Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR40FPCCAX0G66VVRPDXSB

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10.9s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's heart pounded as she swung open the door, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak. The ivory-handled cane he always carried was gripped tightly in his hand, a silent testament to the tension between them. "Rory," he said, his voice smooth and low, like velvet brushing against her skin. She swallowed hard, trying to keep her composure. "Lucien. What are you doing here?" He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed and darted under the sofa. Lucien's gaze swept over the room, taking in the books, scrolls, and research notes scattered across every surface. "I need your help," he said, his tone leaving no room for argument. Aurora crossed her arms, leaning against the doorframe. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here after everything." Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker of regret passing through them. "I know. But this is important." She sighed, her resolve wavering. "Fine. What is it?" He handed her a folded piece of paper, his fingers brushing against hers. The touch sent a jolt of electricity through her, memories flooding back. She unfolded the paper, her eyes scanning the cryptic symbols and notes. "It's a summoning ritual," Lucien explained. "Someone's trying to bring a demon into our world. I need you to help me stop it." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "Why me? You have plenty of contacts in the supernatural underworld." Lucien's jaw tightened. "Because you're the best. And because I trust you." She laughed bitterly. "Trust? That's rich coming from you." He flinched, the words cutting deep. "I made mistakes, Rory. But this isn't about us. It's about saving lives." Aurora stared at him, the weight of their shared history pressing down on her. She remembered the nights they spent together, the passion and the pain. She remembered the betrayal, the lies, and the heartbreak. But she also remembered the way he made her feel, the way he understood her like no one else. "Alright," she said finally. "I'll help you. But this doesn't change anything between us." Lucien nodded, relief washing over his features. "Thank you." They worked in silence, the tension between them palpable. Aurora deciphered the symbols, her mind racing as she pieced together the ritual. Lucien watched her, his gaze unwavering. "How did you find out about this?" she asked, breaking the silence. "An informant tipped me off," he replied. "Said there's a group planning to perform the ritual tonight." Aurora's eyes widened. "Tonight? We don't have much time." Lucien's expression darkened. "I know. That's why I came to you." She nodded, her mind already formulating a plan. "We'll need to gather supplies. Eva has some things that might help." Lucien's lips curved into a small smile. "Always prepared, aren't you?" Aurora ignored the compliment, focusing on the task at hand. "Let's go." They left the flat, the cool night air wrapping around them. Aurora led the way, her steps quick and determined. Lucien followed, his presence a constant reminder of the complicated feelings she had for him. As they reached Eva's flat, Aurora hesitated. She turned to Lucien, her eyes searching his. "Why did you really come to me, Lucien? Was it just about the ritual?" He sighed, his shoulders slumping. "No. I came because I needed to see you. Because I can't stop thinking about you." Aurora's heart ached, the words stirring emotions she had tried to bury. "You hurt me, Lucien. You lied to me." "I know," he said, his voice raw with regret. "And I'm sorry. But I can't change the past. All I can do is try to make things right." She shook her head, tears stinging her eyes. "It's not that simple." Lucien reached out, his hand cupping her cheek. "I know. But I still care about you, Rory. More than you know." Aurora closed her eyes, leaning into his touch. For a moment, she allowed herself to feel the warmth of his hand, the comfort of his presence. But then she pulled away, her resolve hardening. "We have a job to do," she said, her voice steady. "Let's focus on that." Lucien nodded, his expression resigned. "Alright." They entered Eva's flat, the scent of curry lingering in the air. Aurora quickly gathered the supplies they needed, her movements efficient and precise. Lucien watched her, his eyes filled with admiration. "You're incredible," he said softly. Aurora ignored him, her focus on the task at hand. "Let's go." They left the flat, the weight of their unresolved feelings hanging between them. As they made their way to the location of the ritual, Aurora couldn't help but steal glances at Lucien. Despite everything, she still felt drawn to him, the connection between them undeniable. When they arrived, the scene was chaotic. Hooded figures chanted in a circle, the air thick with dark energy. Aurora and Lucien exchanged a look, their silent communication speaking volumes. "Ready?" he asked, his voice steady. Aurora nodded, her heart pounding. "Let's do this." They moved as one, their actions synchronized. Aurora disrupted the circle, her knowledge of the symbols allowing her to break the ritual. Lucien fought off the hooded figures, his cane a deadly weapon. As the last figure fell, the dark energy dissipated, leaving the air clear and still. Aurora and Lucien stood in the centre of the chaos, their breaths heavy. "We did it," Aurora said, her voice filled with relief. Lucien nodded, his eyes locked on hers. "Thanks to you." Aurora's heart ached, the weight of their unresolved feelings pressing down on her. She knew they had a long way to go, but for now, they had succeeded. As they left the scene, Aurora couldn't help but wonder what the future held for them. Despite the pain and the betrayal, she still felt drawn to Lucien, the connection between them undeniable. Only time would tell if they could find their way back to each other. But for now, they had a job to do, and that was enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.103
80.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1019
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1019
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"testament"
count1
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count2
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"palpable"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"determined"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"efficient"
count1
17
word"chaotic"
count1
18
word"pounding"
count1
19
word"synchronized"
count1
20
word"disrupted"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"testament"
2"tension"
3"velvet"
4"flicker"
5"resolve"
6"wavering"
7"scanning"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"palpable"
11"racing"
12"unwavering"
13"determined"
14"reminder"
15"warmth"
16"efficient"
17"chaotic"
18"pounding"
19"synchronized"
20"disrupted"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"couldn't help but"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"couldn't help but wonder"
81.71% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences77
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
1"w with regret"
2"filled with relief"
3"d with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1018
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
11.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount758
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Aurora21
Lucien20
persons
0"Eva"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.115
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1018
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean20.78
std12.05
cv0.58
sampleLengths
052
114
214
342
413
519
616
79
837
923
1014
1112
129
1319
1454
1514
169
1728
1812
1917
209
2111
2220
2311
2412
2535
2629
2721
2820
2928
3012
3121
3234
3315
346
3532
365
3712
3845
3930
406
418
4233
4328
4410
4510
4628
4733
4827
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was gripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences105
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.019762845849802372
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00922266139657444
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.7
std4.55
cv0.47
sampleLengths
015
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220
314
48
56
614
710
818
913
108
1111
1210
136
145
154
1613
1712
1812
196
2017
213
2211
233
249
253
266
276
2813
2914
3012
319
3219
334
3410
357
362
379
3813
396
4012
417
4210
433
446
453
468
478
4812
497
56.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.34285714285714286
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners36
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Only time would tell if"
ratio0.013
76.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences75
matches
0"he said, his voice smooth"
1"She swallowed hard, trying to"
2"He stepped inside without waiting"
3"he said, his tone leaving"
4"She sighed, her resolve wavering."
5"He handed her a folded"
6"She unfolded the paper, her"
7"She laughed bitterly."
8"He flinched, the words cutting"
9"She remembered the nights they"
10"She remembered the betrayal, the"
11"she said finally"
12"They worked in silence, the"
13"she asked, breaking the silence"
14"She nodded, her mind already"
15"They left the flat, the"
16"She turned to Lucien, her"
17"He sighed, his shoulders slumping."
18"he said, his voice raw"
19"She shook her head, tears"
ratio0.36
46.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences75
matches
0"Aurora's heart pounded as she"
1"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic"
2"The ivory-handled cane he always"
3"he said, his voice smooth"
4"She swallowed hard, trying to"
5"He stepped inside without waiting"
6"Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, hissed"
7"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
8"he said, his tone leaving"
9"Aurora crossed her arms, leaning"
10"Lucien's eyes softened, a flicker"
11"She sighed, her resolve wavering."
12"He handed her a folded"
13"The touch sent a jolt"
14"She unfolded the paper, her"
15"Aurora's eyes narrowed."
16"Lucien's jaw tightened."
17"She laughed bitterly."
18"He flinched, the words cutting"
19"Aurora stared at him, the"
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien stood there, his heterochromatic eyes piercing through her with an intensity that made her knees weak."
1"He stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his presence filling the cramped flat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his tone leaving no room for argument"
1"he said, his voice raw with regret"
2"she said, her voice steady"
3"he asked, his voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.051
77.5877%