Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5G3J8A7QY3Y0SBNPXVRP

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Duration:
14.9s
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$0.016913
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stepped quietly into the Fae Grove, her breath visible in the chilly night air. She hesitated near the edge where the ancient oak standing stones rose like sentinels. The stones framed the clearing, casting irregular shadows across the leaf-strewn ground, which were both inviting and foreboding. Aurora’s eyes, bright blue and full of determination, surveyed the hidden clearing that maintained its own rules within the boundaries of the mortal world. Her heart thumped against her chest, urging her forward, revealing a rhythm that felt out of place in the otherwise serene environment. From the time she’d received the Heartstone Pendant, its pulsing warmth had drawn her to places she’d never imagined existed. Tonight, its faint glow illuminated the path before her, casting an eerie crimson light over leaves that fluttered like restless spirits under an unseen breeze. She steeled herself against the night’s chill, her fingers brushing against the crescent scar on her wrist—a reminder that she could overcome unpredictable dangers. “Easy now, Rory,” she murmured to herself, the alias comforting in its familiarity. Ironic, looking for solace when the air itself seemed alive with secrets, whispers she could almost hear. The comforting name, the assurance it usually gave her, fell flat in the face of the grove's strange energy. Her boots crunched softly over fallen twigs as she progressed further. An unseasonal breeze pushed against her, laden with scents of wildflowers that seemed almost too vibrant for a moonlit night. Aurora’s gaze flicked back to the pendant, its glow coiling around her hand like a serpent. She was drawn here for a reason—to search for answers about the Heartstone’s origins—yet an unease lingered beneath her skin, tightening with each step deeper into the Grove. The night carried a sound like distant music, a murmuring that hung in the air without a source. It whispered, indistinct yet beckoning, guiding her toward the core of the grove. Aurora clung to that sound, her logic honing it into a path. The beat of the grove was steady, as if the clearing held a heartbeat of its own, and somehow hers synced to it—a fact both comforting and unsettling. A fluttering from the corner of her eye snatched her attention. Aurora turned sharply, expecting to find an intruder or an animal leaping away, startled by her intrusion. Nothing. Just trees encased in silvery moonlight, standing unmoving in their own stoic silence. Yet, she felt eyes upon her, a sensation prickling her skin like static, raising her nerves. It was merely the Grove being animated, she reasoned—something she'd read about in old folklore books, recounting tales of fae domains with minds of their own. “Just nature playing tricks,” she assured herself, though her voice faltered when the shadows seemed to stretch and bend under the mystic glow of the pendant, swirling ashes of moonlight where there should have been sturdy oak limbs. As she stood still, uncertain, a sound that was not quite a whisper but too solid to be imagined slid through the air. It was close, hanging in the space around Aurora, waiting for acknowledgment. She sharpened her senses, peering through the thick, layered shadows, searching for clarity in this unwelcome company. Aurora's fingertips grazed the pendant and its warmth surged through her. The night felt colder immediately, stark against the pulsing heat radiating from the artifact. “Who’s there?” Her tone firm, though a tremor she couldn’t banish infused it. Only silence answered her call, filling the grove like a heavy blanket, insulating her from rational thought. Or perhaps it wasn’t silence at all, but the breathing of the grove itself—a slow, deliberate inhale that drew her panic closer. Aurora blinked, trying to decipher movement among the twisted branches. The undergrowth seemed alive, a slow crawling mass weaving beneath the surface—at any moment she hoped the illusion would relent, but it held like a suitor’s persistent gaze, unyielding. Shadows within shadows danced, forming shapes of unrecognizable origins, morphing as she stared. She remembered Eva’s words: “The Grove plays with your mind. Clever acumen will get you through—but don’t forget your way back.” Rory was clever, always priding herself on her mental agility, yet here the Grove’s trickery sliced through her rational defenses. The illusion wouldn’t drop; rather, it pressed harder, tests of cleverness morphing into trials of instinct. Focusing on the pendant's warmth, she steadied her breath and whispered aloud, “Control the narrative.” Her father’s old axiom for courtroom battles rose unbidden, grounding her against the growing hysteria. If there were forces at play, standing firm was essential lest they overwhelm. From somewhere ahead came a sound—a twig snapped, unmistakably real amidst illusions. Aurora’s resolve was tested, her instincts demanding flight against common sense. But retreat was not an option; she needed the truth hidden here more than ever. With determination fueled by that unwavering heat beneath her skin, Aurora moved further toward the heart of the grove. She avoided glances at the shadows, knowing their allure would strain her sanity further. The looping music grew in clarity, until she could make out a slight melody weaving through the grove’s pulse—an undercurrent of soft song, distanced yet invitingly close. As she came into a clearing bathed in gentle moonlight, relief surged through her. The night felt less oppressive here, though the promise of safety was just beyond reach, wrapped in this space's eerie beauty. At the center stood an arrangement of stones, their placement deliberate, ceremonial. Her heart raced, uncovering threads of purpose tied to this spectacle, a congregation of presence. Rory stepped into the clearing, and the pendant’s glow stretched outward, casting deeper crimson hues across the scene. Her bright eyes caught movement in the shadows, where the form seemed almost human. Aurora's breath lodged in her throat; fear and curiosity wove tight bonds as she hung on the precipice of the unknown. "You sought answers?" The voice, rich and velvety, cascaded through the grove. Aurora's shoulders stiffened, her skin igniting with the pendant's warmth against the freezing night. Despite her instinctive doubts, she leaned into her self-assurance, into the landscape she could control as surely as courtroom grounds. "Who are you?" Her inquiry solidified under old lessons on courage. Figures—contrasts against starlight, myths given life—materialized from between stones, blending seamlessly into the grove’s shifting ambiance. Each movement resounded with purpose and truth beyond ordinary realms, one Aurora wasn't sure she believed but couldn’t deny. "In this place, claims must be true," replied the voice, authoritative, a chisel of time etching the Grove’s secrets. “What truth binds the Heartstone?” Rory pressed, clutching its warmth as an anchor, daring to defy any fate this encounter would muster. In response, the figures circled closer, and the grove relinquished whispers that sang tales Aurora hadn’t been prepared to hear.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1141
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"foreboding"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count5
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"steeled"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count3
8
word"solace"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"sturdy"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"amidst"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
20
word"etching"
count1
21
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"foreboding"
2"warmth"
3"fluttered"
4"steeled"
5"chill"
6"reminder"
7"comforting"
8"solace"
9"flicked"
10"silence"
11"sturdy"
12"whisper"
13"stark"
14"amidst"
15"resolve"
16"unwavering"
17"pulse"
18"oppressive"
19"raced"
20"etching"
21"encounter"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1080
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Fae1
Grove5
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Ironic1
Aurora14
Eva1
Rory3
Figures1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Ironic"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"Figures"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.852
windowScore1
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed alive with secrets, whispers she could almost hear"
1"not quite a whisper but too solid to be imagined slid through the air"
2"seemed alive a slow crawling mass weaving beneath the surface—at any moment she hoped the illusion would relent, but it held like a suitor’s persistent gaze, unyielding"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.887
wordCount1127
matches
0"not quite a whisper but too solid to be imagined slid through the air"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean46.96
std23.5
cv0.5
sampleLengths
094
169
249
375
471
584
638
777
813
939
1052
1157
1243
1338
1460
1562
1653
1712
1834
1911
2035
2119
2222
2320
82.99% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"was drawn"
1"being animated"
2"was tested"
3"been prepared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs189
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences63
ratio0.19
matches
0"She steeled herself against the night’s chill, her fingers brushing against the crescent scar on her wrist—a reminder that she could overcome unpredictable dangers."
1"She was drawn here for a reason—to search for answers about the Heartstone’s origins—yet an unease lingered beneath her skin, tightening with each step deeper into the Grove."
2"The beat of the grove was steady, as if the clearing held a heartbeat of its own, and somehow hers synced to it—a fact both comforting and unsettling."
3"It was merely the Grove being animated, she reasoned—something she'd read about in old folklore books, recounting tales of fae domains with minds of their own."
4"Or perhaps it wasn’t silence at all, but the breathing of the grove itself—a slow, deliberate inhale that drew her panic closer."
5"The undergrowth seemed alive, a slow crawling mass weaving beneath the surface—at any moment she hoped the illusion would relent, but it held like a suitor’s persistent gaze, unyielding."
6"The illusion wouldn’t drop; rather, it pressed harder, tests of cleverness morphing into trials of instinct."
7"From somewhere ahead came a sound—a twig snapped, unmistakably real amidst illusions."
8"But retreat was not an option; she needed the truth hidden here more than ever."
9"The looping music grew in clarity, until she could make out a slight melody weaving through the grove’s pulse—an undercurrent of soft song, distanced yet invitingly close."
10"Aurora's breath lodged in her throat; fear and curiosity wove tight bonds as she hung on the precipice of the unknown."
11"Figures—contrasts against starlight, myths given life—materialized from between stones, blending seamlessly into the grove’s shifting ambiance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1093
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.036596523330283626
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010978956999085087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
90.03% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean17.89
std6.71
cv0.375
sampleLengths
016
114
218
324
422
520
625
724
813
917
1019
1111
1220
1316
1428
1518
1613
1712
1828
1911
2017
211
2213
2316
2426
2538
2623
2712
2817
2911
3014
3113
3217
3322
3410
3529
3613
3741
3816
3930
4013
4112
4211
4315
4419
4514
4627
4714
4821
4912
82.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.49206349206349204
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Just trees encased in silvery"
1"Only silence answered her call,"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences62
matches
0"She hesitated near the edge"
1"Her heart thumped against her"
2"She steeled herself against the"
3"she murmured to herself, the"
4"Her boots crunched softly over"
5"She was drawn here for"
6"It whispered, indistinct yet beckoning,"
7"It was merely the Grove"
8"she assured herself, though her"
9"It was close, hanging in"
10"She sharpened her senses, peering"
11"Her tone firm, though a"
12"She remembered Eva’s words: Rory"
13"She avoided glances at the"
14"Her heart raced, uncovering threads"
15"Her bright eyes caught movement"
16"Her inquiry solidified under old"
ratio0.274
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped quietly into"
1"She hesitated near the edge"
2"The stones framed the clearing,"
3"Aurora’s eyes, bright blue and"
4"Her heart thumped against her"
5"Tonight, its faint glow illuminated"
6"She steeled herself against the"
7"she murmured to herself, the"
8"The comforting name, the assurance"
9"Her boots crunched softly over"
10"An unseasonal breeze pushed against"
11"Aurora’s gaze flicked back to"
12"She was drawn here for"
13"The night carried a sound"
14"It whispered, indistinct yet beckoning,"
15"Aurora clung to that sound,"
16"The beat of the grove"
17"A fluttering from the corner"
18"Aurora turned sharply, expecting to"
19"It was merely the Grove"
ratio0.71
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Yet, she felt eyes upon"
1"If there were forces at"
ratio0.032
35.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The stones framed the clearing, casting irregular shadows across the leaf-strewn ground, which were both inviting and foreboding."
1"Her heart thumped against her chest, urging her forward, revealing a rhythm that felt out of place in the otherwise serene environment."
2"Tonight, its faint glow illuminated the path before her, casting an eerie crimson light over leaves that fluttered like restless spirits under an unseen breeze."
3"An unseasonal breeze pushed against her, laden with scents of wildflowers that seemed almost too vibrant for a moonlit night."
4"The beat of the grove was steady, as if the clearing held a heartbeat of its own, and somehow hers synced to it—a fact both comforting and unsettling."
5"She sharpened her senses, peering through the thick, layered shadows, searching for clarity in this unwelcome company."
6"Only silence answered her call, filling the grove like a heavy blanket, insulating her from rational thought."
7"Or perhaps it wasn’t silence at all, but the breathing of the grove itself—a slow, deliberate inhale that drew her panic closer."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmured, the alias comforting in its familiarity"
1"she assured, though her voice faltered when the shadows seemed to stretch and bend under the mystic glow of the pendant, swirling ashes of moonlight where there should have been sturdy oak limbs"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she assured (assure)"
2"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
80.3136%