Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4WT8CCV0WYNHKEZ3T3KC

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Duration:
8.0s
Cost:
$0.000363

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual evening symphony of clinking glasses and hushed conversations. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an emerald glow on the cobblestone street, beckoning patrons into its warm embrace. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door, a bell jingling softly overhead. She stepped inside, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, taking in the familiar sight of the worn leather booths and the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs. Rory had been coming to The Raven's Nest for years, ever since she'd fled to London, leaving behind her old life in Cardiff like a snakeskin shed. The bar was her sanctuary, a place where she could be just Rory, not Laila, not Malphora, not the girl who'd left her ex bleeding on the kitchen floor. She'd first met Silas Blackwood here, the bar's enigmatic owner, and they'd formed an unlikely friendship. He was like a mentor to her, a silent guardian who'd taken her under his wing without her even realizing it. Tonight, however, something felt different. As she wound her way through the tables, she felt a prickle at the back of her neck, a sensation that made her pause mid-step. Then she saw him, sitting at the far end of the bar, nursing a drink. Silas. But not as she remembered him. His hair, once a fiery auburn, was now streaked with grey, and his neatly trimmed beard matched the silver in his hair. He was still tall, broad-shouldered, but there was a weariness in his stance, a slight stoop that hadn't been there before. And his eyes... his hazel eyes, once sharp and piercing, now held a distant sadness, like a stormy sea viewed through a fogged window. Rory hesitated, her heart pounding in her chest. She'd been away for a while, working a job that took her out of the country more often than not. She'd sent messages, called occasionally, but she'd never been great at keeping in touch. She'd assumed Silas understood, that he knew she was just... busy. But looking at him now, she wondered if she'd been wrong. She took a deep breath and walked towards him, her boots clicking softly on the wooden floor. As she approached, he looked up, his eyes meeting hers. For a moment, time seemed to stand still. Then, a slow smile spread across his face, lines crinkling at the corners of his eyes. "Rory Carter," he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder. "I thought that was you." She slid onto the stool beside him, her eyes never leaving his. "Silas Blackwood," she replied, a small smile tugging at her lips. "You're looking... different." He chuckled, a sound that held no humor. "And you're looking the same. Still as sharp as a tack, I see." Rory felt a pang of guilt. She'd changed, of course she had. But she wasn't sure she wanted to talk about it, not yet. "What are you drinking?" she asked instead, nodding towards his glass. "Whiskey. The good stuff," he said, raising his glass in a mock salute. "Want one?" She shook her head. "I'm working later. Can't afford to be tipsy on the job." Silas raised an eyebrow. "Still delivering for Yu-Fei?" "Yep. Still the most exciting thing in my life," she said, trying to keep her tone light. But Silas wasn't fooled. He'd known her too long, seen her through too many storms. "Rory," he said, his voice gentle yet firm. "It's been what, three years? You can't keep running from your past forever." She stiffened, her fingers tightening around her glass of soda water. "I'm not running, Silas. I'm... I'm building a new life." He looked at her, his gaze steady. "A life that doesn't include your family? Your friends? Me?" Rory looked away, her eyes scanning the room, anywhere but at Silas. "I can't go back, Silas. You know that." Silas sighed, running a hand through his hair. "I know you can't change the past, Rory. But you can't keep hiding from it either. It's eating you up inside." She turned back to him, her eyes flashing. "And what about you, Silas? You're hiding too, aren't you? Behind this bar, these maps, these... these ghosts of your past." She gestured to the walls, her hand sweeping through the air. "You're not the only one with regrets, you know." Silas was silent for a moment, his gaze distant. Then he nodded, a small, almost imperceptible movement. "You're right, Rory. We're not so different, you and I." Rory felt a lump form in her throat. She'd missed him, more than she'd realized. She'd missed their talks, their silences, the way he understood her without her having to say a word. She reached out, placing her hand over his. His fingers were warm, rough from years of work. He turned his hand over, squeezing hers gently. "I'm glad you're back, Rory," he said softly. "Even if it's just for a little while." She smiled, a genuine smile this time. "Me too, Silas. Me too." But as she looked into his eyes, she saw the unspoken words hanging between them, the regrets they both carried like heavy stones in their pockets. She knew they had a lot to talk about, a lot to make up for. But for now, it was enough to be here, together, in this little corner of the world they'd both called home at one time or another. And so, they sat there, side by side, their fingers entwined, their eyes reflecting the soft glow of the green neon sign outside. The past was a heavy weight, a burden they both carried. But for tonight, they could forget about it, forget about the roads not taken, the paths they'd left behind. For tonight, they could just be Rory and Silas, two old friends catching up over drinks in a bar in Soho. But as the night wore on, and the bar began to empty, Rory knew that tomorrow would come, and with it, the weight of time and unspoken regret. But for now, she could rest, she could breathe, she could be at peace. And that was enough. It had to be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
26.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she asked instead [instead]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.174
80.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1052
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"pang"
count1
6
word"eyebrow"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"symphony"
1"familiar"
2"sanctuary"
3"enigmatic"
4"pounding"
5"pang"
6"eyebrow"
7"scanning"
8"unspoken"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
88.77% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences69
matches
0"felt a prickle"
1"a pang of guilt"
2"felt a lump"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1047
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount867
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory9
London1
Cardiff1
Laila1
Malphora1
Silas9
Blackwood1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Laila"
5"Silas"
6"Blackwood"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.981
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1047
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"understood, that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean38.78
std24.33
cv0.627
sampleLengths
090
193
252
367
464
551
617
726
821
935
1015
1115
128
1332
1421
1521
1617
1720
1829
1949
2027
2158
2216
2312
2467
2574
2650
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences84
ratio0
matches(empty)
96.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount871
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04362801377726751
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008036739380022962
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean12.46
std7.4
cv0.594
sampleLengths
020
122
218
330
427
529
616
721
85
925
1015
111
126
1322
1421
153
1621
178
1820
1914
2010
211
2211
2317
2410
258
2616
2712
285
2912
3011
313
328
3313
346
356
3612
3711
3813
392
404
4111
424
434
4417
454
4611
478
4813
4911
45.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.30952380952380953
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners26
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"Then she saw him, sitting"
1"Then, a slow smile spread"
2"Then he nodded, a small,"
ratio0.045
17.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences67
matches
0"She stepped inside, her eyes"
1"She'd first met Silas Blackwood"
2"He was like a mentor"
3"His hair, once a fiery"
4"He was still tall, broad-shouldered,"
5"his hazel eyes, once sharp"
6"She'd been away for a"
7"She'd sent messages, called occasionally,"
8"She'd assumed Silas understood, that"
9"She took a deep breath"
10"he said, his voice a"
11"She slid onto the stool"
12"she replied, a small smile"
13"He chuckled, a sound that"
14"She'd changed, of course she"
15"she asked instead, nodding towards"
16"he said, raising his glass"
17"She shook her head."
18"she said, trying to keep"
19"He'd known her too long,"
ratio0.507
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences67
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Aurora Carter, known to most"
2"She stepped inside, her eyes"
3"Rory had been coming to"
4"The bar was her sanctuary,"
5"She'd first met Silas Blackwood"
6"He was like a mentor"
7"Tonight, however, something felt different."
8"His hair, once a fiery"
9"He was still tall, broad-shouldered,"
10"his hazel eyes, once sharp"
11"Rory hesitated, her heart pounding"
12"She'd been away for a"
13"She'd sent messages, called occasionally,"
14"She'd assumed Silas understood, that"
15"She took a deep breath"
16"he said, his voice a"
17"She slid onto the stool"
18"she replied, a small smile"
19"He chuckled, a sound that"
ratio0.701
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She stepped inside, her eyes adjusting to the dim light, taking in the familiar sight of the worn leather booths and the walls adorned with old maps and black-a…"
1"He was like a mentor to her, a silent guardian who'd taken her under his wing without her even realizing it."
2"As she wound her way through the tables, she felt a prickle at the back of her neck, a sensation that made her pause mid-step."
3"He was still tall, broad-shouldered, but there was a weariness in his stance, a slight stoop that hadn't been there before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble, like distant thunder"
1"she replied, a small smile tugging at her lips"
2"she said, trying to keep her tone light"
3"he said, his voice gentle yet firm"
4"She gestured, her hand sweeping through the air"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.609
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.4281%