Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3RWXQ7FBEARZ75E8E5SC

Run Details

Duration:
14.5s
Cost:
$0.024160
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest bustled with the usual hum of evening life—clinking glasses, muffled conversations, and the soft strain of jazz leaking from hidden speakers. The distinctive green neon sign outside sliced through Soho's nighttime fog like an emerald beacon. Rory, having just finished another round of deliveries, stepped into the cozy haven of Silas' bar. Her eyes flicked to the corner where a worn bookshelf disguised the entrance to the hidden room, a tiny smirk crossing her lips. She headed to the bar, her steps light but tired. A hulking figure loomed over the polished oak counter, Silas' large frame leaning into his task of cleaning a glass with a white rag. His movements were slow, deliberate, like the hands of a well-wound clock. "Evening, Si," Rory greeted. She slid onto a stool and shrugged off her jacket, exposing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. Silas looked up, his eye catching the glint of his silver signet ring. "Rory," he nodded, a slight limp evident as he shifted to face her more directly. "The usual?" Without waiting for a response, he reached under the counter. She hesitated just a moment. "Sure," she relented, her smile tired but genuine. As Silas fixed her drink, Rory glanced around the bar. It wasn't crowded tonight. A young couple occupied a booth, their heads bowed close in conspiratorial whispers. An older man at the far end seemed lost in thoughts, staring into the amber liquid of his glass as if it held the secrets to his regrets. Rory's eyes finally settled on a figure seated alone at one of the small round tables near a window, his back to her. When Silas set a glass of whiskey in front of her, she sipped appreciatively and settled into the comfort of the place, her sanctuary. Just then, the lone figure in the corner shifted, the subtle motion catching Rory's eye again. The man turned slightly, and in an instant, recognition hit her like an icy wave crashing to shore. "Evan?" The name escaped her lips before she could think to hold it back. The weight of a thousand nights spent running from memories suddenly bore down on her. The man turned fully now, his eyes meeting hers. It was him, undoubtedly. But everything about his presence seemed altered. His once youthful face was etched with hard lines, and his eyes, those eyes she'd once thought were filled with warmth, now harbored a cold, distant shadow. He managed a smile—a ghostly echo of the charm it once held. "Rory," he said simply, rising from his seat. He walked over, each step filled with hesitation, as if the space between them was bridged by fragile glass. "It's been a while." "It has," she replied, her voice steadier than she felt. "I didn't expect to see you here." He shrugged, the gesture awkward. "Got into town a few days ago. Thought I'd explore old haunts." He glanced around the bar, then back to her. "Didn't expect to run into you either." Silas watched the interaction from the corner of his eye, but continued his duties, aware of the disquieting current now weaving through the room. Rory gestured to the empty seat beside her. "Join me?" "Sure," he said, settling onto the stool, his movements still carrying that old, familiar confidence despite the undercurrent of change. There was a moment's silence, heavy with the history between them. Rory traced the rim of her glass with a slender finger, resisting the urge to unsheathe the emotional armor she'd worn ever since leaving. "So," she began, her eyes now steady on his, "what brings you back?" Evan cleared his throat. "Work mostly. Got a consulting gig in the city. Thought I'd revisit some places." His voice trailed off, as if the words carried more weight than he intended to reveal. Rory arched an eyebrow. "Consulting, huh? Quite the change from when I last knew you." A faint smile touched his lips. "Quite the change in a lot of things," he admitted. He let the statement hang in the air for a moment before he continued. "And you? How have you been?" "Managing," she said, glancing toward Silas who gave her an almost imperceptible nod. "Working part-time, keeping busy. Life in London is... different." Evan's gaze fell to her wrist, catching the familiar crescent scar. "I used to worry about you," he confessed, his voice low. "Wondered if you were doing okay." "I'm fine," Rory replied quickly, too quickly. She looked away, a twinge of old pain pressing against her chest. "I had to be." "Yeah," Evan murmured, more to himself than to her. "I get that." His eyes drifted over the bar's decor—a collage of yesterdays memorialized in faded maps and black-and-white photographs—and for a second, he seemed far away. The silence between them thickened, not uncomfortable but dense with unspoken tales. Evan finally broke it. "I've changed, Rory," he said quietly, his eyes meeting hers with an honesty she hadn't seen before. "I had to." She nodded slowly, finding the brittleness in her own voice. "We both did." He reached for her hand, his grip gentle but firm. "I'm sorry," he said, the words poignant in their simplicity, carrying a weight that no apology could truly relieve. Rory looked at their joined hands, then up into his eyes. "So am I," she whispered. They sat there, the hum of the bar a distant murmur, allowing the shared silence to mend the frayed edges of their past. It was a beginning, not of something new, but of understanding, a fragile bridge built on the ashes of what once was. Time had passed, irrevocably changing both their paths. But in the small, dimly lit corner of The Raven's Nest, the weight of unspoken regrets found a voice, and for a fleeting moment, the distance between who they were and who they'd become seemed a little less vast.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Rory having just [just]"
1"he said simply [simply]"
2"He glanced around [around]"
3"Rory replied quickly [quickly]"
4"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.677
leniency1
rawRatio0.238
effectiveRatio0.238
69.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount995
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"hulking"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"weight"
count4
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count2
12
word"silence"
count3
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count2
16
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"flicked"
2"hulking"
3"loomed"
4"glint"
5"sanctuary"
6"weight"
7"etched"
8"warmth"
9"echo"
10"charm"
11"familiar"
12"silence"
13"traced"
14"eyebrow"
15"unspoken"
16"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
99.36% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences65
matches
0"filled with warmth"
1"d with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount837
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Silas5
Rory10
Evan4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.903
windowScore1
8.49% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed lost in thoughts, staring into the amber liquid of his glass as if it held the secrets to his regrets"
1"seemed altered"
2"seemed far away"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.026
wordCount987
matches
0"not uncomfortable but dense with unspoken tales"
1"not of something new, but of understanding, a fragile bridge built on the ashes of wha"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean30.84
std17.53
cv0.568
sampleLengths
088
136
223
340
413
578
624
734
829
959
1031
1117
1233
1324
1410
1520
1635
1713
1834
1915
2036
2122
2228
2323
2412
2536
2624
2713
2829
2916
3045
3147
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"was etched"
1"were filled"
2"was bridged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"The Raven's Nest bustled with the usual hum of evening life—clinking glasses, muffled conversations, and the soft strain of jazz leaking from hidden speakers."
1"He managed a smile—a ghostly echo of the charm it once held."
2"His eyes drifted over the bar's decor—a collage of yesterdays memorialized in faded maps and black-and-white photographs—and for a second, he seemed far away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount132
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.03787878787878788
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.007575757575757576
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean12.82
std7.7
cv0.601
sampleLengths
024
115
216
323
410
524
612
74
819
913
1015
1112
125
138
1410
154
1613
1728
1823
1924
2016
2118
2214
2315
249
254
267
2727
2812
298
3019
314
3210
337
345
3521
367
3724
388
392
4020
4111
4224
4313
444
4530
464
4711
486
4910
68.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44155844155844154
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners34
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Just then, the lone figure"
ratio0.016
26.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences62
matches
0"Her eyes flicked to the"
1"She headed to the bar,"
2"His movements were slow, deliberate,"
3"She slid onto a stool"
4"he nodded, a slight limp"
5"She hesitated just a moment."
6"she relented, her smile tired"
7"It wasn't crowded tonight."
8"It was him, undoubtedly."
9"His once youthful face was"
10"He managed a smile—a ghostly"
11"he said simply, rising from"
12"He walked over, each step"
13"she replied, her voice steadier"
14"He shrugged, the gesture awkward."
15"He glanced around the bar,"
16"he said, settling onto the"
17"she began, her eyes now"
18"His voice trailed off, as"
19"He let the statement hang"
ratio0.484
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The Raven's Nest bustled with"
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"Rory, having just finished another"
3"Her eyes flicked to the"
4"She headed to the bar,"
5"A hulking figure loomed over"
6"His movements were slow, deliberate,"
7"She slid onto a stool"
8"Silas looked up, his eye"
9"he nodded, a slight limp"
10"She hesitated just a moment."
11"she relented, her smile tired"
12"It wasn't crowded tonight."
13"A young couple occupied a"
14"An older man at the"
15"Rory's eyes finally settled on"
16"The man turned slightly, and"
17"The name escaped her lips"
18"The weight of a thousand"
19"The man turned fully now,"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"An older man at the far end seemed lost in thoughts, staring into the amber liquid of his glass as if it held the secrets to his regrets."
29.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she replied, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"His voice trailed, as if the words carried more weight than he intended to reveal"
2"he confessed, his voice low"
3"Evan murmured, more to himself than to her"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he admitted (admit)"
1"he confessed (confess)"
2"Evan murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.258
66.9921%