| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 800 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 800 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pristine" | | 1 | "eyebrow" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "chilled" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "facade" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "implication" | | 11 | "solace" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "delved" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "palpable" | | 17 | "shattered" | | 18 | "comfortable" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "a spark of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tend to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 797 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 641 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Eva | 11 | | Silas | 4 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.174 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if savoring the hesitation between them" | | 1 | "as if searching for something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 797 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.37% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 39.85 | | std | 18.16 | | cv | 0.456 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 42 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 70 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | | |
| 82.07% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's words weren't entirely unfair; the ghosts of her past, including the abusive Evan, had driven her to seek solace in anonymity." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 644 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.031055900621118012 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012422360248447204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 47 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 47 | | mean | 16.96 | | std | 7.07 | | cv | 0.417 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 13 |
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| 86.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5319148936170213 | | totalSentences | 47 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the mischievous quirk of" | | 1 | "Then, with a subtle shake" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "he asked, his deep voice" | | 1 | "She nodded, and he began" | | 2 | "Her grip on the glass" | | 3 | "Her eyes roamed over Rory's" |
| | ratio | 0.103 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim hum of The" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, or Rory to" | | 2 | "Silas, polishing a glass with" | | 3 | "he asked, his deep voice" | | 4 | "She nodded, and he began" | | 5 | "The newcomer's eyes, scanning the" | | 6 | "Her grip on the glass" | | 7 | "The name escaped her lips" | | 8 | "The woman, once a bright," | | 9 | "Eva's eyes, once warm and" | | 10 | "Eva's gaze lingered on Rory" | | 11 | "Silas, sensing the tension, excused" | | 12 | "Eva said, a husky undertone" | | 13 | "Her eyes roamed over Rory's" | | 14 | "Rory's smile felt forced, a" | | 15 | "Eva replied, signaling Silas for" | | 16 | "The implication hung in the" | | 17 | "Rory's fingers drummed a staccato" | | 18 | "Eva said, her voice laced" | | 19 | "Rory's gaze dropped, the whiskey" |
| | ratio | 0.718 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's gaze lingered on Rory before she made her way over, each step deliberate, as if savoring the hesitation between them." | | 1 | "Her eyes roamed over Rory's face, as if searching for something." | | 2 | "As the night wore on, enveloped in the comfortable silence of The Raven's Nest, Rory realized that sometimes, the heaviest burdens are those we carry in silence…" |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory began, her voice barely above a whisper, the vulnerability a risk" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |