Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR30WKF17FA3DV1NGM8TXC

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.014730
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing Aurora Carter standing on the threshold of Eva's flat. Her bright blue eyes met the mismatched gaze of Lucien Moreau, who stood in the dimly lit hallway, his silhouette framed by the flickering light of the streetlamp outside. The air between them crackled with unspoken words and unresolved tension. "Rory," Lucien's voice was smooth, like velvet draped over steel. He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, though his posture betrayed a hint of unease. "Lucien," she replied, her voice steady, though her heart raced. She hadn't expected to see him here, not after everything that had happened. "What are you doing here?" He stepped inside, the scent of his cologne mingling with the aroma of spices wafting up from the curry house below. "I could ask you the same," he said, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips. "But I suppose we both have our reasons for seeking refuge in Eva's sanctuary." Aurora closed the door behind him, the sound of the deadbolts clicking into place echoing in the small space. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched them with curious eyes from his perch atop a stack of books. "Eva's out," she said, moving to clear a space on the cluttered table. "She didn't mention you were coming." Lucien shrugged, his gaze lingering on her for a moment longer than necessary. "I didn't plan on it. But circumstances change." She nodded, understanding the unspoken complexities of their world. "Tea?" she offered, gesturing to the kettle on the stove. "Please," he replied, settling into a chair with the grace of a man accustomed to luxury, even in the most modest of settings. As she busied herself with the tea, the silence between them stretched, filled with memories and the weight of their shared past. The last time they'd seen each other, words had been exchanged that cut deeper than any blade. Yet here they were, drawn together once more by forces beyond their control. "How's the restaurant?" Lucien asked, breaking the silence. "Busy," Aurora replied, pouring hot water over the tea leaves. "Yu-Fei's been keeping me on my toes." "And your studies?" he inquired, his tone casual, though his eyes betrayed a deeper interest. She hesitated, the question touching a nerve. "I left that behind," she said, her voice firm. "It wasn't for me." Lucien nodded, as if he understood more than she was willing to admit. "Sometimes the path we choose isn't the one we're meant to walk." She brought the tea to the table, setting a cup before him. "And what about you, Lucien? Still playing the part of the enigmatic Frenchman?" He chuckled, a low, rich sound that sent a shiver down her spine. "Some roles are hard to shake," he said, taking a sip of the tea. "But enough about me. How have you been, Rory?" The question hung in the air, laden with concern and something else she couldn't quite place. She met his gaze, the intensity of his heterochromatic eyes drawing her in. "I've been managing," she replied, her voice softer now. "It's not easy, but I'm getting by." He reached across the table, his fingers brushing against hers. The contact was electric, a reminder of the connection they once shared. "If you ever need anything, you know where to find me." She pulled her hand back, the gesture both a rejection and an acknowledgment of the offer. "I appreciate that, Lucien. But I've learned to stand on my own." He nodded, respect in his eyes. "I never doubted that." The conversation shifted, moving to safer topics, yet the undercurrent of their past remained. They spoke of mutual acquaintances, of the ever-changing landscape of London's supernatural underworld, and of the small joys and challenges of everyday life. As the evening wore on, the tension between them eased, replaced by a tentative camaraderie. Yet beneath the surface, the unresolved emotions lingered, waiting for the right moment to resurface. "Do you ever think about it?" Aurora asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper. Lucien's gaze met hers, understanding the question without needing clarification. "Every day," he admitted, his voice tinged with regret. "But some things are better left in the past." She nodded, though her heart ached with the truth of his words. "I suppose you're right." They sat in silence, the weight of their shared history pressing down on them. Yet in that moment, there was a sense of peace, a fragile truce between two souls who had once been entwined. As the clock ticked towards midnight, Lucien rose, his movements fluid and deliberate. "I should go," he said, though his eyes lingered on her face, as if memorizing every detail. Aurora stood, walking him to the door. "Take care, Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. He paused, his hand on the doorknob. "You too, Rory," he replied, his voice soft, almost tender. "Until next time." With that, he stepped into the night, the door closing behind him with a finality that echoed in the quiet flat. Aurora stood there for a moment, her heart heavy with the weight of what could have been. Ptolemy meowed, rubbing against her leg, and she bent down to scratch behind his ears. "Looks like it's just you and me, Ptolemy," she murmured, the cat's purr a comforting presence in the solitude. As she turned off the lights and headed to bed, Aurora couldn't shake the feeling that this encounter was just the beginning of something new. Yet for now, she would let the past rest, content in the knowledge that some connections, no matter how complicated, were never truly severed.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:45:48.057Z" 2/19/2026, 10:45:48 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.056
84.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount945
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount945
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"unspoken"
count2
1
word"tension"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"raced"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"enigmatic"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"tinged"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"comforting"
count1
18
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"unspoken"
1"tension"
2"velvet"
3"raced"
4"sanctuary"
5"echoing"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"enigmatic"
9"down her spine"
10"intensity"
11"electric"
12"reminder"
13"whisper"
14"tinged"
15"sense of"
16"echoed"
17"comforting"
18"encounter"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences57
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences57
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences73
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords942
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount757
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora7
Carter1
Eva1
Lucien7
Moreau1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.09% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"as if memorizing every detail"
93.84% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.062
wordCount942
matches
0"not easy, but I'm getting by"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"exchanged that cut"
77.57% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean27.71
std11.68
cv0.422
sampleLengths
054
125
228
352
436
519
621
719
823
952
108
1117
1215
1320
1425
1525
1636
1729
1816
1933
2028
2110
2237
2330
2415
2528
2616
2735
2830
2919
3020
3138
3234
3349
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences57
matches
0"been exchanged"
1"were, drawn"
2"been entwined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was willing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.021080368906455864
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006587615283267457
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences73
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences73
mean12.9
std5.36
cv0.416
sampleLengths
014
129
211
310
415
510
613
75
821
917
1014
1119
1217
1313
146
1513
168
179
1810
1923
2022
2117
2213
238
2410
257
2615
277
289
294
3013
3112
3212
3313
3413
3514
369
3716
3813
399
407
4110
4212
4311
4416
4512
466
474
4814
4923
73.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4383561643835616
totalSentences73
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes met"
1"He leaned casually on his"
2"she replied, her voice steady,"
3"She hadn't expected to see"
4"He stepped inside, the scent"
5"he said, a ghost of"
6"she said, moving to clear"
7"She nodded, understanding the unspoken"
8"she offered, gesturing to the"
9"he replied, settling into a"
10"he inquired, his tone casual,"
11"She hesitated, the question touching"
12"she said, her voice firm"
13"She brought the tea to"
14"He chuckled, a low, rich"
15"he said, taking a sip"
16"She met his gaze, the"
17"she replied, her voice softer"
18"He reached across the table,"
19"She pulled her hand back,"
ratio0.526
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences57
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Her bright blue eyes met"
2"The air between them crackled"
3"Lucien's voice was smooth, like"
4"He leaned casually on his"
5"she replied, her voice steady,"
6"She hadn't expected to see"
7"He stepped inside, the scent"
8"he said, a ghost of"
9"Aurora closed the door behind"
10"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched"
11"she said, moving to clear"
12"Lucien shrugged, his gaze lingering"
13"She nodded, understanding the unspoken"
14"she offered, gesturing to the"
15"he replied, settling into a"
16"The last time they'd seen"
17"Lucien asked, breaking the silence"
18"Aurora replied, pouring hot water"
19"he inquired, his tone casual,"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes met the mismatched gaze of Lucien Moreau, who stood in the dimly lit hallway, his silhouette framed by the flickering light of the streetla…"
1"He stepped inside, the scent of his cologne mingling with the aroma of spices wafting up from the curry house below."
2"With that, he stepped into the night, the door closing behind him with a finality that echoed in the quiet flat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she replied, her voice steady, though her heart raced"
1"he said, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips"
2"she said, moving to clear a space on the cluttered table"
3"he inquired, his tone casual, though his eyes betrayed a deeper interest"
4"she said, her voice firm"
5"she replied, her voice softer now"
6"Aurora asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper"
7"he said, though his eyes lingered on her face, as if memorizing every detail"
8"she said, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
9"he replied, his voice soft, almost tender"
61.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he inquired (inquire)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.176
74.3725%