| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice trembled slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 68.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 794 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 794 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "cacophony" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "chilled" | | 11 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 82.07% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 47 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 795 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.89% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 681 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.619 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like shattering glass, she waved a" |
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| 74.21% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.258 | | wordCount | 795 | | matches | | 0 | "not to come to Richmond Park after dark, but desperation had driven her to seek out the Fae Grove" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.92% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 49.69 | | std | 23.44 | | cv | 0.472 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 78 |
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| 97.80% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.91% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "The normal nocturnal sounds of the park were strangely absent - no hooting owls or rustling small mammals." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 657 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.0395738203957382 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0197869101978691 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 55 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 92.56% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 55 | | mean | 14.45 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.381 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 70.91% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.43636363636363634 | | totalSentences | 55 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Just an unsettling silence that" | | 1 | "Only silence greeted her call." | | 2 | "Then, with a tinkling laugh" | | 3 | "Only then did she allow" |
| | ratio | 0.087 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 1 | "She quickened her pace, heart" | | 2 | "Her voice trembled slightly and" | | 3 | "She reached the center of" | | 4 | "She shrank back as the" | | 5 | "She scrabbled to her feet," | | 6 | "She nearly sobbed in relief" |
| | ratio | 0.152 | |
| 68.70% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "A thick mist snaked through" | | 1 | "The full moon overhead cast" | | 2 | "She'd been warned not to" | | 3 | "The locket tucked beneath her" | | 4 | "Rory paused, head tilted as" | | 5 | "The normal nocturnal sounds of" | | 6 | "She quickened her pace, heart" | | 7 | "The ancient oaks that marked" | | 8 | "Colors stretched and ran together" | | 9 | "Rory spun in a slow" | | 10 | "The mist had thickened into" | | 11 | "Her voice trembled slightly and" | | 12 | "The locket began to grow" | | 13 | "She reached the center of" | | 14 | "The fog seemed to darken," | | 15 | "Whispers slithered through the mist," | | 16 | "Rory whirled, trying to pinpoint" | | 17 | "A knotted wind tore through" | | 18 | "The whispers grew louder, more" | | 19 | "The shadows drew closer, reaching" |
| | ratio | 0.783 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as her foot crossed" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 81.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The full moon overhead cast an eerie glow, casting long shadows that danced at the edges of her vision." | | 1 | "The ancient oaks that marked the boundary of the Grove loomed ahead, their twisted branches reaching out like fingers." | | 2 | "The mist had thickened into a choking fog that obscured her footprints behind her." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whimpered (whimper)" | | 1 | "Rory stammered (stammer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |