| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 864 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "truly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 864 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "enigmatic" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "gleaming" | | 11 | "churning" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 84.35% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | matches | | 0 | "g in surprise" | | 1 | "felt the sting" |
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| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 41 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 859 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 699 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Silas | 7 | | Eva | 15 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Blackwood" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.427 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the waters of their reunited past" | | 1 | "felt like a dull ember, a reminder of t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 859 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 50 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.05% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 39.05 | | std | 15.7 | | cv | 0.402 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 40 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 71 | | 21 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.57% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 50 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "She had, indeed, resisted change, clinging to the comfort of familiarity – her work at the Golden Empress, her flat above the bar, and the quiet, unassuming routine she'd built." | | 1 | "The whiskey, once a comforting warmth, now felt like a dull ember, a reminder of the long, complicated journey that lay ahead – one that would force her to confront the inevitable question: who was she, truly, beyond the comforting familiarities of her life?" |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 703 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "awkward, half-hearted hug," |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02702702702702703 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008534850640113799 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 50 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 50 | | mean | 17.18 | | std | 8.93 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 81.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 50 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "he asked, his deep voice" | | 1 | "She nodded, and Silas poured" | | 2 | "she said, her voice lower," | | 3 | "Her gaze locked onto Rory's," | | 4 | "She had, indeed, resisted change," |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | | 0 | "The distinctive green neon sign" | | 1 | "Silas Blackwood, the bar's proprietor," | | 2 | "he asked, his deep voice" | | 3 | "She nodded, and Silas poured" | | 4 | "Rory's gaze drifted towards the" | | 5 | "The name escaped her lips" | | 6 | "Eva, her childhood friend, now" | | 7 | "Eva's eyes, once a deep," | | 8 | "Eva's gaze, however, held a" | | 9 | "she said, her voice lower," | | 10 | "Rory slid off the stool," | | 11 | "The two women met in" | | 12 | "Silas intervened, his voice a" | | 13 | "Eva's smile, a thin, enigmatic" | | 14 | "Eva's laughter, a melodic, practiced" | | 15 | "Her gaze locked onto Rory's," | | 16 | "The bar's ambient noise receded," | | 17 | "Rory felt the sting of" | | 18 | "She had, indeed, resisted change," | | 19 | "Rory countered, her voice even," |
| | ratio | 0.65 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 40 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.31% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva's eyes, once a deep, warm brown, now appeared an unsettling shade of grey, a color that seemed almost..." | | 1 | "Rory slid off the stool, her movements uncertain, as if testing the waters of their reunited past." | | 2 | "The two women met in an awkward, half-hearted hug, the type that spoke of long-standing intimacy struggling to bridge the chasm of years." | | 3 | "As the night's final notes began to fade, Eva glanced at her watch, a sleek, silver accessory that seemed an extension of her transformed self." | | 4 | "The whiskey, once a comforting warmth, now felt like a dull ember, a reminder of the long, complicated journey that lay ahead – one that would force her to conf…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.118 | | leniency | 0.235 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |