Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4247MY7QHE2WPSZHVZ9D

Run Details

Duration:
2.6s
Cost:
$0.000067

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air outside the flat was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like old blood, clinging to the cold stone walls. Aurora stepped off the pavement, her boots sinking into the grass of Richmond Park, the standing stones of The Fae Grove looming just beyond the treeline. The moment her boots touched the ground, the world tilted. A breath too long. A pause in the wind that shouldn’t exist. She exhaled sharply, her fingers tightening around the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant. The crimson gem pulsed faintly, warm against her skin, like a heartbeat in the dark. The grove was supposed to be quiet. Supposed to be safe. The trees shifted. Aurora froze. The branches above her didn’t rustle. No leaves fell. The air didn’t stir. But the shadows did. Thin, shifting things slithered between the trunks, too thin to be branches, too still to be shadows. Her pulse hammered in her throat. She turned slowly, scanning the darkness. Nothing moved. Then the whisper came. Not a sound. A vibration in the air, like a voice that hadn’t been spoken yet. It slithered around her, low and wet, the kind of sound that made her skin prickle. She stumbled back, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the pendant’s glow flickering against her wrist. *"You shouldn’t be here."* Aurora’s blood turned to ice. She didn’t turn around. The whisper came again, closer this time, closer than it should have been. The trees groaned, their bark splitting open like wounds. Something wet dripped from the branches, pooling on the ground. She could see it now—just for a second, before the light faded—dark, veined things moving beneath the leaves, fingers of something unseen reaching out. *"Who are you?"* The voice was hers. Her own lips moving, but no sound came out. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting jagged shadows across the bark. The standing stones loomed, silent sentinels, their ancient faces carved with faces that weren’t there anymore. The air smelled of rust and something sweet, like honey that had been left too long. Aurora’s hands shook. She reached for her phone, but her fingers slipped. The pendant burned brighter. The whisper coiled around her, hot and hungry. *"You don’t belong here."* She turned. The trees parted. Not a clearing. A throat. A mouth of leaves and bark, gaping wide, the edges lined with teeth. The whisper hissed, sharp and alive. Aurora’s breath came in short, sharp bursts. The pendant’s glow pulsed, a warning, a promise. She ran. The ground twisted beneath her, the trees twisting with her. The whisper followed, a living thing in her ears. The standing stones loomed, their faces twisting into something else—something that watched her as she ran, something that didn’t belong in the world. Aurora didn’t look back. She didn’t stop until her lungs burned, until the world blurred and the trees closed in. She collapsed, gasping, her back against the cold stone of the flat’s wall. The pendant burned against her wrist, warm and steady. The whisper faded, but the weight of it lingered. Aurora’s fingers trembled as she pulled the pendant free, cradling it in her palm. The crimson gem pulsed, steady and sure. She exhaled, her breath shaky. She was alive. For now.
total_cost0.00006724

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
81.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount547
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount547
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count6
5
word"loomed"
count2
6
word"sentinels"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"pulsed"
2"pulse"
3"scanning"
4"whisper"
5"loomed"
6"sentinels"
7"weight"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences64
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords11
totalWords543
ratio0.02
matches
0"\"You shouldn’t be here.\""
1"\"Who are you?\""
2"\"You don’t belong here.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount532
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora7
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.842
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like old blood, clinging to the co"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount543
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean21.72
std22.18
cv1.021
sampleLengths
061
152
23
348
42
54
648
74
85
94
1056
113
1255
1324
144
152
163
1739
182
1942
204
2147
2226
233
242
93.76% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"was supposed"
1"been spoken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs96
matches(empty)
8.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences64
ratio0.047
matches
0"The air outside the flat was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like old blood, clinging to the cold stone walls."
1"She could see it now—just for a second, before the light faded—dark, veined things moving beneath the leaves, fingers of something unseen reaching out."
2"The standing stones loomed, their faces twisting into something else—something that watched her as she ran, something that didn’t belong in the world."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount536
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03171641791044776
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005597014925373134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean8.48
std6.06
cv0.715
sampleLengths
025
126
210
34
48
514
615
77
84
93
102
116
123
134
144
1517
166
176
182
194
203
2113
2216
2316
244
255
264
2713
289
2910
3024
313
324
339
3410
3516
3616
373
389
394
408
414
422
433
443
452
4613
476
487
498
31.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.265625
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners17
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then the whisper came."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences55
matches
0"She exhaled sharply, her fingers"
1"Her pulse hammered in her"
2"She turned slowly, scanning the"
3"It slithered around her, low"
4"She stumbled back, her breath"
5"She didn’t turn around."
6"She could see it now—just"
7"Her own lips moving, but"
8"She reached for her phone,"
9"She didn’t stop until her"
10"She collapsed, gasping, her back"
11"She exhaled, her breath shaky."
12"She was alive."
ratio0.236
23.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences55
matches
0"The air outside the flat"
1"Aurora stepped off the pavement,"
2"The moment her boots touched"
3"A breath too long."
4"A pause in the wind"
5"She exhaled sharply, her fingers"
6"The crimson gem pulsed faintly,"
7"The grove was supposed to"
8"The trees shifted."
9"The branches above her didn’t"
10"The air didn’t stir."
11"Her pulse hammered in her"
12"She turned slowly, scanning the"
13"A vibration in the air,"
14"It slithered around her, low"
15"She stumbled back, her breath"
16"Aurora’s blood turned to ice."
17"She didn’t turn around."
18"The whisper came again, closer"
19"The trees groaned, their bark"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora stepped off the pavement, her boots sinking into the grass of Richmond Park, the standing stones of The Fae Grove looming just beyond the treeline."
1"It slithered around her, low and wet, the kind of sound that made her skin prickle."
2"She stumbled back, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the pendant’s glow flickering against her wrist."
3"The standing stones loomed, silent sentinels, their ancient faces carved with faces that weren’t there anymore."
4"The air smelled of rust and something sweet, like honey that had been left too long."
5"The standing stones loomed, their faces twisting into something else—something that watched her as she ran, something that didn’t belong in the world."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.8847%