Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3DRX4SDK99VTW6JMDYK1

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.012485
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak stones loomed ahead, resembling silent guardians keeping watch over the forest. Aurora, or Rory to her friends, steadied herself, feeling a sudden unease. The hair on the back of her neck prickled like a warning. *This is crazy*. She steeled her nerves, focused on the mission. She had to find the answers. Rory's heart raced, despite her attempts to rein in her anxiety. The air thickened, pressing on her skin, suffocating under a moonless sky. As she moved between the towering stones, a chill ran down her spine, as if something had whispered in her ear. Stepping into the grove felt like walking into a breathless dream. Dead silence. No rustling leaves, no nocturnal creatures stirring. No wind. The grove was still as a painting. Even the grass seemed immobile, caught in time. Eerily isolated. A soft puff of wind stirred the trees, yet the swaying branches didn't whisper. She glanced around, confused. *They shouldn't be silent*. Something wasn't right. The deep crimson pendant nestled between her breasts pulsed, reassuring her she was on the right path. Its heat grew as she moved further in, giving her strength. *There's no turning back*. Pine needles crunched under her feet, the only sound breaking the silence. Feet shuffling, she searched for anything that'd explain these peculiar groves. Ahead, a clearing drew her near. She willed her legs to slow down. Lying in the center was a bundle, partially covered by leaves and earth. A body, motionless, seemingly at peace. "Hey." Voice quivering, she approached. Nerves jumping, she knelt, heart rattling her ribs. "Are you okay?" They were wearing a uniform. She could just make out the pattern—a delivery person's outfit. *Oh God, please no*. Closer now, she saw Yu-Fei Cheung's name embroidered. A breath caught in her throat. She'd prepared herself for many things. Bodies, however, hadn't been one of them. "Hey… c'mon. Come on, let's get you home." Rory's voice cracked. She had to shake the shock, figure this out. "Look, they'll have sent out a search, you've been missed. So please—just wake up." But the body didn't move. Time slowed. This felt impossible. That warmth from her pendant hummed against her hand, the only thing urging her on. *Rory*, it whispered in the quiet space between her heartbeats. *Look closer.* She took a deep breath. Leaf litter scraped beneath trembling hands as she brushed aside the covering. Gods above, she hoped nothing moved. Nothing would scurry out, or— *No, too disgusting to think on.* Holding back a gag, she moved more earth. Stillness remained. No movement, sound, or sign of life. Not even an insect dared dwell on this body. Her eyes scanned the rigid frame, head to toe, impressed this uniform—frozen, dirty, and torn—still remained intact. White and green blurring stripes, now trussed with string bindings at the cuffs and ankles, held the figure—dreadfully—in place. *What kind of horror am I looking at?* Panicked mind raced to places she couldn't allow it to dwell. Then a deeper calm washed over her. This hasn't been done by human hands. No experience held in her memory could possibly explain this. Yet, that slight pulse around her heart hinted she was making progress. Gently, she undid each string tie, moving with more care than her anxious mind should've allowed. The procedure was eerily satisfying; even morbidly so. She drew back when finished, watching, but nothing happened. Just as slowly, a fluttering hope grew that this person might've evaded the macabre fate she'd expected at every step. She half-laughed, half-coughed. "Please say something… Move, and tell me I'm not seeing things." Even her bravest wishes fell silent, offering an eerie calm to the dense, still air. Unconsciously, her hand rose to rub the scar on her left wrist. It was soothing—more physical evidence that part of her traumatic history was truly behind her. Still, doubts echoed. *This life is so absurd.* Looking down, she rubbed at her eyes to clear the sudden blurriness in her vision. Yet, nothing moved in focus. Tears rolled down her face, the crystalline drops smudging the earth beneath. For they indeed saw a man there, bound hand and foot, silent, yet very much alive.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
71.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount709
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"truly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount709
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"steeled"
count1
2
word"raced"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"macabre"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"crystalline"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"steeled"
2"raced"
3"chill"
4"down her spine"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"pulsed"
8"warmth"
9"scanned"
10"pulse"
11"macabre"
12"echoed"
13"crystalline"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"tears streamed down"
count1
highlights
0"Tears rolled down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.13% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords37
totalWords699
ratio0.053
matches
0"This is crazy"
1"They shouldn't be silent"
2"There's no turning back"
3"Oh God, please no"
4"Rory"
5"Look closer."
6"No, too disgusting to think on."
7"What kind of horror am I looking at?"
8"This life is so absurd."
62.50% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"*Rory*, it whispered in the quiet space between her heartbeats."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount662
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Nerves1
God1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Holding1
Panicked1
Unconsciously1
Looking1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nerves"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Cheung"
4"Holding"
5"Looking"
places
0"Panicked"
globalScore1
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like walking into a breathless dre"
1"y, motionless, seemingly at peace"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount699
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"grew that this"
66.45% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean30.39
std11.63
cv0.383
sampleLengths
055
144
239
325
432
523
632
716
846
934
105
1120
1212
1334
1426
1536
1619
1736
1824
1929
2029
2135
2248
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
95.83% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs128
matches
0"were wearing"
1"was making"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences77
ratio0.078
matches
0"She could just make out the pattern—a delivery person's outfit."
1"Nothing would scurry out, or— *No, too disgusting to think on.*"
2"Her eyes scanned the rigid frame, head to toe, impressed this uniform—frozen, dirty, and torn—still remained intact."
3"White and green blurring stripes, now trussed with string bindings at the cuffs and ankles, held the figure—dreadfully—in place."
4"The procedure was eerily satisfying; even morbidly so."
5"It was soothing—more physical evidence that part of her traumatic history was truly behind her."
85.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deeper calm washed over her."
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04918032786885246
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.019374068554396422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean9.08
std5.19
cv0.571
sampleLengths
014
112
212
33
48
56
611
712
821
911
102
117
122
137
148
152
1614
174
184
193
2017
2111
224
2312
2411
256
267
2713
286
295
308
313
325
3310
344
358
366
376
387
3911
409
4114
425
432
443
4515
4610
472
485
4912
97.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6493506493506493
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences69
matches
0"Even the grass seemed immobile,"
1"Then a deeper calm washed"
2"Gently, she undid each string"
3"Even her bravest wishes fell"
4"Unconsciously, her hand rose to"
ratio0.072
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences69
matches
0"She steeled her nerves, focused"
1"She had to find the"
2"She glanced around, confused."
3"*They shouldn't be silent*."
4"Its heat grew as she"
5"She willed her legs to"
6"They were wearing a uniform."
7"She could just make out"
8"She'd prepared herself for many"
9"She had to shake the"
10"She took a deep breath."
11"Her eyes scanned the rigid"
12"She drew back when finished,"
13"She half-laughed, half-coughed."
14"It was soothing—more physical evidence"
ratio0.217
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences69
matches
0"The ancient oak stones loomed"
1"Aurora, or Rory to her"
2"The hair on the back"
3"*This is crazy*."
4"She steeled her nerves, focused"
5"She had to find the"
6"Rory's heart raced, despite her"
7"The air thickened, pressing on"
8"The grove was still as"
9"A soft puff of wind"
10"She glanced around, confused."
11"*They shouldn't be silent*."
12"Something wasn't right."
13"The deep crimson pendant nestled"
14"Its heat grew as she"
15"Pine needles crunched under her"
16"Feet shuffling, she searched for"
17"She willed her legs to"
18"A body, motionless, seemingly at"
19"Nerves jumping, she knelt, heart"
ratio0.609
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Yet, that slight pulse around"
1"Just as slowly, a fluttering"
2"Yet, nothing moved in focus."
ratio0.043
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air thickened, pressing on her skin, suffocating under a moonless sky."
1"Feet shuffling, she searched for anything that'd explain these peculiar groves."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Voice quivering (voice quiver)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
84.1660%