Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5XFXS19RA24ZBK85TS0G

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.001698
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed faintly as Rory pushed open the heavy wooden door of The Raven’s Nest. The smell of aged whiskey and polished wood hit her like a comfort she hadn’t realised she’d missed. The bar was quiet tonight, save for the low hum of conversation from a couple of regulars seated at the far end. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with the meticulous precision of a man who took pride in his craft. He glanced up, nodded once, and returned to his task without a word. Rory headed for her usual spot, a corner booth with a clear view of the room. She’d barely settled in when the door creaked open again. A man stepped in, tall and broad-shouldered, his silhouette momentarily framed by the pale streetlight outside. He hesitated, scanning the room, and Rory froze. The angle of his jaw, the way he carried himself—she knew that posture, that familiar tilt of the head. It was Evan. Her breath caught. Evan looked different. His once unruly blond hair was neatly cropped, and the boyish charm she remembered had hardened into something sharper, more deliberate. He wore a tailored suit, the kind that spoke of money and power, and his eyes—those piercing grey eyes—locked onto hers the moment they met. He strode over, his steps measured, and slid into the booth across from her. “Rory.” His voice was deeper now, rougher, but still carried that faint lilt she used to find endearing. “Evan.” She leaned back, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. “You’re a long way from Cardiff.” He shrugged, a gesture that felt rehearsed. “Business brought me to London. I didn’t expect to find you here.” “Small world.” Her tone was light, but her mind raced. Memories she’d buried came rushing back—the late-night phone calls, the promises, the fights. The night she left. Silas approached the table, his presence a quiet reassurance. “Can I get you anything?” Evan glanced at Rory’s glass. “Whiskey. Neat.” Silas nodded and retreated without another word. Evan leaned forward, his hands clasped on the table. “You look good.” “So do you.” She studied him, searching for traces of the man she’d known. “You’ve changed.” “Haven’t we all?” His gaze flickered to her scar, and for a moment, something unspoken passed between them. “Still got that scar, I see.” “Reminder of the past.” She took a sip of her drink, the bitterness grounding her. “What brings you to London? You never struck me as the corporate type.” “People change, Rory.” His voice was tight, as though the words were a shield. “I’m in acquisitions now. Mergers, takeovers. You’d be surprised how cutthroat it can be.” “Sounds stressful.” “It pays the bills.” He paused as Silas returned with his whiskey. Evan took a quick sip, his expression unreadable. “What about you? What are you doing these days?” “Delivery driver. Part-time.” She didn’t elaborate, didn’t mention the flat upstairs or the life she’d built away from him. “Still aiming for that law degree?” She shook her head. “That was my father’s dream, not mine.” He studied her, his gaze calculating. “You always were too smart for that kind of life.” “And you always had a knack for saying the right thing.” She forced a smile, but it didn’t reach her eyes. Evan leaned back, his expression softening. “I’ve missed you, Rory.” “Have you?” The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken accusations. He hesitated, then nodded. “More than I realised.” Silence settled over the table, broken only by the faint clink of glasses from the bar. Rory traced the rim of her glass, her mind a whirlwind of emotions. She’d imagined this moment countless times—what she’d say, how she’d feel. But now that it was here, she felt adrift, unsure of how to navigate the uncharted waters between them. “Why’d you leave?” His voice was low, almost pained. She met his gaze, her blue eyes steady. “You know why.” He flinched, a flicker of guilt crossing his face. “I wasn’t myself back then.” “And now?” He ran a hand through his hair, a gesture that felt achingly familiar. “I’ve changed, Rory. I’m not that person anymore.” She didn’t immediately respond, her thoughts swirling like the ice in her glass. “People don’t change that much, Evan.” He leaned forward, his intensity palpable. “I’ve spent years trying to prove that wrong. To myself, to you. I’d do anything to make things right.” She shook her head, a bittersweet smile tugging at her lips. “Some things can’t be fixed.” His jaw tightened, and for a moment, she saw the shadow of the man she’d left behind. “You think I don’t know that? That I haven’t lived with it every damn day?” Rory folded her arms, her voice steady despite the storm brewing inside her. “We both made choices, Evan. You can’t rewrite the past.” He slammed his glass down, the sound echoing in the quiet bar. Several patrons glanced their way, but Silas gave Rory a subtle nod, a silent reminder that she wasn’t alone. Evan leaned back, his frustration giving way to a weary resignation. “I didn’t come here to fight.” “Then why did you come?” He hesitated, his gaze searching hers. “I came because I needed to see you. To know that you’re okay.” She nodded, her expression softening. “I am.” He let out a slow breath, as if releasing a weight he’d been carrying for years. “Good. That’s good.” They sat in silence, the tension between them slowly ebbing away. The years apart stretched like a chasm, filled with regrets and what-ifs, but for the first time, Rory felt a sense of closure, a quiet acceptance of the paths they’d chosen. Evan finished his whiskey and stood, his movements deliberate. “Take care of yourself, Rory.” She watched him go, his silhouette disappearing into the night. The door swung shut, and the bar seemed to settle back into its usual rhythm. Silas approached her table, his hazel eyes intent. “Everything okay?” She nodded, her gaze drifting to the empty space where Evan had been. “Just ghosts of the past.” He gave her a knowing look, his presence a silent anchor. “Ghosts have a habit of showing up when you least expect them.” She smiled faintly, her fingers brushing the scar on her wrist. “Maybe it’s time to stop running from them.” Silas nodded, his expression unwavering. “Maybe.” Rory finished her drink, the warmth of the whiskey mingling with the bittersweet ache of memory. The past was behind her now, a chapter closed, but the future—raw and uncertain—loomed ahead. And for the first time in years, she felt ready to face it.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:47:22.9Z" 2/19/2026, 10:47:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.042
95.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"lilt"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"calculating"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"navigate"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"intensity"
count1
17
word"palpable"
count1
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"sense of"
count1
22
word"unwavering"
count1
23
word"warmth"
count1
24
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"familiar"
2"charm"
3"measured"
4"lilt"
5"tracing"
6"raced"
7"flickered"
8"unspoken"
9"reminder"
10"unreadable"
11"calculating"
12"silence"
13"traced"
14"navigate"
15"flicker"
16"intensity"
17"palpable"
18"echoing"
19"weight"
20"tension"
21"sense of"
22"unwavering"
23"warmth"
24"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"a flicker of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1112
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount832
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Raven1
Nest1
Evan9
Memories1
Silas7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.959
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if releasing a weight he’d been carrying for years"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1112
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"knew that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean21.8
std17.69
cv0.811
sampleLengths
0108
156
252
332
419
519
627
714
87
97
1012
1116
1224
1328
1428
152
1629
1719
186
1911
2016
2121
2210
2311
248
2559
269
2711
2814
292
3021
3119
3225
3316
3432
3523
3631
3717
385
3919
407
4119
4242
4314
4425
4510
4618
4723
4819
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
9.35% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences107
ratio0.047
matches
0"The angle of his jaw, the way he carried himself—she knew that posture, that familiar tilt of the head."
1"He wore a tailored suit, the kind that spoke of money and power, and his eyes—those piercing grey eyes—locked onto hers the moment they met."
2"Memories she’d buried came rushing back—the late-night phone calls, the promises, the fights."
3"She’d imagined this moment countless times—what she’d say, how she’d feel."
4"The past was behind her now, a chapter closed, but the future—raw and uncertain—loomed ahead."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount843
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02965599051008304
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011862396204033215
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.39
std5.88
cv0.566
sampleLengths
018
118
222
321
413
516
610
716
88
919
103
113
123
1321
1425
1514
1618
1713
186
197
2012
2110
2213
234
249
255
265
272
287
299
303
3114
322
3318
346
3515
3613
3714
3814
392
4012
418
429
4319
446
454
467
476
4810
4921
64.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.40186915887850466
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences71
matches
0"He glanced up, nodded once,"
1"She’d barely settled in when"
2"He hesitated, scanning the room,"
3"It was Evan."
4"Her breath caught."
5"His once unruly blond hair"
6"He wore a tailored suit,"
7"He strode over, his steps"
8"His voice was deeper now,"
9"She leaned back, her fingers"
10"He shrugged, a gesture that"
11"Her tone was light, but"
12"She studied him, searching for"
13"His gaze flickered to her"
14"She took a sip of"
15"His voice was tight, as"
16"He paused as Silas returned"
17"She didn’t elaborate, didn’t mention"
18"She shook her head."
19"He studied her, his gaze"
ratio0.563
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences71
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"The smell of aged whiskey"
2"The bar was quiet tonight,"
3"Silas stood behind the counter,"
4"He glanced up, nodded once,"
5"Rory headed for her usual"
6"She’d barely settled in when"
7"A man stepped in, tall"
8"He hesitated, scanning the room,"
9"The angle of his jaw,"
10"It was Evan."
11"Her breath caught."
12"Evan looked different."
13"His once unruly blond hair"
14"He wore a tailored suit,"
15"He strode over, his steps"
16"His voice was deeper now,"
17"She leaned back, her fingers"
18"He shrugged, a gesture that"
19"Her tone was light, but"
ratio0.958
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with the meticulous precision of a man who took pride in his craft."
1"He let out a slow breath, as if releasing a weight he’d been carrying for years."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She leaned back, her fingers tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist"
1"She took, the bitterness grounding her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.3328%