Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5XY13HW0M57RWV86BWET

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Duration:
28.5s
Cost:
$0.010538

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the pavement into a slick mirror under the flickering streetlights. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she sprinted, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The suspect—Tomás Herrera—was fast, his dark curls plastered to his forehead as he dodged through the late-night crowd spilling out of a pub. A Saint Christopher medallion bounced against his chest with every stride. Quinn’s fingers twitched near her sidearm, but she didn’t draw. Not yet. Not in this mess of drunken laughter and umbrellas. Herrera cut left down a narrow alley, his scarred forearm flashing as he shoved a dumpster aside. The metal groaned against the wet brick. She followed. The alley stank of stale beer and piss. Herrera vaulted over a pile of discarded crates, his boots skidding on the slick cobblestones before he righted himself. Quinn didn’t slow. She leapt after him, her military precision keeping her balanced even as her lungs burned. Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes locking onto hers for a split second—no fear, just calculation. Then he was gone, ducking under a rusted fire escape and vanishing into the shadows. Quinn cursed under her breath. She pressed against the alley wall, scanning the darkness. A faint scuffle of footsteps echoed ahead, then silence. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her wrist, the second hand ticking too loud in her ears. Herrera wasn’t just running. He was leading her somewhere. She moved forward, her hand brushing the cold metal of her gun. The alley opened into a wider street, the neon glow of a sign reflecting off the wet pavement. *The Raven’s Nest.* The green light flickered like a dying ember. Quinn’s jaw tightened. She knew this place. Silas’ bar. A front for something darker. Herrera stood in the doorway, his chest heaving. He didn’t run. Didn’t bolt. Just waited, like he’d planned this all along. “Detective,” he said, wiping rain from his face. “You’re gonna want to see this.” Quinn didn’t lower her guard. “Step away from the door, Herrera. Hands where I can see them.” He smirked, the scar on his forearm glinting under the neon. “Or what? You’ll shoot me in front of half of Soho?” He tilted his head toward the bar. “They’re already watching.” She didn’t look. Didn’t need to. The hairs on the back of her neck stood up. She could feel eyes on her—hidden, curious, maybe hostile. Herrera took a step back, his boots splashing in a puddle. “You want answers about Morris? Then come inside.” Quinn’s pulse spiked. *Morris.* The name hit like a punch to the gut. She hadn’t said a word about him. Not to Herrera. Not to anyone outside the force. Herrera knew. And that meant he was deeper in this than she’d thought. She hesitated, her fingers flexing near her weapon. The rain drummed against the pavement, drowning out the distant hum of the city. Herrera didn’t move. Just waited, like he had all the time in the world. Then he turned and walked into the bar. Quinn exhaled through her nose. She could call for backup. Could wait. But Morris’ face flashed in her mind—his laugh, the way he’d always stolen her coffee, the last time she’d seen him alive. Unexplained. Supernatural. *Answers.* She followed. The Raven’s Nest was warmer than she expected, the air thick with the scent of whiskey and old paper. The walls were lined with maps and photographs, their edges yellowed with age. A few patrons glanced up as she entered, their expressions unreadable. Herrera led her toward the back, past a bookshelf that looked heavier than it should. He pressed a hidden latch. The shelf swung open. Quinn’s hand went to her gun. “What the hell is this?” Herrera didn’t look back. “Shortcut.” Beyond the bookshelf, a narrow staircase descended into darkness. The air grew colder, damp with the scent of earth and something else—something metallic, like old blood. Quinn’s boots thudded against the stone steps. Herrera moved ahead, his Saint Christopher medallion catching the dim light. “You’re taking me to the Veil Market,” she said. Herrera paused, glancing over his shoulder. “You know about it?” “Enough.” She didn’t elaborate. The market was off the books, off the grid. A place where things that shouldn’t exist were bought and sold. And if Herrera was leading her there, he wasn’t just a suspect. He was a guide. The staircase ended in a tunnel, the walls slick with moisture. A faint glow pulsed ahead, casting long shadows. Herrera slowed, his voice dropping to a murmur. “Market moves every full moon. Tonight’s your lucky night.” Quinn’s skin prickled. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space, the ceiling lost in darkness. Stalls lined the walls, their wares hidden under tattered cloths. A bone token—carved with strange symbols—hung from a chain at the entrance. Herrera plucked it from the air and slipped it around his neck. “You’ll need this,” he said, tossing her a second one. Quinn caught it. The bone was cold, heavier than it looked. She didn’t put it on. “What’s down here, Herrera?” He smirked. “Everything you’re not supposed to find.” A figure stepped out of the shadows—a woman with silver-streaked hair, her eyes reflecting the dim light like a cat’s. She looked Quinn up and down, then nodded to Herrera. “You brought a cop.” “She’s not here to bust anyone,” Herrera said. “She’s looking for the same thing we are.” Quinn’s grip tightened on the bone token. “And what’s that?” The woman’s lips curled. “The truth.” Herrera turned to her, his expression serious for the first time. “Morris didn’t just die, Quinn. He was taken. And if you want to know who took him, you’re gonna have to trust me.” The market hummed around them, the air thick with whispers and the clink of unseen coins. Quinn’s pulse hammered in her throat. She could turn back. Could call this in, bring the full force of the Met down on this place. But Morris’ face wouldn’t leave her mind. Neither would the way Herrera had said *taken.* She slipped the bone token over her head. Herrera nodded. “Then let’s go.”
total_cost0.010538

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"footsteps"
2"echoed"
3"silence"
4"flickered"
5"glinting"
6"could feel"
7"pulse"
8"unreadable"
9"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords6
totalWords1027
ratio0.006
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest."
1"Morris."
2"Answers."
3"taken."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
23.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount868
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.53
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Quinn15
Tomás1
Herrera22
Saint2
Christopher2
Raven2
Unexplained1
Nest2
Met1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Raven"
places(empty)
globalScore0.233
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1027
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean27.03
std19.36
cv0.716
sampleLengths
067
145
22
362
415
550
655
721
814
917
1032
1144
1242
1336
148
1537
162
1758
189
1911
205
2144
229
2310
2440
2536
2649
2710
2820
298
3034
3116
3210
336
3434
3556
368
375
95.43% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences107
matches
0"was gone"
1"were lined"
2"were bought"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was leading"
1"was leading"
4.61% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences124
ratio0.048
matches
0"The suspect—Tomás Herrera—was fast, his dark curls plastered to his forehead as he dodged through the late-night crowd spilling out of a pub."
1"Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes locking onto hers for a split second—no fear, just calculation."
2"She could feel eyes on her—hidden, curious, maybe hostile."
3"The air grew colder, damp with the scent of earth and something else—something metallic, like old blood."
4"A bone token—carved with strange symbols—hung from a chain at the entrance."
5"A figure stepped out of the shadows—a woman with silver-streaked hair, her eyes reflecting the dim light like a cat’s."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount382
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.034031413612565446
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean8.28
std5.26
cv0.635
sampleLengths
017
116
223
311
410
52
69
717
87
92
108
1119
123
1315
1417
1515
165
179
189
1918
204
215
2212
2318
2411
253
264
272
285
298
303
312
328
338
346
355
3612
3711
3818
393
403
413
4210
439
4411
458
463
4710
487
493
45.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.25806451612903225
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then he was gone, ducking"
1"Just waited, like he’d planned"
2"Just waited, like he had"
3"Then he turned and walked"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences92
matches
0"She leapt after him, her"
1"She pressed against the alley"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"He was leading her somewhere."
4"She moved forward, her hand"
5"She knew this place."
6"He didn’t run."
7"he said, wiping rain from"
8"He smirked, the scar on"
9"He tilted his head toward"
10"She didn’t look."
11"She could feel eyes on"
12"She hadn’t said a word"
13"She hesitated, her fingers flexing"
14"She could call for backup."
15"He pressed a hidden latch."
16"She didn’t elaborate"
17"He was a guide."
18"he said, tossing her a"
19"She didn’t put it on."
ratio0.25
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"The suspect—Tomás Herrera—was fast, his"
3"A Saint Christopher medallion bounced"
4"Quinn’s fingers twitched near her"
5"Herrera cut left down a"
6"The metal groaned against the"
7"The alley stank of stale"
8"Herrera vaulted over a pile"
9"Quinn didn’t slow."
10"She leapt after him, her"
11"Herrera glanced back, his warm"
12"Quinn cursed under her breath."
13"She pressed against the alley"
14"A faint scuffle of footsteps"
15"She adjusted the worn leather"
16"Herrera wasn’t just running."
17"He was leading her somewhere."
18"She moved forward, her hand"
19"The alley opened into a"
ratio0.859
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.8711%