Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR35VXY6CXQST87VE21XQZ

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Duration:
16.0s
Cost:
$0.030775
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed against the damp evening air as Aurora pushed open the heavy wooden door. The familiar scent of aged wood, mixed with the traces of whiskey and faintly bitter hops, welcomed her like an old friend. Conversations hummed in low tones, broken occasionally by the clink of glasses and bursts of raucous laughter. She navigated through the scattered tables, the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls absorbing the glow from dim sconces. Rory's keen eyes searched the room. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with practiced ease. His hazel eyes met hers, and he offered a subtle nod of acknowledgment, his hand brushing the silver signet ring he always wore. She returned a slight smile, feeling the security and familiarity of this place seep into her bones. Tucking a strand of straight black hair behind her ear, she moved towards an empty table in the corner. The dim light caught the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. As she pulled out a chair and sat down, memories of late-night conversations and hushed secrets shared in this very spot flooded back. Her thoughts were interrupted by the creak of the door. The chattering noise softened for a moment as a figure entered. Rory glanced up and felt her breath catch in her throat. It was like seeing a ghost. The person who had just stepped in had the same striking features—sharp angles softened by time, tall and lean—but something fundamental had shifted. The man’s hair, once raven-black, now had streaks of silver. Lines etched around eyes that had seen too much, yet still glimmered with the same vibrant curiosity she remembered. His gaze swept the room, momentarily indifferent, until it landed on her. Recognition dawned, followed by a mixture of surprise and something unreadable. "Evan," Aurora breathed, her voice barely audible over the hum of the room. "Rory," his reply was soft, almost a whisper. He strode towards her, moving with a grace that belied years of harsh experience. He took the chair opposite her, and for a moment, both remained in a heavy silence, two souls caught between the past and present. "So, you've found your way here," he said, breaking the silence, his gaze pinpointed on her face as if trying to read every thought. "It’s a small world," she replied, gripping the edge of the table. "A lot’s changed." He nodded, eyes flicking to the scar on her wrist before meeting her gaze again. "It has." Silas made his way over, holding a tumbler of whiskey in each hand. He placed them on the table without a word, though his eyes lingered on Evan for a moment longer than usual. Evan gave him a curt nod of thanks. "To memories," Silas finally said, raising his own glass a bit before walking away. Evan lifted the tumbler, studying it as if it held answers. "To memories," he echoed, clinking his glass gently against Rory's. She took a small sip, feeling the liquid warmth spread through her, a stark contrast to the chill memories that had resurfaced with Evan’s arrival. "So, what happened to you?" He looked down, tracing the rim of the glass with his finger. "Life, I suppose. After you left, I did some soul searching, got mixed up in some dodgy business. Tried to find myself in the most unlikely of places." "Did you?" Her bright blue eyes bore into him, searching for a semblance of the man she once knew. "Not sure," he admitted. "Ended up in places I never thought I'd see, met people I wished I hadn't. Managed to sort some things out, burned some bridges." "And now you're here," she mused, leaning back in her chair. "Why?" His laughter held a note of irony. "Maybe I wanted a fresh start. Maybe I missed the familiarity... or maybe I wanted to see you." The last part hung in the air, heavy with unspoken emotions and unhealed wounds. Rory's expression softened, her eyes reflecting years of shared history and untold stories. "I never thought I'd see you again," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Neither did I," he admitted, staring into his drink. "But here we are. So much for plans." They sat in silence for a moment, each lost in their own thoughts, memories of Cardiff mingling with the present reality. Rory’s hand absentmindedly touched the scar on her wrist, a physical reminder of a past they shared. "What have you been up to?" Evan asked, breaking the silence. "Working part-time for Yu-Fei Cheung's restaurant," she replied. "Living in a flat above Silas' bar. Life's simpler now, in some ways. More complicated in others." "Still the same Rory," he remarked, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. She shook her head. "Not quite. I've had to adapt, learn to fend for myself. And you — the changes are evident." His eyes met hers, a flash of regret passing through. "I never wanted it to end the way it did." "Neither did I," she confessed. "But what's done is done. We can't change the past." "No, we can’t," Evan agreed. "We can only try to make sense of it." Silas reappeared, collecting empty glasses from another table. He glanced at them, reading the tension, the unspoken words. "Everything alright here?" His tone was casual, but the concern was clear. Rory nodded, managing a small smile. "Just catching up with an old friend." Silas gave a terse nod, his eyes lingering on Evan once more before he moved away. The weight of the past continued to press down on them. The room seemed to close in, making their world smaller, more intimate. "So, where do we go from here?" Evan's question was direct, probing. She sighed, feeling the pull of nostalgia and the pain it carried. "We could try being friends again. Start fresh. Or maybe... we move on, separately this time." He looked out into the bar, eyes distant. "When you left, it was a wake-up call. I never truly apologized for everything." Rory's eyes softened, the distant trace of old wounds reappearing and then retreating. "I think we both needed to escape. Heal in our own ways." Evan's hand reached across the table, stopping just short of touching hers. "I still care about you, Rory. But I know I can't undo the past." She placed her hand next to his, close but not touching. "Caring isn't enough sometimes. Maybe we were meant to cross paths again, to find closure, not revival." They held each other’s gaze, the silence speaking volumes. The weight of time and unspoken regret hung heavy, but there was also a glimmer of understanding, a shared acknowledgement of the past, and an acceptance of the present. Evan stood up slowly, a sense of finality in his movements. "Take care, Rory. I hope you find what you're looking for." "You too, Evan," she replied, eyes steady. "Maybe one day, we'll meet again under better circumstances." He turned and walked towards the door. As it swung shut behind him, she released a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding. Silas approached, concern in his eyes. "You alright?" he asked, gently placing a hand on her shoulder. She nodded, standing up and feeling the presence of Evan still lingering in the air. "I think I will be." Silas gave a slight, understanding nod. "Welcome to move on. The past doesn't need to define you." Rory glanced around The Raven's Nest, feeling a sense of resolve settling over her. The weight of time and regret still hung in the air, but there was also a newfound determination to move forward. "Yeah," she agreed. "The beginning of something new." Silas smiled, leading her towards the bar. "Let's start with a drink." The dimly lit room continued its hum of conversations and laughter, life moving forward, each step a little lighter than the last. Rory felt the past slowly releasing its grip, leaving her with the hope of new beginnings.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Silas finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.043
74.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"gently"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"navigated"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"silence"
count5
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count3
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"sense of"
count3
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"weight"
count3
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"newfound"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"navigated"
2"practiced ease"
3"etched"
4"unreadable"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"echoed"
8"warmth"
9"stark"
10"chill"
11"tracing"
12"unspoken"
13"reminder"
14"sense of"
15"tension"
16"weight"
17"resolve"
18"newfound"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"a sense of resolve"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1340
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount989
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora2
Evan11
Rory9
Cardiff1
Silas8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.944
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if trying to read every thought"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1340
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean26.27
std14.69
cv0.559
sampleLengths
082
157
254
361
452
513
622
724
824
915
1017
1142
1214
1321
1430
1540
1619
1728
1812
1925
2027
2115
2217
2338
2411
2525
2615
2722
2820
2915
3014
3130
3213
3339
3412
3528
3622
3725
3826
3928
4038
4122
4216
4329
4411
4520
4617
4735
488
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"were interrupted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences106
ratio0.009
matches
0"The person who had just stepped in had the same striking features—sharp angles softened by time, tall and lean—but something fundamental had shifted."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount996
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03614457831325301
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013052208835341365
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean12.64
std6.02
cv0.476
sampleLengths
022
122
217
321
46
511
623
717
819
912
1023
1110
1211
1311
146
1523
1610
1719
1812
1911
2013
218
2214
2324
2424
2512
263
2715
282
2913
3021
318
3214
3311
3410
3525
365
3712
3828
3919
404
4124
4211
431
447
4518
4614
4713
4815
499
63.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4056603773584906
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences76
matches
0"She navigated through the scattered"
1"His hazel eyes met hers,"
2"She returned a slight smile,"
3"Her thoughts were interrupted by"
4"It was like seeing a"
5"His gaze swept the room,"
6"his reply was soft, almost"
7"He strode towards her, moving"
8"He took the chair opposite"
9"he said, breaking the silence,"
10"she replied, gripping the edge"
11"He nodded, eyes flicking to"
12"He placed them on the"
13"he echoed, clinking his glass"
14"She took a small sip,"
15"He looked down, tracing the"
16"Her bright blue eyes bore"
17"she mused, leaning back in"
18"His laughter held a note"
19"she said, her voice barely"
ratio0.461
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences76
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The familiar scent of aged"
2"Conversations hummed in low tones,"
3"She navigated through the scattered"
4"Rory's keen eyes searched the"
5"Silas stood behind the bar,"
6"His hazel eyes met hers,"
7"She returned a slight smile,"
8"The dim light caught the"
9"Her thoughts were interrupted by"
10"The chattering noise softened for"
11"Rory glanced up and felt"
12"It was like seeing a"
13"The person who had just"
14"The man’s hair, once raven-black,"
15"Lines etched around eyes that"
16"His gaze swept the room,"
17"Recognition dawned, followed by a"
18"Aurora breathed, her voice barely"
19"his reply was soft, almost"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The person who had just stepped in had the same striking features—sharp angles softened by time, tall and lean—but something fundamental had shifted."
1"Lines etched around eyes that had seen too much, yet still glimmered with the same vibrant curiosity she remembered."
2"Evan lifted the tumbler, studying it as if it held answers."
3"She took a small sip, feeling the liquid warmth spread through her, a stark contrast to the chill memories that had resurfaced with Evan’s arrival."
4"Rory glanced around The Raven's Nest, feeling a sense of resolve settling over her."
5"Rory felt the past slowly releasing its grip, leaving her with the hope of new beginnings."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora breathed, her voice barely audible over the hum of the room"
1"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"he remarked, a hint of a smile playing on his lips"
3"she replied, eyes steady"
19.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
2"he admitted (admit)"
3"she confessed (confess)"
4"Evan agreed (agree)"
5"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.261
73.4269%