| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1140 | | totalAiIsms | 48 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | | | 28 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "enigmatic" | | 4 | "grave" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "resolve" | | 7 | "stark" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "dance" | | 11 | "tangible" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "anticipation" | | 15 | "scanning" | | 16 | "tapestry" | | 17 | "fractured" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "familiar" | | 20 | "flicker" | | 21 | "wavering" | | 22 | "symphony" | | 23 | "quickened" | | 24 | "flickered" | | 25 | "resolved" | | 26 | "echoes" | | 27 | "steeled" | | 28 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1140 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 42 | | wordCount | 1117 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.61 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Realisation | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Realisation" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.694 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed aware of" | | 1 | "quite forgotten" | | 2 | "not quite familiar, not quite there" | | 3 | "not quite there" | | 4 | "as though preparing for revelation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.877 | | wordCount | 1140 | | matches | | 0 | "not death but understanding" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.90% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 51.82 | | std | 21.18 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 112 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 79 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 63 | | 10 | 65 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 51 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 41 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0.221 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her neck thrummed with a barely perceptible warmth — an oddity that echoed the peculiarity of her surroundings." | | 1 | "Rory’s mind was sharp, trained to find clarity within chaos — yet this night, the clarity ducked and dodged like shadows in a gale." | | 2 | "Quiet crumbled to stark silence, broken intermittently by rustles—the kind that set spiders trawling up one's spine in instinctive reminder of watching eyes." | | 3 | "Rory whipped around, her eyes searching — nothing." | | 4 | "Shadows could dance upon the periphery all they pleased; she'd not let them unsettle her." | | 5 | "She considered retreat — who to run to, who to call — as realisation solidified its chill." | | 6 | "A flicker caught her eye – something barely visible, darting quickly away, leaving barely formed doubts to deepen." | | 7 | "A fragment of reality hung suspended, wavering—an unseen doorway breached by only the tools kept ready in her mind." | | 8 | "Her foot caught upon a stone, bounded by moss that relinquished its hold too easy, a reminder she sought not death but understanding—the clarity her journey demanded." | | 9 | "It formed reality anew from fractured pieces; a voice commanding enquires with expectation wrapped around each syllable." | | 10 | "Words failed her when Rory endeavoured reply—her search, once clear, clouded by the uncertainty breathed from landscapes beside her senses’ reach." | | 11 | "As whispered shadows claimed entry to her thoughts, Rory steeled herself for what truths wait beyond Isolde’s Grove—her fractured perception carried within herself." | | 12 | "Her father’s tales left impressions faint — Rory cast them aside, knowing understanding lay beyond doubt’s reach." | | 13 | "Alongside each whisper came laughter, resonant across ensorcelled memory mazes — laughter familiar, laughter feared." | | 14 | "Rory continued, each step claiming breaking revelation congealed beyond the tangible, only perceivable by the dance-bound pendant guiding her to reality’s shape, conjured from before — acknowledgement yet to come." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 876 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.028538812785388126 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0136986301369863 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 78.47% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 16.76 | | std | 5.8 | | cv | 0.346 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 90.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5441176470588235 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond lay the Fae" | | 1 | "Perhaps three heartbeats ago she'd" | | 2 | "Alongside each whisper came laughter," |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 1 | "Her breath formed clouds in" | | 2 | "She reached the boundary marked" | | 3 | "Her father had called it" | | 4 | "She pushed forward, her steps" | | 5 | "She exhaled shakily and smiled" | | 6 | "She considered retreat — who" | | 7 | "Her foot caught upon a" | | 8 | "It formed reality anew from" | | 9 | "She held her answer beneath" | | 10 | "Its origin a fractal mystery" | | 11 | "She slipped between the faults" | | 12 | "Her father’s tales left impressions" | | 13 | "She surged onward to where" |
| | ratio | 0.206 | |
| 77.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "A canopy of stars arched" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her" | | 4 | "Aurora had come here searching" | | 5 | "The path wound through the" | | 6 | "Trees loomed unnaturally tall, their" | | 7 | "Her breath formed clouds in" | | 8 | "Rory’s mind was sharp, trained" | | 9 | "She reached the boundary marked" | | 10 | "Her father had called it" | | 11 | "The moment she stepped into" | | 12 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 13 | "She pushed forward, her steps" | | 14 | "a voice echoed, disembodied and" | | 15 | "Rory whipped around, her eyes" | | 16 | "She exhaled shakily and smiled" | | 17 | "Shadows could dance upon the" | | 18 | "The heart of the Grove" | | 19 | "Here, time deviated from its" |
| | ratio | 0.765 | |
| 73.53% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | 0 | "If her father’s words held" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 38.96% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, walked the trail that led to the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant around her neck thrummed with a barely perceptible warmth — an oddity that echoed the peculiarity of her surroundings." | | 2 | "Somewhere beyond lay the Fae Grove, that hidden clearing existing in pockets where the boundaries of the world wore thin and dreams mingled with reality." | | 3 | "Her father had called it Isolde's Grove, murmuring tales that weren’t quite forgotten." | | 4 | "Rory could almost feel the air itself contract, drawing close as though preparing for revelation." | | 5 | "Rory’s pulse quickened, her eyes scanning the myriad of imagined forms shaping themselves out of sameness in a dance she refused to be entrapped by." | | 6 | "Her foot caught upon a stone, bounded by moss that relinquished its hold too easy, a reminder she sought not death but understanding—the clarity her journey dem…" | | 7 | "Rory unfurled the pendant from beneath the folds of her jacket, its faint glow spilling light that shadows loathed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "voice teased (voice)" | | 1 | "Words failed (fail)" | | 2 | "another voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |