Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR51941683DM8KVP0QH8H9

Run Details

Duration:
30.5s
Cost:
$0.019058
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, stood at the edge of the Fae Grove, her bright blue eyes scanning the ancient oak standing stones that marked its boundary. The air shimmered with a faint distortion, a whisper of magic that only those attuned to the supernatural could perceive. Beside her, Nyx, a living shadow with faintly glowing violet eyes, shifted between solid and incorporeal forms, their presence a constant reminder of the realms beyond the mortal plane. Isolde Varga, the ethereal Half-Fae seer, led the way, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight as she moved with a grace that left no footprints. "Are you sure this is the place?" Rory's voice carried a hint of skepticism, her cool-headed nature always seeking logic amidst the fantastical. Isolde turned, her pale lavender eyes meeting Rory's. "The Grove awaits those who seek its secrets. But remember, time dances differently here." Nyx's voice, a whisper on the wind, added, "The Veil is thin. Tread carefully." With a nod, Rory stepped forward, the Heartstone Pendant around her neck pulsing faintly with warmth. The moment she crossed the threshold, the world shifted. The air grew thick with the scent of wildflowers, a riot of colors blooming in every direction. The sky above, a tapestry of swirling hues, defied earthly logic, casting an otherworldly glow over the landscape. "Feels like stepping into a dream," Rory murmured, her voice tinged with awe. Isolde's laughter, a melodic chime, echoed through the grove. "Dreams and reality often blur here." As they ventured deeper, the grove revealed its wonders. Trees with bark like silver and leaves that shimmered with an inner light towered above them. The ground beneath their feet was soft, almost spongy, as if the earth itself breathed with life. Rory reached out, brushing her fingers against a nearby tree, feeling the cool, smooth texture beneath her touch. "These trees... they're alive in a way I've never felt before," Rory observed, her voice filled with wonder. Nyx drifted closer, their form casting elongated shadows that danced across the ground. "The Fae realm's touch lingers here. Life thrives in ways mortals cannot comprehend." A rustle in the underbrush drew their attention. Rory's hand instinctively moved to the Fae-Forged Blade at her side, its moonsilver surface cold against her skin. But instead of danger, a creature emerged — a small, luminescent being with wings like stained glass. It hovered before them, its eyes curious and unafraid. "Fae sprites," Isolde explained, her tone gentle. "Guardians of the grove." The sprite flitted around them, leaving trails of light in its wake. Rory watched, captivated by its beauty, her earlier unease melting away. "It's like nothing I've ever seen." As they continued, the grove's magic deepened. The air hummed with energy, a symphony of sounds that seemed to resonate with their very souls. Rory felt a connection to the place, a sense of belonging that defied her logical mind. "Do you feel it?" she asked, glancing at Nyx. Nyx's form solidified, their eyes glowing with an intensity that matched the grove's vibrancy. "The Veil's song. It calls to those who listen." Isolde paused, her gaze distant as if seeing beyond the present. "The grove holds many secrets. Some are meant to be discovered, others to remain hidden." Rory's curiosity piqued, she ventured off the path, drawn by a faint glimmer in the distance. The others followed, their footsteps silent on the soft earth. As they approached, the source of the light became clear — a pool of water, its surface like liquid glass, reflecting the kaleidoscope sky above. "An oasis," Rory breathed, kneeling beside it. The water was cool, its touch invigorating. Isolde joined her, her reflection rippling in the pool. "The waters of the grove are said to reveal truths to those who seek them." Rory leaned closer, her reflection staring back with an intensity that seemed to pierce her soul. For a moment, she saw not just herself, but glimpses of her past and future, intertwined in a dance of possibilities. "It's... overwhelming," she admitted, pulling back. Nyx's presence was a comforting shadow beside her. "Truth often is." They lingered by the pool, each lost in their thoughts, before Isolde's voice broke the silence. "We should move on. The grove's magic is unpredictable." Reluctantly, Rory rose, casting one last glance at the pool. As they continued, the grove's wonders unfolded around them — flowers that sang with the wind, stones that glowed with an inner fire, and creatures that defied earthly classification. Yet, amidst the beauty, a sense of unease lingered. The grove's magic, while enchanting, was also unpredictable, its power both a gift and a danger. Rory felt it in the air, a tension that thrummed beneath the surface. "Do you ever worry about getting lost here?" she asked Isolde, her voice a mix of curiosity and caution. Isolde's smile was enigmatic, her eyes reflecting the grove's mysteries. "The grove guides those who respect its ways. But it can be unforgiving to those who seek to exploit it." Rory nodded, understanding the unspoken warning. The grove was a place of wonder, but also one of caution. As they ventured deeper, she felt a growing respect for the ancient magic that pulsed through the land. Their journey continued, each step revealing new marvels and challenges. The grove was a living tapestry, its threads woven with the magic of the Fae and the mysteries of the Veil. Rory felt a part of it, her heart beating in time with its rhythm. As they reached the heart of the grove, a clearing bathed in ethereal light, Rory paused, taking in the scene. The air was thick with magic, a tangible force that wrapped around them like a warm embrace. "It's beautiful," she whispered, her voice filled with awe. Nyx's form shimmered, their presence a comforting shadow beside her. "The grove's heart. A place of power and peace." Isolde stepped forward, her gaze serene. "Here, the Veil is at its thinnest. A place where worlds touch." Rory felt the truth of her words, the air alive with possibilities. The grove was a place of wonder, a testament to the magic that lay beyond the mortal realm. As they stood in its heart, she felt a sense of belonging, a connection to the world and its mysteries. In that moment, Rory knew that the grove was more than just a place — it was a part of her journey, a step on the path to understanding the magic that lay within and beyond. And as they turned to leave, she carried with her the knowledge that the grove's magic would always be a part of her, a reminder of the wonders that lay beyond the Veil.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1122
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"very"
2"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1122
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count3
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"reminder"
count2
4
word"amidst"
count2
5
word"dances"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"tapestry"
count2
8
word"otherworldly"
count1
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"symphony"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count3
13
word"intensity"
count2
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
16
word"dance"
count1
17
word"comforting"
count2
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"tension"
count1
20
word"enigmatic"
count1
21
word"unspoken"
count1
22
word"pulsed"
count1
23
word"tangible"
count1
24
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"shimmered"
2"whisper"
3"reminder"
4"amidst"
5"dances"
6"warmth"
7"tapestry"
8"otherworldly"
9"tinged"
10"echoed"
11"symphony"
12"sense of"
13"intensity"
14"footsteps"
15"kaleidoscope"
16"dance"
17"comforting"
18"silence"
19"tension"
20"enigmatic"
21"unspoken"
22"pulsed"
23"tangible"
24"testament"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
1"The air was thick with"
11.36% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells9
narrationSentences66
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"d with awe"
2"filled with wonder"
3"d with wonder"
4"a sense of belonging"
5"a sense of unease"
6"filled with awe"
7"d with awe"
8"a sense of belonging"
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1123
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
43.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount938
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory20
Fae4
Grove1
Nyx7
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Isolde10
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Veil2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Fae-Forged"
3"Veil"
globalScore0.434
windowScore0.5
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounds that seemed to resonate with their very souls"
1"as if seeing beyond the present"
2"intensity that seemed to pierce her soul"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.89
wordCount1123
matches
0"not just herself, but glimpses of her past"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean31.19
std20.29
cv0.65
sampleLengths
0105
123
222
314
460
513
615
760
818
926
1052
1111
1229
1340
149
1523
1626
1751
1814
1924
2037
216
2211
2325
2439
2538
2619
2730
2836
2945
3037
319
3219
3318
3450
3569
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences79
ratio0.051
matches
0"But instead of danger, a creature emerged — a small, luminescent being with wings like stained glass."
1"As they approached, the source of the light became clear — a pool of water, its surface like liquid glass, reflecting the kaleidoscope sky above."
2"As they continued, the grove's wonders unfolded around them — flowers that sang with the wind, stones that glowed with an inner fire, and creatures that defied earthly classification."
3"In that moment, Rory knew that the grove was more than just a place — it was a part of her journey, a step on the path to understanding the magic that lay within and beyond."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02454642475987193
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008537886872998933
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.22
std6.72
cv0.473
sampleLengths
030
120
229
326
423
58
614
714
816
99
1017
1118
1213
139
146
159
1616
1717
1818
1918
2013
2113
228
2318
2417
259
267
274
2812
2911
306
317
3217
3316
349
3514
369
3711
3815
3916
4010
4125
427
437
449
4515
4616
4721
486
498
60.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.379746835443038
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners30
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Reluctantly, Rory rose, casting one"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences66
matches
0"It hovered before them, its"
1"she asked, glancing at Nyx"
2"she admitted, pulling back"
3"They lingered by the pool,"
4"she asked Isolde, her voice"
5"Their journey continued, each step"
6"she whispered, her voice filled"
ratio0.106
73.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The air shimmered with a"
2"Isolde Varga, the ethereal Half-Fae"
3"Rory's voice carried a hint"
4"Isolde turned, her pale lavender"
5"Nyx's voice, a whisper on"
6"The moment she crossed the"
7"The air grew thick with"
8"The sky above, a tapestry"
9"Rory murmured, her voice tinged"
10"Isolde's laughter, a melodic chime,"
11"Trees with bark like silver"
12"The ground beneath their feet"
13"Rory reached out, brushing her"
14"Rory observed, her voice filled"
15"Nyx drifted closer, their form"
16"A rustle in the underbrush"
17"Rory's hand instinctively moved to"
18"It hovered before them, its"
19"Isolde explained, her tone gentle"
ratio0.773
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Yet, amidst the beauty, a"
ratio0.015
59.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Nyx drifted closer, their form casting elongated shadows that danced across the ground."
1"Nyx's form solidified, their eyes glowing with an intensity that matched the grove's vibrancy."
2"Isolde paused, her gaze distant as if seeing beyond the present."
3"Rory leaned closer, her reflection staring back with an intensity that seemed to pierce her soul."
4"As they continued, the grove's wonders unfolded around them — flowers that sang with the wind, stones that glowed with an inner fire, and creatures that defied …"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde explained, her tone gentle"
1"she asked, her voice a mix of curiosity and caution"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"the wind added (add)"
1"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2"Rory observed (observe)"
3"Isolde explained (explain)"
4"Rory breathed (breathe)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.778
effectiveRatio0.609
72.7370%