Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR56EQ6M7KEP7Q9D242SDE

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain assaulted the slick streets of Soho with relentless fury, swallowing them whole in puddles that shimmered beneath the piercing glow of neon lights. Detective Harlow Quinn stood on the corner, her wet boots grinding against the sidewalk, tense eyes scanning the stretch of road as if she could will her suspect out into the open. Just ahead, the faint flickering hue of the distinctive green neon sign marked The Raven's Nest. Her prey might be lurking around that shadowy den, but she'd have to stick to the trail until she was sure. The chase was far from over. There—an elusive silhouette dashed out from a side alley, skittering like a shadow trying to escape the light. Quinn caught the curve of a shoulder, but what pinned her gaze was the flash of a scar on a forearm. A scar she knew too well. The suspect was Tomás Herrera, the former paramedic now tangled up with the supernatural underworld she was desperately trying to unravel. "Damn, Tommy," she muttered under her breath. Not personal; not yet. Quinn darted after him, feet pounding the pavement with military precision, her movements as fluid as the rain cascading down her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. She matched his pace, her worn leather watch ticking in sync with her heartbeat. Flashes of the past returned unbidden—the case that had cost her a partner, the link to the supernatural she had not been able to decipher. Ahead, Herrera sprinted towards the Tube station, every intention clear in his flight path. He was heading underground, to some place she hadn't ventured yet, some place that smelled of danger and uncertainty. She couldn't afford to lose him now. Her breath came in short bursts, chasing him past the remnants of evening crowds apparent in those brave enough to weather the storm. Herrera rounded a corner and Quinn lost sight of him momentarily, panic threatening to claw at her resolve. But then she saw it—a faint glimmer in the night as he slipped through the metal grating of the entrance to the abandoned Tube station. It was her chance. Half-time thinking was a luxury in pursuit. A reasonable risk, she told herself, probing at the grating before ducking inside. The entrance gave way to a passage, the cavernous depths before her echoing with the polite whisper of rain on metal. Quinn slipped, corrected herself, leveraging her focus on the path snaking ahead. The slippery trail led deeper into the bowels of the city—a realm that few dared tread unless they held a particular interest or desperation. She blinked, scanned the walls, finding them painted with murals of forgotten legends—beasts and sorcerers, warriors wreathed in shadows. The tunnel sang of the supernatural, oozed its presence through art and architecture. Despite the drowning heartbeat ringing in her ears, she recognized the workings of magic—the underbelly signaling an entrance to something greater, more sinister. Quinn halted before a small doorway sparsely lit by a faded bulb. Unfamiliar territory. Chaos whirled in her mind, but she steadied herself, remembering Herrera’s hurried footsteps, the urgency in his flight. There was little time to weigh the options; a faint echo from beyond the door dragged her forward. Through the threshold lay The Veil Market, a world hidden beneath Camden. Her entry was unauthorized, granted not by bone token but sheer determination. The sprawling cavern boasted stalls laden with wares unnatural, doused in a glow of forbidden enchantments and witchlight dapples. Old maps decorated the walls alongside black-and-white photographs—remnants of the past, haunted by mystery and secrets. Quinn maneuvered through shuffling crowds, her gaze scanning for Herrera among the sellers—some human, others decidedly more inhuman. Opal eyes, sharp fangs, skin like bark; the fair of oddities beckoned, tempted, whispering truths wrapped in deceit. Eyes of strangers jabbed at her with clandestine interest, sensing her unfamiliarity, yet she pushed on through the stifling secrecy. Each step was a trot through foreign paths, a tentative wade by an interloper treading softly. The cacophony enveloped her, tension rising with each heartbeat in pursuit. She knew Herrera was here; she could feel the remnants of his presence in the chill draft that whispered through the market. An urgency tingled on her skin, her instincts nudged by remnants of the supernatural she sought to comprehend. And then—near a stall displaying vials that glowed ominously—she found him. Herrera stood in conversational embrace with a merchant brandishing a necklace, fingers poised on the pendant as if it were weighted with destiny. His voice was low, urgent; the resonance of a man negotiating ties that bound them both to secrecy. “Tomás, what’s going on?” Her voice pierced the veil of chatter like a warning shot, inadequately softened, marked by urgency. Warm brown eyes met hers, defiance simmering within them, yet a flicker of vulnerability clung to the air around him like the scent of rain. “Quinn, you’re far from your beat. This place isn’t for you.” His warning was a hollow foreboding, yet laced with genuine concern. Quinn stepped closer, her brow marked by resolve and determination. “I need answers, Tommy. About Morris. About those three years that keep clawing back at me.” Silence drowned the ambulatory noise, a hushed beckoning within their embrace. The delicate bond of trust between them strained, unyielding yet nurturing unspoken truths. “If you want answers," Herrera replied, keeping his gaze unwavering, "you're walking a razor’s edge.” Quinn’s eyes arrested his presence, a storm within them raging as she weighed his words. Choices unfurled like spectres in the shadows. Pursue further into alien factions or retreat to territories she knew too well. Moments hung heavy as her decision formed, shrouded in the layered storm of uncertainties. Draw breath, dive into it. Resolve aloud, queuing action for fate to take reign. “What’re you hiding, Tommy?” Her words bore the etchings of challenge, the drawbridge to revelations she dared to breach. Herrera knotted his brow, fingers resting on the pendant. “Easy, Quinn. I promise… Just not here. Not now.” An exchange veiled by circumstance and insight, an accord newly born yet flecked with risk—the cornered lion intent on stalking yet to find solace in wary patience. Quinn saw the quandary unfold, mind undulating with visceral thought—the secreted abyss of unknowns heralded deeper discourse. She made her choice, drawing breath to speak again in an ever-thickening night.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count2
2
word"unravel"
count1
3
word"pounding"
count1
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count3
6
word"depths"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"leveraging"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"sinister"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
14
word"clandestine"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"resonance"
count1
20
word"simmering"
count1
21
word"flicker"
count1
22
word"foreboding"
count1
23
word"silence"
count1
24
word"unspoken"
count1
25
word"unwavering"
count1
26
word"solace"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"scanning"
2"unravel"
3"pounding"
4"cascading"
5"resolve"
6"depths"
7"echoing"
8"whisper"
9"leveraging"
10"scanned"
11"sinister"
12"footsteps"
13"echo"
14"clandestine"
15"cacophony"
16"tension"
17"could feel"
18"chill"
19"resonance"
20"simmering"
21"flicker"
22"foreboding"
23"silence"
24"unspoken"
25"unwavering"
26"solace"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1055
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A reasonable risk, she told herself, probing at the grating before ducking inside."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1000
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn10
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás1
Herrera9
Tube2
Veil1
Market1
Camden1
Warm1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
1"Tube"
2"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.948
wordCount1055
matches
0"not by bone token but sheer determination"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean42.2
std23.04
cv0.546
sampleLengths
099
166
275
363
467
557
655
750
859
956
1067
1152
1220
1325
1411
1521
1616
1724
1815
1935
2028
2119
2218
2327
2430
99.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"were weighted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was heading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences68
ratio0.235
matches
0"There—an elusive silhouette dashed out from a side alley, skittering like a shadow trying to escape the light."
1"Not personal; not yet."
2"Flashes of the past returned unbidden—the case that had cost her a partner, the link to the supernatural she had not been able to decipher."
3"But then she saw it—a faint glimmer in the night as he slipped through the metal grating of the entrance to the abandoned Tube station."
4"The slippery trail led deeper into the bowels of the city—a realm that few dared tread unless they held a particular interest or desperation."
5"She blinked, scanned the walls, finding them painted with murals of forgotten legends—beasts and sorcerers, warriors wreathed in shadows."
6"Despite the drowning heartbeat ringing in her ears, she recognized the workings of magic—the underbelly signaling an entrance to something greater, more sinister."
7"There was little time to weigh the options; a faint echo from beyond the door dragged her forward."
8"Old maps decorated the walls alongside black-and-white photographs—remnants of the past, haunted by mystery and secrets."
9"Quinn maneuvered through shuffling crowds, her gaze scanning for Herrera among the sellers—some human, others decidedly more inhuman."
10"Opal eyes, sharp fangs, skin like bark; the fair of oddities beckoned, tempted, whispering truths wrapped in deceit."
11"She knew Herrera was here; she could feel the remnants of his presence in the chill draft that whispered through the market."
12"And then—near a stall displaying vials that glowed ominously—she found him."
13"His voice was low, urgent; the resonance of a man negotiating ties that bound them both to secrecy."
14"An exchange veiled by circumstance and insight, an accord newly born yet flecked with risk—the cornered lion intent on stalking yet to find solace in wary patience."
15"Quinn saw the quandary unfold, mind undulating with visceral thought—the secreted abyss of unknowns heralded deeper discourse."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1018
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.0275049115913556
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009823182711198428
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean15.51
std6.37
cv0.41
sampleLengths
024
132
216
321
46
518
621
76
821
97
104
1125
1214
1325
1414
1519
167
1723
1818
1925
204
217
2213
2321
2412
2524
2619
2713
2823
2912
302
3118
3218
3312
3412
3519
3616
3718
3818
3920
4016
4111
4222
4318
4411
4523
4618
4720
4825
4911
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6029411764705882
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners41
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Just ahead, the faint flickering"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences64
matches
0"Her prey might be lurking"
1"she muttered under her breath"
2"She matched his pace, her"
3"He was heading underground, to"
4"She couldn't afford to lose"
5"Her breath came in short"
6"It was her chance."
7"She blinked, scanned the walls,"
8"Her entry was unauthorized, granted"
9"She knew Herrera was here;"
10"His voice was low, urgent;"
11"Her voice pierced the veil"
12"His warning was a hollow"
13"Her words bore the etchings"
14"She made her choice, drawing"
ratio0.234
69.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences64
matches
0"Rain assaulted the slick streets"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood on"
2"Her prey might be lurking"
3"The chase was far from"
4"There—an elusive silhouette dashed out"
5"Quinn caught the curve of"
6"A scar she knew too"
7"The suspect was Tomás Herrera,"
8"she muttered under her breath"
9"Quinn darted after him, feet"
10"She matched his pace, her"
11"Flashes of the past returned"
12"He was heading underground, to"
13"She couldn't afford to lose"
14"Her breath came in short"
15"Herrera rounded a corner and"
16"It was her chance."
17"A reasonable risk, she told"
18"The entrance gave way to"
19"Quinn slipped, corrected herself, leveraging"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rain assaulted the slick streets of Soho with relentless fury, swallowing them whole in puddles that shimmered beneath the piercing glow of neon lights."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood on the corner, her wet boots grinding against the sidewalk, tense eyes scanning the stretch of road as if she could will her suspec…"
2"She knew Herrera was here; she could feel the remnants of his presence in the chill draft that whispered through the market."
3"Herrera stood in conversational embrace with a merchant brandishing a necklace, fingers poised on the pendant as if it were weighted with destiny."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.286
81.7062%