Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4P5ESRS0H6P78Y1HXEFB

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Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.017010
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open with a creak, revealing Aurora Carter standing in the dimly lit hallway. Her bright blue eyes widened in surprise as she took in the figure before her. Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood there with his usual air of nonchalance, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that made her heart skip a beat. "Lucien," she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper. The name tasted familiar on her tongue, like a song she hadn't heard in years but still knew by heart. "Aurora," he replied, his voice smooth and rich, like velvet draped over a dagger. He leaned casually on his ivory-handled cane, the blade concealed within a secret only they shared. She hesitated, her hand still on the door, caught between the urge to slam it shut and the pull of curiosity that had always drawn her to him. "What are you doing here?" "Business," he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "And perhaps a touch of nostalgia." She stepped aside, allowing him entry into the cramped flat. The scent of curry from the restaurant below mingled with the musty aroma of old books and parchment, creating a unique fragrance that was distinctly Eva's place. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched from his perch atop a stack of scrolls, his green eyes narrowing suspiciously at the intruder. Lucien's gaze swept over the cluttered room, taking in the chaos of books and notes that covered every available surface. "Charming," he remarked, his tone laced with irony. "Eva's not here," Aurora said, closing the door behind him. "If you're looking for her." "I'm not," he replied, turning to face her. "I'm here for you." Her heart thudded in her chest, a traitorous response to his words. She crossed her arms, a defensive gesture that did little to shield her from the memories that flooded back. "We said everything that needed saying last time." "Did we?" He took a step closer, his presence filling the small space between them. "I seem to recall a few things left unsaid." She met his gaze, defiance warring with the undeniable attraction that simmered beneath the surface. "Like what?" "Like why you left without a word," he said, his voice low and edged with something that might have been hurt. "Or why you never returned my calls." Aurora looked away, her eyes landing on a stack of books that threatened to topple over. "I had my reasons." "Reasons you never shared," he countered, his tone softening. "I thought we were past secrets, Aurora." She sighed, the weight of their shared history pressing down on her. "It wasn't about secrets, Lucien. It was about survival." He reached out, his fingers brushing against the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident and the life she had left behind. "And now?" "Now," she said, pulling her hand back, "I'm trying to build something new." "With him?" Lucien's voice held a note of disdain, and she knew he was referring to Evan, the ex she had fled from. "That's over," she said firmly. "It has been for a long time." "Good," he said, relief evident in his eyes. "Because I have a proposition for you." She raised an eyebrow, scepticism colouring her features. "A proposition?" "Work with me," he said, his gaze unwavering. "I could use someone with your skills." Aurora laughed, a short, humourless sound. "You want me to join your world of shadows and secrets?" "It's not as dark as you think," he said, a hint of amusement in his voice. "And you might find it suits you." She considered his offer, the temptation of it tugging at her. "And what do I get in return?" "Protection," he said simply. "From those who might wish you harm." She hesitated, the memory of Evan's threats still fresh in her mind. "And what about us?" Lucien's expression softened, a rare vulnerability showing through his polished exterior. "That's up to you, Aurora. But I promise, no more secrets." She studied him, the man who had once been her ally, her confidant, and something more. The man who stood before her now, offering a chance at something new, something dangerous and thrilling. "Alright," she said finally, her decision made. "But on my terms." "Of course," he agreed, a smile curving his lips. "I wouldn't have it any other way." As they stood there, the past and present colliding in the small flat, Aurora felt a flicker of hope. Perhaps this time, things would be different. Perhaps this time, they could find a way forward together. But as the shadows lengthened and the night deepened, she knew one thing for certain: with Lucien Moreau, nothing would ever be simple. And maybe, just maybe, that was exactly what she needed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
1"he said simply [simply]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
93.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount806
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount806
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"firmly"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"whisper"
2"familiar"
3"velvet"
4"weight"
5"reminder"
6"firmly"
7"eyebrow"
8"unwavering"
9"flicker"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a flicker of hope"
88.77% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences46
matches
0"d in surprise"
1"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords802
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount605
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora5
Carter1
Moreau2
Frenchman1
Eva1
Lucien5
Evan2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Frenchman"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Eva"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount802
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"notes that covered"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean23.59
std11.92
cv0.505
sampleLengths
061
129
230
333
418
558
628
715
812
939
1024
1117
1228
1320
1416
1521
1629
1713
1823
1912
2015
2110
2215
2317
2423
2518
2611
2716
2822
2933
3011
3116
3236
3333
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs105
matches
0"was referring"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences70
ratio0.014
matches
0"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood there with his usual air of nonchalance, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that made her heart skip a beat."
93.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount609
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.041050903119868636
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.0180623973727422
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean11.46
std6.6
cv0.576
sampleLengths
016
115
230
39
420
514
616
728
85
912
106
1110
1227
1321
1420
158
1610
175
188
194
2012
2119
228
2315
249
2515
262
2721
287
2916
304
319
327
3312
349
3527
362
3713
3823
395
407
418
427
438
442
458
467
476
4811
4916
77.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"Perhaps this time, things would"
1"Perhaps this time, they could"
ratio0.043
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences46
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes widened"
1"she breathed, her voice barely"
2"he replied, his voice smooth"
3"He leaned casually on his"
4"She hesitated, her hand still"
5"he said, a hint of"
6"She stepped aside, allowing him"
7"he remarked, his tone laced"
8"he replied, turning to face"
9"Her heart thudded in her"
10"She crossed her arms, a"
11"He took a step closer,"
12"She met his gaze, defiance"
13"he said, his voice low"
14"he countered, his tone softening"
15"She sighed, the weight of"
16"He reached out, his fingers"
17"she said, pulling her hand"
18"she said firmly"
19"he said, relief evident in"
ratio0.63
14.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences46
matches
0"The door swung open with"
1"Her bright blue eyes widened"
2"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood"
3"she breathed, her voice barely"
4"The name tasted familiar on"
5"he replied, his voice smooth"
6"He leaned casually on his"
7"She hesitated, her hand still"
8"he said, a hint of"
9"She stepped aside, allowing him"
10"The scent of curry from"
11"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, watched"
12"Lucien's gaze swept over the"
13"he remarked, his tone laced"
14"Aurora said, closing the door"
15"he replied, turning to face"
16"Her heart thudded in her"
17"She crossed her arms, a"
18"He took a step closer,"
19"She met his gaze, defiance"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Lucien Moreau, the Frenchman, stood there with his usual air of nonchalance, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that …"
1"The scent of curry from the restaurant below mingled with the musty aroma of old books and parchment, creating a unique fragrance that was distinctly Eva's plac…"
2"She met his gaze, defiance warring with the undeniable attraction that simmered beneath the surface."
3"She studied him, the man who had once been her ally, her confidant, and something more."
4"The man who stood before her now, offering a chance at something new, something dangerous and thrilling."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she breathed, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"he said, a hint of a smile playing on his lips"
2"he replied, turning to face her"
3"He took, his presence filling the small space between them"
4"he countered, his tone softening"
5"he said, his gaze unwavering"
6"he said, a hint of amusement in his voice"
7"she said finally, her decision made"
8"he agreed, a smile curving his lips"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.095
77.6462%