| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 603 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 603 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 95.76% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of wonder" | | 1 | "felt scared" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 610 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 589 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.821 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed muted their colors washed out in the pale light" | | 1 | "seemed deeper here, more absolute than they should be" | | 2 | "appeared ahead but they looked wrong - twisted, their shapes distorted like melting wax" |
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| 36.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.639 | | wordCount | 610 | | matches | | 0 | "not words, but a sound like dry leaves scraping stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 76.38% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 23.46 | | std | 9.79 | | cv | 0.417 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 32 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 28 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 59 | | ratio | 0.119 | | matches | | 0 | "The ambient sounds of London that normally filtered through - distant traffic, aircraft overhead - had vanished, replaced by a heavy silence." | | 1 | "The crescent scar on her wrist itched - an old tell from childhood when she felt scared." | | 2 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision - a flicker of darkness darker than the shadows." | | 3 | "A whisper floated on the air - not words, but a sound like dry leaves scraping stone." | | 4 | "The bark felt wrong under her fingers - soft, yielding, like touching flesh." | | 5 | "In the absolute silence that followed, Aurora heard breathing that wasn't her own - wet, ragged breaths from just behind her right shoulder." | | 6 | "The standing stones appeared ahead, but they looked wrong - twisted, their shapes distorted like melting wax." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 582 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own - wet, ragged breaths" |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03436426116838488 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00859106529209622 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 59 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 59 | | mean | 10.34 | | std | 5.02 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 57.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3728813559322034 | | totalSentences | 59 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Usually, crossing the threshold filled" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant," | | 1 | "she whispered to herself" | | 2 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 3 | "She'd told Eva she'd be" | | 4 | "She spun around, heart jumping" | | 5 | "Her voice sounded flat, dead" | | 6 | "She forced herself to move" | | 7 | "Her scalp prickled." | | 8 | "She kept her eyes forward," | | 9 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 10 | "she hissed through clenched teeth" | | 11 | "She yanked it away from" | | 12 | "She jerked back with a" | | 13 | "She closed her eyes." | | 14 | "She crashed through the underbrush," |
| | ratio | 0.273 | |
| 23.64% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora's footsteps crunched on fallen" | | 1 | "The full moon cast long" | | 2 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant," | | 3 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 4 | "she whispered to herself" | | 5 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 7 | "Tonight, the air felt thick," | | 8 | "The ambient sounds of London" | | 9 | "Aurora pulled her phone out" | | 10 | "She'd told Eva she'd be" | | 11 | "The Grove's time-warping tendencies made" | | 12 | "A twig snapped somewhere behind" | | 13 | "She spun around, heart jumping" | | 14 | "The shadows seemed deeper here," | | 15 | "Her voice sounded flat, dead" | | 16 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 17 | "She forced herself to move" | | 18 | "The Heartstone's pulse quickened against" | | 19 | "Something moved at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.873 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone's pulse quickened against her chest, matching her rising heartbeat." | | 1 | "In the absolute silence that followed, Aurora heard breathing that wasn't her own - wet, ragged breaths from just behind her right shoulder." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |