Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3NC2WKCGZX0E5CZ6S0JM

Run Details

Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.000647
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thicker as they stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary of the Fae Grove. Time hesitated here, lingers teased by the strange rhythm of its different pulse. Greenwood greenery spilled out in wild, chaotic splashes of colour—blossoms that shimmered like liquid silver, leaves here glowing faintly in hues that defied earthly palettes. Aurora’s breath hitched as she crossed the threshold, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground. The scent of wildflowers infused the air, but beneath it, a faint metallic tang prickled her senses, like the hint of a blade too sharp for mortal sight. Her skin prickled, faint but persistent, as if the very environment acknowledged her presence. "Feels... off," Nyx whispered, shadow flickering behind them, shadows stretching out like fingers afraid to be caught. "Not just the usual magic." Aurora paused, scanning the grove with sharp eyes. The trees didn’t sway with wind; they floated, their roots tangled and shimmering like glass. No sound of insects or birds. Instead, a strange hum vibrated in the air—neither musical nor discordant, but a lilting whisper, like a song played on a wind that carried voices from a forgotten world. Isolde’s silver hair shimmered in the low light as she moved forward, her steps silent, almost dissolving into the environment. She looked back, eyes half-lidded, lips whispering riddles under her breath. "Here, the boundary bends. Blink, and time folds." That only made Aurora’s skin crawl harder. She hesitated before stepping past the standing stones, her hand instinctively brushing the Heartstone Pendant at her neck, feeling the familiar pulse of warmth. The pendant flared faintly, matching the faint glow of her Fae-Forged Blade, which she drew a little from her belt. Always better to be prepared. Deeper, the grove shifted. The ground itself pulsed in gentle waves, like breathing flesh. Vines crept like living veins across the earth, crawling in strange patterns that Aurora couldn't immediately decipher. The plants here twisted in unnatural grace, flowering with clouds of tiny glowing spores that shimmered in the dim, pulsating light. Nyx’s whisper-like voice floated over her shoulder. "What kind of realm is this? It’s not Fae realm or mortal earth. Something’s changed." "That’s obvious," Aurora answered softly. Her gaze flicked up to a cluster of trees that towered like spires, their bark spun with iridescent filaments. She reached out, but her fingers brushed against a trunk and recoiled as a faint ripple of energy shimmered outward. The whole grove seemed alive in ways she hadn't felt before—every breath of wind, every flicker of light, was woven with unseen magic. Whispers tickled the edge of her mind, invisible voices skittering just beyond comprehension. She bit her lip, fighting the urge to turn back. Somewhere here, the veil between worlds was thinner than it appeared. Isolde finally stepped forward, her tranquil voice speaking in riddles. "Within the place of kin and shadow, secrets hide in the light of the unseen." Aurora’s eyes sharpened. “Secrets or traps?” she asked. Her gaze snagged on a faint shimmer ahead, like a ripple in space. She moved toward it, Blade lowered but ready. The ground beneath her trembled softly, like a heartbeat she could feel through her feet. She knelt, brushing her fingers over the rippling space—an anomaly, a tear in the fabric. Not dangerous, but definitely not natural. “Whatever this is, it’s unattended.” Nyx drifted closer, voice almost a whisper. “Could be a tear in the Veil. Maybe even a rift.” Aurora’s stomach clenched. She looked around as the grove’s strange pulse intensified, every sense alert. Wildflowers stretched upward, their glow flickering like candle flames caught in a breath of wind. Shadows edged closer—more shadow than substance—as if the darkness itself leaned in. The moment stretched, thick with expectation. Then, a soft, unnatural glow burst from within the rippling space. A flicker of movement—something human, but not. A figure emerged, tall and shrouded in shifting shadow, eyes glowing violet like twin lanterns. Nyx stepped back, tense. The apparition hovered, a silent sentinel. Its form flickered, half-shadow, half-human, voice like the rustling of leaves. “You are not of here.” Aurora held her ground, shoulders tense. “Who are you?” The figure’s form twisted, flickered. “Guardian of the boundary, keeper of secrets. I sense your intent.” Isolde, eyes gleaming with curiosity, slowly raised her hands. “We seek knowledge. We mean no harm.” The shadow’s form wavered, then nodded once, slow and deliberate. “The realm’s heart beats here. But beware. The boundaries are fragile. What you touch can’t always be returned.” Aurora kept her voice steady. “We’re only passing through.” A faint smile flickered across the shadow’s face, more warning than amusement. “Few pass without consequence.” The ripple softened, the shadow dissolving back into the grove’s flickering glow. The tear in the fabric remained, pulsing faintly, as if beckoning. Nyx’s voice cut softly across the space. “What now?” Aurora hesitated, feeling that quiet call from the mystery beyond. She slid her fingers into her pocket, feeling the Heartstone Pendant’s faint warmth. The grove whispered around her, of secrets buried deep, of thresholds crossed. She looked back at the others. “We go deeper. We find what’s on the other side.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Aurora answered softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
65.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count3
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount873
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"shimmered"
count4
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count3
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"sentinel"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count3
16
word"gleaming"
count1
17
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"chaotic"
2"shimmered"
3"scanning"
4"vibrated"
5"whisper"
6"familiar"
7"warmth"
8"pulsed"
9"flicked"
10"flicker"
11"trembled"
12"could feel"
13"stomach"
14"sentinel"
15"flickered"
16"gleaming"
17"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords862
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount732
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove1
Aurora10
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae-Forged1
Blade2
Nyx5
Isolde3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Blade"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.817
windowScore1
55.66% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed alive in ways she hadn't felt before—every breath of wind, every flicker of light, was woven with unseen magic"
1"as if beckoning"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.32
wordCount862
matches
0"neither musical nor"
1"Not dangerous, but definitely not natural"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean30.79
std16.92
cv0.55
sampleLengths
057
158
222
358
439
556
652
722
844
957
1025
1129
1241
1318
1442
1539
164
1722
189
1916
2016
2128
229
2316
2423
259
2635
2716
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was woven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences77
ratio0.091
matches
0"Greenwood greenery spilled out in wild, chaotic splashes of colour—blossoms that shimmered like liquid silver, leaves here glowing faintly in hues that defied earthly palettes."
1"The trees didn’t sway with wind; they floated, their roots tangled and shimmering like glass."
2"Instead, a strange hum vibrated in the air—neither musical nor discordant, but a lilting whisper, like a song played on a wind that carried voices from a forgotten world."
3"The whole grove seemed alive in ways she hadn't felt before—every breath of wind, every flicker of light, was woven with unseen magic."
4"She knelt, brushing her fingers over the rippling space—an anomaly, a tear in the fabric."
5"Shadows edged closer—more shadow than substance—as if the darkness itself leaned in."
6"A flicker of movement—something human, but not."
88.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount743
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.052489905787348586
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.020188425302826378
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.19
std6.16
cv0.55
sampleLengths
019
113
225
316
428
514
617
75
88
915
106
1129
1220
1311
148
157
1624
1720
185
194
2010
2117
2221
237
2415
255
2619
2720
2823
2913
3010
3111
3210
3315
343
355
3613
378
3815
3915
406
415
427
4311
443
4512
4615
4712
486
4911
69.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44155844155844154
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, a strange hum vibrated"
1"Always better to be prepared."
2"Somewhere here, the veil between"
3"Then, a soft, unnatural glow"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her skin prickled, faint but"
1"She looked back, eyes half-lidded,"
2"She hesitated before stepping past"
3"Her gaze flicked up to"
4"She reached out, but her"
5"She bit her lip, fighting"
6"Her gaze snagged on a"
7"She moved toward it, Blade"
8"She knelt, brushing her fingers"
9"She looked around as the"
10"Its form flickered, half-shadow, half-human,"
11"She slid her fingers into"
12"She looked back at the"
ratio0.213
17.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences61
matches
0"The air grew thicker as"
1"Time hesitated here, lingers teased"
2"Greenwood greenery spilled out in"
3"Aurora’s breath hitched as she"
4"The scent of wildflowers infused"
5"Her skin prickled, faint but"
6"Nyx whispered, shadow flickering behind"
7"Aurora paused, scanning the grove"
8"The trees didn’t sway with"
9"Isolde’s silver hair shimmered in"
10"She looked back, eyes half-lidded,"
11"That only made Aurora’s skin"
12"She hesitated before stepping past"
13"The pendant flared faintly, matching"
14"The ground itself pulsed in"
15"Vines crept like living veins"
16"The plants here twisted in"
17"Nyx’s whisper-like voice floated over"
18"Aurora answered softly"
19"Her gaze flicked up to"
ratio0.885
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Greenwood greenery spilled out in wild, chaotic splashes of colour—blossoms that shimmered like liquid silver, leaves here glowing faintly in hues that defied e…"
1"Her skin prickled, faint but persistent, as if the very environment acknowledged her presence."
2"Instead, a strange hum vibrated in the air—neither musical nor discordant, but a lilting whisper, like a song played on a wind that carried voices from a forgot…"
3"She hesitated before stepping past the standing stones, her hand instinctively brushing the Heartstone Pendant at her neck, feeling the familiar pulse of warmth…"
4"The plants here twisted in unnatural grace, flowering with clouds of tiny glowing spores that shimmered in the dim, pulsating light."
5"Her gaze flicked up to a cluster of trees that towered like spires, their bark spun with iridescent filaments."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.111
76.3997%