| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "reluctantly" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "reluctantly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1122 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "amidst" | | 5 | "dances" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "tapestry" | | 8 | "otherworldly" | | 9 | "tinged" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "symphony" | | 12 | "sense of" | | 13 | "intensity" | | 14 | "footsteps" | | 15 | "kaleidoscope" | | 16 | "dance" | | 17 | "comforting" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "tension" | | 20 | "enigmatic" | | 21 | "unspoken" | | 22 | "pulsed" | | 23 | "tangible" | | 24 | "testament" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a sense of unease" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 11.36% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 9 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "d with awe" | | 2 | "filled with wonder" | | 3 | "d with wonder" | | 4 | "a sense of belonging" | | 5 | "a sense of unease" | | 6 | "filled with awe" | | 7 | "d with awe" | | 8 | "a sense of belonging" |
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| 99.57% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1123 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 938 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.13 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Fae-Forged" | | 3 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.434 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sounds that seemed to resonate with their very souls" | | 1 | "as if seeing beyond the present" | | 2 | "intensity that seemed to pierce her soul" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.89 | | wordCount | 1123 | | matches | | 0 | "not just herself, but glimpses of her past" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 31.19 | | std | 20.29 | | cv | 0.65 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 50 | | 35 | 69 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "But instead of danger, a creature emerged — a small, luminescent being with wings like stained glass." | | 1 | "As they approached, the source of the light became clear — a pool of water, its surface like liquid glass, reflecting the kaleidoscope sky above." | | 2 | "As they continued, the grove's wonders unfolded around them — flowers that sang with the wind, stones that glowed with an inner fire, and creatures that defied earthly classification." | | 3 | "In that moment, Rory knew that the grove was more than just a place — it was a part of her journey, a step on the path to understanding the magic that lay within and beyond." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 937 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.02454642475987193 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008537886872998933 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 14.22 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.473 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 60.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.379746835443038 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Reluctantly, Rory rose, casting one" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "It hovered before them, its" | | 1 | "she asked, glancing at Nyx" | | 2 | "she admitted, pulling back" | | 3 | "They lingered by the pool," | | 4 | "she asked Isolde, her voice" | | 5 | "Their journey continued, each step" | | 6 | "she whispered, her voice filled" |
| | ratio | 0.106 | |
| 73.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 1 | "The air shimmered with a" | | 2 | "Isolde Varga, the ethereal Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Rory's voice carried a hint" | | 4 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "Nyx's voice, a whisper on" | | 6 | "The moment she crossed the" | | 7 | "The air grew thick with" | | 8 | "The sky above, a tapestry" | | 9 | "Rory murmured, her voice tinged" | | 10 | "Isolde's laughter, a melodic chime," | | 11 | "Trees with bark like silver" | | 12 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 13 | "Rory reached out, brushing her" | | 14 | "Rory observed, her voice filled" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form" | | 16 | "A rustle in the underbrush" | | 17 | "Rory's hand instinctively moved to" | | 18 | "It hovered before them, its" | | 19 | "Isolde explained, her tone gentle" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 75.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, amidst the beauty, a" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form casting elongated shadows that danced across the ground." | | 1 | "Nyx's form solidified, their eyes glowing with an intensity that matched the grove's vibrancy." | | 2 | "Isolde paused, her gaze distant as if seeing beyond the present." | | 3 | "Rory leaned closer, her reflection staring back with an intensity that seemed to pierce her soul." | | 4 | "As they continued, the grove's wonders unfolded around them — flowers that sang with the wind, stones that glowed with an inner fire, and creatures that defied …" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde explained, her tone gentle" | | 1 | "she asked, her voice a mix of curiosity and caution" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the wind added (add)" | | 1 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Rory observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 4 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.391 | | leniency | 0.783 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.609 | |