Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR44NN04YAJTJJW3VXQ6EG

Run Details

Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.007430

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the London streets into a slick, neon-lit maze. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The suspect—lean, fast, and now ducking into a narrow alley—had the look of someone who knew these backstreets better than she did. Her radio crackled. "Quinn, you still on him?" Dispatch’s voice cut through the static, but she didn’t answer. No time. The alley twisted, then spilled into a wider street where the glow of a green neon sign flickered above a battered door. *The Raven’s Nest.* She’d heard whispers about this place—off-duty cops, shady deals, things that didn’t add up. The suspect vanished inside. Quinn slowed, her hand brushing the grip of her sidearm. The door groaned as she pushed it open, the scent of stale beer and old paper hitting her like a wall. The bar was half-empty, a few patrons nursing drinks in the dim light. No sign of her target. A man behind the counter—tall, gaunt, with a face like weathered stone—watched her with cold eyes. "We don’t like cops in here, Detective." She ignored him, scanning the room. A bookshelf against the far wall stood slightly ajar. The hidden room. Her pulse kicked up. She moved toward it, fingers tightening around her weapon. The bookshelf swung open before she reached it. A figure stepped out—Tomás Herrera, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting under the low light. His warm brown eyes flicked to her badge, then back to her face. "You’re not welcome here." "Move aside, Herrera." He didn’t budge. "You’re chasing the wrong man." "Then who am I chasing?" A beat of silence. The rain outside drummed against the windows. Tomás exhaled, then stepped back, revealing the dark passage beyond. "If you go down there, you won’t come back the same." Quinn didn’t hesitate. She slipped past him, descending a narrow staircase into the bowels of the city. The air grew thick, humid, laced with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—metal, maybe, or ozone. The stairs ended in a tunnel, its walls lined with flickering lanterns. Voices murmured ahead, a low hum of activity. She emerged into a cavernous space, the abandoned Tube station transformed. Stalls stretched in every direction, their wares glowing under dim, eerie light—jars of swirling liquid, bundles of herbs that pulsed faintly, bones carved with strange symbols. The Veil Market. Her suspect stood near a stall, haggling with a vendor whose face was obscured by a hood. Quinn started forward, but the crowd shifted, blocking her path. A hand clamped onto her shoulder. She spun, ready to strike— Tomás stood there, his expression grim. "You don’t know what you’re walking into." "Then tell me." He shook his head. "Some doors don’t close once they’re opened." The suspect glanced back, locking eyes with her. Then he turned and melted into the crowd, disappearing between stalls. Quinn broke into a run, shoving past a group of cloaked figures. The market seemed to stretch endlessly, the walls shifting as she moved. A stall selling what looked like human teeth blocked her path. She vaulted over the counter, scattering jars. The suspect was ahead, ducking into a side tunnel. Quinn followed, her boots pounding against the damp stone. The tunnel sloped downward, the air growing colder. The sounds of the market faded behind her. Then the tunnel opened into a wider chamber. The suspect stood in the center, his back to her. But he wasn’t alone. Figures emerged from the shadows—tall, gaunt, their movements too smooth, too precise. Their eyes gleamed in the dark. Quinn’s breath hitched. She’d seen things like this before. Three years ago. The night Morris died. The suspect turned, his face twisting into something inhuman. "You shouldn’t have followed me, Detective." Her hand went to her gun. But the figures were already moving.
total_cost0.00743

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount655
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount655
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"pulse"
3"glinting"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"pulsed"
7"pounding"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords644
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount581
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Quinn7
Raven1
Tomás3
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Market"
7"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.898
windowScore1
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like human teeth blocked her path"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount644
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean23
std14.36
cv0.624
sampleLengths
053
120
243
349
423
518
613
739
83
98
105
1132
1217
1338
1440
1533
165
1713
183
1911
2019
2142
2234
2322
2418
2516
2615
2712
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences72
ratio0.111
matches
0"The suspect—lean, fast, and now ducking into a narrow alley—had the look of someone who knew these backstreets better than she did."
1"*The Raven’s Nest.* She’d heard whispers about this place—off-duty cops, shady deals, things that didn’t add up."
2"A man behind the counter—tall, gaunt, with a face like weathered stone—watched her with cold eyes."
3"A figure stepped out—Tomás Herrera, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting under the low light."
4"The air grew thick, humid, laced with the scent of damp earth and something sharper—metal, maybe, or ozone."
5"Stalls stretched in every direction, their wares glowing under dim, eerie light—jars of swirling liquid, bundles of herbs that pulsed faintly, bones carved with strange symbols."
6"She spun, ready to strike—"
7"Figures emerged from the shadows—tall, gaunt, their movements too smooth, too precise."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount592
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slick, neon-lit maze."
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.030405405405405407
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005067567567567568
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean8.94
std5.27
cv0.589
sampleLengths
015
116
222
33
415
52
622
717
84
910
1021
1113
125
1316
147
156
169
173
184
199
208
2114
2213
234
243
253
265
275
284
297
3010
3111
323
3314
3418
3512
368
3711
3826
393
4017
4110
426
435
446
457
463
474
487
498
42.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3055555555555556
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners22
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then he turned and melted"
1"Then the tunnel opened into"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her radio crackled."
1"She ignored him, scanning the"
2"Her pulse kicked up."
3"She moved toward it, fingers"
4"His warm brown eyes flicked"
5"He didn’t budge."
6"She slipped past him, descending"
7"She emerged into a cavernous"
8"Her suspect stood near a"
9"She spun, ready to strike—"
10"He shook his head."
11"She vaulted over the counter,"
12"Their eyes gleamed in the"
13"She’d seen things like this"
14"Her hand went to her"
ratio0.246
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"The suspect—lean, fast, and now"
3"Her radio crackled."
4"Dispatch’s voice cut through the"
5"The alley twisted, then spilled"
6"*The Raven’s Nest.* She’d heard"
7"The suspect vanished inside."
8"Quinn slowed, her hand brushing"
9"The door groaned as she"
10"The bar was half-empty, a"
11"A man behind the counter—tall,"
12"She ignored him, scanning the"
13"A bookshelf against the far"
14"The hidden room."
15"Her pulse kicked up."
16"She moved toward it, fingers"
17"The bookshelf swung open before"
18"A figure stepped out—Tomás Herrera,"
19"His warm brown eyes flicked"
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The suspect—lean, fast, and now ducking into a narrow alley—had the look of someone who knew these backstreets better than she did."
1"Stalls stretched in every direction, their wares glowing under dim, eerie light—jars of swirling liquid, bundles of herbs that pulsed faintly, bones carved with…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.9267%