Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4HFS7FQ1M9QK1PEYVT6G

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Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.006511
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
**Chapter 1: Whispers in the Nest** Rory's fingers drummed a staccato beat on the wooden counter as she waited for Silas to pour her usual whiskey. The Raven's Nest was bustling with the after-work crowd, the air thick with the smell of ale and worn leather. She nudged her gaze toward the entrance, where a flurry of new arrivals jostled for the bartender's attention. That's when she saw him – Eva's brother, Alex, standing by the doorway, his eyes scanning the room as if searching for a ghost. The last time Rory had seen Alex, they were all still in Cardiff, sharing laughter and dreams in Eva's cramped living room. That was years ago, before life had scattered them like autumn leaves. Alex's gaze finally found hers, and for an instant, they just stared, the present colliding with the past. The man before her was a stranger – chiseled features, sharp jawline, and piercing green eyes that seemed to hold a world of stories. The boy she once knew had been soft around the edges, with a quick smile and a heart full of hope. This version of Alex was forged from steel and shadows. "Alex?" The name barely escaped her lips, uncertainty woven into the single syllable. A hint of a smile creased his face, a Map of wrinkles etched around his eyes, telling tales of their lost years. He navigated through the crowd with the ease of a man who'd grown accustomed to claiming his space. As he approached, the sounds of the bar receded, leaving only the creak of the wooden floorboards beneath his feet. "Aurora Carter," he said, his voice low and even, a melody that was both familiar and foreign. "Or should I say... Laila?" He raised an eyebrow, a glint of amusement dancing in his eyes. Rory's hand instinctively moved to cover the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a habitual gesture she'd thought she'd long outgrown. "Rory's fine. It's been... a while." Alex slid onto the stool beside her, his movements economical and precise, a world away from the gangly teenager she remembered. "Indeed. Years swallowed us whole, haven't they?" Silas, ever the observant host, slid a glass of Scotch towards Alex without being asked. "On the house, for old times' sake." "Thanks, Silas," Alex said, his voice tinged with a hint of gravel, a sound that spoke of long nights and harder roads. Rory turned back to her whiskey, the amber liquid glowing in the dim light. "So, what brings you to London... and to this part of town?" Alex's gaze roamed the bar, taking in the ancient maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls. "Business. And nostalgia, I suppose. It's funny how some places feel like home, no matter how much time has passed." Their conversation was a delicate dance, each step and word chosen with the care of two people navigating a minefield. Rory sensed the unspoken questions hanging between them, the weight of unshared experiences and untold stories. "Eva?" Rory ventured, the name hanging in the air like a challenge. A flicker of something – pain, perhaps, or regret – crossed Alex's face before he masked it with a neutral smile. "She's... well. Still the glue that holds us all together. You know Eva." The pause that followed was heavy with the ghosts of their past, the memories of laughter, dreams, and the unspoken promises they'd once made to each other. "I've often wondered," Alex began, his voice low, "what if? What if we'd all stayed in Cardiff? Would things have turned out differently for us?" Rory's laughter was a soft, melancholic sound. "We were invincible back then, weren't we? Convinced we could change the world... or at least our corner of it." Their eyes met, and for an instant, Rory glimpsed the boy she once knew, hiding beneath the layers of the man he'd become. It was a fleeting moment, a whisper of what could have been, before the present reasserted itself. The sounds of the bar, the clinking glasses, and muffled conversations, slowly seeped back into their bubble, a reminder that life, in all its complexity, waited just beyond their shared nostalgia. "I should go," Alex said abruptly, pushing his untouched Scotch towards Silas. "It was... good running into you, Rory. Maybe we can catch up properly soon?" Rory nodded, a sense of loss already settling in, a realization that their meeting had been both a reunion and a farewell. "Yeah, soon." As Alex merged with the crowd, disappearing into the London night, Rory felt Silas's scrutinizing gaze upon her. She turned to him, a question forming on her lips, but found him already attending to another patron, leaving her with only her thoughts and the haunting melody of what could have been. The whiskey in her glass seemed to glow with a newfound intensity, a reminder of the fleeting nature of connections and the profound impact of time on the human heart. With a sigh, Rory downed the remainder, the burn a stark contrast to the chill settling within her. Just then, the door swung open once more, and a chill ran down Rory's spine as she made out a figure from across the room – a man with piercing blue eyes, his gaze locked intently on her, the shadows cast by the dim lighting obliterating his features. For a moment, their eyes held, a spark of tension arcing between them like a promise of storms to come. Then, as swiftly as he appeared, he vanished into the crowd, leaving Rory with the unnerving feeling that her night, and perhaps her life, was about to take a drastic turn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Alex said abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.125
94.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount944
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"navigated"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"navigating"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count2
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count2
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count2
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"newfound"
count1
18
word"intensity"
count1
19
word"profound"
count1
20
word"stark"
count1
21
word"chill"
count2
22
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"etched"
2"navigated"
3"familiar"
4"eyebrow"
5"glint"
6"dancing"
7"tinged"
8"dance"
9"navigating"
10"unspoken"
11"weight"
12"flicker"
13"fleeting"
14"whisper"
15"reminder"
16"sense of"
17"newfound"
18"intensity"
19"profound"
20"stark"
21"chill"
22"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences42
matches
0"a sense of loss"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords945
ratio0.006
matches
0"Chapter 1: Whispers in the Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount810
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Alex"
discoveredNames
Whispers1
Rory13
Silas4
Raven1
Nest2
Eva2
Alex12
Cardiff1
Map1
Scotch2
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Eva"
5"Alex"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.698
windowScore0.667
28.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if searching for a ghost"
1"eyes that seemed to hold a world of stories"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount945
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean37.8
std24.65
cv0.652
sampleLengths
06
182
2107
313
460
534
628
728
822
922
1026
1137
1236
1312
1434
1527
1625
1727
1840
1931
2026
2124
2251
2348
2499
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"was forged"
1"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences51
ratio0.078
matches
0"That's when she saw him – Eva's brother, Alex, standing by the doorway, his eyes scanning the room as if searching for a ghost."
1"The man before her was a stranger – chiseled features, sharp jawline, and piercing green eyes that seemed to hold a world of stories."
2"A flicker of something – pain, perhaps, or regret – crossed Alex's face before he masked it with a neutral smile."
3"Just then, the door swung open once more, and a chill ran down Rory's spine as she made out a figure from across the room – a man with piercing blue eyes, his gaze locked intently on her, the shadows cast by the dim lighting obliterating his features."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount809
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03584672435105068
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012360939431396786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean18.53
std7.88
cv0.425
sampleLengths
06
120
220
318
424
522
612
718
824
921
1010
1113
1222
1318
1420
1517
1617
1722
186
1921
207
2115
227
2322
2414
2512
2617
2720
2820
2916
3012
3121
3213
3327
3425
357
3620
3723
3817
3931
4012
4114
4222
432
4418
4533
4630
4718
4848
4920
87.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5490196078431373
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"Just then, the door swung"
1"Then, as swiftly as he"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences42
matches
0"She nudged her gaze toward"
1"He navigated through the crowd"
2"he said, his voice low"
3"He raised an eyebrow, a"
4"Their conversation was a delicate"
5"Their eyes met, and for"
6"It was a fleeting moment,"
7"She turned to him, a"
ratio0.19
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences42
matches
0"**Chapter 1: Whispers in the"
1"Rory's fingers drummed a staccato"
2"The Raven's Nest was bustling"
3"She nudged her gaze toward"
4"That's when she saw him"
5"The last time Rory had"
6"That was years ago, before"
7"Alex's gaze finally found hers,"
8"The man before her was"
9"The boy she once knew"
10"This version of Alex was"
11"The name barely escaped her"
12"A hint of a smile"
13"He navigated through the crowd"
14"he said, his voice low"
15"He raised an eyebrow, a"
16"Rory's hand instinctively moved to"
17"Alex slid onto the stool"
18"Silas, ever the observant host,"
19"Alex said, his voice tinged"
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"That's when she saw him – Eva's brother, Alex, standing by the doorway, his eyes scanning the room as if searching for a ghost."
1"Alex's gaze roamed the bar, taking in the ancient maps and black-and-white photographs that adorned the walls."
2"The pause that followed was heavy with the ghosts of their past, the memories of laughter, dreams, and the unspoken promises they'd once made to each other."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He raised, a glint of amusement dancing in his eyes"
1"Rory ventured, the name hanging in the air like a challenge"
2"Alex began, his voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.2912%