Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4Q0C19992M5VYR10161C

Run Details

Duration:
5.9s
Cost:
$0.000291

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's hum faded into a symphony of nocturnal creatures, Aurora Carter found herself beneath a moon that hung like a bloated, spectral eye. The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove, whatever it was called, was supposed to be her sanctuary, a place of respite from the city's relentless pace. Yet, as she stepped into the clearing, her heart pounded a rhythm of unease, her instincts screaming that something was amiss. The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching out as if to warn her away. She shivered, rubbing her arms against the sudden chill that had nothing to do with the cool night air. The wildflowers that usually danced in vibrant profusion seemed to have wilted, their petals drooping as if in mourning. Aurora's breath hitched as she noticed the silence. No rustle of leaves, no chirp of crickets, no hoot of owls. It was as if the entire grove held its breath, waiting. She took a tentative step forward, her boots sinking into the soft earth. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its deep crimson gemstone casting an eerie glow on her fingers as she reached up to touch it. It was warm, its faint inner glow steady, a beacon in the oppressive stillness. A twig snapped. Aurora spun around, her eyes scanning the darkness. Nothing moved. She took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing heart. It was just an animal, she told herself. But the words rang hollow in her ears. She had been coming to the grove for months, and she had never felt this way. This wrongness was new, a malevolent presence that seemed to seep into her bones. She turned back towards the heart of the grove, her steps hesitant. The standing stones seemed to close in around her, their shadows stretching like elongated fingers reaching for her throat. She could swear she heard whispers on the wind, voices that hissed and whispered in a language she didn't understand. She shook her head, trying to dislodge the sound. It was just her imagination, playing tricks on her. But then she saw it. A figure, standing at the edge of the grove. It was tall, too tall to be human, its form obscured by the shadows. It seemed to be watching her, its eyes reflecting the moonlight like two cold, distant stars. Aurora's breath caught in her throat, her heart pounding like a drum in her ears. She took a step back, her hand reaching for the Heartstone Pendant, finding comfort in its warmth. The figure moved. It stepped forward, its form becoming clearer. It was humanoid, but its features were wrong, twisted. Its eyes were too large, too round, and its mouth was a slash of darkness, filled with too many teeth. It reached out a hand towards her, its fingers long and thin, ending in sharp, talon-like nails. Aurora stumbled back, her heart pounding in her chest. This was not the Fae she had read about in stories, the mischievous tricksters or the benevolent guardians. This was something else, something ancient and terrible. She turned to run, her feet slipping on the damp earth as she tried to put as much distance between herself and the creature as possible. But the grove seemed to have grown darker, the trees looming like monstrous sentinels, their branches reaching out to snag her clothes, to trip her up. She could hear the creature behind her, its footsteps echoing like thunder in the silent grove. She could feel its breath on her neck, cold and damp, like the breath of the grave. She broke through the tree line, her lungs burning as she gasped for breath. The city lights seemed to mock her, their brightness a cruel joke in the face of the darkness she had left behind. She could hear the creature's laughter, a harsh, grating sound that echoed in her mind, a chilling reminder of the terror that lurked in the heart of the grove. Aurora fell to her knees, her body wracked with sobs. She had come to the grove for solace, for a connection to the magic that she had always felt was missing from her life. But she had found something else, something ancient and terrible, a darkness that seemed to have awakened at her touch. She looked back at the grove, her heart filled with dread. She knew she would never see it the same way again. The Fae Grove was no longer her sanctuary. It was a place of terror, a place of nightmares. And she had no idea how to escape it.
total_cost0.00029115

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount781
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount781
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"spectral"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count2
3
word"amiss"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"sentinels"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count2
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"looming"
count1
16
word"footsteps"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
19
word"grave"
count1
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"chilling"
count1
22
word"reminder"
count1
23
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"spectral"
2"sanctuary"
3"amiss"
4"loomed"
5"sentinels"
6"chill"
7"silence"
8"pulsed"
9"beacon"
10"oppressive"
11"scanning"
12"racing"
13"pounding"
14"warmth"
15"looming"
16"footsteps"
17"echoing"
18"could feel"
19"grave"
20"echoed"
21"chilling"
22"reminder"
23"solace"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
94.14% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences54
matches
0"filled with dread"
1"d with dread"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences54
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords781
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"It was just an animal, she told herself."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount781
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora6
Carter1
Fae3
Grove2
Isolde1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was as if the entire grove held its breath, waiting"
1"presence that seemed to seep into her bones"
2"darkness that seemed to have awakened at her touch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount781
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"screaming that something"
9.10% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean71
std12.91
cv0.182
sampleLengths
076
162
284
370
469
576
656
761
859
965
10103
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"was called"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs130
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount781
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03201024327784891
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002560819462227913
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences54
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences54
mean14.46
std6.87
cv0.475
sampleLengths
031
124
221
324
419
519
68
712
811
913
1026
1114
123
138
142
1511
168
178
1816
1914
2012
2119
2220
239
249
255
269
2714
2816
2915
3017
313
327
339
3420
3517
369
3718
388
3926
4026
4116
4217
4314
4422
4529
4610
4724
4820
4911
37.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.24074074074074073
totalSentences54
uniqueOpeners13
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences53
matches
0"She shivered, rubbing her arms"
1"It was as if the"
2"She took a tentative step"
3"It was warm, its faint"
4"She took a deep breath,"
5"It was just an animal,"
6"She had been coming to"
7"She turned back towards the"
8"She could swear she heard"
9"She shook her head, trying"
10"It was just her imagination,"
11"It was tall, too tall"
12"It seemed to be watching"
13"She took a step back,"
14"It stepped forward, its form"
15"It was humanoid, but its"
16"Its eyes were too large,"
17"It reached out a hand"
18"She turned to run, her"
19"She could hear the creature"
ratio0.509
35.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences53
matches
0"The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove,"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She shivered, rubbing her arms"
3"The wildflowers that usually danced"
4"Aurora's breath hitched as she"
5"It was as if the"
6"She took a tentative step"
7"The Heartstone Pendant around her"
8"It was warm, its faint"
9"A twig snapped."
10"Aurora spun around, her eyes"
11"She took a deep breath,"
12"It was just an animal,"
13"She had been coming to"
14"This wrongness was new, a"
15"She turned back towards the"
16"The standing stones seemed to"
17"She could swear she heard"
18"She shook her head, trying"
19"It was just her imagination,"
ratio0.849
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Yet, as she stepped into"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"In the heart of Richmond Park, where the city's hum faded into a symphony of nocturnal creatures, Aurora Carter found herself beneath a moon that hung like a bl…"
1"The ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary loomed like silent sentinels, their gnarled fingers reaching out as if to warn her away."
2"She shivered, rubbing her arms against the sudden chill that had nothing to do with the cool night air."
3"The wildflowers that usually danced in vibrant profusion seemed to have wilted, their petals drooping as if in mourning."
4"This wrongness was new, a malevolent presence that seemed to seep into her bones."
5"It seemed to be watching her, its eyes reflecting the moonlight like two cold, distant stars."
6"But the grove seemed to have grown darker, the trees looming like monstrous sentinels, their branches reaching out to snag her clothes, to trip her up."
7"She could hear the creature's laughter, a harsh, grating sound that echoed in her mind, a chilling reminder of the terror that lurked in the heart of the grove."
8"But she had found something else, something ancient and terrible, a darkness that seemed to have awakened at her touch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
70.8915%