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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR614QNXP63MAERPRJFSQS
Run Details
Model:
GPT-4o Mini (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
47.4s
Cost:
$0.001290
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
77.11%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
93.60%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
59.09%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
90.38%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
58.81%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
5.98%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
42.86%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
74.2604%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The air shimmered as Aurora
stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove.
A soft breeze brushed against
her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating.
She paused, taking in the
vibrant colors that danced before her eyes. The grove
pulsed
with life, each flower a splash of color against the lush green backdrop. “Is this real?”
Rory whispered, her bright blue
eyes wide with wonder.
She brushed her fingers against
a nearby flower, its petals soft and velvety.
The bloom seemed to hum
under her touch, vibrating with energy. “Real enough,”
Nyx replied, their voice a
whisper
that floated like smoke.
They glided beside her, a
silhouette of shadow that
flickered
in and out of focus. “But be wary. The Grove has its own rules.” Rory nodded, her heart
racing
.
She had heard tales of
this place, where time twisted and turned like a river, but standing here, she felt the
weight
of its magic.
The sunlight filtered through the
leaves, casting dappled patterns on the ground, and the air thrummed with an
otherworldly
melody, a
symphony
of rustling leaves and distant laughter. “Look!”
Isolde Varga, the ethereal half-Fae
seer, pointed toward a cluster of ancient trees. Their trunks twisted and spiraled, adorned with silver vines that glimmered in the light. “The heart of the Grove lies ahead. It reveals itself only to those who seek with pure intent.”
Rory exchanged a glance with
Nyx, who nodded, their violet eyes glowing faintly.
The shadows around them seemed
to deepen, as if the Grove itself held its breath. “Let’s go,”
Rory urged, stepping forward
.
The ground felt soft beneath
her feet, almost like walking on a thick carpet of moss.
Each step brought a new
sensation, a tingling
warmth
that spread through her body. As they ventured deeper, the trees grew taller, their branches intertwining like fingers reaching for the sky.
The light dimmed, replaced by
a soft, golden glow that emanated from the heart of the grove. Rory’s
pulse
quickened
. “What do you think it is?”
she asked, glancing back at
Isolde, who walked with an
otherworldly
grace, leaving no footprints behind. “Possibilities,” Isolde replied cryptically, her pale lavender eyes
scanning
the surroundings. “The Grove holds many secrets, but not all are meant to be uncovered.” Rory frowned, unease creeping in. “Secrets? Like what?” “Like the shadows that linger,” Nyx interjected, their form flickering as they gestured toward a darker corner of the grove. “Not all who enter leave unchanged.” A
chill
ran down Rory’s spine. She glanced at the shadows, which
seemed to
pulse
with a life of their own. “We should stick together,”
she said, her voice steady
despite the unease gnawing at her.
They pressed on, the golden
glow growing brighter. The air thickened with magic, wrapping around them like a warm embrace. Rory felt a pull, an urge to move closer to the source of the light. “Do you hear that?” Isolde paused, tilting her head. The distant laughter grew louder, a chorus of voices that danced on the edge of understanding. “Sounds like a party,”
Nyx murmured, their silhouette shifting as they stepped forward
. “Or a trap.” “Let’s find out,”
Rory said, her curiosity outweighing her caution
.
She led the way, her
heart
pounding
with
anticipation
. As they rounded a massive tree, the grove opened up into a breathtaking clearing. A grand feast sprawled before them, tables laden with exotic fruits, shimmering dishes, and goblets overflowing with vibrant liquids. The air buzzed with laughter and music, a celebration of life and indulgence. “Welcome, travelers!” a voice boomed, drawing their attention. A figure stood at the head of the table, a tall man with a crown of vines and flowers. His eyes sparkled with mischief, and a wide grin split his face. “Join us! Feast with us!” Rory hesitated, glancing at Nyx and Isolde. “Should we?” “Caution is wise,”
Isolde replied, her voice low
. “But the Grove offers gifts to those who dare.” “Gifts or traps?”
Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty
. “Let’s not be rude,” Rory said, stepping forward. The allure of the feast tugged at her, the colors and scents intoxicating. As they approached, the laughter grew louder, wrapping around them like a warm blanket. The guests, a mix of Fae and
otherworldly
beings, beckoned them closer, their eyes
glinting
with curiosity. “Come, come!” the crowned figure urged, gesturing to an empty seat. “You must taste the fruits of Dymas! They are unlike anything you’ve ever experienced.” Rory’s
stomach
growled at the sight of a deep crimson fruit,
glistening
like a jewel.
She reached for it, her
fingers brushing against the smooth surface. “Wait!” Nyx’s voice cut through the revelry, a warning laced with urgency. “We don’t know what they’re offering.” But the moment Rory picked the fruit,
a wave of warmth
surged through her. The laughter faded, replaced by a low hum that
resonated
in her bones.
She glanced around, the faces
of the guests blurring, their smiles stretching wider, almost too wide. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice broke through the haze. “Put it down!” But it was too late. The fruit
pulsed
in her hand, a heartbeat that matched her own.
She took a bite, the
flavor exploding in her mouth—sweet, rich, and overwhelming. “Delicious, isn’t it?” the crowned figure leaned closer, his eyes
glinting
with something darker. “A taste of indulgence, a glimpse of what lies beyond.” Rory’s vision swirled, the grove shifting around her. The laughter morphed into whispers, secrets brushing against her mind.
She felt the shadows creeping
closer, wrapping around her like a shroud. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice broke through the chaos, their silhouette solidifying as they reached for her. “Fight it!” But the sweetness of the fruit clung to her senses, pulling her deeper into the revelry. The grove
pulsed
with life, and she felt herself slipping, the boundaries of reality blurring. “Join us,” the crowned
figure urged, his voice a seductive whisper
. “Embrace the feast, embrace the magic.” Rory’s heart
raced
, caught between the allure of the grove and the warning in Nyx’s eyes.
She glanced at Isolde, who
stood still, her expression
unreadable
. “Rory!” Nyx’s voice cut through the haze again, a lifeline in the storm. “Remember who you are!” With a jolt, Rory pulled back, the fruit slipping from her fingers and rolling away. The laughter faded, replaced by a tense
silence
. The guests turned their gazes toward her, their smiles faltering. “Not yet,” the crowned
figure said, his voice low and dangerous
. “You’ve tasted the fruit of Dymas. You cannot leave so easily.” Rory’s breath
quickened
, the
weight
of the grove pressing down on her.
She felt the shadows closing
in, the magic swirling around her like a tempest. “Together,”
Nyx urged, their form flickering with determination
. “We can break free.” Rory nodded, her
resolve
hardening. She reached for Nyx’s hand, feeling the coolness of their touch grounding her. “Let’s go,”
she said, her voice steady
. As they turned to leave, the grove
trembled
, the laughter rising again, but this time it
felt like a warning
. The shadows writhed, and the crowned figure’s smile twisted into something darker. “Not so fast,”
he called, his voice echoing
through the clearing. “The Grove has chosen you.” Rory’s heart
raced
as they pushed forward, the path ahead shrouded in uncertainty. The magic of the grove
pulsed
around them, a living entity that would not let them go easily.
total_cost
0.0012904499999999998
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
25
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
dialogueSentences
45
tagDensity
0.556
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.04
effectiveRatio
0.04
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1246
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1246
totalAiIsms
37
found
0
word
"shimmered"
count
1
1
word
"pulsed"
count
4
2
word
"whisper"
count
2
3
word
"flickered"
count
1
4
word
"racing"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
2
6
word
"otherworldly"
count
3
7
word
"symphony"
count
1
8
word
"warmth"
count
2
9
word
"pulse"
count
2
10
word
"quickened"
count
2
11
word
"scanning"
count
1
12
word
"chill"
count
1
13
word
"pounding"
count
1
14
word
"anticipation"
count
1
15
word
"glinting"
count
2
16
word
"stomach"
count
1
17
word
"glistening"
count
1
18
word
"resonated"
count
1
19
word
"raced"
count
2
20
word
"unreadable"
count
1
21
word
"silence"
count
1
22
word
"resolve"
count
1
23
word
"trembled"
count
1
24
word
"echoing"
count
1
highlights
0
"shimmered"
1
"pulsed"
2
"whisper"
3
"flickered"
4
"racing"
5
"weight"
6
"otherworldly"
7
"symphony"
8
"warmth"
9
"pulse"
10
"quickened"
11
"scanning"
12
"chill"
13
"pounding"
14
"anticipation"
15
"glinting"
16
"stomach"
17
"glistening"
18
"resonated"
19
"raced"
20
"unreadable"
21
"silence"
22
"resolve"
23
"trembled"
24
"echoing"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
77.11%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
5
narrationSentences
87
matches
0
"e with wonder"
1
"g with anticipation"
2
"d with urgency"
3
"a wave of warmth"
4
"g with determination"
93.60%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
3
narrationSentences
87
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
106
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
28
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1244
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
59.09%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
46
wordCount
1045
uniqueNames
7
maxNameDensity
1.82
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora
1
Fae
3
Grove
2
Varga
1
Nyx
13
Isolde
7
Rory
19
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Grove"
2
"Nyx"
3
"Isolde"
4
"Rory"
places
0
"Fae"
globalScore
0.591
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
77
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"felt like a warning"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1244
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
106
matches
(empty)
90.38%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
46
mean
27.04
std
12.61
cv
0.466
sampleLengths
0
67
1
36
2
36
3
58
4
46
5
28
6
36
7
37
8
22
9
24
10
8
11
26
12
36
13
35
14
25
15
16
16
19
17
46
18
44
19
9
20
17
21
10
22
21
23
31
24
25
25
26
26
18
27
43
28
10
29
30
30
24
31
30
32
17
33
31
34
17
35
26
36
17
37
33
38
22
39
26
40
12
41
18
42
7
43
32
44
16
45
31
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
194
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
1
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
106
ratio
0.009
matches
0
"She took a bite, the flavor exploding in her mouth—sweet, rich, and overwhelming."
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1047
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
27
adverbRatio
0.025787965616045846
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.0057306590257879654
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
11.74
std
4.97
cv
0.424
sampleLengths
0
22
1
17
2
12
3
16
4
12
5
13
6
11
7
12
8
15
9
9
10
5
11
25
12
28
13
14
14
14
15
18
16
13
17
15
18
6
19
16
20
14
21
17
22
17
23
3
24
22
25
11
26
13
27
5
28
3
29
20
30
6
31
6
32
15
33
15
34
8
35
12
36
15
37
9
38
16
39
13
40
3
41
10
42
9
43
14
44
19
45
13
46
8
47
19
48
12
49
5
58.81%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.3584905660377358
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
38
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
20
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"She paused, taking in the"
1
"She brushed her fingers against"
2
"They glided beside her, a"
3
"She had heard tales of"
4
"Their trunks twisted and spiraled,"
5
"she asked, glancing back at"
6
"She glanced at the shadows,"
7
"she said, her voice steady"
8
"They pressed on, the golden"
9
"She led the way, her"
10
"His eyes sparkled with mischief,"
11
"She reached for it, her"
12
"She glanced around, the faces"
13
"She took a bite, the"
14
"She felt the shadows creeping"
15
"She glanced at Isolde, who"
16
"She felt the shadows closing"
17
"She reached for Nyx’s hand,"
18
"she said, her voice steady"
19
"he called, his voice echoing"
ratio
0.23
5.98%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
79
totalSentences
87
matches
0
"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1
"A soft breeze brushed against"
2
"She paused, taking in the"
3
"The grove pulsed with life,"
4
"Rory whispered, her bright blue"
5
"She brushed her fingers against"
6
"The bloom seemed to hum"
7
"Nyx replied, their voice a"
8
"They glided beside her, a"
9
"Rory nodded, her heart racing."
10
"She had heard tales of"
11
"The sunlight filtered through the"
12
"Isolde Varga, the ethereal half-Fae"
13
"Their trunks twisted and spiraled,"
14
"Rory exchanged a glance with"
15
"The shadows around them seemed"
16
"Rory urged, stepping forward"
17
"The ground felt soft beneath"
18
"Each step brought a new"
19
"The light dimmed, replaced by"
ratio
0.908
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
87
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
42.86%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
50
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1
"Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who nodded, their violet eyes glowing faintly."
2
"As they ventured deeper, the trees grew taller, their branches intertwining like fingers reaching for the sky."
3
"The distant laughter grew louder, a chorus of voices that danced on the edge of understanding."
4
"The fruit pulsed in her hand, a heartbeat that matched her own."
5
"She glanced at Isolde, who stood still, her expression unreadable."
6
"She reached for Nyx’s hand, feeling the coolness of their touch grounding her."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
25
uselessAdditionCount
13
matches
0
"Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that floated like smoke"
1
"she said, her voice steady despite the unease gnawing at her"
2
"Nyx murmured, their silhouette shifting as they stepped forward"
3
"Rory said, her curiosity outweighing her caution"
4
"Isolde replied, her voice low"
5
"Nyx countered, their form flickering with uncertainty"
6
"figure leaned, his eyes glinting with something darker"
7
"Nyx’s voice broke, their silhouette solidifying as they reached for her"
8
"figure urged, his voice a seductive whisper"
9
"figure said, his voice low and dangerous"
10
"Nyx urged, their form flickering with determination"
11
"she said, her voice steady"
12
"he called, his voice echoing through the clearing"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
17
fancyCount
7
fancyTags
0
"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1
"Rory urged (urge)"
2
"Nyx interjected (interject)"
3
"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4
"figure urged (urge)"
5
"figure urged (urge)"
6
"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences
45
tagDensity
0.378
leniency
0.756
rawRatio
0.412
effectiveRatio
0.311
74.2604%