| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.818 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 758 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 758 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "unspoken" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "wavered" | | 6 | "chilled" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "desire" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "fleeting" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "tangible" | | 14 | "intrigue" | | 15 | "resolve" | | 16 | "whisper" | | 17 | "dance" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was heavy with" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 33 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "begins to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 751 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 687 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.75 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Flat | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | Moreau | 2 | | Eva | 4 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Flat" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.627 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 751 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 35 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 16 | | mean | 46.94 | | std | 17.65 | | cv | 0.376 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 36 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 43 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 80 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 35 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "On her threshold, bathed in the golden glow of the setting sun filtering through the grimy Brick Lane windowpanes, stood Lucien Moreau, his heterochromatic gaze—amber and black, a permanent contradiction—locking onto hers with the intensity of a physical grasp." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 694 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar," |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03890489913544669 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01585014409221902 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 35 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 35 | | mean | 21.46 | | std | 10.06 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 45 |
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| 95.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 35 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a tell Lucien" | | 1 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 66.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | | 0 | "The metallic scrape of the" | | 1 | "Eva's Flat, with all its" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 3 | "The tailored charcoal suit, immaculate" | | 4 | "Rory's hand instinctively went to" | | 5 | "It was a tell Lucien" | | 6 | "Rory stated, her voice neutral," | | 7 | "The name hung in the" | | 8 | "Lucien's gaze never wavered." | | 9 | "The depth of his voice" | | 10 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 11 | "Rory hesitated, the pause a" | | 12 | "Curiosity, in the end, won" | | 13 | "The air was heavy with" | | 14 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, watched" | | 15 | "Lucien remarked, his glance halting" | | 16 | "Rory defended, a hint of" | | 17 | "The flicker was quickly extinguished," | | 18 | "Lucien's lips twitched, the almost-smile" | | 19 | "The admission slipped out, unguarded," |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 33 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 21 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "As Lucien entered, his eyes roved over the cluttered space, drinking in the chaos of Eva's research that filled every spare inch of the flat." | | 1 | "Lucien's gaze drifted around the room once more before settling back on her, his eyes burning with an intensity that made her skin prickle." | | 2 | "And she knew, with a sinking heart, that this unexpected visit from Lucien Moreau was merely the first whisper of a storm that would challenge the fragile equil…" |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory defended, a hint of a smile darting across her lips, uninvited" | | 1 | "Rory urged, her posture unfolding from its defensive stance, interest piqued" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory stated (state)" | | 1 | "Rory urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.182 | | leniency | 0.364 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |