Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5FZJCN30335PDZNEZWSY

Run Details

Duration:
40.4s
Cost:
$0.034971
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual Tuesday night crowd—not packed, but comfortably populated with the kind of regulars who made the place feel lived-in. Aurora wiped down glasses behind the bar, covering for Silas who'd disappeared into his office twenty minutes ago with a frown and a muttered comment about "bloody paperwork." The green neon sign outside cast an otherworldly glow through the windows, painting emerald highlights across the liquor bottles. "Another gin and tonic for Maeve over there," Aurora told herself, mixing the drink with practiced efficiency. Three months of helping out at the Nest had given her skills she'd never imagined needing during those stuffy pre-law lectures. The door swung open, letting in a gust of London's autumn chill. Aurora glanced up, then froze, the bottle of tonic water suspended mid-pour. James Harrington stood in the doorway, shaking raindrops from his coat. His once wild, curly hair was cut into a severe side part, his formerly lanky frame filled out with the solid weight of someone who'd discovered protein shakes and regular gym visits. Five years. Five years since university, since they'd walked different paths after graduation. Five years since her last unanswered text to him. James scanned the bar, clearly looking for someone, when his gaze landed on her. His eyes widened, recognition dawning instantly despite the dim lighting. "Rory?" He moved toward the bar, weaving between tables with an assured stride that the James she'd known never possessed. Aurora finished pouring the drink mechanically. "Maeve's gin and tonic," she called out, sliding it down the bar to the waiting server. She wiped her hands on a cloth, buying precious seconds to compose herself. "Didn't expect to see you here," James said, settling onto a bar stool directly in front of her. "I work here. Part-time." Aurora gestured vaguely around the bar. "What about you? Bit far from Canary Wharf, isn't it?" James tilted his head. "How'd you know I work there?" "LinkedIn updates." The admission felt more vulnerable than it should have. "Congratulations on the promotion. Investment banking suits you, apparently." He laughed—a clipped, controlled sound nothing like the full-body laugh that used to make her sides hurt from laughing along. "Thanks. Meeting a client here, actually. He insisted—said it has character." "That it does." Aurora reached for a glass. "What can I get you?" "Macallan 18, neat." Aurora raised an eyebrow. "Expensive taste these days." "Company card." He tapped his breast pocket where a wallet peeked out. She poured his drink, sliding it across the polished wood. Their fingers didn't touch—she made sure of that. "So," James swirled the amber liquid, "bartending. That's... different from what you planned." "I deliver Chinese food too," Aurora said with a sharpness she hadn't intended. "Law school didn't work out." "I remember you were top of our class." He took a careful sip. "What happened?" What happened. As if five years could be summed up in a neat little package. "Life," Aurora said simply. "Evan happened. Cardiff happened. I needed a change." James nodded slowly, recognition flickering across his face at Evan's name. "I never liked him." "You never said anything." "Would you have listened?" The question hung between them, charged with all the history they weren't saying. "Probably not," she admitted. "I was stubborn." "Was?" James smiled, a glimpse of the old warmth breaking through his polished exterior. Aurora laughed despite herself. "Fair enough." She glanced around the bar, grateful it wasn't busy enough to pull her away from this unexpected collision of past and present. "You look good, Rory." James' voice softened. "Different, but good." "Different how?" She couldn't help asking. He considered her, eyes tracing the changes five years had carved into her. "Steadier, maybe. Like you've found your footing." "Funny, I was thinking you look less like yourself." James stiffened slightly. "What's that supposed to mean?" "The haircut. The watch." Aurora nodded toward the gleaming timepiece on his wrist that probably cost more than her monthly rent. "The single malt scotch. It's all very... curated." "It's called growing up," he replied, defensive edge creeping into his tone. "We can't all hang onto our university personas forever." "Is that what you think I'm doing?" "Aren't you? Working odd jobs, living above a bar in Soho?" Aurora felt heat rising in her cheeks. "You don't know the first thing about my life now." "Whose fault is that?" James drained his glass, setting it down harder than necessary. "You disappeared, Rory. After graduation, after Evan—you just vanished." "I texted you." "Once. To say you were 'fine' and 'needed space.' That's not exactly keeping in touch." The weight of unspoken words pressed down on them. Behind James, the door opened again, and a man in an expensive suit glanced around the bar. "Your client's here," Aurora nodded toward the door. James didn't turn. "He can wait." "Very un-banker-like of you." "Maybe I'm not as changed as you think." Aurora reached for his empty glass. "Another?" "Please." She poured a second drink, buying time with the ritual of it. When she looked up again, James was studying the photographs on the wall behind the bar—black and white scenes of London through the decades. "Remember that photography class we took?" he asked. "The one you dragged me to because you needed an 'artistic eye' for your stupid blog?" "God, that blog." Aurora laughed. "What was it called again?" "'Cardiff Confessions.' You wanted to be the next great gonzo journalist." "While studying pre-law. I contained multitudes." "You still do, apparently." James gestured around the bar. "Delivery person, bartender... what else?" "Occasional locksmith for Silas when the storeroom door sticks." She leaned against the counter. "What about you? Banking by day, what else?" James shrugged. "Not much time for else. Work keeps me busy." "Happy?" The question seemed to catch him off guard. "Successful," he answered after a pause. "Not the same thing." "No," he agreed softly. "It's not." Aurora noticed his client checking his watch impatiently. "You should probably—" "I know." James didn't move. "Did you ever wonder? What might have happened if—" "If I'd stayed? If you'd come after me? If we'd chosen differently?" Aurora cut him off, heart suddenly hammering against her ribs. "Of course I did." "And?" "And nothing. We made our choices." James reached into his pocket, pulled out a business card, and slid it across the bar. "My number. It's changed since... before." Aurora looked at the card but didn't pick it up. "What am I supposed to do with this?" "Call me. Text me. Throw it away." He stood, adjusting his tie. "Just don't disappear again." "James—" "I'm not asking for anything, Rory. Just..." He gestured vaguely between them. "Just don't let it be another five years." She nodded, finally taking the card, turning it over in her fingers. "Your client's getting antsy," she said. "Right." James straightened his already-straight tie. "How much for the drinks?" "On the house." "Rory—" "Consider it my investment in your very important banking meeting." A smile—his real smile, the one she remembered—broke through. "I'll see you around, Carter." "Maybe you will, Harrington." She watched him cross to his waiting client, all smooth confidence and professional charm. Just as he sat down, Silas emerged from his office, limping slightly as he approached the bar. "Who was that?" Silas asked, his eyes following her gaze. "Old friend." Aurora tucked the business card into her pocket. "Ancient history." Silas gave her an appraising look. "History has a way of repeating itself." "Not this time," Aurora said, but even to her own ears, it sounded unconvincing. Across the room, James laughed at something his client said—that new, controlled laugh that didn't reach his eyes. Then, for just a moment, he glanced back at her, and in that brief connection, five years compressed into nothing more than a breath between sentences in their ongoing conversation. Aurora turned away first, busying herself with wiping down the already clean bar top, wondering how long she would wait before using that card, and what version of herself she would be when she did.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:47:09.047Z" 2/19/2026, 10:47:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
54.17% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags36
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Aurora gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"The admission felt more [more]"
2"Aurora said simply [simply]"
3"She glanced around [around]"
4"James gestured around [around]"
5"he agreed softly [softly]"
6"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.194
effectiveRatio0.146
70.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count3
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1360
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"gleaming"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count1
10
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"chill"
2"weight"
3"scanned"
4"eyebrow"
5"charged"
6"warmth"
7"tracing"
8"gleaming"
9"unspoken"
10"charm"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The weight of unspoken words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1346
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount853
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.46
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"James"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Silas4
Three1
London2
Harrington1
James19
Aurora21
Evan1
Five3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Harrington"
4"James"
5"Aurora"
6"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.269
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
51.41% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.486
wordCount1346
matches
0"not packed, but comfortably populated with the kind of regulars who made the"
1"Not this time,\" Aurora said, but even to her own ears, it sounded unconvincing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"using that card"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs87
mean15.47
std11.66
cv0.754
sampleLengths
072
138
224
343
422
524
620
735
818
920
1010
1120
1231
1313
143
158
1612
1718
1813
1918
2015
2115
2212
2315
244
254
2613
277
2814
2928
3010
316
3220
339
348
3529
3621
377
3811
3917
4023
413
4215
4326
448
456
464
478
487
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs162
matches
0"weren't saying"
1"was studying"
21.28% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences141
ratio0.043
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual Tuesday night crowd—not packed, but comfortably populated with the kind of regulars who made the place feel lived-in."
1"He laughed—a clipped, controlled sound nothing like the full-body laugh that used to make her sides hurt from laughing along."
2"Their fingers didn't touch—she made sure of that."
3"When she looked up again, James was studying the photographs on the wall behind the bar—black and white scenes of London through the decades."
4"A smile—his real smile, the one she remembered—broke through."
5"Across the room, James laughed at something his client said—that new, controlled laugh that didn't reach his eyes."
94.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount872
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.045871559633027525
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.0194954128440367
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean9.55
std7.05
cv0.739
sampleLengths
025
147
217
321
412
512
611
732
82
911
109
1114
1210
1320
146
1516
1613
1718
1810
1910
204
216
2211
239
2420
2511
268
275
283
294
304
3112
3210
338
3413
3513
365
3713
382
392
4013
414
428
4311
444
454
464
4713
484
493
85.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5390070921985816
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners76
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, for just a moment,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences74
matches
0"His once wild, curly hair"
1"His eyes widened, recognition dawning"
2"He moved toward the bar,"
3"she called out, sliding it"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"He laughed—a clipped, controlled sound"
6"He tapped his breast pocket"
7"She poured his drink, sliding"
8"Their fingers didn't touch—she made"
9"He took a careful sip"
10"She glanced around the bar,"
11"She couldn't help asking"
12"He considered her, eyes tracing"
13"he replied, defensive edge creeping"
14"She poured a second drink,"
15"She leaned against the counter"
16"he answered after a pause"
17"he agreed softly"
18"He stood, adjusting his tie"
19"He gestured vaguely between them"
ratio0.297
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora wiped down glasses behind"
2"Aurora told herself, mixing the"
3"The door swung open, letting"
4"Aurora glanced up, then froze,"
5"James Harrington stood in the"
6"His once wild, curly hair"
7"James scanned the bar, clearly"
8"His eyes widened, recognition dawning"
9"He moved toward the bar,"
10"Aurora finished pouring the drink"
11"she called out, sliding it"
12"She wiped her hands on"
13"James said, settling onto a"
14"Aurora gestured vaguely around the"
15"James tilted his head."
16"The admission felt more vulnerable"
17"He laughed—a clipped, controlled sound"
18"Aurora reached for a glass"
19"Aurora raised an eyebrow."
ratio0.878
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"As if five years could"
1"Just as he sat down,"
ratio0.027
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with its usual Tuesday night crowd—not packed, but comfortably populated with the kind of regulars who made the place feel lived-in."
1"His once wild, curly hair was cut into a severe side part, his formerly lanky frame filled out with the solid weight of someone who'd discovered protein shakes …"
2"He laughed—a clipped, controlled sound nothing like the full-body laugh that used to make her sides hurt from laughing along."
3"Across the room, James laughed at something his client said—that new, controlled laugh that didn't reach his eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags36
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas asked, his eyes following her gaze"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
2"Aurora laughed (laugh)"
3"he agreed softly (agree)"
dialogueSentences96
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.083
80.4573%