Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2XTW4ZCRH52FH7FGAC9X

Run Details

Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.000591
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A thick mist snaked through the trees, winding its way around Rory's ankles as she picked her way carefully along the overgrown path. The full moon overhead cast an eerie glow, casting long shadows that danced at the edges of her vision. She'd been warned not to come to Richmond Park after dark, but desperation had driven her to seek out the Fae Grove. The locket tucked beneath her shirt felt heavy against her sternum, pulsing softly with an inner warmth. Rory paused, head tilted as she listened intently. The normal nocturnal sounds of the park were strangely absent - no hooting owls or rustling small mammals. Just an unsettling silence that pressed in on her from all sides. She quickened her pace, heart thudding dully in her chest. The ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove loomed ahead, their twisted branches reaching out like fingers. As she stepped between two of the monoliths, the air shimmered and the woods around her rippled and warped. Colors stretched and ran together in watercolor swirls before solidifying into a new scene. Rory spun in a slow circle, taking in the hidden clearing. The mist had thickened into a choking fog that obscured her footprints behind her. Unlike the late autumn bareness of the rest of the park, vibrant wildflowers carpeted the ground in a riot of color, their sweet fragrance cloying in the still air. "Hello?" Her voice trembled slightly and she cleared her throat, trying again. "Is anyone here?" Only silence greeted her call. With a deep breath to steel herself, Rory ventured deeper into the Grove. The locket began to grow warmer, an insistent thrumming against her skin. She reached the center of the clearing and looked around wildly. The fog seemed to darken, coalescing into shadowy figures that flickered at the edge of her vision. Whispers slithered through the mist, insidious sibilant hissing that raised gooseflesh on her arms. Rory whirled, trying to pinpoint their source. "Show yourself!" A knotted wind tore through the clearing, wrenching the breath from her lungs and leaving her gasping. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, voices overlapping in a cacophony of sound that battered against her eardrums. The shadows drew closer, reaching for her with dark tendrils. Spinning desperately, Rory groped for the locket and pulled it free of her shirt. The stone pulsed bright red, flooding the clearing with a scarlet glow that pierced the fog. "Please, I just want to go home," Rory whimpered, falling to her knees as the wind whipped her hair into stinging tendrils. "I didn't mean to come here. I just want to leave!" The gusts died down as suddenly as they'd begun, the shadows fading back into the mist. An eerie calm descended over the Grove, broken only by the sound of Rory's ragged breathing. A soft glow coalesced in front of her, coiling into the shape of a woman. Long hair the color of moonlight streamed down her back and her eyes sparked with roaring fire. "Foolish mortal," the woman chided in a voice that cracked like burning wood. "This is no place for the likes of you. Twice now you trespass where you ought not be." "I-I didn't know," Rory stammered. She shrank back as the fiery eyes raked over her. "I was drawn here. The locket - it led me to the Grove." "Ah, yes," the woman mused, drifting closer to examine the pulsing stone. "A trinket from my wayward daughter. But why, I wonder, were you chosen to receive it?" Rory squeezed her eyes shut, trembling violently. "I don't know. Please, just let me go. I swear I won't come back." The fae woman was silent for a long moment. Then, with a tinkling laugh that sounded like shattering glass, she waved a hand and the fog parted. "Very well, little mouse. I give you a glimpse of the mercy my daughter once knew. Be grateful for it." Rory didn't need to be told twice. She scrabbled to her feet, knocking over wildflowers in her haste to flee. The locket chilled against her skin, in stark contrast to the burn of the fae's stare prickling down her backbone. She nearly sobbed in relief when she spotted the arch of oaks that marked the exit from the clearing. Just as her foot crossed the threshold, Rory glanced back over her shoulder. The clearing had already warped away, leaving her standing under the moonlit canopy of Richmond Park. A shudder ripped through her and she broke into a stumbling run, not stopping until she reached the safety of her little flat above Silas' bar. Only then did she allow herself to collapse onto the bed and release the scream that had clawed its way up her throat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice trembled slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.154
68.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount794
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount794
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"cacophony"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"chilled"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"silence"
2"quickened"
3"loomed"
4"shimmered"
5"trembled"
6"flickered"
7"cacophony"
8"pulsed"
9"roaring"
10"chilled"
11"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences47
matches
0"d in relief"
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences55
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount681
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Richmond2
Park2
Fae1
Grove4
persons
0"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.619
windowScore0.667
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like shattering glass, she waved a"
74.21% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.258
wordCount795
matches
0"not to come to Richmond Park after dark, but desperation had driven her to seek out the Fae Grove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
91.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean49.69
std23.44
cv0.472
sampleLengths
081
167
287
315
458
523
675
733
864
931
1028
1128
1221
1347
1459
1578
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"been warned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
90.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences55
ratio0.018
matches
0"The normal nocturnal sounds of the park were strangely absent - no hooting owls or rustling small mammals."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount657
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.0395738203957382
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.0197869101978691
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences55
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
92.56% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences55
mean14.45
std5.51
cv0.381
sampleLengths
023
119
222
317
48
518
612
710
819
919
1014
1111
1214
1329
1412
153
165
1713
1812
1911
2017
2114
227
232
2417
2518
2610
2714
2816
2922
3011
3116
3216
3315
3417
3513
3618
375
3810
3913
4012
4116
427
4314
449
4518
4620
477
4813
4920
70.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.43636363636363634
totalSentences55
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences46
matches
0"Just an unsettling silence that"
1"Only silence greeted her call."
2"Then, with a tinkling laugh"
3"Only then did she allow"
ratio0.087
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences46
matches
0"She'd been warned not to"
1"She quickened her pace, heart"
2"Her voice trembled slightly and"
3"She reached the center of"
4"She shrank back as the"
5"She scrabbled to her feet,"
6"She nearly sobbed in relief"
ratio0.152
68.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences46
matches
0"A thick mist snaked through"
1"The full moon overhead cast"
2"She'd been warned not to"
3"The locket tucked beneath her"
4"Rory paused, head tilted as"
5"The normal nocturnal sounds of"
6"She quickened her pace, heart"
7"The ancient oaks that marked"
8"Colors stretched and ran together"
9"Rory spun in a slow"
10"The mist had thickened into"
11"Her voice trembled slightly and"
12"The locket began to grow"
13"She reached the center of"
14"The fog seemed to darken,"
15"Whispers slithered through the mist,"
16"Rory whirled, trying to pinpoint"
17"A knotted wind tore through"
18"The whispers grew louder, more"
19"The shadows drew closer, reaching"
ratio0.783
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Just as her foot crossed"
ratio0.022
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The full moon overhead cast an eerie glow, casting long shadows that danced at the edges of her vision."
1"The ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove loomed ahead, their twisted branches reaching out like fingers."
2"The mist had thickened into a choking fog that obscured her footprints behind her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory whimpered (whimper)"
1"Rory stammered (stammer)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.308
84.6615%