Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR614QNXP63MAERPRJFSQS

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Duration:
47.4s
Cost:
$0.001290

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove. A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating. She paused, taking in the vibrant colors that danced before her eyes. The grove pulsed with life, each flower a splash of color against the lush green backdrop. “Is this real?” Rory whispered, her bright blue eyes wide with wonder. She brushed her fingers against a nearby flower, its petals soft and velvety. The bloom seemed to hum under her touch, vibrating with energy. “Real enough,” Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that floated like smoke. They glided beside her, a silhouette of shadow that flickered in and out of focus. “But be wary. The Grove has its own rules.” Rory nodded, her heart racing. She had heard tales of this place, where time twisted and turned like a river, but standing here, she felt the weight of its magic. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled patterns on the ground, and the air thrummed with an otherworldly melody, a symphony of rustling leaves and distant laughter. “Look!” Isolde Varga, the ethereal half-Fae seer, pointed toward a cluster of ancient trees. Their trunks twisted and spiraled, adorned with silver vines that glimmered in the light. “The heart of the Grove lies ahead. It reveals itself only to those who seek with pure intent.” Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who nodded, their violet eyes glowing faintly. The shadows around them seemed to deepen, as if the Grove itself held its breath. “Let’s go,” Rory urged, stepping forward. The ground felt soft beneath her feet, almost like walking on a thick carpet of moss. Each step brought a new sensation, a tingling warmth that spread through her body. As they ventured deeper, the trees grew taller, their branches intertwining like fingers reaching for the sky. The light dimmed, replaced by a soft, golden glow that emanated from the heart of the grove. Rory’s pulse quickened. “What do you think it is?” she asked, glancing back at Isolde, who walked with an otherworldly grace, leaving no footprints behind. “Possibilities,” Isolde replied cryptically, her pale lavender eyes scanning the surroundings. “The Grove holds many secrets, but not all are meant to be uncovered.” Rory frowned, unease creeping in. “Secrets? Like what?” “Like the shadows that linger,” Nyx interjected, their form flickering as they gestured toward a darker corner of the grove. “Not all who enter leave unchanged.” A chill ran down Rory’s spine. She glanced at the shadows, which seemed to pulse with a life of their own. “We should stick together,” she said, her voice steady despite the unease gnawing at her. They pressed on, the golden glow growing brighter. The air thickened with magic, wrapping around them like a warm embrace. Rory felt a pull, an urge to move closer to the source of the light. “Do you hear that?” Isolde paused, tilting her head. The distant laughter grew louder, a chorus of voices that danced on the edge of understanding. “Sounds like a party,” Nyx murmured, their silhouette shifting as they stepped forward. “Or a trap.” “Let’s find out,” Rory said, her curiosity outweighing her caution. She led the way, her heart pounding with anticipation. As they rounded a massive tree, the grove opened up into a breathtaking clearing. A grand feast sprawled before them, tables laden with exotic fruits, shimmering dishes, and goblets overflowing with vibrant liquids. The air buzzed with laughter and music, a celebration of life and indulgence. “Welcome, travelers!” a voice boomed, drawing their attention. A figure stood at the head of the table, a tall man with a crown of vines and flowers. His eyes sparkled with mischief, and a wide grin split his face. “Join us! Feast with us!” Rory hesitated, glancing at Nyx and Isolde. “Should we?” “Caution is wise,” Isolde replied, her voice low. “But the Grove offers gifts to those who dare.” “Gifts or traps?” Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty. “Let’s not be rude,” Rory said, stepping forward. The allure of the feast tugged at her, the colors and scents intoxicating. As they approached, the laughter grew louder, wrapping around them like a warm blanket. The guests, a mix of Fae and otherworldly beings, beckoned them closer, their eyes glinting with curiosity. “Come, come!” the crowned figure urged, gesturing to an empty seat. “You must taste the fruits of Dymas! They are unlike anything you’ve ever experienced.” Rory’s stomach growled at the sight of a deep crimson fruit, glistening like a jewel. She reached for it, her fingers brushing against the smooth surface. “Wait!” Nyx’s voice cut through the revelry, a warning laced with urgency. “We don’t know what they’re offering.” But the moment Rory picked the fruit, a wave of warmth surged through her. The laughter faded, replaced by a low hum that resonated in her bones. She glanced around, the faces of the guests blurring, their smiles stretching wider, almost too wide. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice broke through the haze. “Put it down!” But it was too late. The fruit pulsed in her hand, a heartbeat that matched her own. She took a bite, the flavor exploding in her mouth—sweet, rich, and overwhelming. “Delicious, isn’t it?” the crowned figure leaned closer, his eyes glinting with something darker. “A taste of indulgence, a glimpse of what lies beyond.” Rory’s vision swirled, the grove shifting around her. The laughter morphed into whispers, secrets brushing against her mind. She felt the shadows creeping closer, wrapping around her like a shroud. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice broke through the chaos, their silhouette solidifying as they reached for her. “Fight it!” But the sweetness of the fruit clung to her senses, pulling her deeper into the revelry. The grove pulsed with life, and she felt herself slipping, the boundaries of reality blurring. “Join us,” the crowned figure urged, his voice a seductive whisper. “Embrace the feast, embrace the magic.” Rory’s heart raced, caught between the allure of the grove and the warning in Nyx’s eyes. She glanced at Isolde, who stood still, her expression unreadable. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice cut through the haze again, a lifeline in the storm. “Remember who you are!” With a jolt, Rory pulled back, the fruit slipping from her fingers and rolling away. The laughter faded, replaced by a tense silence. The guests turned their gazes toward her, their smiles faltering. “Not yet,” the crowned figure said, his voice low and dangerous. “You’ve tasted the fruit of Dymas. You cannot leave so easily.” Rory’s breath quickened, the weight of the grove pressing down on her. She felt the shadows closing in, the magic swirling around her like a tempest. “Together,” Nyx urged, their form flickering with determination. “We can break free.” Rory nodded, her resolve hardening. She reached for Nyx’s hand, feeling the coolness of their touch grounding her. “Let’s go,” she said, her voice steady. As they turned to leave, the grove trembled, the laughter rising again, but this time it felt like a warning. The shadows writhed, and the crowned figure’s smile twisted into something darker. “Not so fast,” he called, his voice echoing through the clearing. “The Grove has chosen you.” Rory’s heart raced as they pushed forward, the path ahead shrouded in uncertainty. The magic of the grove pulsed around them, a living entity that would not let them go easily.
total_cost0.0012904499999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.04
effectiveRatio0.04
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1246
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"otherworldly"
count3
7
word"symphony"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count2
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"quickened"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"anticipation"
count1
15
word"glinting"
count2
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"glistening"
count1
18
word"resonated"
count1
19
word"raced"
count2
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"silence"
count1
22
word"resolve"
count1
23
word"trembled"
count1
24
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"flickered"
4"racing"
5"weight"
6"otherworldly"
7"symphony"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"quickened"
11"scanning"
12"chill"
13"pounding"
14"anticipation"
15"glinting"
16"stomach"
17"glistening"
18"resonated"
19"raced"
20"unreadable"
21"silence"
22"resolve"
23"trembled"
24"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
77.11% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences87
matches
0"e with wonder"
1"g with anticipation"
2"d with urgency"
3"a wave of warmth"
4"g with determination"
93.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1244
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1045
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae3
Grove2
Varga1
Nyx13
Isolde7
Rory19
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Grove"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a warning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1244
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
90.38% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean27.04
std12.61
cv0.466
sampleLengths
067
136
236
358
446
528
636
737
822
924
108
1126
1236
1335
1425
1516
1619
1746
1844
199
2017
2110
2221
2331
2425
2526
2618
2743
2810
2930
3024
3130
3217
3331
3417
3526
3617
3733
3822
3926
4012
4118
427
4332
4416
4531
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences106
ratio0.009
matches
0"She took a bite, the flavor exploding in her mouth—sweet, rich, and overwhelming."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1047
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.025787965616045846
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0057306590257879654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean11.74
std4.97
cv0.424
sampleLengths
022
117
212
316
412
513
611
712
815
99
105
1125
1228
1314
1414
1518
1613
1715
186
1916
2014
2117
2217
233
2422
2511
2613
275
283
2920
306
316
3215
3315
348
3512
3615
379
3816
3913
403
4110
429
4314
4419
4513
468
4719
4812
495
58.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3584905660377358
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences87
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She brushed her fingers against"
2"They glided beside her, a"
3"She had heard tales of"
4"Their trunks twisted and spiraled,"
5"she asked, glancing back at"
6"She glanced at the shadows,"
7"she said, her voice steady"
8"They pressed on, the golden"
9"She led the way, her"
10"His eyes sparkled with mischief,"
11"She reached for it, her"
12"She glanced around, the faces"
13"She took a bite, the"
14"She felt the shadows creeping"
15"She glanced at Isolde, who"
16"She felt the shadows closing"
17"She reached for Nyx’s hand,"
18"she said, her voice steady"
19"he called, his voice echoing"
ratio0.23
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"A soft breeze brushed against"
2"She paused, taking in the"
3"The grove pulsed with life,"
4"Rory whispered, her bright blue"
5"She brushed her fingers against"
6"The bloom seemed to hum"
7"Nyx replied, their voice a"
8"They glided beside her, a"
9"Rory nodded, her heart racing."
10"She had heard tales of"
11"The sunlight filtered through the"
12"Isolde Varga, the ethereal half-Fae"
13"Their trunks twisted and spiraled,"
14"Rory exchanged a glance with"
15"The shadows around them seemed"
16"Rory urged, stepping forward"
17"The ground felt soft beneath"
18"Each step brought a new"
19"The light dimmed, replaced by"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1"Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who nodded, their violet eyes glowing faintly."
2"As they ventured deeper, the trees grew taller, their branches intertwining like fingers reaching for the sky."
3"The distant laughter grew louder, a chorus of voices that danced on the edge of understanding."
4"The fruit pulsed in her hand, a heartbeat that matched her own."
5"She glanced at Isolde, who stood still, her expression unreadable."
6"She reached for Nyx’s hand, feeling the coolness of their touch grounding her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that floated like smoke"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the unease gnawing at her"
2"Nyx murmured, their silhouette shifting as they stepped forward"
3"Rory said, her curiosity outweighing her caution"
4"Isolde replied, her voice low"
5"Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty"
6"figure leaned, his eyes glinting with something darker"
7"Nyx’s voice broke, their silhouette solidifying as they reached for her"
8"figure urged, his voice a seductive whisper"
9"figure said, his voice low and dangerous"
10"Nyx urged, their form flickering with determination"
11"she said, her voice steady"
12"he called, his voice echoing through the clearing"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory urged (urge)"
2"Nyx interjected (interject)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4"figure urged (urge)"
5"figure urged (urge)"
6"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.756
rawRatio0.412
effectiveRatio0.311
74.2604%