Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5ZHSXC4DRH03PPA4EHKE

Run Details

Duration:
5m 7s
Cost:
$0.000789
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The wrongness crept over her slowly. At first, Rory thought perhaps it was just the lateness of the hour messing with her head. But the further she ventured into the Grove, the more the little hairs on the back of her neck stood on end, the more she could've sworn eyes watched her from the deep shadow of the ancient oaks. Something about this place wasn't right. Moonlight filtered through the canopy, casting eerie, shifting shadows across the ground. The standing stones loomed ahead, gnarled and twisted with age. Rory shivered, pulling her coat tighter around her as she neared the boundary of the Grove. She'd been drawn here by whispers of an "otherworldly" grove in Richmond Park. Talk of a place where Fae magic lingered. Where time moved differently. Rory needed to know if the tales were true. To see for herself. A twig snapped behind her. Rory whirled around, heart pounding. But the shadows revealed nothing. "Get a grip," she muttered, pressing a hand to her racing heart. Damn these stories, getting in her head. Still, curiosity dragged her feet forward until she stood before the towering oaks, their branches gnarled like arthritic fingers reaching for the starlit sky. Injust in front of the stones, Rory stopped, a strange reluctance seizing her. She glanced down at the Heartstone pendant resting against her chest. Its crimson surface pulsed faintly, the inner glow intensifying. It seemed to be guiding her to this place. But why? "Fuck it," Rory whispered. If she didn't do this now, she never would. On a deep breath, she crossed over, stepping between two of the giant oak sentinels. The air shimmered and rippled, like passing through an invisible waterfall. Goosebumps raced along Rory's skin. She emerged on the other side, into the true Grove. And froze. The clearing was just as she'd heard - wildflowers carpeting the ground in a vibrant tapestry that shouldn't exist at this time of year. Glowing fireflies zipped and twirled about the glade in dizzying patterns. But the beauty was tainted by the oppressive weight of thedim, creeping feeling of wrongness. Rory felt...unwelcome here. Like she was being warned off. "Or invited in," a small voice in her head whispered. A shiver traced her spine. I shouldn't be here. The thought blindsided Rory. She turned to retrace her steps to the comforting normalcy of the real world. Except the standing stones were gone. Rory blinked, spinning in a slow circle. No oaks, no archway out. Just endless forest pressing in on her. Her heart rate spiked, palms slicking with nervous sweat. She was trapped here. A scream sliced through the deathly hush, chilling the blood in Rory's veins. She whirled toward the sound, instinctively reaching for a weapon she didn't have. The echoes faded. The scream hadn't come from a human throat. Bird, she told herself. Just a bird. She didn't believe it. Rory edged forward, compelled by some force she couldn't name. The wildflowers seemed to glow brighter, enticing her deeper into the grove's heart. A childlike part of her longed to dance among them, to twirl and laugh. But the logical part screamed at her to run, to flee before it was too late. She didn't know how long she walked in the strange twilight gloaming. Long enough for her feet to ache. She paused, looking down at her feet. The wildflowers had crept over her boots, twining around her ankles like small, botanical hands trying to drag her down. With a startled yelp, Rory stumbled back, ripping the verdant vines from her legs with desperate hands. Her breathing came hard and fast, fogging the chill night air. "Too far," she gasped, ready to turn tail. Except behind her, the forest had changed. Gnarled, spindly branches clawed at the indigo sky, the once-distant fireflies now hovering unnaturally close, suffusing the air with their sickly glow. The trees, the flowers, even the shadows seemed to have spread, to grownwhile she wasn't looking. And the screams came again. Closer this time. Multiple dire calls sounding in some unholy chorus. Humans, animals, something else - Rory couldn't tell. They all blended into a cacophony of pain and terror that set her teeth on edge. The logical voice in her head shrieked at her to move. Rory ran, leaping over shadowy mounds and crashing through brush. Vines snapped at her heels like lashings whips, wicked thorns tearing at her clothes and skin. Up ahead, an outcropping of black stone rose from the forest floor. Resembling the standing stones, the boulders promised safety, a place to catch her breath. Rory sprinted for them, scrabbling up the rocks. Safe for the moment, she crouched, trying to catch her breath. The forest stretched endlessly around her, an undulating carpet of deadly flowers and grasping trees. No escape in sight. No way back. Fear cramped her lungs, making it hard to breathe. This was Fae magic, she realized numbly. Old, powerful. Dangerous. She'd trespassed somewhere she damn well shouldn't have. Time seemed to contract, expand, loop. Minutes passed, or hours. Rory crouched, barely daring to breathe, searching for a path, any path, out of this cursed place. The Heartstone pulsed, warm against her chest, chasing back some of her fear. Were the Fae toying with her, drawing out her fear and confusion for their own amusement? Would they let her go? Beneath her, the boulders began to tremble, to groan. Cracks snaked up the surface of the stone, widening. Rory gasped as one handhold crumbled, sending her sliding several feet down the rockface. She scrabbled for purchase, but the rock continued to break apart, to buckle. With a sharp cry, Rory lost her grip entirely and tumbled to the forest floor, landing hard amidst the grasping flowers. Dazed, she rolled, trying to escape their snaking tendrils. But not fast enough. One wrapped her wrist, pricking deep enough to draw blood with its thorns. The Heartstone pulsed. Once. Twice. On the third beat, a blinding flash of crimson erupted from the gemstone, bathing the grove in its eerie light. The vines recoiled with unnatural hisses, faces in their leaves contorted in agony. Rory staggered to her feet as the vines withered, crumbling to ash. An opening appeared in the trees, the original oaks back, archway clear. The sounds of the forest were muted, hushed. Moving on wooden legs, Rory stumbled toward the exit. She couldn't look away from the Heartstone as she walked, its glow mesmerizing, seeming to draw her forward. One step over the boundary, back in Richmond Park proper, Rory collapsed, chest heaving. The Heartstone's glow faded, though the gem remained warm, comforting against her fluttering pulse. Her breath came in ragged gulps, mind reeling. Whatever just happened, she'd been guided here for a reason. The pendant, the warnings, some part of her whispered. But for what purpose? One thing was certain. She'd just walked through a place of ancient power, of old magic. And it let her go. For now. With shaking hands, Rory hauled herself up, weaving on unsteady legs. She looked back at the standing stones, the Grove just visible beyond them. Part of her swore she saw glowing eyes watching her from the shadows. She hadn't been released yet. Fear was an icepick in her veins, but still she turned and walked away, out of the fae realm, feet leading her back to the mortal world, wholly unprepared for the truths the night would bring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"otherworldly"
count1
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"racing"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"sentinels"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"tapestry"
count1
9
word"oppressive"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"comforting"
count2
13
word"normalcy"
count1
14
word"chilling"
count1
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"dance"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
18
word"cacophony"
count1
19
word"amidst"
count1
20
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"otherworldly"
2"pounding"
3"racing"
4"pulsed"
5"sentinels"
6"shimmered"
7"raced"
8"tapestry"
9"oppressive"
10"weight"
11"traced"
12"comforting"
13"normalcy"
14"chilling"
15"echoes"
16"dance"
17"chill"
18"cacophony"
19"amidst"
20"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
86.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1244
ratio0
matches(empty)
75.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Bird, she told herself."
56.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1233
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory23
Grove4
Richmond2
Park2
Fae3
Damn1
Heartstone5
Except2
One3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Fae"
2"Damn"
3"One"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Heartstone"
globalScore0.567
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1244
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
94.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.62
std14.24
cv0.481
sampleLengths
061
16
238
338
45
522
631
744
828
926
102
1159
1215
1322
146
1519
1613
1744
184
1953
2046
2128
2253
2340
2437
2534
2642
2718
2827
2934
3032
3134
3226
3338
3432
3527
3628
3731
3823
3924
4018
4136
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences126
matches
0"been drawn"
1"was tainted"
2"being warned"
3"were gone"
4"been guided"
5"been released"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs235
matches
0"wasn't looking"
97.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences126
ratio0.016
matches
0"The clearing was just as she'd heard - wildflowers carpeting the ground in a vibrant tapestry that shouldn't exist at this time of year."
1"Humans, animals, something else - Rory couldn't tell."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1232
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"warm, comforting against her"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03814935064935065
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012175324675324676
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean9.87
std6.14
cv0.622
sampleLengths
06
117
238
36
412
510
616
713
88
94
109
114
125
135
145
1512
167
1724
1813
1911
209
219
222
234
249
2515
2611
275
2810
292
3024
3111
3215
333
346
3510
365
374
384
3914
406
417
425
437
449
454
4613
4713
483
498
80.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.49206349206349204
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners62
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just endless forest pressing in"
1"Just a bird."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences118
matches
0"She'd been drawn here by"
1"she muttered, pressing a hand"
2"She glanced down at the"
3"Its crimson surface pulsed faintly,"
4"It seemed to be guiding"
5"She emerged on the other"
6"I shouldn't be here."
7"She turned to retrace her"
8"Her heart rate spiked, palms"
9"She was trapped here."
10"She whirled toward the sound,"
11"She didn't believe it."
12"She didn't know how long"
13"She paused, looking down at"
14"Her breathing came hard and"
15"she gasped, ready to turn"
16"They all blended into a"
17"She'd trespassed somewhere she damn"
18"She scrabbled for purchase, but"
19"She couldn't look away from"
ratio0.203
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences118
matches
0"The wrongness crept over her"
1"Something about this place wasn't"
2"Moonlight filtered through the canopy,"
3"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
4"Rory shivered, pulling her coat"
5"She'd been drawn here by"
6"Talk of a place where"
7"Rory needed to know if"
8"A twig snapped behind her."
9"Rory whirled around, heart pounding."
10"she muttered, pressing a hand"
11"Injust in front of the"
12"She glanced down at the"
13"Its crimson surface pulsed faintly,"
14"It seemed to be guiding"
15"The air shimmered and rippled,"
16"Goosebumps raced along Rory's skin."
17"She emerged on the other"
18"The clearing was just as"
19"Rory felt...unwelcome here."
ratio0.627
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"To see for herself."
1"If she didn't do this"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The clearing was just as she'd heard - wildflowers carpeting the ground in a vibrant tapestry that shouldn't exist at this time of year."
1"The wildflowers had crept over her boots, twining around her ankles like small, botanical hands trying to drag her down."
2"They all blended into a cacophony of pain and terror that set her teeth on edge."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she gasped, ready to turn tail"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"her head whispered (whisper)"
3"she gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
84.6188%