Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR47JQN11TAATBZKFHRCTP

Run Details

Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.009220

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, the occasional burst of laughter. The air smelled of aged whiskey and lemon polish, the kind of scent that clung to the walls like a second skin. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the rim of a half-empty gin and tonic. The ice had long since melted, watering down the sharpness of the juniper. The door creaked open, letting in a draft that carried the scent of rain and wet pavement. A man stepped inside, shaking droplets from his coat. He moved with the careful precision of someone who’d learned to compensate for an old injury, his left leg carrying just a hint of stiffness. His auburn hair, streaked with silver, caught the dim light as he scanned the room. Rory didn’t look up at first. She was too busy staring at the condensation ring her glass had left on the bar, the way it blurred the grain of the wood beneath. Then she heard it—the familiar rasp of his voice, lower than she remembered, rougher. "Still drinking that watered-down swill, I see." Her head snapped up. Silas stood there, his hazel eyes crinkled at the corners, the same way they always had when he was amused. But there was something else in them now—something heavier. The years had carved lines into his face that hadn’t been there before, and his beard, once a dark auburn, was now liberally threaded with grey. Rory’s breath hitched. "Silas." He didn’t smile, not really. Just a slight tilt of the mouth, like he was testing the expression to see if it still fit. "Been a while, Rory." She swallowed. "Yeah. A while." He slid onto the stool beside her, his signet ring catching the light as he rested his hands on the bar. The silver glinted, cold and unyielding. "You look different." Rory laughed, but it came out sharp, brittle. "Do I?" Silas didn’t answer right away. He flagged down the bartender, ordered a whiskey neat, then turned back to her. "You used to have that look—like you were always three steps ahead of everyone else. Now you just look tired." She flinched. "Thanks." "Wasn’t a compliment." He took a sip of his drink, his throat working as he swallowed. "What happened to you?" Rory’s fingers tightened around her glass. "Life, I guess." Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might have been a laugh if it hadn’t been so hollow. "That’s not an answer." "No," she said, "it’s not." The bartender slid Silas’s drink toward him, and for a moment, the only sound was the ice shifting in Rory’s glass. She could feel the weight of his gaze on her, like he was trying to peel back the layers of the last few years with just his eyes. "You left," he said finally. "No warning. No note. Just gone." Rory’s jaw clenched. "I had to." "Why?" She didn’t answer. The silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating. Silas didn’t push. He just sat there, watching her, waiting. Rory traced the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the one she’d gotten falling off her bike when she was eight. It was a habit she’d picked up when she was lying, though she wasn’t sure if she was lying now or if she just didn’t know the truth herself. "I thought you’d be proud of me," she said quietly. "I did what you always said I should. I got out. I made my own way." Silas’s expression didn’t change, but something flickered in his eyes. "And is that what you wanted?" Rory’s chest ached. "I don’t know anymore." He leaned back, his stool creaking under his weight. "You used to know. You used to have this fire in you—like nothing could touch you. Now you’re just… surviving." She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him he was wrong, that she was fine, that she’d built a life here, that she had a job, a flat, a routine. But the words died in her throat. Silas sighed, rubbing a hand over his beard. "I kept the place running. Thought maybe you’d come back. Even left your old room just how you left it." Rory’s breath caught. "You didn’t have to do that." "I know." He took another sip of his whiskey, his eyes never leaving hers. "But I did." She looked away, her gaze landing on the old maps tacked to the wall, the black-and-white photographs of faces she didn’t recognize. "I didn’t think you’d still be here." Silas chuckled, but it was a dry, humorless sound. "Where else would I be?" Rory didn’t have an answer for that. She picked up her glass, drained the last of her drink, and set it down with a sharp *clink*. "I should go." Silas didn’t stop her. He just nodded, like he’d expected it. "Always running, aren’t you?" She stood, her stool scraping against the floor. "It’s not running if you’re not looking back." He didn’t turn to watch her leave. Just lifted his glass in a silent toast. "See you around, Rory." She hesitated for just a second, her fingers brushing the edge of the bar. Then she walked away, the door swinging shut behind her with a finality that echoed in the hollow space between them.
total_cost0.00922

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.125
94.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount896
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"jaw clenched"
6"silence"
7"traced"
8"flickered"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords889
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount704
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory11
Silas9
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.719
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount889
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean24.03
std17.86
cv0.743
sampleLengths
070
166
246
37
459
54
628
75
830
910
1039
113
1220
139
1423
155
1649
1711
186
191
2021
2150
2226
2316
247
2529
2638
2728
289
2917
3029
3114
3229
3315
3416
3519
3635
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"was amused"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was testing"
1"was trying"
2"was lying, was lying"
77.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences87
ratio0.023
matches
0"Then she heard it—the familiar rasp of his voice, lower than she remembered, rougher."
1"But there was something else in them now—something heavier."
99.26% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04084507042253521
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007042253521126761
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean10.22
std7.67
cv0.751
sampleLengths
019
122
216
313
417
59
625
715
86
926
1014
117
124
1320
149
1526
163
171
185
1919
204
212
223
2321
246
253
268
272
285
2914
3020
312
321
3316
344
356
363
3719
384
395
4021
4128
425
436
443
453
461
473
488
493
50.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then she heard it—the familiar"
1"Just a slight tilt of"
2"Just lifted his glass in"
3"Then she walked away, the"
ratio0.07
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences57
matches
0"He moved with the careful"
1"His auburn hair, streaked with"
2"She was too busy staring"
3"Her head snapped up."
4"He didn’t smile, not really."
5"He slid onto the stool"
6"He flagged down the bartender,"
7"He took a sip of"
8"She could feel the weight"
9"he said finally"
10"She didn’t answer."
11"He just sat there, watching"
12"It was a habit she’d"
13"she said quietly"
14"He leaned back, his stool"
15"She wanted to argue."
16"She wanted to tell him"
17"He took another sip of"
18"She looked away, her gaze"
19"She picked up her glass,"
ratio0.421
12.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences57
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The air smelled of aged"
2"Rory leaned against the bar,"
3"The ice had long since"
4"The door creaked open, letting"
5"A man stepped inside, shaking"
6"He moved with the careful"
7"His auburn hair, streaked with"
8"Rory didn’t look up at"
9"She was too busy staring"
10"Her head snapped up."
11"Silas stood there, his hazel"
12"The years had carved lines"
13"Rory’s breath hitched."
14"He didn’t smile, not really."
15"He slid onto the stool"
16"The silver glinted, cold and"
17"Rory laughed, but it came"
18"Silas didn’t answer right away."
19"He flagged down the bartender,"
ratio0.895
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He moved with the careful precision of someone who’d learned to compensate for an old injury, his left leg carrying just a hint of stiffness."
1"Then she walked away, the door swinging shut behind her with a finality that echoed in the hollow space between them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.094
leniency0.188
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.9614%