Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR54NDEAGEX8VQVK0H2261

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Duration:
7.4s
Cost:
$0.000343

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
In the heart of Soho, The Raven's Nest hummed with the usual evening crowd. The air was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and the low murmur of conversations. The distinctive green neon sign cast an eerie glow on the cobblestone street outside, beckoning patrons in from the chill of the London night. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, pushed open the heavy wooden door, a bell jingling softly overhead. She stepped inside, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. The bar was a labyrinth of old maps and black-and-white photographs, each one telling a story of a time long past. She scanned the room, her gaze landing on a familiar face hunched over a glass of amber liquid at the far end of the bar. Silas Blackwood, or Si as she used to call him, looked up as she approached. His hazel eyes, once sharp and piercing, now held a certain weariness. His hair, once a fiery auburn, was now streaked with grey, and a neatly trimmed beard framed his face. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand, a remnant of his past life. He still carried himself with quiet authority, but there was a stiffness in his movements, a slight limp in his left leg that Rory didn't remember. "Silas," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. It was a statement, not a question. She didn't need to ask if it was him. Time might have weathered him, but the essence of the man was still there, etched into the lines of his face. He looked at her, surprise flickering across his features. "Rory," he said, his voice a low rumble. "I heard you were back in London." She nodded, sliding onto the stool next to him. "Been here a few months now. You look... different." Silas chuckled, taking a sip of his drink. "A few years can do that to a man. You, on the other hand, haven't changed a bit. Still the same old Rory." Rory smiled, but it didn't reach her eyes. She looked around the bar, her gaze landing on a photograph of two young people, arms slung around each other's shoulders. "You still running this place, then?" "Yep," Silas replied, following her gaze. "Best cover story I could think of. Keeps me close to the action, so to speak." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Action? In a bar?" Silas grinned, a glint of mischief in his eyes. "You'd be surprised what goes on in here, Rory. But enough about me. What brings you back to London? Last I heard, you were in Cardiff, making a name for yourself in law." Rory's smile faded. She looked down at her hands, tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "That was a long time ago, Si. A lot's changed since then." Silas studied her for a moment, then signaled the bartender for another round. "Want to talk about it?" Rory took a deep breath, her mind flashing back to the past. "I left Cardiff after... after things with Evan got ugly. Eva convinced me to come to London, start fresh. I've been working for Yu-Fei, delivering food. It's not much, but it pays the bills." Silas nodded, his expression unreadable. "And your law degree?" Rory shrugged. "It's on hold. I needed a break, you know? From everything." Silas was silent for a moment, then he reached out, placing a hand over hers. "I'm sorry, Rory. I know things haven't been easy for you." Rory looked at him, her bright blue eyes filled with unshed tears. "Neither have they been for you, Si. I heard about Prague. I'm sorry." Silas withdrew his hand, taking a sip of his drink. "It was a long time ago. I've made my peace with it." Rory nodded, but she could see the tension in his shoulders, the way he held himself rigid. She knew better than to push the subject. Instead, she changed the topic. "You still living above the bar?" Silas nodded. "It's convenient. Close to work, you know?" Rory smiled, a genuine one this time. "You always did love your convenience, Si." Silas chuckled, the tension in his shoulders easing slightly. "Some things never change, I guess." They fell into a comfortable silence, each lost in their own thoughts. The bar around them buzzed with life, but they were isolated in their own little world, two old friends catching up on lost time. After a while, Rory broke the silence. "You know, I've been thinking. About us. About how we used to be." Silas looked at her, his expression guarded. "What about us?" Rory took a deep breath. "We were so young, so full of dreams. We thought we could change the world." Silas smiled, a sad smile that didn't reach his eyes. "We were foolish, Rory. We thought we were invincible." Rory nodded. "We were. But now... now we're just two people, trying to make sense of the mess we've made of our lives." Silas was silent for a moment, then he reached out, his hand covering hers again. "We're still here, Rory. Still fighting. That's something, isn't it?" Rory looked at him, her eyes filled with unshed tears. "Is it, Si? Is it really?" Silas didn't answer, just squeezed her hand tightly. The unspoken words hung heavy in the air between them, a testament to the weight of time and the regret that came with it. They finished their drinks in silence, each lost in their own thoughts, each wondering what the future held for them. But for now, they were content to be together, two old friends who had found each other again in the heart of Soho.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount952
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"slightly"
3"really"
4"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount952
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"tension"
count2
10
word"comfortable"
count1
11
word"silence"
count3
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"testament"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"whisper"
4"etched"
5"eyebrow"
6"glint"
7"tracing"
8"unreadable"
9"tension"
10"comfortable"
11"silence"
12"sense of"
13"unspoken"
14"testament"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords948
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount642
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Carter1
Rory14
Blackwood1
Si1
Silas14
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.41
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
94.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.055
wordCount948
matches
0"not much, but it pays the bills"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean29.63
std19.49
cv0.658
sampleLengths
054
174
287
346
424
518
631
735
822
98
1042
1130
1218
1346
149
1513
1626
1725
1822
1936
209
2114
2215
2336
2420
2510
2620
2719
2823
2925
3016
3175
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"were isolated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences79
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount645
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.027906976744186046
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007751937984496124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean12
std7.06
cv0.588
sampleLengths
014
116
224
318
410
521
625
715
812
919
1015
1126
129
137
149
1521
169
178
187
199
209
218
2223
238
2421
256
266
2716
284
294
309
3133
323
3315
3412
3513
365
3712
3834
395
404
412
4211
4315
4411
4512
4613
4710
4812
4917
58.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3670886075949367
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners29
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Instead, she changed the topic."
ratio0.02
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences50
matches
0"She stepped inside, her eyes"
1"She scanned the room, her"
2"His hazel eyes, once sharp"
3"His hair, once a fiery"
4"He still carried himself with"
5"she said, her voice barely"
6"It was a statement, not"
7"She didn't need to ask"
8"He looked at her, surprise"
9"he said, his voice a"
10"She nodded, sliding onto the"
11"She looked around the bar,"
12"She looked down at her"
13"She knew better than to"
14"They fell into a comfortable"
15"They finished their drinks in"
ratio0.32
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences50
matches
0"The air was thick with"
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"Aurora Carter, known to most"
3"She stepped inside, her eyes"
4"The bar was a labyrinth"
5"She scanned the room, her"
6"Silas Blackwood, or Si as"
7"His hazel eyes, once sharp"
8"His hair, once a fiery"
9"A silver signet ring glinted"
10"He still carried himself with"
11"she said, her voice barely"
12"It was a statement, not"
13"She didn't need to ask"
14"Time might have weathered him,"
15"He looked at her, surprise"
16"he said, his voice a"
17"She nodded, sliding onto the"
18"Silas chuckled, taking a sip"
19"Rory smiled, but it didn't"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"he said, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.207
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.8363%