| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1032 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1032 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "oppressive" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "throbbed" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "traced" | | 13 | "chilled" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "stomach" | | 18 | "racing" | | 19 | "flicker" | | 20 | "throb" | | 21 | "raced" | | 22 | "could feel" | | 23 | "pounding" | | 24 | "fluttered" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "clenched her fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1017 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 984 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.41 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Hunger | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "warmth that seemed to demand she reach this particular clearing" | | 1 | "as if waiting" | | 2 | "Not quite words, more like a hiss" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.983 | | wordCount | 1017 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words anymore, but a static hum" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "feeling that she" | | 1 | "spun that way" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 21.19 | | std | 16.07 | | cv | 0.759 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 41 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 38 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "were holding" | | 1 | "was walking" | | 2 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d been here a dozen times before—unlaced her fingers at the edges of the stones, taken a breath, and left—never this late, never with a feeling that she was walking into something beyond her understanding." | | 1 | "She recalled the stories—about the Grove, about the boundary that one crossed into something unnatural." | | 2 | "A sharp sound broke the stillness—a whisper, distant but clear, whispering her name." | | 3 | "Movement—light, flickering faintly, just at the limits of her sight." | | 4 | "A sound—a faint, rhythmic tapping—began, slow and deliberate, somewhere just beyond her reach." | | 5 | "A warmth, then a prickling—like icy fingers crawling up her skin from beneath the surface." | | 6 | "A shadow shifted—an outline, flickering like a flame in the north wind." | | 7 | "The stories she’d heard about the Grove, the strange boundary—something refused to stay quiet tonight." | | 8 | "The figure moved—no, flickered—just beyond the edge of her perception, like a shadow caught in a current, too quick to grasp." | | 9 | "Her fingers brushed the pendant again, felt the faint pulse, and remembered what Eva had warned her about: these woods—this place—was dangerous when its secrets got disturbed." | | 10 | "The Hunger—what she had read in forbidden texts—those who dwelled in this place fed on fear, on doubt." |
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| 92.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 999 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.04804804804804805 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014014014014014014 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 10.07 | | std | 6.61 | | cv | 0.657 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 48.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.32673267326732675 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard it." | | 1 | "Only the gnarled branches and" | | 2 | "Just her imagination." | | 3 | "Then, a whisper again, closer" | | 4 | "Then, a movement." | | 5 | "Too still, yet not." |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 74.55% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here late," | | 1 | "She kept her eyes trained" | | 2 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 3 | "Her boots squished onto the" | | 4 | "She’d been here a dozen" | | 5 | "She hesitated for a fragile" | | 6 | "Her pulse quickened, each beat" | | 7 | "She drew in a shallow" | | 8 | "She blinked, trying to shake" | | 9 | "she muttered, voice thin" | | 10 | "She moved toward the centre" | | 11 | "She knelt briefly, fingering the" | | 12 | "Her eyes snapped up, scanning" | | 13 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 14 | "She recalled the stories—about the" | | 15 | "She froze, heart hammering." | | 16 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" | | 17 | "she managed, voice trembling" | | 18 | "She clenched her jaw, fighting" | | 19 | "It echoed lightly through the" |
| | ratio | 0.364 | |
| 33.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 1 | "The moon hung low, casting" | | 2 | "She had come here late," | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned softly" | | 4 | "She kept her eyes trained" | | 5 | "The silence was oppressive, like" | | 6 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 7 | "Her boots squished onto the" | | 8 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 9 | "She’d been here a dozen" | | 10 | "A whisper crawling beneath her" | | 11 | "She hesitated for a fragile" | | 12 | "Time felt elastic." | | 13 | "Her pulse quickened, each beat" | | 14 | "The pendant’s faint glow throbbed," | | 15 | "She drew in a shallow" | | 16 | "A slight rustle, behind her." | | 17 | "Aurora spun around sharply." | | 18 | "The shadows stayed still, as" | | 19 | "She blinked, trying to shake" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned softly against her chest, a faint pulse of warmth that seemed to demand she reach this particular clearing." | | 1 | "Something strange pressed on her skull, a whisper of sensation that made her teeth grind." | | 2 | "Not words anymore, but a static hum that made her ears throb." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, voice lost in the hush" | | 1 | "she muttered, voice thin" | | 2 | "she managed, voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |