| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1074 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1074 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "anticipation" | | 2 | "racing" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "sanctuary" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "fleeting" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "flicker" | | 12 | "pounding" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "pulsed" | | 16 | "warmth" | | 17 | "quickened" | | 18 | "whisper" | | 19 | "familiar" | | 20 | "lurched" | | 21 | "shimmered" | | 22 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 81 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1054 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1039 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.38 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Grove | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 5.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite remember, whispering that somewhere beyond the ancient oak stones, the boundary between worlds thinned" | | 1 | "warped faces seemingly watching her" | | 2 | "not quite right, something wrong—so wrong she couldn’t breathe" | | 3 | "as if urging her to leave" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.949 | | wordCount | 1054 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.35% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 40.54 | | std | 13.65 | | cv | 0.337 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 40 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 20 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.193 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a faint rustle of leaves betrayed her path—until she stopped dead, an icy prick crawling up her spine." | | 1 | "From somewhere deeper in the grove, a sound unexpectedly sliced through the night—a faint, intermittent tapping, rhythmic, persistent." | | 2 | "Nothing about the shape felt real—too still, too shapeless." | | 3 | "She stiffened, instincts turning sharp, unbidden memories flickering—of stories whispered about the Grove, of eyes that watched from the shadows." | | 4 | "The air grew thick, the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and cold." | | 5 | "A flicker of movement—an edge of a figure—danced at the edge of her vision again." | | 6 | "The boundary was close enough that she could feel it—reality wrinkling at the edges." | | 7 | "Just beyond the reach of her sight, she sensed something—an awareness, a presence that was not her own." | | 8 | "A figure—human-shaped but distorted—stumbled into a patch of moonlight." | | 9 | "The figure made a muffled sound—a kind of sibilant whisper, more felt than heard." | | 10 | "Something not quite right, something wrong—so wrong she couldn’t breathe." | | 11 | "She could see the faint outline of claws not visible in the dark—they shimmered at the edge of perception like a mirage." | | 12 | "In the Grove, time moved differently—an hour could stretch into days or vanish in moments." | | 13 | "She froze, heartbeat loud in her ears, staring at the boundary—at the door between worlds she had dared to cross." | | 14 | "A voice—soft, distant—called her name from somewhere deep within the shadows." | | 15 | "And she understood—she wasn’t alone." |
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| 95.34% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1059 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.0453257790368272 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014164305949008499 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 12.7 | | std | 6.06 | | cv | 0.477 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 41.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.2891566265060241 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a faint rustle of" | | 1 | "Just beyond the reach of" | | 2 | "Instead, she studied it, the" | | 3 | "Then it vanished into a" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 58.96% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Her footsteps were careful, deliberate," | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 2 | "She’d come here at dusk," | | 3 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" | | 4 | "She held her breath, fingers" | | 5 | "Her hand trembled as she" | | 6 | "She moved forward, slow and" | | 7 | "She froze, breath shallow." | | 8 | "She stiffened, instincts turning sharp," | | 9 | "It sank into her skin." | | 10 | "She told herself it was" | | 11 | "She spun around sharply, heart" | | 12 | "She clenched her jaw, her" | | 13 | "She swallowed hard, trying to" | | 14 | "She stared at the stones," | | 15 | "She pulled her coat tighter" | | 16 | "She took a tentative step" | | 17 | "She reached out, fingertips brushing" | | 18 | "Her breath caught, her eyes" | | 19 | "She spun around to face" |
| | ratio | 0.403 | |
| 57.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter moved quietly through" | | 1 | "Her footsteps were careful, deliberate," | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 3 | "The pendant had been her" | | 4 | "She’d come here at dusk," | | 5 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 6 | "Her eyes darted around, searching" | | 7 | "A shadow flickered at the" | | 8 | "She held her breath, fingers" | | 9 | "Her hand trembled as she" | | 10 | "She moved forward, slow and" | | 11 | "The tapping grew louder, more" | | 12 | "Every pulse of the Heartstone" | | 13 | "A sudden movement caught her" | | 14 | "A figure, glimpsed out of" | | 15 | "She froze, breath shallow." | | 16 | "Nothing about the shape felt" | | 17 | "She stiffened, instincts turning sharp," | | 18 | "The air grew thick, the" | | 19 | "It sank into her skin." |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, darkness had taken root," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She clenched her jaw, her fingers tightening around the pendant as if it could anchor her." | | 1 | "Just beyond the reach of her sight, she sensed something—an awareness, a presence that was not her own." | | 2 | "The pulse quickened, as if the artifact responded to the invisible eyes watching." | | 3 | "She saw the faint shimmer of eyes that shone with unnatural light, voids glowing in a face that should have been familiar but was not." | | 4 | "The figure lurched forward, limbs jerking and unnatural, as if it struggled against unseen chains." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |