Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR60M2MV3J0BTJH7NZQ4W0

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Duration:
12.6s
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$0.016952
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Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A canopy of stars arched over Richmond Park, each one a distant spectre in the vast night sky. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, walked the trail that led to the Fae Grove. Her boots sank into the damp earth, the air whispering a chill that bit at her skin with every step. The Heartstone Pendant around her neck thrummed with a barely perceptible warmth — an oddity that echoed the peculiarity of her surroundings. Aurora had come here searching for answers. Why her father had sent her an enigmatic message from beyond the grave, drawing her to this secluded grove, a detail only the Heartstone's glow seemed aware of. The path wound through the park like a snake, each bend appearing the same as the last. Trees loomed unnaturally tall, their branches knitting a web overhead through which the muted moonlight barely crawled. Her breath formed clouds in the air, each exhalation misting before vanishing. Rory’s mind was sharp, trained to find clarity within chaos — yet this night, the clarity ducked and dodged like shadows in a gale. She reached the boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones, a timeless wall itching with age and secrets. Somewhere beyond lay the Fae Grove, that hidden clearing existing in pockets where the boundaries of the world wore thin and dreams mingled with reality. Her father had called it Isolde's Grove, murmuring tales that weren’t quite forgotten. Still, doubt gnawed at the edges of Rory’s resolve, her memories a spool of entwined legends handed down in half whispers during childhood. The moment she stepped into the clearing, the sounds changed. Quiet crumbled to stark silence, broken intermittently by rustles—the kind that set spiders trawling up one's spine in instinctive reminder of watching eyes. Rory tightened her grip on the pendant, its inner glow competing with the broad dark. She pushed forward, her steps muting to silence on wildflowers insistent in their eternal bloomed state amid the swirl of Fae-touched air. "Pity you insist on coming alone," a voice echoed, disembodied and soft as the breeze caressing her ear, leaving it cold with dread. Rory whipped around, her eyes searching — nothing. She exhaled shakily and smiled coldly. Shadows could dance upon the periphery all they pleased; she'd not let them unsettle her. The heart of the Grove felt different in her bones, the wrongness a tangible whisper against her senses. Underneath the seeming serenity lay a pulse, anticipation suspended. Here, time deviated from its expected linear flow, warping with each step she took deeper into its embrace. Perhaps three heartbeats ago she'd entered, yet it felt longer, stretched and unclear. Nearby, a branch snapped. Rory froze, her muscles tight and alert, scanning the psychedelic tapestry of moon-washed flora. Oak trees arched into the sky, their silhouettes fractured by shadows that shimmered and shifted. She considered retreat — who to run to, who to call — as realisation solidified its chill. Isolation chanted a discordant tune, punctuated by movement not quite familiar, not quite there. Rory knew well the stories taught to plague childhood fears, doubts dredged in whispers to make minds wander when assailed by unseen presences. A flicker caught her eye – something barely visible, darting quickly away, leaving barely formed doubts to deepen. Ignoring it, Rory's stride resumed its tireless duty, pushing forward past each crease in reality the Grove offered. "Trust not the clearing under Isolde’s moon," another whispered voice teased, layering suspicion into Rory's resolve. The voice stirred memories of stories told in her father’s raspy growl, stories both comfort and terror as they cavorted through her thoughts at times like this. A chill seeped through her skin. Rory could almost feel the air itself contract, drawing close as though preparing for revelation. A fragment of reality hung suspended, wavering—an unseen doorway breached by only the tools kept ready in her mind. If her father’s words held merit, the Heartstone might act the compass she needed, a guide through the chaos masking truth with illusions. Whispers saturated the Grove, multiplying as she moved, a symphony of lost tongues. Rory’s pulse quickened, her eyes scanning the myriad of imagined forms shaping themselves out of sameness in a dance she refused to be entrapped by. Her foot caught upon a stone, bounded by moss that relinquished its hold too easy, a reminder she sought not death but understanding—the clarity her journey demanded. A delicate glow flickered anew at her neck, guiding her to a place deepest within this unreal tapestry’s recesses. Time’s uncertain flow taunted with promises wrapped in endless delay. No path marked the way, yet the Heartstone performed its resolute magic, tugging Rory’s attention where her instincts demanded it not capture. The sounds heightened. Murmured sibilance resolved into chanting intertwined with echoes insistent in their promise of realisation. Rory unfurled the pendant from beneath the folds of her jacket, its faint glow spilling light that shadows loathed. A dance commenced within the clearing beyond, contrasting the silence its performance interrupted. "Who do you seek?" asked a voice, whether from her side or rising from the soil she could not tell. It formed reality anew from fractured pieces; a voice commanding enquires with expectation wrapped around each syllable. Words failed her when Rory endeavoured reply—her search, once clear, clouded by the uncertainty breathed from landscapes beside her senses’ reach. Realisation dawned as impressions converged, each yielding a path forward no map ever betrayed to her knowledge. She held her answer beneath suspicion's chains, raised anew the pendant’s guiding glow. “Answers must have cost,” another voice whispered, lending dark humour to its promise. Its origin a fractal mystery spinning across shaded branches eluding Rory’s attempts to pinpoint. As whispered shadows claimed entry to her thoughts, Rory steeled herself for what truths wait beyond Isolde’s Grove—her fractured perception carried within herself. Questions sifted through her mind unanswered, possibilities ripened under chase-demanding obscurity the Grove defied refusal. She slipped between the faults moaned with discoveries shaped to redirect fate itself. As before, the pendant pulsed with its call. Shadows blurred from colourless interaction, promising a reality evermore altered yet forming substance unconcerned by demands it defied. Her father’s tales left impressions faint — Rory cast them aside, knowing understanding lay beyond doubt’s reach. She surged onward to where fragments knit into certainty, her vision resolute in pursuit of eternal questions these echoes breathed. Each step claimed its finality, the truth of Isolde’s grove laying its future bare, uninterrupted by this world’s witness beyond. Alongside each whisper came laughter, resonant across ensorcelled memory mazes — laughter familiar, laughter feared. Rory continued, each step claiming breaking revelation congealed beyond the tangible, only perceivable by the dance-bound pendant guiding her to reality’s shape, conjured from before — acknowledgement yet to come. Alone her quest unfolded its conclusions, layered as questions upward spread.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.23% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"coldly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"coldly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1140
totalAiIsms48
found
0
word"chill"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count2
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"dance"
count4
11
word"tangible"
count2
12
word"whisper"
count2
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"anticipation"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count2
16
word"tapestry"
count2
17
word"fractured"
count3
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count2
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"wavering"
count1
22
word"symphony"
count1
23
word"quickened"
count1
24
word"flickered"
count1
25
word"resolved"
count1
26
word"echoes"
count2
27
word"steeled"
count1
28
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"echoed"
3"enigmatic"
4"grave"
5"loomed"
6"resolve"
7"stark"
8"silence"
9"reminder"
10"dance"
11"tangible"
12"whisper"
13"pulse"
14"anticipation"
15"scanning"
16"tapestry"
17"fractured"
18"shimmered"
19"familiar"
20"flicker"
21"wavering"
22"symphony"
23"quickened"
24"flickered"
25"resolved"
26"echoes"
27"steeled"
28"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"d with dread"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences68
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1140
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1117
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Rory18
Fae3
Grove8
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Isolde3
Fae-touched1
Realisation1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Grove"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
5"Isolde"
6"Realisation"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.694
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed aware of"
1"quite forgotten"
2"not quite familiar, not quite there"
3"not quite there"
4"as though preparing for revelation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.877
wordCount1140
matches
0"not death but understanding"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
73.90% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean51.82
std21.18
cv0.409
sampleLengths
0112
170
279
370
452
558
650
755
861
963
1065
1151
1249
1337
1451
1527
1623
1728
1826
1957
2015
2141
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs208
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences68
ratio0.221
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant around her neck thrummed with a barely perceptible warmth — an oddity that echoed the peculiarity of her surroundings."
1"Rory’s mind was sharp, trained to find clarity within chaos — yet this night, the clarity ducked and dodged like shadows in a gale."
2"Quiet crumbled to stark silence, broken intermittently by rustles—the kind that set spiders trawling up one's spine in instinctive reminder of watching eyes."
3"Rory whipped around, her eyes searching — nothing."
4"Shadows could dance upon the periphery all they pleased; she'd not let them unsettle her."
5"She considered retreat — who to run to, who to call — as realisation solidified its chill."
6"A flicker caught her eye – something barely visible, darting quickly away, leaving barely formed doubts to deepen."
7"A fragment of reality hung suspended, wavering—an unseen doorway breached by only the tools kept ready in her mind."
8"Her foot caught upon a stone, bounded by moss that relinquished its hold too easy, a reminder she sought not death but understanding—the clarity her journey demanded."
9"It formed reality anew from fractured pieces; a voice commanding enquires with expectation wrapped around each syllable."
10"Words failed her when Rory endeavoured reply—her search, once clear, clouded by the uncertainty breathed from landscapes beside her senses’ reach."
11"As whispered shadows claimed entry to her thoughts, Rory steeled herself for what truths wait beyond Isolde’s Grove—her fractured perception carried within herself."
12"Her father’s tales left impressions faint — Rory cast them aside, knowing understanding lay beyond doubt’s reach."
13"Alongside each whisper came laughter, resonant across ensorcelled memory mazes — laughter familiar, laughter feared."
14"Rory continued, each step claiming breaking revelation congealed beyond the tangible, only perceivable by the dance-bound pendant guiding her to reality’s shape, conjured from before — acknowledgement yet to come."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount876
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.028538812785388126
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.0136986301369863
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences68
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
78.47% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences68
mean16.76
std5.8
cv0.346
sampleLengths
018
117
220
322
47
528
617
717
812
924
1018
1125
1213
1323
1410
1523
1615
1722
1823
198
206
2115
2218
239
2418
2513
264
2714
2815
2917
3014
3123
3218
3318
3416
3527
366
3715
3819
3923
4013
4125
4227
4319
4410
4522
463
4714
4819
4913
90.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5441176470588235
totalSentences68
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Somewhere beyond lay the Fae"
1"Perhaps three heartbeats ago she'd"
2"Alongside each whisper came laughter,"
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her boots sank into the"
1"Her breath formed clouds in"
2"She reached the boundary marked"
3"Her father had called it"
4"She pushed forward, her steps"
5"She exhaled shakily and smiled"
6"She considered retreat — who"
7"Her foot caught upon a"
8"It formed reality anew from"
9"She held her answer beneath"
10"Its origin a fractal mystery"
11"She slipped between the faults"
12"Her father’s tales left impressions"
13"She surged onward to where"
ratio0.206
77.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences68
matches
0"A canopy of stars arched"
1"Aurora Carter, known to her"
2"Her boots sank into the"
3"The Heartstone Pendant around her"
4"Aurora had come here searching"
5"The path wound through the"
6"Trees loomed unnaturally tall, their"
7"Her breath formed clouds in"
8"Rory’s mind was sharp, trained"
9"She reached the boundary marked"
10"Her father had called it"
11"The moment she stepped into"
12"Rory tightened her grip on"
13"She pushed forward, her steps"
14"a voice echoed, disembodied and"
15"Rory whipped around, her eyes"
16"She exhaled shakily and smiled"
17"Shadows could dance upon the"
18"The heart of the Grove"
19"Here, time deviated from its"
ratio0.765
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"If her father’s words held"
ratio0.015
38.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, walked the trail that led to the Fae Grove."
1"The Heartstone Pendant around her neck thrummed with a barely perceptible warmth — an oddity that echoed the peculiarity of her surroundings."
2"Somewhere beyond lay the Fae Grove, that hidden clearing existing in pockets where the boundaries of the world wore thin and dreams mingled with reality."
3"Her father had called it Isolde's Grove, murmuring tales that weren’t quite forgotten."
4"Rory could almost feel the air itself contract, drawing close as though preparing for revelation."
5"Rory’s pulse quickened, her eyes scanning the myriad of imagined forms shaping themselves out of sameness in a dance she refused to be entrapped by."
6"Her foot caught upon a stone, bounded by moss that relinquished its hold too easy, a reminder she sought not death but understanding—the clarity her journey dem…"
7"Rory unfurled the pendant from beneath the folds of her jacket, its faint glow spilling light that shadows loathed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"voice teased (voice)"
1"Words failed (fail)"
2"another voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.75
79.7950%