| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 81.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 547 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 547 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "looming" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 543 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "\"You shouldn’t be here.\"" | | 1 | "\"Who are you?\"" | | 2 | "\"You don’t belong here.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 532 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.842 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like old blood, clinging to the co" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 543 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 21.72 | | std | 22.18 | | cv | 1.021 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 |
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| 93.76% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been spoken" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.047 | | matches | | 0 | "The air outside the flat was thick with the scent of damp earth and something older—something like old blood, clinging to the cold stone walls." | | 1 | "She could see it now—just for a second, before the light faded—dark, veined things moving beneath the leaves, fingers of something unseen reaching out." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed, their faces twisting into something else—something that watched her as she ran, something that didn’t belong in the world." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 536 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.03171641791044776 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005597014925373134 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 8.48 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 31.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.265625 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 17 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the whisper came." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 1 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 2 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 3 | "It slithered around her, low" | | 4 | "She stumbled back, her breath" | | 5 | "She didn’t turn around." | | 6 | "She could see it now—just" | | 7 | "Her own lips moving, but" | | 8 | "She reached for her phone," | | 9 | "She didn’t stop until her" | | 10 | "She collapsed, gasping, her back" | | 11 | "She exhaled, her breath shaky." | | 12 | "She was alive." |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 23.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The air outside the flat" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped off the pavement," | | 2 | "The moment her boots touched" | | 3 | "A breath too long." | | 4 | "A pause in the wind" | | 5 | "She exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 6 | "The crimson gem pulsed faintly," | | 7 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 8 | "The trees shifted." | | 9 | "The branches above her didn’t" | | 10 | "The air didn’t stir." | | 11 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 12 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 13 | "A vibration in the air," | | 14 | "It slithered around her, low" | | 15 | "She stumbled back, her breath" | | 16 | "Aurora’s blood turned to ice." | | 17 | "She didn’t turn around." | | 18 | "The whisper came again, closer" | | 19 | "The trees groaned, their bark" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped off the pavement, her boots sinking into the grass of Richmond Park, the standing stones of The Fae Grove looming just beyond the treeline." | | 1 | "It slithered around her, low and wet, the kind of sound that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "She stumbled back, her breath coming in ragged gasps, the pendant’s glow flickering against her wrist." | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed, silent sentinels, their ancient faces carved with faces that weren’t there anymore." | | 4 | "The air smelled of rust and something sweet, like honey that had been left too long." | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed, their faces twisting into something else—something that watched her as she ran, something that didn’t belong in the world." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |