Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3SQV2QCCKS5RZPKC2DQV

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Duration:
43.7s
Cost:
$0.034128
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crescent moon hung like a ghostly scar in the night sky as Aurora approached the edge of Richmond Park. The iron-wrought gates had been closed hours ago, but she knew another way in—a gap in the fence behind the old groundskeeper's shed that Eva had shown her years ago. "Can't believe I'm doing this," she muttered, squeezing through the narrow opening. Her delivery uniform caught on a jagged edge, and she winced as she heard the fabric tear. The Heartstone Pendant thumped against her chest, warmer than it should be against her skin. Aurora had been having dreams for weeks—vivid, insistent dreams of the standing stones in Richmond Park calling to her. Tonight, the pendant had practically burned against her skin while she'd been delivering noodles, as if urging her toward the park. Dry leaves crunched beneath her trainers as she navigated through the darkness. The usual night sounds of London—distant traffic, occasional sirens—faded with each step deeper into the park. Her phone's torch cast a weak beam ahead, shadows dancing as she walked. The air grew unexpectedly cooler, with an odd stillness that made the hairs on her neck rise. According to the local myths Eva had collected, the standing stones only revealed themselves under certain conditions—moonlight, solstices, or to those specifically summoned. Aurora wasn't sure which category she fell into, but the pendant's insistent warmth suggested she wasn't here by accident. A twig snapped somewhere to her right. Aurora froze, swinging her light toward the sound. Nothing but gnarled oaks and undergrowth. "Just a fox," she reassured herself, continuing forward. "Richmond Park's full of them." But when she lowered her light, she could have sworn the shadows moved differently than they had before—not following her torch's beam but sliding away independently, as if retreating from her presence. The trees thinned, and suddenly there they were—ancient standing stones arranged in a rough circle, their weathered surfaces gleaming faintly in the moonlight. Aurora's breath caught. The historic sites she'd researched mentioned no stone circle in Richmond Park. Yet here it stood, massive and undeniable. The Heartstone grew painfully hot against her skin as she approached the boundary. "Hello?" she called, her voice sounding thin and fragile in the unnatural quiet. "Is anyone here?" No response came, yet the silence itself felt expectant, as if the darkness were listening intently. Aurora stepped between two of the towering stones, crossing the threshold into what locals called the Fae Grove. The change was subtle but immediate—the air smelled different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in autumn. The temperature shifted, neither warmer nor colder but somehow both at once. The pendant's heat subsided to a gentle pulse. She'd found what it wanted her to find. Wild flowers carpeted the clearing, their petals luminous under moonlight that seemed brighter inside the circle than out. At the center stood a flat stone altar, smooth and unmarked. Aurora checked her phone—no signal, as expected. The screen showed 11:42 PM. She made a mental note, remembering Eva's warnings about time flowing strangely within the Grove. She approached the altar, drawn by some compulsion she couldn't name. The pendant swung forward as she bent to examine the stone surface, as if pulled by an invisible force. That's when she noticed the first wrongness. The flowers, which appeared to wave in a gentle breeze, moved against the air current she felt on her skin. As if they responded to winds from another place entirely. "Right," she whispered, "definitely not normal." A rustling sound came from behind her. Aurora spun, torch raised, but the beam revealed only empty air where she was certain something had moved. The pendant pulsed in time with her quickening heartbeat. She clutched it, finding the familiar contours of the crimson stone reassuring. "I'm here," she announced to the empty Grove, trying to keep the tremor from her voice. "You've been calling me, and I came. What do you want?" The words echoed strangely, seeming to bounce back from multiple directions, overlapping until they became unintelligible whispers that lingered too long. Aurora took a steadying breath. The crescent scar on her wrist tingled—a sensation she hadn't felt since the night she'd fled from Evan. Something brushed against her ankle. She jumped back, swinging her light downward. The flowers had parted, creating a perfect circle of bare earth around her feet. As she watched, they continued to recede, like a tide drawing back from shore. "Stop," she commanded, surprised when the movement immediately ceased. The silence deepened. Even the distant London sounds that should have penetrated this far into the park were absent. Aurora realized she couldn't even hear the familiar white noise of wind in leaves. A soft, melodic humming began. Not from any direction she could pinpoint—it seemed to emanate from the stones themselves, a barely-there vibration that resonated in her chest. The pendant answered, its pulse strengthening until it felt like a second heartbeat against her skin. Shadows pooled at the base of the standing stones, deeper than the darkness surrounding them. Aurora's light couldn't penetrate these patches of perfect black. As she watched, one shadow stretched, elongating along the ground like spilled ink, reaching toward the altar at the center. "Who's there?" she called, backing away from the approaching darkness. Her back hit something solid—one of the standing stones, though she was certain she'd been in the center of the clearing. The humming changed pitch, taking on an almost questioning tone. The pendant grew painfully hot again, and Aurora fought the urge to rip it from her neck. "What do you want from me?" Her voice sounded small and very human in this ancient, other place. The elongated shadow paused in its advance. Then, impossibly, it began to rise from the ground, forming a column of darkness that slowly took shape—not quite human, taller and more slender, with proportions that made Aurora's eyes strain to comprehend. She closed her eyes briefly, trying to steady herself. When she opened them, the shadow was gone. But something brushed against her hair, like fingers gently tucking a strand behind her ear. Aurora's breath caught. She spun, sweeping her torch in a wide arc. Nothing. A whisper came, so close it might have been inside her own head: "Malphora." The name sent a shock through her system. She'd never heard it before, yet it resonated with something deep within her, like the echo of a forgotten memory. "I'm Aurora," she said firmly, grounding herself in her identity. "Aurora Carter." A soft sound like laughter rippled through the Grove. The flowers began to glow with a pale blue light, illuminating the clearing better than her torch. She clicked it off, watching as patterns formed in the blossoms—swirls and whorls that seemed to be writing in a language she almost recognized. The pendant pulled forward again, straining toward the altar. Aurora reluctantly approached it once more. The stone surface was no longer blank—intricate symbols carved themselves into the rock as she watched, the fresh grooves filling with what looked like liquid moonlight. The humming intensified, vibrating through her bones. Aurora felt eyes upon her—not one pair but many, watching from between the trees beyond the standing stones, from gaps in the air itself that hadn't been there moments before. She glanced at her phone. The screen read 11:43 PM. Only a minute had passed, yet it felt like hours. "Malphora," came the whisper again, from everywhere and nowhere. The pendant jerked violently, snapping its chain. Before Aurora could catch it, the Heartstone landed on the altar, fitting perfectly into a depression that formed to receive it. Immediately, the air changed—pressure dropping as if before a storm. The standing stones began to glow with the same inner light as the flowers, revealing runes carved into their surfaces that matched those appearing on the altar. The shadows between the stones deepened further, and within them, Aurora glimpsed movement—tall, elegant figures with features she couldn't quite focus on, watching her with ancient, patient hunger. One stepped forward, extending a hand of impossible proportions, fingers too long and joints too numerous. Its face remained in shadow, but Aurora felt its gaze like a physical touch. "Return to us," it said in a voice that wasn't quite sound but pure meaning flowing into her mind. "The veil thins. Your time of wandering ends, Malphora." The pendant pulsed on the altar, its crimson light spreading in veins through the stone, connecting to the runes, which began to rotate and shift. Aurora felt a pull like gravity shifting sideways, urging her toward the extended hand and the darkness beyond. The crescent scar on her wrist burned as if freshly cut. With sudden clarity, she understood the pendant hadn't led her here—it had been bringing her back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.647
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
79.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"gently"
4"reluctantly"
5"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
25.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1485
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"dancing"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count2
10
word"resonated"
count2
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"echo"
count1
13
word"firmly"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"dancing"
2"warmth"
3"gleaming"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"pulsed"
7"familiar"
8"echoed"
9"perfect"
10"resonated"
11"whisper"
12"echo"
13"firmly"
14"intricate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
46.70% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1464
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"As she watched, they continued to recede, like a tide drawing back from shore."
78.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1403
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.43
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora20
Richmond3
Park3
Eva3
Heartstone3
Pendant1
London2
Fae1
Grove4
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore0.787
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"as if urging her toward the park"
1"as if retreating from her presence"
2"seemed brighter inside the circle than out"
3"felt like a second heartbeat against he"
4"not quite human, taller and more slender, with proportions that made Aurora's eyes strain to comprehend"
5"whorls that seemed to be writing in a language she almost recognized"
6"looked like liquid moonlight"
7"felt like hours"
8"quite focus on, watching her with ancient, patient hunger"
9"quite sound but pure meaning flowing into her mind"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.049
wordCount1464
matches
0"not following her torch's beam but sliding away independently, as if retreating from her presen"
1"neither warmer nor"
2"not one pair but many, watching from between the trees beyond the standing st"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean25.68
std13.06
cv0.509
sampleLengths
050
129
255
358
442
57
614
713
832
945
1013
1116
1216
1350
1416
1529
1627
1730
187
1930
206
2125
2221
2327
2421
2523
265
2735
289
2933
3027
3116
3244
3331
3427
3518
3640
3717
3815
3913
4014
4128
4212
4350
4441
457
4630
4720
489
4928
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"been closed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs251
matches
0"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount19
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences18
totalSentences109
ratio0.165
matches
0"The iron-wrought gates had been closed hours ago, but she knew another way in—a gap in the fence behind the old groundskeeper's shed that Eva had shown her years ago."
1"Aurora had been having dreams for weeks—vivid, insistent dreams of the standing stones in Richmond Park calling to her."
2"The usual night sounds of London—distant traffic, occasional sirens—faded with each step deeper into the park."
3"According to the local myths Eva had collected, the standing stones only revealed themselves under certain conditions—moonlight, solstices, or to those specifically summoned."
4"But when she lowered her light, she could have sworn the shadows moved differently than they had before—not following her torch's beam but sliding away independently, as if retreating from her presence."
5"The trees thinned, and suddenly there they were—ancient standing stones arranged in a rough circle, their weathered surfaces gleaming faintly in the moonlight."
6"The change was subtle but immediate—the air smelled different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in autumn."
7"Aurora checked her phone—no signal, as expected."
8"The crescent scar on her wrist tingled—a sensation she hadn't felt since the night she'd fled from Evan."
9"Not from any direction she could pinpoint—it seemed to emanate from the stones themselves, a barely-there vibration that resonated in her chest."
10"Her back hit something solid—one of the standing stones, though she was certain she'd been in the center of the clearing."
11"Then, impossibly, it began to rise from the ground, forming a column of darkness that slowly took shape—not quite human, taller and more slender, with proportions that made Aurora's eyes strain to comprehend."
12"She clicked it off, watching as patterns formed in the blossoms—swirls and whorls that seemed to be writing in a language she almost recognized."
13"The stone surface was no longer blank—intricate symbols carved themselves into the rock as she watched, the fresh grooves filling with what looked like liquid moonlight."
14"Aurora felt eyes upon her—not one pair but many, watching from between the trees beyond the standing stones, from gaps in the air itself that hadn't been there moments before."
15"Immediately, the air changed—pressure dropping as if before a storm."
16"The shadows between the stones deepened further, and within them, Aurora glimpsed movement—tall, elegant figures with features she couldn't quite focus on, watching her with ancient, patient hunger."
17"With sudden clarity, she understood the pendant hadn't led her here—it had been bringing her back."
94.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1424
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount65
adverbRatio0.04564606741573034
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.020365168539325844
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.43
std7.01
cv0.522
sampleLengths
020
130
212
317
415
519
621
712
816
913
1017
1123
1219
137
148
156
168
175
1832
1923
203
2112
227
2313
2413
253
2616
2718
2820
2912
308
318
3218
3311
347
355
3615
3711
3819
397
4020
4110
426
437
4418
459
4612
4716
4811
4921
55.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3761467889908257
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences102
matches
0"Even the distant London sounds"
1"Then, impossibly, it began to"
2"Only a minute had passed,"
3"Immediately, the air changed—pressure dropping"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences102
matches
0"she muttered, squeezing through the"
1"Her delivery uniform caught on"
2"Her phone's torch cast a"
3"she reassured herself, continuing forward"
4"she called, her voice sounding"
5"She'd found what it wanted"
6"She made a mental note,"
7"She approached the altar, drawn"
8"She clutched it, finding the"
9"she announced to the empty"
10"She jumped back, swinging her"
11"she commanded, surprised when the"
12"she called, backing away from"
13"Her back hit something solid—one"
14"Her voice sounded small and"
15"She closed her eyes briefly,"
16"She spun, sweeping her torch"
17"She'd never heard it before,"
18"she said firmly, grounding herself"
19"She clicked it off, watching"
ratio0.225
62.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences102
matches
0"The crescent moon hung like"
1"The iron-wrought gates had been"
2"she muttered, squeezing through the"
3"Her delivery uniform caught on"
4"The Heartstone Pendant thumped against"
5"Aurora had been having dreams"
6"Tonight, the pendant had practically"
7"The usual night sounds of"
8"Her phone's torch cast a"
9"The air grew unexpectedly cooler,"
10"Aurora wasn't sure which category"
11"A twig snapped somewhere to"
12"Aurora froze, swinging her light"
13"Nothing but gnarled oaks and"
14"she reassured herself, continuing forward"
15"The trees thinned, and suddenly"
16"Aurora's breath caught."
17"The historic sites she'd researched"
18"The Heartstone grew painfully hot"
19"she called, her voice sounding"
ratio0.794
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"As if they responded to"
1"Before Aurora could catch it,"
ratio0.02
11.90% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Tonight, the pendant had practically burned against her skin while she'd been delivering noodles, as if urging her toward the park."
1"The air grew unexpectedly cooler, with an odd stillness that made the hairs on her neck rise."
2"But when she lowered her light, she could have sworn the shadows moved differently than they had before—not following her torch's beam but sliding away independ…"
3"The change was subtle but immediate—the air smelled different, heavy with the scent of flowers that shouldn't bloom in autumn."
4"Wild flowers carpeted the clearing, their petals luminous under moonlight that seemed brighter inside the circle than out."
5"The words echoed strangely, seeming to bounce back from multiple directions, overlapping until they became unintelligible whispers that lingered too long."
6"Not from any direction she could pinpoint—it seemed to emanate from the stones themselves, a barely-there vibration that resonated in her chest."
7"Then, impossibly, it began to rise from the ground, forming a column of darkness that slowly took shape—not quite human, taller and more slender, with proportio…"
8"Before Aurora could catch it, the Heartstone landed on the altar, fitting perfectly into a depression that formed to receive it."
9"The standing stones began to glow with the same inner light as the flowers, revealing runes carved into their surfaces that matched those appearing on the altar…"
10"The pendant pulsed on the altar, its crimson light spreading in veins through the stone, connecting to the runes, which began to rotate and shift."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called, her voice sounding thin and fragile in the unnatural quiet"
1"she announced, trying to keep the tremor from her voice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she reassured (reassure)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she announced (announce)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.471
72.8917%