Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR3TGERTVXWDVAE5W9GGJX

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Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.002417
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain streamed down the cracked tile walls of the abandoned tube station, pooling in the dim recesses of the platform. Detective Harlow Quinn's shoes splashed through the puddles as she approached the scene, her sharp eyes taking in every detail. "What've we got, Jenkins?" she asked, gaze sweeping over the body sprawled on the ground. The young uniformed officer looked up from his notes, brow furrowed. "Victim's Evelyn Kowalski, 26. Appears to be a single gunshot wound to the chest. Wallet and phone are still on her." Quinn crouched down, examining the body more closely. The girl's green eyes were open, staring sightlessly, and a dark stain had blossomed across the front of her floral print dress. A tattered leather satchel lay nearby, its contents spilled across the floor. "Robbery gone wrong?" she mused, glancing around at the shadowy alcoves of the platform. "That's what it looks like," Jenkins agreed. "But something seems... off." Quinn raised one eyebrow, and the officer hastened to explain. "I mean, the wound... it's not what I'd expect from a standard gunshot. And look at her hands - no defensive wounds." He gestured to the girl's pristine palms. "And why would a mugger leave the wallet and phone?" The detective considered this, lips pursed. "Good eye, Jenkins. This doesn't have the hallmarks of a simple mugging." She rose to her feet, brushing off her trousers. "Bag the body and take it back to the morgue. I want a full forensic work-up." As the uniformed officers set to their task, Quinn turned her attention to the scattered contents of the satchel. Several leather-bound books, a pair of round glasses, and a small brass compass caught her eye. She picked up the compass, turning it over in her palm. The face was etched with delicate protective sigils, and the needle spun erratically, as if drawn to an unseen force. Quinn frowned, slipping it into her pocket. "Detective!" She turned to see a tall, willowy woman striding toward her, dark curls bouncing against her shoulders. The woman's green eyes were wide with distress, and she clutched a rumpled piece of paper in one hand. "I'm Agent Mara Belova, from MI5," the woman said, flashing a badge. "I understand this is your crime scene, but I need to speak with you." Quinn eyed her warily. "What's this about?" "Evelyn Kowalski was one of ours - an asset in the Directorate of Special Access. She was investigating a lead on a…" Belova glanced around, lowering her voice. "A sensitive matter." The detective felt a tightening in her chest. "You mean the supernatural?" she murmured. Belova nodded, dark eyes serious. "We believe her death may be connected to her work - that's why I'm here." She extended the crumpled paper. "This was found in her possession. I think it may be important." Quinn took the paper, smoothing it out. It appeared to be a map, etched with strange symbols and what looked like a diagram of an underground tunnel system. Her brow furrowed as she studied it. "Where does this lead?" she asked. "The Veil Market," Belova replied grimly. "An underground black market that deals in... unnatural goods. We suspect Evelyn was close to uncovering something there." Quinn's mind raced. The compass in her pocket seemed to grow heavier, as if reacting to the mention of the supernatural market. "You think her death is tied to whatever she was investigating?" Belova nodded. "That's why I need to take over this case, Detective. It's a matter of national security." Quinn's jaw tightened. "With all due respect, Agent Belova, this is my jurisdiction. I can't just hand it off to you." She paused, considering. "But I'm willing to work with you, if you can guarantee me full access to your investigation." The MI5 agent studied her for a moment, then inclined her head. "Very well. We'll need to proceed with the utmost discretion." "Agreed." Quinn glanced back down at the map, her mind whirring. "Let's see what else we can uncover at this Veil Market." * * * The air was thick with the scent of smoke and spices as Quinn and Belova descended the worn stone steps into the Veil Market. The narrow passageways were lined with shadowy stalls, their wares ranging from arcane tomes to gleaming blades to strange, flickering crystals. Quinn gripped the brass compass in her pocket, its needle spinning wildly. Belova moved with a practiced ease, weaving through the throngs of cloaked figures. "Stay close," she murmured to the detective. "And keep your wits about you." Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning the crowd. A flash of red hair caught her eye, and she nudged Belova's arm. "There." She nodded toward a woman sitting alone at a small table, a worn satchel at her feet. "That could be our girl's friend - the one mentioned in the file." Belova followed her gaze, then turned to Quinn. "Let me do the talking." The MI5 agent approached the woman, who looked up with wary green eyes magnified by her round glasses. "Eva Kowalski?" Belova asked. The woman tensed, her fingers tightening on the edge of the table. "Who's asking?" "I'm Agent Mara Belova, with MI5. This is Detective Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police." Belova flashed her badge. "We're here about your friend Evelyn." Eva's face paled. "Evie? What happened?" Quinn stepped forward. "I'm sorry, but Evelyn... Evie, was found dead earlier tonight in an abandoned tube station." The woman's eyes went wide, and she shook her head in disbelief. "No, that can't be... She was supposed to meet me here." Her voice trembled. "You have to be mistaken." Belova's expression softened slightly. "I'm afraid not. We were hoping you might be able to help us understand what happened." Eva's gaze darted between the two women, her hands shaking. "I... I don't know. Evie and I were researching some... unusual occurrences in London. She said she'd found a lead and needed to follow it up." Quinn exchanged a glance with Belova. "Do you have any idea what that lead might have been?" The other woman hesitated, then reached down to retrieve her satchel. "She gave me this, before she left. Said it might be important." She pulled out a small brass compass, its needle spinning wildly. Quinn felt her breath catch in her throat as she recognized the object. "The Veil Compass," she murmured, holding out her hand. "May I?" Eva nodded, passing it over. As Quinn's fingers closed around the brass casing, the needle steadied, pointing resolutely toward a darkened alcove at the edge of the market. Belova's eyes narrowed. "It seems we may have found our next lead."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:46:14.292Z" 2/19/2026, 10:46:14 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Belova glanced around [around]"
1"Belova replied grimly [grimly]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.083
86.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"warily"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"warily"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1103
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"furrowed"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"pristine"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"furrowed"
1"eyebrow"
2"standard"
3"pristine"
4"etched"
5"raced"
6"gleaming"
7"practiced ease"
8"scanning"
9"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"d in disbelief"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
12.80% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount656
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.74
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Jenkins1
Belova13
Veil1
Market1
Eva3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Jenkins"
3"Belova"
4"Eva"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.128
windowScore0.333
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a diagram of an underground t"
1"as if reacting to the mention of the supernatural market"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean23.57
std12.24
cv0.519
sampleLengths
041
115
232
342
414
511
610
739
843
946
1027
111
1236
1326
147
1531
1614
1737
1835
196
2024
2133
2218
2341
2422
2522
263
2745
2825
2913
3020
3131
3213
3318
344
3514
3623
376
3818
3931
4020
4136
4217
4334
4424
4528
4612
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"was etched"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount657
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.0258751902587519
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0136986301369863
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.76
std6.79
cv0.578
sampleLengths
021
120
215
311
421
58
622
712
814
97
104
1110
1229
1310
146
1521
1616
1719
1816
1911
2020
217
221
2317
2419
2512
2614
274
283
2928
303
318
326
335
3420
3512
367
3721
387
396
406
4118
423
4319
4411
452
4616
473
4821
4917
63.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.39361702127659576
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences61
matches
0"she asked, gaze sweeping over"
1"she mused, glancing around at"
2"He gestured to the girl's"
3"She rose to her feet,"
4"She picked up the compass,"
5"She turned to see a"
6"She extended the crumpled paper"
7"It appeared to be a"
8"Her brow furrowed as she"
9"She paused, considering"
10"she murmured to the detective"
11"She nodded toward a woman"
12"Her voice trembled"
13"She pulled out a small"
14"she murmured, holding out her"
ratio0.246
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain streamed down the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's shoes splashed"
2"she asked, gaze sweeping over"
3"The young uniformed officer looked"
4"Quinn crouched down, examining the"
5"The girl's green eyes were"
6"A tattered leather satchel lay"
7"she mused, glancing around at"
8"Quinn raised one eyebrow, and"
9"He gestured to the girl's"
10"The detective considered this, lips"
11"She rose to her feet,"
12"Several leather-bound books, a pair"
13"She picked up the compass,"
14"The face was etched with"
15"Quinn frowned, slipping it into"
16"She turned to see a"
17"The woman's green eyes were"
18"the woman said, flashing a"
19"Quinn eyed her warily."
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The face was etched with delicate protective sigils, and the needle spun erratically, as if drawn to an unseen force."
1"The compass in her pocket seemed to grow heavier, as if reacting to the mention of the supernatural market."
2"The narrow passageways were lined with shadowy stalls, their wares ranging from arcane tomes to gleaming blades to strange, flickering crystals."
3"The MI5 agent approached the woman, who looked up with wary green eyes magnified by her round glasses."
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she asked, gaze sweeping over the body sprawled on the ground"
1"Quinn glanced, her mind whirring"
2"She pulled out, its needle spinning wildly"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Jenkins agreed (agree)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.167
75.4719%