Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5HQ4G6WG1PBHN26HZKYT

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Duration:
12.5s
Cost:
$0.000387

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed at Detective Harlow Quinn's face, each drop stinging like a tiny, icy needle. Her breath misted in the chilled air as she sprinted, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. The city lights blurred into a stream of color, the neon signs reflecting off the slick pavement. She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera for what felt like miles, her heart pounding in her chest like a drum. Herrera, a former paramedic turned underground doctor for London's supernatural underbelly, had been their best lead on the clique's activities. But the slippery bastard had bolted the moment she'd shown up at his doorstep, leaving her no choice but to give chase. Quinn's worn leather watch glinted under the streetlights as she glanced at it, her military precision bearing faltering slightly. She was running out of time. The Veil Market, an underground black market that dealt in everything from enchanted goods to banned alchemical substances, was due to move locations with the full moon. If Herrera slipped through her fingers now, she'd lose him for another month. The chase led them down a narrow alley, the stench of rotting garbage and something more sinister filling Quinn's nostrils. She gagged, but her resolve didn't falter. She'd been down worse alleys, seen worse things. Like the unexplained supernatural shit that had taken her partner, DS Morris, from her three years ago. Herrera skidded to a halt at the end of the alley, turning to face Quinn. His warm brown eyes were wild, his olive skin glistening with rain. "You shouldn't be here, Detective," he panted, his Spanish accent thick with fear. "This place... it's not for you." Quinn didn't slow her pace. "Neither are you, Herrera. You're coming with me." He shook his head, backing away. "You don't understand. The Market... it's not like your world. It's dangerous." Quinn stopped a few feet from him, her hands on her hips. "So is mine. Now, are you going to come quietly, or am I going to have to make this difficult for you?" Herrera's gaze flicked over her shoulder, then back to her face. He was weighing his options, Quinn could see it in his eyes. She braced herself, ready for a fight. But instead of lunging at her, Herrera turned and bolted, disappearing down a set of crumbling stone steps leading into the darkness. Quinn cursed, her heart pounding. She couldn't let him get away. Not again. She followed him down the steps, her hand on her gun. The darkness enveloped her, the only light coming from the faint glow of her phone. The air grew colder, damper, the scent of earth and something metallic filling her nostrils. She wrinkled her nose, her eyes watering. The steps led them to a vast, cavernous space. The Veil Market. It was like nothing she'd ever seen. Stalls made of rotting wood and rusted metal stretched out as far as the eye could see, lit by flickering lanterns that cast eerie shadows on the faces of the patrons. Creatures she couldn't even begin to identify bustled about, their eyes glinting in the darkness. Quinn scanned the crowd, her heart pounding. Where was Herrera? She spotted him, his dark curls easy to pick out in the sea of strange faces. He was weaving through the crowd, his head ducked low. She took off after him, her hand still on her gun. The market was a labyrinth, the stalls twisting and turning in ways that defied logic. Quinn lost sight of Herrera more than once, her heart leaping into her throat each time. But she pushed on, her determination unwavering. She wouldn't lose him. Not again. She rounded a corner and spotted him again, this time standing in front of a stall that seemed to be selling nothing but bones. Human bones. Quinn's stomach turned, but she pushed the revulsion aside. She had a job to do. She approached him cautiously, her hand still on her gun. "Herrera," she said, her voice low. "It's over. You can't run anymore." He turned to face her, his eyes wide. "Detective, please," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "You don't understand. I can't go with you." Quinn frowned. "Why not?" Before Herrera could answer, a figure stepped out from behind the bone stall. It was a man, or at least, it had been once. Now, it was little more than a skeleton, its flesh rotting away, its eyes glowing with an otherworldly light. It held a bone in its hand, a wicked-looking thing that seemed to hum with energy. "Because, Detective," it rasped, its voice like the rustling of dry leaves, "he belongs to us now." Quinn's heart leapt into her throat. She'd seen some strange shit in her time on the force, but this... this was something else entirely. She tightened her grip on her gun, her mind racing. She was out of her depth, she knew it. But she also knew that she couldn't leave Herrera to whatever fate awaited him here. She took a deep breath, her eyes locked on the skeletal figure. "I'm afraid I can't let you do that," she said, her voice steady. "He's coming with me." The figure smiled, a grim, skeletal smile that sent a chill down Quinn's spine. "Very well," it said. "But know this, Detective. You've made an enemy today. The Market does not take kindly to those who interfere in its affairs." Quinn didn't flinch. "I'll take my chances," she said. "Now, step aside. I'm not going to ask again." The figure hesitated for a moment, then stepped aside. Quinn grabbed Herrera by the arm, her heart pounding. She'd made it. She'd actually made it. She turned to leave, her eyes scanning the crowd for the quickest route out. But as they stepped away from the bone stall, a figure stepped out in front of them. It was a woman, her eyes glowing with the same otherworldly light as the skeletal figure's. She held a knife in her hand, the blade gleaming in the lantern light. "Going somewhere, Detective?" she asked, her voice like velvet. "I'm afraid I can't let you do that." Quinn's heart sank. She should have known it wouldn't be that easy. She tightened her grip on her gun, her mind racing. She was outnumbered, outgunned, and out of her depth. But she wasn't out of options. Not yet. She took a deep breath, her eyes locked on the woman's face. "You can try to stop me," she said, her voice steady. "But I promise you, you won't like the outcome." The woman smiled, a slow, predatory smile that sent a chill down Quinn's spine. "We'll see about that," she said. "Shall we begin?" Quinn braced herself, her heart pounding. She was ready. As ready as she could be, anyway. She took a deep breath, her eyes scanning the crowd. It was time to make her move.
total_cost0.00038685

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.435
leniency0.87
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1155
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"pounding"
count5
2
word"sinister"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"glistening"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"unwavering"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"otherworldly"
count2
12
word"racing"
count2
13
word"chill"
count2
14
word"scanning"
count2
15
word"gleaming"
count1
16
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"pounding"
2"sinister"
3"resolve"
4"glistening"
5"flicked"
6"glinting"
7"scanned"
8"unwavering"
9"stomach"
10"whisper"
11"otherworldly"
12"racing"
13"chill"
14"scanning"
15"gleaming"
16"velvet"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count2
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences96
matches
0"k with fear"
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1152
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.14% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount991
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn19
Tomás1
Herrera11
London1
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Spanish1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Morris"
places
0"Detective"
1"London"
globalScore0.541
windowScore0.667
48.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like miles, her heart pounding in"
1"stall that seemed to be selling nothing but bones"
2"thing that seemed to hum with energy"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.868
wordCount1152
matches
0"no choice but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"knew that she"
81.78% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.16
std16.21
cv0.436
sampleLengths
069
142
265
352
446
513
618
734
830
935
1048
1165
1247
1344
1441
1522
1626
174
1859
1917
2058
2129
2240
2318
2439
2547
2617
2739
2832
2923
3033
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"was outnumbered"
88.27% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was running"
1"was weighing"
2"was weaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences109
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"former paramedic turned underground"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03420523138832998
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009054325955734407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.57
std5.95
cv0.563
sampleLengths
016
117
217
319
420
522
619
76
827
913
1020
117
128
1317
1415
1512
1613
176
185
198
206
2112
2212
2322
2411
2512
267
2722
285
296
302
3111
3215
3315
347
359
363
377
3831
3915
407
413
4216
4310
4411
4515
4616
477
484
492
41.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.28440366972477066
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
10.91% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences88
matches
0"Her breath misted in the"
1"She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera"
2"She was running out of"
3"She gagged, but her resolve"
4"She'd been down worse alleys,"
5"His warm brown eyes were"
6"he panted, his Spanish accent"
7"He shook his head, backing"
8"He was weighing his options,"
9"She braced herself, ready for"
10"She couldn't let him get"
11"She followed him down the"
12"She wrinkled her nose, her"
13"It was like nothing she'd"
14"She spotted him, his dark"
15"He was weaving through the"
16"She took off after him,"
17"She wouldn't lose him."
18"She rounded a corner and"
19"She had a job to"
ratio0.523
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences88
matches
0"The rain lashed at Detective"
1"Her breath misted in the"
2"The city lights blurred into"
3"She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera"
4"Herrera, a former paramedic turned"
5"Quinn's worn leather watch glinted"
6"She was running out of"
7"The Veil Market, an underground"
8"The chase led them down"
9"She gagged, but her resolve"
10"She'd been down worse alleys,"
11"Herrera skidded to a halt"
12"His warm brown eyes were"
13"he panted, his Spanish accent"
14"Quinn didn't slow her pace."
15"He shook his head, backing"
16"Quinn stopped a few feet"
17"Herrera's gaze flicked over her"
18"He was weighing his options,"
19"She braced herself, ready for"
ratio0.864
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"If Herrera slipped through her"
1"Before Herrera could answer, a"
2"Now, it was little more"
ratio0.034
49.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She'd been chasing Tomás Herrera for what felt like miles, her heart pounding in her chest like a drum."
1"The Veil Market, an underground black market that dealt in everything from enchanted goods to banned alchemical substances, was due to move locations with the f…"
2"Stalls made of rotting wood and rusted metal stretched out as far as the eye could see, lit by flickering lanterns that cast eerie shadows on the faces of the p…"
3"She rounded a corner and spotted him again, this time standing in front of a stall that seemed to be selling nothing but bones."
4"Now, it was little more than a skeleton, its flesh rotting away, its eyes glowing with an otherworldly light."
5"It held a bone in its hand, a wicked-looking thing that seemed to hum with energy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he panted, his Spanish accent thick with fear"
1"she said, her voice low"
2"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said, her voice steady"
4"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.087
74.3346%