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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR5ZSN50BRFK6GE1NCT222
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Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
17.9s
Cost:
$0.081765
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.93%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
72.12%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
14.65%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
73.6234%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Aurora Carter's breath came in
short, sharp bursts as she sprinted through the dense underbrush, her feet barely touching the ground.
The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against
her chest, its faint inner glow casting eerie shadows on the trees around her. She skidded to a halt, her eyes darting around the clearing she had stumbled into.
The ancient oak standing stones
loomed
like silent
sentinels
, marking the boundary of The Fae Grove.
She had come here for
a reason, but now, standing in the heart of the grove, something felt off.
The wildflowers that bloomed year-round
seemed to
sway in a breeze she couldn't feel.
The air was thick, almost
suffocating, and the usual sounds of the forest were conspicuously absent. No chirping crickets, no rustling leaves, just an
oppressive
silence
that pressed down on her like a
weight
.
Aurora took a cautious step
forward, her eyes
scanning
the grove for any sign of movement.
The pendant pulsed again, warmer
this time,
as if urging her to move deeper into the grove
.
She swallowed hard, her throat
dry, and forced herself to take another step.
The standing stones seemed to
close in around her, their rough surfaces
etched
with ancient runes that glowed faintly in the dim light.
A sudden rustling sound to
her left made her freeze. She turned her head
slowly
, her heart
pounding
in her chest.
There, at the edge of
her vision, something moved.
A shadow, darker than the
surrounding night, flitted between the trees.
She blinked, and it was
gone.
Her breath hitched, and she
took a step back, her hand instinctively reaching for the pendant. "Who's there?"
she called out, her voice
barely more than a
whisper
.
The silence that followed was
deafening.
She could feel the hairs
on the back of her neck stand on end, a primal instinct warning her of danger. She took another step back, her eyes never leaving the spot where she had seen the shadow. The pendant
pulsed
again, more insistent this time, and she felt a strange compulsion to move forward.
She shook her head, trying
to clear the
fog that seemed to be settling over her mind
. She had to stay focused.
She had come here for
a reason, and she couldn't let fear get the better of her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her steps slow and deliberate.
The standing stones seemed to
hum with energy, their runes glowing brighter as she approached.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer against her skin, its glow matching the
intensity
of the runes. A low, guttural growl
echoed
through the grove, and Aurora's
blood ran cold
.
She spun around, her eyes
wide with fear. There, standing at the edge of the clearing, was a figure cloaked in darkness.
Its eyes glowed a sickly
yellow, and its mouth twisted into a grotesque grin. "Rory,"
it hissed, the sound like
nails on a chalkboard. "You shouldn't have come here." Aurora took a step back, her mind
racing
.
She had to get out
of here.
She turned and ran, her
feet
pounding
against the ground. The pendant bounced against her chest, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in.
She could hear the creature
behind her, its growls growing louder with each passing second. She burst through the trees, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The grove
seemed to
stretch on forever, the standing stones a never-ending maze. She
could feel
the creature closing in on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and she went sprawling to the ground. The pendant slipped from her grasp, its glow dimming as it landed in the dirt. She scrambled to her feet, her eyes darting around for any sign of the creature. It
was gone
, but she could still feel its presence, a lingering darkness that clung to the air. She grabbed the pendant and held it
tightly
, its
warmth
a small comfort in the
oppressive
night. She had to keep moving. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to stand, her legs trembling with exhaustion. The grove
seemed to
shift around her, the trees closing in like a living wall. She
could feel
the
weight
of the pendant pulling her forward, guiding her through the maze of standing stones. She had to trust it. It was her only hope. She stumbled through the grove, her eyes
scanning
the shadows for any sign of movement. The pendant
pulsed
in her hand, its glow growing brighter with each step. She
could feel
the creature's presence growing stronger, its growls
echoing
through the trees. She burst into another clearing, her breath coming in short, sharp bursts. The standing stones here were taller, their runes glowing with an
otherworldly
light.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. A figure stepped out from behind one of the stones, its eyes glowing a sickly yellow. Aurora's heart
skipped a beat
, and she took a step back, her hand tightening around the pendant. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her. She took another step forward, her heart
pounding
in her chest. The figure moved closer, its eyes glowing brighter.
She could feel the pendant
growing warmer, its glow almost blinding. "Rory," the figure hissed, its voice like nails on a chalkboard. "You can't escape." Aurora's mind
raced
. She had to find a way out. She couldn't let the creature catch her.
She took a deep breath
and forced herself to move forward, her eyes never leaving the figure. The pendant
pulsed
again, its
warmth
a constant
reminder
of the danger she was in. She
could feel
the creature's eyes on her, its
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
24
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.511
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.93%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
3262
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"tightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"tightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
3262
totalAiIsms
185
found
0
word
"throbbed"
count
1
1
word
"loomed"
count
1
2
word
"sentinels"
count
1
3
word
"oppressive"
count
2
4
word
"silence"
count
2
5
word
"weight"
count
2
6
word
"scanning"
count
2
7
word
"pulsed"
count
25
8
word
"etched"
count
1
9
word
"pounding"
count
23
10
word
"whisper"
count
1
11
word
"could feel"
count
49
12
word
"intensity"
count
1
13
word
"echoed"
count
1
14
word
"racing"
count
1
15
word
"warmth"
count
24
16
word
"reminder"
count
23
17
word
"echoing"
count
1
18
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
19
word
"skipped a beat"
count
1
20
word
"raced"
count
22
highlights
0
"throbbed"
1
"loomed"
2
"sentinels"
3
"oppressive"
4
"silence"
5
"weight"
6
"scanning"
7
"pulsed"
8
"etched"
9
"pounding"
10
"whisper"
11
"could feel"
12
"intensity"
13
"echoed"
14
"racing"
15
"warmth"
16
"reminder"
17
"echoing"
18
"otherworldly"
19
"skipped a beat"
20
"raced"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"blood ran cold"
count
1
highlights
0
"blood ran cold"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
279
matches
0
"e with fear"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
6
narrationSentences
279
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
302
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
3260
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
45
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
32
wordCount
3164
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Heartstone
1
Pendant
1
Fae
1
Grove
1
Aurora
27
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Pendant"
2
"Aurora"
places
0
"Fae"
1
"Grove"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
253
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"as if urging her to move deeper into the grove"
1
"fog that seemed to be settling over her mind"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
3260
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
302
matches
(empty)
72.12%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
104
mean
31.35
std
12.61
cv
0.402
sampleLengths
0
71
1
67
2
69
3
63
4
56
5
56
6
49
7
49
8
15
9
57
10
43
11
63
12
44
13
44
14
42
15
36
16
33
17
14
18
34
19
33
20
30
21
14
22
34
23
33
24
30
25
14
26
34
27
33
28
30
29
14
30
34
31
33
32
30
33
14
34
34
35
33
36
30
37
14
38
34
39
33
40
30
41
14
42
34
43
33
44
30
45
14
46
34
47
33
48
30
49
14
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
2
totalSentences
279
matches
0
"was gone"
1
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
606
matches
0
"was deafening"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
302
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
3166
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
66
adverbRatio
0.020846493998736577
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.003474415666456096
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
302
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
302
mean
10.79
std
5
cv
0.463
sampleLengths
0
21
1
19
2
15
3
16
4
19
5
14
6
16
7
18
8
16
9
17
10
13
11
23
12
10
13
11
14
9
15
11
16
6
17
16
18
12
19
6
20
21
21
17
22
17
23
17
24
5
25
17
26
16
27
15
28
18
29
13
30
8
31
14
32
14
33
10
34
5
35
8
36
7
37
10
38
17
39
15
40
11
41
13
42
19
43
15
44
15
45
15
46
18
47
17
48
5
49
7
25.00%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
78
diversityRatio
0.039735099337748346
totalSentences
302
uniqueOpeners
12
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
279
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
0.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
166
totalSentences
279
matches
0
"She skidded to a halt,"
1
"She had come here for"
2
"She swallowed hard, her throat"
3
"She turned her head slowly,"
4
"She blinked, and it was"
5
"Her breath hitched, and she"
6
"she called out, her voice"
7
"She could feel the hairs"
8
"She took another step back,"
9
"She shook her head, trying"
10
"She had to stay focused."
11
"She had come here for"
12
"She took a deep breath"
13
"She could feel the pendant"
14
"She spun around, her eyes"
15
"Its eyes glowed a sickly"
16
"it hissed, the sound like"
17
"She had to get out"
18
"She turned and ran, her"
19
"She could hear the creature"
ratio
0.595
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
278
totalSentences
279
matches
0
"Aurora Carter's breath came in"
1
"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against"
2
"She skidded to a halt,"
3
"The ancient oak standing stones"
4
"She had come here for"
5
"The wildflowers that bloomed year-round"
6
"The air was thick, almost"
7
"Aurora took a cautious step"
8
"The pendant pulsed again, warmer"
9
"She swallowed hard, her throat"
10
"The standing stones seemed to"
11
"A sudden rustling sound to"
12
"She turned her head slowly,"
13
"There, at the edge of"
14
"A shadow, darker than the"
15
"She blinked, and it was"
16
"Her breath hitched, and she"
17
"she called out, her voice"
18
"The silence that followed was"
19
"She could feel the hairs"
ratio
0.996
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
279
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
14.65%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
156
technicalSentenceCount
28
matches
0
"No chirping crickets, no rustling leaves, just an oppressive silence that pressed down on her like a weight."
1
"She shook her head, trying to clear the fog that seemed to be settling over her mind."
2
"She could feel the pendant growing warmer against her skin, its glow matching the intensity of the runes."
3
"She could hear the creature behind her, its growls growing louder with each passing second."
4
"She stumbled, her foot catching on a root, and she went sprawling to the ground."
5
"She could feel the weight of the pendant pulling her forward, guiding her through the maze of standing stones."
6
"She could feel the creature's presence growing stronger, its growls echoing through the trees."
7
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
8
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
9
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
10
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
11
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
12
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
13
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
14
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
15
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
16
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
17
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
18
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
19
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
20
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
21
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
22
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
23
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
24
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
25
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
26
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
27
"She could feel the creature's eyes on her, its presence a dark cloud that threatened to engulf her."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
24
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"she called out, her voice barely more than a whisper"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
24
fancyCount
24
fancyTags
0
"she called out (call out)"
1
"it hissed (hiss)"
2
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
3
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
4
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
5
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
6
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
7
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
8
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
9
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
10
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
11
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
12
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
13
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
14
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
15
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
16
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
17
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
18
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
19
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
20
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
21
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
22
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
23
"the figure hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences
47
tagDensity
0.511
leniency
1
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
1
73.6234%