Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR2ZSX77P6N1TE6F5AV4NF

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Duration:
10.8s
Cost:
$0.026125
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slid onto the last vacant stool at the bar, the familiar creak of the old wood echoing in her ears. She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror behind the liquor display — shoulder-length black hair slightly mussed from the light rain outside, bright blue eyes reflecting the muted lighting of The Raven's Nest. Her shift had ended an hour ago, but she’d found herself wandering through Soho, trailing through memories as she’d paced the wet streets. When she decided to duck into Silas’ bar, it felt inevitable. She rapped her knuckles lightly against the counter. “Silas, you around?” From behind the rows of bottles appeared Silas Blackwood, his hazel eyes lighting up in recognition. “Rory, thought you might show up.” He motioned with his head toward a darkened corner. “Someone’s waiting for you.” Puzzled, Aurora slid off the stool and made her way through the dimly lit bar, passing the old maps and black-and-white photographs hanging on the walls. She could feel the heavy, intimate history interwoven into the very fabric of the place. As she approached the corner, a figure uncrossed his legs and leaned forward into the light. “Rory,” the voice said, deep and resonant. “Long time.” She froze, staring at the man before her. “Evan,” she managed, the name both a whisper and a knife. He looked different — older, with a bit of stubble on his chin and the weariness of the world etched into his face. But those eyes, piercing and electric, remained the same. “Sit down,” he offered, gesturing to the seat opposite him. Without thinking, she obeyed. Her mind raced, trying to piece together how and why Evan was here, of all places. “Didn’t expect to see you here,” she said, attempting nonchalance as she sat down. Her scar itched, a phantom reminder of past pain. “Had some... business to take care of,” he replied, the shadow of an old smirk appearing on his lips. “And you? Still delivering noodles by day?” She bristled at his tone but kept her voice steady. “Yes, and it’s honest work. Keeps a roof over my head.” His eyes flickered down briefly, almost imperceptibly. “I wasn’t— I didn’t mean—” “Sure,” she interrupted. “What brings you to The Raven’s Nest? It's not exactly your usual haunt.” Evan leaned back, drumming his fingers on the wooden table. “The thing is, Rory, people change. I changed.” He looked away, then met her gaze with a seriousness that took her off guard. “And I need your help.” Aurora clenched her fists under the table. “You haven’t been part of my life for years, Evan. Why now?” He sighed, running a hand through his hair. “It’s complicated. After we… separated, things got rough. I got involved with the wrong crowd. Now, I’m trying to get out, but they won’t let me go so easily.” A bitter laugh escaped her lips. “So you’re back because you need something. Typical.” Raising his hands, he pleaded, “I came because Silas said you might… listen.” She turned to glance at Silas, who stood silent behind the bar, polishing glasses. The old man’s eyes met hers briefly. He gave a slight nod, encouragement she wasn’t sure she wanted. “Fine,” she muttered. “What do you need?” “The people I got mixed up with,” Evan began, leaning in, “they’re dangerous. They’ve been after me for weeks, and now they’ve threatened... someone I care about.” Aurora’s breath caught, and she struggled to maintain her composure. “Who?” He hesitated, then whispered, “My daughter, Sophie.” Shock rippled through her. “You have a daughter?” The disbelief in her voice was palpable. Evan nodded, eyes softening. “She's six. She’s innocent in all this. I just need to keep her safe.” A flood of conflicting emotions swept through Aurora. Anger, betrayal, but also a sliver of pity. “You dragged an innocent child into your mess?” A look of unspoken regret passed over his face. “I didn’t know how to protect her. But you...you’ve always been able to think on your feet. You’re smart, Rory.” His words hit a tender chord. Despite everything, the affection and admiration in his voice reminded her of the man Evan had once been. Briefly, she caught a glimpse of the past — the late-night conversations, the laughter, the dreams they’d once shared before everything crumbled. “Alright,” she said, her resolve firming. “I’ll help, but this doesn’t mean I’ve forgiven you. It’s for the little girl, not you.” Relief visibly washed over him. “Thank you, Rory. I knew I could count on you.” “Don’t thank me yet,” she warned, eyes narrowing. “First, we need Silas.” As if on cue, Silas limped over, his silver signet ring catching the light. “What’s the plan, kids?” Aurora rolled her eyes slightly at the term. “We need a safe place for a child. Somewhere those thugs can’t find her.” Silas thought for a moment, then nodded. “I have a few places in mind. We’ll get the girl to safety first and figure out the rest from there.” His voice carried the weight of someone who’d orchestrated countless operations. Evan’s shoulders dropped, the stress momentarily easing. “How soon can we move her?” “Tomorrow morning,” Silas answered. “For tonight, we’ll keep her in the Nest’s secret room.” He pointed to the hidden space behind the bookshelf. Aurora nodded. “Evan, bring Sophie here tonight. No one will think to look for her in a bar.” Evan’s posture straightened. “I’ll be back in an hour.” Watching him leave, Aurora felt a whirlwind of emotions. Evan’s return had reopened wounds she thought had healed. Yet, amidst the pain, there was a spark of something else — perhaps hope, or a chance for closure. “He seems different,” Silas noted, his eyes keen. “Yes,” Aurora admitted, “But I need to be sure.” “You’ve got this, Rory,” he said, laying a comforting hand on her shoulder. “You always have.” Later, as she waited for Evan to return, she found herself reflecting on the years that had passed. Life had been anything but kind, but here she was, standing firm, ready to face the storm once more. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for what lay ahead.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He looked away [away]"
1"He hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.913
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.087
80.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"palpable"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"affection"
count1
12
word"resolve"
count1
13
word"carried the weight"
count1
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"echoing"
2"could feel"
3"whisper"
4"etched"
5"electric"
6"raced"
7"reminder"
8"flickered"
9"palpable"
10"unspoken"
11"affection"
12"resolve"
13"carried the weight"
14"amidst"
15"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1028
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount675
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.33
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Silas6
Blackwood1
Puzzled1
Aurora9
Evan9
Shock1
Relief1
Later1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
6"Shock"
7"Relief"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.833
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1028
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean23.36
std15.68
cv0.671
sampleLengths
091
111
235
357
49
519
632
710
820
923
1026
1121
1212
1316
1438
1519
1637
1714
1813
1932
207
2127
2211
237
2415
2518
2624
2729
2846
2922
3015
3112
3218
3322
3439
3513
3623
3718
389
3937
408
419
4216
4348
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs130
matches
0"was, standing"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror behind the liquor display — shoulder-length black hair slightly mussed from the light rain outside, bright blue eyes reflecting the muted lighting of The Raven's Nest."
1"He looked different — older, with a bit of stubble on his chin and the weariness of the world etched into his face."
2"Briefly, she caught a glimpse of the past — the late-night conversations, the laughter, the dreams they’d once shared before everything crumbled."
3"Yet, amidst the pain, there was a spark of something else — perhaps hope, or a chance for closure."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount345
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.020289855072463767
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.005797101449275362
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.17
std7.07
cv0.633
sampleLengths
022
135
223
311
48
53
616
715
84
926
1015
1116
127
132
148
1511
1623
179
1810
194
2016
2114
229
2319
247
2510
2611
277
285
293
3013
3110
3223
335
347
3512
368
3729
386
398
4013
4114
427
4311
443
454
4627
4710
481
497
86.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.532608695652174
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners49
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Briefly, she caught a glimpse"
ratio0.016
45.81% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences62
matches
0"She caught a glimpse of"
1"Her shift had ended an"
2"She rapped her knuckles lightly"
3"He motioned with his head"
4"She could feel the heavy,"
5"She froze, staring at the"
6"she managed, the name both"
7"He looked different — older,"
8"he offered, gesturing to the"
9"Her mind raced, trying to"
10"she said, attempting nonchalance as"
11"Her scar itched, a phantom"
12"he replied, the shadow of"
13"She bristled at his tone"
14"His eyes flickered down briefly,"
15"He looked away, then met"
16"He sighed, running a hand"
17"She turned to glance at"
18"He gave a slight nod,"
19"He hesitated, then whispered,"
ratio0.435
72.90% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter slid onto the"
1"She caught a glimpse of"
2"Her shift had ended an"
3"She rapped her knuckles lightly"
4"He motioned with his head"
5"She could feel the heavy,"
6"the voice said, deep and"
7"She froze, staring at the"
8"she managed, the name both"
9"He looked different — older,"
10"he offered, gesturing to the"
11"Her mind raced, trying to"
12"she said, attempting nonchalance as"
13"Her scar itched, a phantom"
14"he replied, the shadow of"
15"She bristled at his tone"
16"His eyes flickered down briefly,"
17"Evan leaned back, drumming his"
18"He looked away, then met"
19"Aurora clenched her fists under"
ratio0.774
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"As if on cue, Silas"
1"Yet, amidst the pain, there"
ratio0.032
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She turned to glance at Silas, who stood silent behind the bar, polishing glasses."
1"As if on cue, Silas limped over, his silver signet ring catching the light."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he replied, the shadow of an old smirk appearing on his lips"
1"she said, her resolve firming"
2"she warned, eyes narrowing"
3"Silas noted, his eyes keen"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she interrupted (interrupt)"
1"his hands he pleaded (plead)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"she warned (warn)"
4"Silas noted (note)"
5"Aurora admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.261
leniency0.522
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.261
82.3749%