Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR4YKZXZTFHR1HSFD36FRB

Run Details

Duration:
19.6s
Cost:
$0.007498

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clink of glasses, the occasional burst of laughter. The green neon sign outside cast a sickly glow through the rain-streaked windows, painting the wooden tables in shifting shades of jade. Rory wiped her hands on her apron, balancing a tray of empty pint glasses against her hip as she weaved between patrons. The dinner rush had thinned, leaving only the regulars—old men nursing whiskies, a couple locked in hushed argument, a lone woman in the corner scribbling in a notebook. She didn’t see him at first. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp air, and there he was. Evan. Leaner than she remembered, his jaw sharper, his dark hair cropped close to his skull. He stood in the doorway, scanning the room, and for a heartbeat, Rory froze. The tray slipped, glasses clattering against the wood. Heads turned. Evan’s gaze locked onto hers. Her pulse hammered in her throat. She set the tray down with deliberate care, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. The one he’d given her. The one she’d tried to hide for years. Evan stepped forward, hands shoved deep in the pockets of his wool coat. "Rory." The name hung between them, heavy as the rain outside. She hadn’t heard it in years—not from him. Not like that. "Evan." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "What are you doing here?" He gestured vaguely toward the bar. "Looking for a drink. Heard this place was decent." She almost laughed. "Since when do you care about decent?" A flicker of something crossed his face—annoyance, maybe. Or shame. "People change." "Not you." The words slipped out before she could stop them. His mouth tightened, but he didn’t deny it. Instead, he nodded toward the bar. "Buy you one?" She should say no. Should walk away. But the past had its hooks in her, and she found herself sliding onto a stool beside him. Silas was already there, polishing a glass with slow, methodical strokes. His hazel eyes flicked between them, sharp as broken glass. "What’ll it be?" "Whiskey," Evan said. "Neat." Rory hesitated. "Just water." Silas raised an eyebrow but didn’t comment. He set the drinks down and moved to the other end of the bar, giving them the illusion of privacy. Evan wrapped his fingers around the glass, knuckles white. "You look good." She didn’t answer. The silence stretched, thick with everything unsaid. "You still working here?" he asked. "Part-time. Deliveries, mostly." He nodded, like that made sense. Like he hadn’t once told her she was wasting her life on menial jobs. "And the law thing?" "Didn’t take." Another nod. Another beat of silence. The ice in her water had melted, leaving it tasteless and weak. Evan exhaled through his nose. "I heard about your dad." Her fingers stilled. "Yeah." "Sorry." She shrugged. "It’s been a while." He looked at her then, really looked at her, and she saw the question in his eyes. *Why didn’t you come back?* But he didn’t ask. Maybe he already knew the answer. "You ever think about Cardiff?" he said instead. "Every day." The admission surprised her. Evan’s expression flickered, something raw and unguarded. For a second, he was the boy she’d known—the one who’d laughed too loud, who’d stolen kisses in the university library, who’d promised her the world. Then his walls went back up. He tossed back the whiskey, wincing as it burned. "I should go." She didn’t stop him. He stood, hesitated. "Take care, Rory." She watched him walk away, the door swinging shut behind him. The bar felt smaller without him in it. Silas slid a fresh glass of water toward her, condensation beading on the sides. "You okay?" She traced a finger through the wet ring on the bar. "I don’t know." Silas didn’t press. He just nodded, like he understood. Maybe he did. Outside, the rain kept falling.
total_cost0.007498

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.074
92.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount665
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount665
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"pulse"
2"flicker"
3"methodical"
4"flicked"
5"eyebrow"
6"silence"
7"flickered"
8"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords659
ratio0.008
matches
0"Why didn’t you come back?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount577
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory3
Evan7
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.893
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount659
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean16.07
std16.96
cv1.055
sampleLengths
091
16
260
36
429
514
621
714
815
910
1012
112
1226
1325
1424
154
164
1727
1812
1910
206
213
2224
232
2418
2510
264
271
286
2932
308
312
3237
3318
344
356
3633
372
3814
3912
405
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs108
matches
0"was wasting"
17.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences91
ratio0.044
matches
0"The dinner rush had thinned, leaving only the regulars—old men nursing whiskies, a couple locked in hushed argument, a lone woman in the corner scribbling in a notebook."
1"She hadn’t heard it in years—not from him."
2"A flicker of something crossed his face—annoyance, maybe."
3"For a second, he was the boy she’d known—the one who’d laughed too loud, who’d stolen kisses in the university library, who’d promised her the world."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount582
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03436426116838488
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006872852233676976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean7.24
std5.83
cv0.805
sampleLengths
019
122
222
328
46
515
61
715
814
98
102
115
126
1316
145
158
1613
171
1810
198
203
219
225
236
249
253
267
278
282
292
302
319
328
336
343
354
363
3718
3811
3910
403
413
421
432
442
457
4620
479
483
493
71.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.45054945054945056
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences60
matches
0"Instead, he nodded toward the"
1"Maybe he already knew the"
2"Then his walls went back"
3"Maybe he did."
ratio0.067
66.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences60
matches
0"She didn’t see him at"
1"He stood in the doorway,"
2"Her pulse hammered in her"
3"She set the tray down"
4"She hadn’t heard it in"
5"Her voice came out steadier"
6"He gestured vaguely toward the"
7"She almost laughed."
8"His mouth tightened, but he"
9"She should say no."
10"His hazel eyes flicked between"
11"He set the drinks down"
12"She didn’t answer."
13"He nodded, like that made"
14"Her fingers stilled."
15"He looked at her then,"
16"he said instead"
17"He tossed back the whiskey,"
18"She didn’t stop him."
19"He stood, hesitated."
ratio0.383
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences60
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"The green neon sign outside"
2"Rory wiped her hands on"
3"The dinner rush had thinned,"
4"She didn’t see him at"
5"The door swung open, letting"
6"He stood in the doorway,"
7"The tray slipped, glasses clattering"
8"Evan’s gaze locked onto hers."
9"Her pulse hammered in her"
10"She set the tray down"
11"The one he’d given her."
12"The one she’d tried to"
13"Evan stepped forward, hands shoved"
14"The name hung between them,"
15"She hadn’t heard it in"
16"Her voice came out steadier"
17"He gestured vaguely toward the"
18"She almost laughed."
19"A flicker of something crossed"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.4122%