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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3RCTJP2VTMJY4S8GMYJ8
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Model:
Hermes 3 405B
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
43.9s
Cost:
$0.005386
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
88.67%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
54.70%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
73.05%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
28.18%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.1535%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The sharp rap at the
door startled me from my research. Three deadbolts meant three chances to compose myself before answering.
I turned the last lock
and cracked the door. And there she stood. Rory.
God, I'd forgotten how blue
her eyes were.
They were even bluer against
the luggage under them.
Sleep hadn't been kind to
her recently. "Aurora."
I kept my voice neutral
. "This is unexpected."
She looked at me, then
past me into the flat. "You gonna let me in or do I have to talk over Ptolemy's yowling?" I stepped aside wordlessly.
She brushed past, leaving a
whiff of Golden Empress takeout in her wake. Late shift.
She always did work too
hard. "You look tired."
It came out flat
. Almost an accusation. "I worked a double."
She didn't take the bait
.
Instead, she moved further into
the flat, trailing fingers over the spines of books. "This is new." The photo. Istanbul, six years ago. Her hair had been shorter. Mine less gray.
We'd been stupid happy before
everything went to hell. "I found it last week." Along with the silver bangle bracelet I'd bought her that trip.
I'd stumbled to the bin
half-drunk at 2 am to fish it out.
The bracelet lay nestled in
my sock drawer now. Ridiculous. "Place looks the same. Research going well?"
She turned to the wall
of sticky notes and crime scene photos. Her brow
furrowed
. "As well as can be expected." She nodded, hand falling away. The
silence
stretched. "Have you eaten?" The question tumbled out. Idiot. Of course, she hadn't. Not if she came here first after a double shift. "I'm fine." "Sit."
I moved to the kitchen
before she could argue, digging for pots. "Tea? Noodles? I think I have veggie ones." "Trying to poison me with kindness?" I glared over my shoulder. She arched a dark brow, arms crossed. There
was that fire
. Good. "So dramatic. The usual I presume?"
I filled the kettle, keeping
my back to her. Metal clattered on the stove. Pot. Chopsticks. Anything but looking at her. "I-" "Stop."
I rubbed my forehead, suddenly
tired. "Just...sit. We both know how this
dance
goes." I heard her shift. A moment later, the scrape of chair legs. I exhaled. Good. We managed a brittle peace as I cooked. Her presence filled my small kitchen, watching me, weighing me. I dumped noodles in boiling water with more force than necessary. "I meant to call." Her voice was soft. The water sloshed, scalding my hand. I hid my wince. "Of course." I'd only left a dozen messages. No matter. "Things happen." "Lucien-" I held up a hand. "Please. Let's not-" "You disappeared!" She stood, sending the chair skidding back. "For two years, Lucien! No word, no note. I thought-" "You thought what?" I turned to her, leaning on the counter to hide the shake in my hands. "That I ghosted you? That I got bored?" "I don't know!" She threw her hands up. "You didn't give me anything to go on!" "I was working! The Dresden case. It took me-" "Two years? Without a single word? Do you know how many times I called? I thought you were dead!" The crack in her voice broke me. I closed my eyes, gathering fraying edges of control. "I fucked up. Christ, Rory, I- I was in over my head. Dresden was... I got lost in it. Forgot what daylight looked like. I forgot a lot of things." I swallowed hard. "But you weren’t one of them. You were the thought that got me through that mess." It hung between us, ugly and honest. She deflated, head bowing. "You could have called." "Would you have answered?" The
silence
said it all. I sighed, rubbing my forehead. "Rory, I..." "I moved on." Her voice was quiet. "After you disappeared. I tried to, anyway." My heart stopped. I'd seen the photos on Instagram. The new man. Evan. Somebulky Welshman. Accountant? Banker? Something soulless. "I saw." My voice was tight. "You look happy." "I'm not." It was barely a
whisper
. "I thought I could be. He's... safe. Boring. Not-" Me. Not me. She didn't have to say it. My relief was pathetic. I pushed it down. "And now?" She met my eyes. Her blue ones were bright with tears she'd never let fall. "I don't know." I leaned against the counter, marveling at how much two words could hurt. I don't know. It had been the answer to everything with her. Her future. Her feelings. Us. I fought the urge to close the distance. Kiss the doubt off her lips. I knew her kiss. Knew how to make her respond, arching into me. I could- The kettle whistled, shrill and demanding. I startled, heart
pounding
. "Later." She peeled her gaze away, toward the stove. "We should eat first." I turned robotically, reaching for the kettle with one hand and the chopsticks with the other. The noodles were overcooked. Soggy. Like my goddamned self-preservation. The rest of the night went like that. Mechanical. Polite. Conversations that skirted the graveyard of us. We tiptoed around landmines and old wounds,
carefully
picking our way back to neutral territory. The clock ticked midnight. We'd
navigated
the noodles and the tea. It was now or never. "Rory-"
created_at
"2026-02-19T10:46:12.129Z"
2/19/2026, 10:46:12 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
15
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"I'd only [only]"
1
"I swallowed hard [hard]"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.319
leniency
0.638
rawRatio
0.133
effectiveRatio
0.085
88.67%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
883
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
1
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"suddenly"
1
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
54.70%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
883
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"furrowed"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
2
2
word
"dance"
count
1
3
word
"whisper"
count
1
4
word
"pounding"
count
1
5
word
"mechanical"
count
1
6
word
"navigated"
count
1
highlights
0
"furrowed"
1
"silence"
2
"dance"
3
"whisper"
4
"pounding"
5
"mechanical"
6
"navigated"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
113
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
113
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
141
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
33
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
881
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
6
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
7
wordCount
632
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
0.16
worstName
"Golden"
maxWindowNameDensity
0
worstWindowName
(null)
discoveredNames
Golden
1
Empress
1
Idiot
1
Metal
1
Instagram
1
Welshman
1
Me
1
persons
0
"Metal"
places
(empty)
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
46
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
881
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
141
matches
0
"was that fire"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
53
mean
16.62
std
10.42
cv
0.627
sampleLengths
0
21
1
38
2
9
3
24
4
25
5
10
6
26
7
23
8
39
9
22
10
6
11
8
12
22
13
2
14
21
15
6
16
17
17
27
18
1
19
15
20
15
21
29
22
8
23
22
24
1
25
8
26
19
27
26
28
16
29
9
30
19
31
16
32
49
33
11
34
4
35
4
36
5
37
7
38
14
39
19
40
9
41
16
42
9
43
10
44
18
45
30
46
29
47
10
48
13
49
25
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
113
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
125
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
141
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
634
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.03785488958990536
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.012618296529968454
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
141
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
141
mean
6.25
std
4.75
cv
0.76
sampleLengths
0
11
1
10
2
9
3
4
4
1
5
8
6
9
7
7
8
6
9
3
10
10
11
14
12
4
13
13
14
2
15
6
16
7
17
3
18
9
19
14
20
3
21
2
22
4
23
5
24
3
25
9
26
16
27
13
28
9
29
1
30
19
31
3
32
6
33
5
34
3
35
7
36
1
37
4
38
10
39
2
40
13
41
8
42
6
43
5
44
7
45
4
46
1
47
15
48
5
49
1
73.05%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
7
diversityRatio
0.46808510638297873
totalSentences
141
uniqueOpeners
66
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
88
matches
0
"Almost an accusation."
1
"Instead, she moved further into"
2
"Of course, she hadn't."
ratio
0.034
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
57
totalSentences
88
matches
0
"I turned the last lock"
1
"They were even bluer against"
2
"I kept my voice neutral"
3
"She looked at me, then"
4
"I stepped aside wordlessly."
5
"She brushed past, leaving a"
6
"She always did work too"
7
"It came out flat"
8
"She didn't take the bait"
9
"Her hair had been shorter."
10
"We'd been stupid happy before"
11
"I'd stumbled to the bin"
12
"She turned to the wall"
13
"Her brow furrowed."
14
"She nodded, hand falling away."
15
"I moved to the kitchen"
16
"I glared over my shoulder."
17
"She arched a dark brow,"
18
"I filled the kettle, keeping"
19
"I rubbed my forehead, suddenly"
ratio
0.648
28.18%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
76
totalSentences
88
matches
0
"The sharp rap at the"
1
"I turned the last lock"
2
"God, I'd forgotten how blue"
3
"They were even bluer against"
4
"Sleep hadn't been kind to"
5
"I kept my voice neutral"
6
"She looked at me, then"
7
"I stepped aside wordlessly."
8
"She brushed past, leaving a"
9
"She always did work too"
10
"It came out flat"
11
"She didn't take the bait"
12
"Istanbul, six years ago."
13
"Her hair had been shorter."
14
"We'd been stupid happy before"
15
"I'd stumbled to the bin"
16
"The bracelet lay nestled in"
17
"She turned to the wall"
18
"Her brow furrowed."
19
"She nodded, hand falling away."
ratio
0.864
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
88
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
13
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
15
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"I moved (move)"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.021
leniency
0.043
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.043
88.1535%