| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 59.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 620 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "ever so slightly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "warmly" | | 2 | "ever so slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 620 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "trepidation" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "kaleidoscope" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "resonance" | | 9 | "symphony" | | 10 | "delved" | | 11 | "crystalline" | | 12 | "intricate" | | 13 | "shimmered" | | 14 | "dancing" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 26 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 26 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 614 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.68% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 498 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 2 | | Aurora | 8 | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 2 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 2 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Shade" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.697 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if absorbing the Shade's words" | | 1 | "as if attuning her to the grove's resonance" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 614 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.38% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 14 | | mean | 43.86 | | std | 17.38 | | cv | 0.396 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 80 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 26 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 32 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers of every hue – sapphire delphiniums, amber black-eyed susans, and ruby poppies – swayed in rhythms that seemed almost..." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 505 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender, leaf-shaped form" |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.0297029702970297 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013861386138613862 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 32 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 32 | | mean | 19.19 | | std | 10.3 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 32 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 47 |
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| 85.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.53125 | | totalSentences | 32 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood shoulder-to-shoulder with Nyx," |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood shoulder-to-shoulder with Nyx," | | 1 | "Isolde's voice whispered on the" | | 2 | "Nyx followed, their humanoid silhouette" | | 3 | "The sky above transformed into" | | 4 | "Aurora wandered down the winding," | | 5 | "Wildflowers of every hue –" | | 6 | "The sweet fragrance of blooming" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted beside her, their" | | 8 | "Aurora's gaze snapped to a" | | 9 | "A shiver danced across her" | | 10 | "Isolde's laughter, like the tinkling" | | 11 | "Aurora, feeling an inexplicable connection," | | 12 | "Nyx's shadowy form twitched, as" | | 13 | "the seer whispered, her eyes" | | 14 | "The moment Aurora's fingertips made" | | 15 | "The heartstone pendant, a deep" | | 16 | "Nyx's whispery voice wove a" | | 17 | "The Half-Fae seer smiled, her" |
| | ratio | 0.72 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 25 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky above transformed into a kaleidoscope of saffron, amethyst, and rose, as if sunset and twilight had merged in perpetual harmony." | | 1 | "Wildflowers of every hue – sapphire delphiniums, amber black-eyed susans, and ruby poppies – swayed in rhythms that seemed almost..." | | 2 | "Aurora's gaze snapped to a cluster of starflowers, their white petals tilting in unison toward Nyx, as if absorbing the Shade's words." | | 3 | "As they delved deeper into the grove, the trio encountered a crystalline pool, its surface adorned with intricate, swirling patterns that shimmered like the moo…" | | 4 | "Nyx's shadowy form twitched, as if to intervene, but Isolde's gentle hand on their arm stayed them." | | 5 | "The heartstone pendant, a deep crimson gem on a silver chain, pulsed warmly against her chest, as if attuning her to the grove's resonance." | | 6 | "With the moonlit blade in hand, Aurora felt the balance of her world shift, as if the very fabric of reality had been tweaked, ever so slightly, to admit a hint…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde's voice whispered, her pale lavender eyes gleaming with an otherworldly intensity" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the seer whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |