Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR59K80ARCBWXBYDGHF7M2

Run Details

Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.013768
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon light of the bar's sign shone through the window, casting a surreal glow on the cobblestones and the figure leaning against the wall. Rory paused mid-stride as she recognised the sharp angles of the silhouette, familiar even after all these years. She hesitated, her hand hovering over the door handle, unsure if she should interrupt. But the figure raised its head, eyes locking with hers, and in that moment, she knew she was meant to be there. 'Rory,' a rough voice called out, laced with a roughness that age had carved. 'Is that you?' She pushed open the door, letting the warm glow of the bar welcome her. An old friend stood there, a half-smile frozen on his face, uncertainty waging war with the recognition twinkling in his dark eyes. 'Si?' she breathed, taking in the bar's clandestine atmosphere. Old maps and photographs created a conspiratorial backdrop, enhancing the clandestine intimacy of the reunion. 'It's been a while, kiddo.' His once-authoritative voice, now softened by time, carried a hint of bittersweet nostalgia. She smiled, noticing the grey creeping into his auburn hair, the hint of a beard rounding his jawline, and the slight limp in his stride. 'You're looking well,' she lied. The man before her now bore the scars of time's toil. But his eyes retained the keen intelligence and dry humour she recalled. 'Busy?' she asked, glancing at the bar counter with a suggestion of an eyebrow raise. 'Not at all. Take a seat.' He gestured to the booth. 'I owe you that much.' She slid into a booth, the worn leather creaking in welcome. A ring, silver and worn, glinted on his hand as he set two glasses on the scarred wood. She traced the grain with her finger, remembering similar markings on the coffee table at home. A thousand memories threaded their way into the present, each leaving a trace of longing and regret. 'So, Rory Carter,' he said, taking the seat opposite. The drinks were forgotten as they leapt into a conversation weighted by the passage of time. 'Or do you prefer Laila now? Malphora was always my personal favourite.' 'Rory's fine,' she replied, recognising the old nicknames spoken with a mix of tender familiarity and biting irony. 'I'd hoped to catch you another time. I didn't know you still owned this place.' 'I've never really been able to let go of my old life. But it's quieter here these days. No more Prague,' he said, the memory scalding him with bitterness. She reached across the table, her hand hovering near his, but paused as if the space between them held a current that denied contact. 'I'm sorry, Si. Truly. You never deserved any of that.' He shrugged, his grey eyes hooded. 'It's water under the bridge now. But I'm glad you came. I never thought I'd see you again after... well, after.' He trailed off, his face grim. 'Me neither. But I heard you were back in town and I couldn't just not look you up.' She spoke over the knot in her throat. 'Not like old times, eh?' He said, the joke falling flat. 'I missed you, Rory. I really did. And I wish...' He frowned, the words dying in his throat. 'Me too,' she whispered, the air between them thick with unspoken regrets, words they couldn't bring themselves to say. The pause stretched, fraught with the weight of their history. 'I suppose we should catch up.' Her voice carried a note of hollow cheerfulness. 'I heard you opened this place after you left. How's business?' 'Steady. It's become more than a bar, though.' The bar's worn wood seemed to pulse with history, absorbing and dispensing stories with each patron. 'I had to retire from the service after Prague, but this place has become my retirement fund and my penance.' She raised an eyebrow, surprised by his candour. 'You never struck me as the penitent type.' He grunted, his lips twisting in a half-smile. 'A man like me has a lot to atone for. A lifetime of dodgy deals and unsavoury alliances. It's the only way I can sleep at night, these days.' 'You're being too hard on yourself.' She reached across the table, her fingertips brushing the back of his hand, the skin rough with age. 'I know some things are hard to forget, but you've done a lot of good, too. You saved people.' 'I guess that's the best one can do. Try to make amends for the past,' he said, his face softening at her touch. She smiled, her bright eyes welling with unshed tears. 'You didn't have to do it alone, you know. I've always been here for you. I still am.' He looked at her, the pain in his eyes melting into acceptance. 'I know. I should've reached out sooner. But it's not easy letting people in when you spend your life keeping secrets.'
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount823
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount823
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"surreal"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"clandestine"
count2
3
word"eyebrow"
count2
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"surreal"
1"familiar"
2"clandestine"
3"eyebrow"
4"traced"
5"unspoken"
6"weight"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords819
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions3
wordCount455
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
You2
Try1
persons
0"You"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount819
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
74.61% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean35.61
std14.64
cv0.411
sampleLengths
080
117
236
324
443
543
616
762
837
933
1029
1134
1233
1326
1429
1554
1644
1716
1837
1943
2023
2127
2233
89.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences45
matches
0"was meant"
1"were forgotten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs83
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences75
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount81
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean10.92
std6.51
cv0.596
sampleLengths
026
118
214
322
414
53
614
722
89
915
1018
1125
125
1311
1412
1515
163
178
185
1911
2018
2116
2217
239
2416
256
266
2718
287
298
3012
316
3211
3324
343
351
366
376
386
395
408
418
422
4324
4411
454
463
4711
4819
4910
50.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
14.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences37
matches
0"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
1"She pushed open the door,"
2"She smiled, noticing the grey"
3"She slid into a booth,"
4"She traced the grain with"
5"I didn't know you still"
6"She reached across the table,"
7"You never deserved any of"
8"He shrugged, his grey eyes"
9"I never thought I'd see"
10"I really did."
11"It's become more than a"
12"She raised an eyebrow, surprised"
13"He grunted, his lips twisting"
14"It's the only way I"
15"She smiled, her bright eyes"
16"I've always been here for"
17"He looked at her, the"
18"I should've reached out sooner."
ratio0.514
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences37
matches
0"The green neon light of"
1"Rory paused mid-stride as she"
2"She hesitated, her hand hovering"
3"She pushed open the door,"
4"An old friend stood there,"
5"She smiled, noticing the grey"
6"The man before her now"
7"She slid into a booth,"
8"A ring, silver and worn,"
9"She traced the grain with"
10"A thousand memories threaded their"
11"The drinks were forgotten as"
12"Malphora was always my personal"
13"I didn't know you still"
14"She reached across the table,"
15"You never deserved any of"
16"He shrugged, his grey eyes"
17"I never thought I'd see"
18"I really did."
19"The pause stretched, fraught with"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.9556%