Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4TKRF5C8GE5Z84D4W4D8

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.002497
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The dim hum of The Raven's Nest's neon sign cast an eerie glow on the rain-soaked pavement, beckoning in passersby like a siren's call. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of aged wood and spiced rum, a perpetual haze swirling around the patrons. Aurora Carter, or Rory to those who knew her, slid onto a stool, shaking the rain from her hair. Silas, polishing a glass with a pristine white cloth, raised an eyebrow in greeting. "Usual, love?" he asked, his deep voice a comforting constant in Rory's life. She nodded, and he began expertly mixing her a whiskey sour. As he handed her the drink, the door swung open, admitting a blast of chilled air and a drenched figure. The newcomer's eyes, scanning the room, locked onto Rory with a spark of recognition. Her grip on the glass tightened, the condensation seeping into her skin like a cold dread. "Eva?" The name escaped her lips barely above a whisper. The woman, once a bright, effervescent presence in Rory's life, now stood before her transformed. Gone was the wild tangle of curly brown hair, replaced by a sleek, platinum bob that framed a face sharper, more angular. Eva's eyes, once warm and inviting, had muted, like the color of parched earth. Only the mischievous quirk of her left eyebrow remained, a haunting reminder of the girl she once was. Eva's gaze lingered on Rory before she made her way over, each step deliberate, as if savoring the hesitation between them. Silas, sensing the tension, excused himself to attend to another customer, leaving the two women alone in their bubble of unease. "Aurora Carter, as I live and breathe," Eva said, a husky undertone to her voice, sliding onto the stool beside Rory. Her eyes roamed over Rory's face, as if searching for something. "Still as beautiful as ever, I see." Rory's smile felt forced, a fragile facade. "Eva, it's... been a while." Eight years, to be exact, since they'd parted ways after university, each chasing dreams that, for Rory, had turned into fleeting shadows. "I'll say," Eva replied, signaling Silas for a drink. "You're looking... settled. I wasn't sure what to expect after the chaos you left behind in Cardiff." The implication hung in the air, a challenge. Rory's fingers drummed a staccato beat on the counter, a betraying sign of her growing discomfort. "I've managed. You know how it is. Life happens." "Oh, I do," Eva said, her voice laced with a mix of longing and resentment. "It's been... enlightening, watching from afar as you distanced yourself from everything we once shared. The firebrand of Cardiff University, reduced to... this." Rory's gaze dropped, the whiskey sour suddenly too acidic on her tongue. Eva's words weren't entirely unfair; the ghosts of her past, including the abusive Evan, had driven her to seek solace in anonymity. But there was more, a depth to her choices that Eva, in her transformed state, might not comprehend. "Eva, what's going on with you?" Rory asked, deflecting the spotlight. "You're... different. Not just the hair." A cold, mirthless laugh escaped Eva's lips, sending a shiver down Rory's spine. "Different? That's one way to put it. Let's just say I've found my true calling, one that doesn't involve the naivety of our youth." As Eva spoke, her eyes, once bright with shared dreams and late-night conversations, now seemed to hold a world of unspoken regret, a burden Rory couldn't begin to decipher. Silas, delivering Eva's drink, cast them a thoughtful glance before retreating, sensing the fragile balance of their interaction. The two women sipped their drinks in silence, the noise of the bar receding into the background as they delved into the unspoken. The weight of years, of choices made and paths diverged, hung between them, a palpable barrier. "Eva, we used to talk about everything," Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, the vulnerability a risk. "What happened to us? To you?" For a moment, Eva's mask slipped, a glimmer of the girl she once was peeking through the facade. Then, with a subtle shake of her head, the illusion was shattered, leaving only the stranger beside Rory. "Life, Aurora. It has a way of happening, no matter how loudly we protest. Sometimes, the only way forward is to let go of who we were, for better or worse." The statement hung in the air, a melancholic truth that neither dared to challenge. As the night wore on, enveloped in the comfortable silence of The Raven's Nest, Rory realized that sometimes, the heaviest burdens are those we carry in silence, the what-ifs and maybes that define the chasm between who we were and who we've become. And in that moment, she wasn't sure which of them had changed more.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount800
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count2
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"facade"
count2
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"implication"
count1
11
word"solace"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"silence"
count3
14
word"delved"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"palpable"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
18
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"eyebrow"
2"comforting"
3"chilled"
4"scanning"
5"whisper"
6"reminder"
7"tension"
8"facade"
9"fleeting"
10"implication"
11"solace"
12"unspoken"
13"silence"
14"delved"
15"weight"
16"palpable"
17"shattered"
18"comfortable"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count2
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
1"hung in the air"
2"a spark of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tend to"
1"seemed to"
2"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences47
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords797
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount641
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory17
Eva11
Silas4
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.174
windowScore0.167
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if savoring the hesitation between them"
1"as if searching for something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount797
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
87.37% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean39.85
std18.16
cv0.456
sampleLengths
078
113
261
310
469
542
639
734
826
933
1038
1152
1217
1337
1447
1539
1625
1736
1831
1970
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"was shattered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs103
matches
0"was peeking"
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences47
ratio0.021
matches
0"Eva's words weren't entirely unfair; the ghosts of her past, including the abusive Evan, had driven her to seek solace in anonymity."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount644
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.031055900621118012
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012422360248447204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences47
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences47
mean16.96
std7.07
cv0.417
sampleLengths
024
121
219
314
413
511
620
714
816
910
1015
1122
1214
1318
1421
1521
1621
1711
187
197
2027
219
2217
238
2416
259
2615
2723
2812
2922
3018
3111
326
3313
3424
3529
3618
3723
3816
3919
406
4118
4218
4331
4414
4543
4613
86.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5319148936170213
totalSentences47
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"Only the mischievous quirk of"
1"Then, with a subtle shake"
ratio0.051
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences39
matches
0"he asked, his deep voice"
1"She nodded, and he began"
2"Her grip on the glass"
3"Her eyes roamed over Rory's"
ratio0.103
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences39
matches
0"The dim hum of The"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory to"
2"Silas, polishing a glass with"
3"he asked, his deep voice"
4"She nodded, and he began"
5"The newcomer's eyes, scanning the"
6"Her grip on the glass"
7"The name escaped her lips"
8"The woman, once a bright,"
9"Eva's eyes, once warm and"
10"Eva's gaze lingered on Rory"
11"Silas, sensing the tension, excused"
12"Eva said, a husky undertone"
13"Her eyes roamed over Rory's"
14"Rory's smile felt forced, a"
15"Eva replied, signaling Silas for"
16"The implication hung in the"
17"Rory's fingers drummed a staccato"
18"Eva said, her voice laced"
19"Rory's gaze dropped, the whiskey"
ratio0.718
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva's gaze lingered on Rory before she made her way over, each step deliberate, as if savoring the hesitation between them."
1"Her eyes roamed over Rory's face, as if searching for something."
2"As the night wore on, enveloped in the comfortable silence of The Raven's Nest, Rory realized that sometimes, the heaviest burdens are those we carry in silence…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, the vulnerability a risk"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.7667%