Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR614ZXV65WPEQXYNQ2N43

Run Details

Duration:
32.9s
Cost:
$0.002603
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The distinctive green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an eerie glow on the rain-soaked pavement. Inside, the bar's warm hum enveloped Aurora Carter, known to few as Rory, as she slid onto a stool, shaking the droplets from her shoulder-length black hair. Silas Blackwood, the bar's proprietor, polished a glass with a white cloth, his hazel eyes meeting hers in a brief, knowing glance. "Usual, Rory?" he asked, his deep voice a comforting constant in her life. She nodded, and Silas poured a generous measure of whiskey into a glass. As he handed it to her, the door swung open, admitting a flurry of rain and a tall, lanky figure. Rory's gaze drifted towards the newcomer, her bright blue eyes widening in surprise. "Eva?" The name escaped her lips before she could temper her reaction. Eva, her childhood friend, now stood before her, transformed. Gone was the wild mane of curly brown hair, replaced by a sleek, platinum bob that framed a face sharper, more angular than Rory remembered. Eva's eyes, once a deep, warm brown, now appeared an unsettling shade of grey, a color that seemed almost... manufactured. Eva's gaze, however, held a spark of the old familiarity, and with it, a deep-seated wariness. "Rory," she said, her voice lower, smoother, like fine silk. "It's been a while." Rory slid off the stool, her movements uncertain, as if testing the waters of their reunited past. The two women met in an awkward, half-hearted hug, the type that spoke of long-standing intimacy struggling to bridge the chasm of years. "Sit, please," Silas intervened, his voice a gentle nudge, as he gestured to the stool beside Rory. "Drink on the house, Eva. What's your poison these days?" Eva's smile, a thin, enigmatic line, hinted at secrets kept and stories untold. "Just water, Si. Thank you." As Silas complied, Rory found her voice, "Eva, what... what have you done to your hair? And your eyes..." The questions tumbled out, unguarded, borne of a deep-seated disquiet. Eva's laughter, a melodic, practiced sound, filled the brief silence. "Reinvention, Rory. Sometimes it's necessary to shed old skin." Her gaze locked onto Rory's, a fleeting glimmer of the old Eva flickering like a candle flame in the wind. "You, on the other hand, look remarkably... consistent." The bar's ambient noise receded, leaving only the soft clinking of glasses and the weight of unspoken regret. Rory felt the sting of Eva's words, a mix of truth and veiled criticism. She had, indeed, resisted change, clinging to the comfort of familiarity – her work at the Golden Empress, her flat above the bar, and the quiet, unassuming routine she'd built. "I suppose some of us prefer to grow into ourselves, rather than out of them," Rory countered, her voice even, a delicate balance of wit and warning. Eva's smile never wavered, but a tiny, almost imperceptible tension crept into her shoulders. "Perhaps. Though sometimes, Rory, it's in the letting go that we discover who we're meant to be." Silas, ever the perceptive host, inserted himself into the increasingly charged conversation. "Eva, what brings you back to London? We don't often get to see our... globe-trotting friends." As Eva launched into a tale of freelance writing and wanderlust, Rory listened, entranced by the narrative's gleaming surface. Beneath it, she sensed the murky undertows of Eva's true intentions, the unspoken reasons for this unexpected reunion. The Eva she once knew would never have been so... polished, so deliberately opaque. As the evening wore on, the conversation eddied and flowed, a delicate ballet of shared memories and carefully skirted truths. Rory found herself drawn into the undertow of their past, the "what ifs" and "maybes" threatening to upend the fragile equilibrium of her present. In the fleeting moments of eye contact with Eva, Rory glimpsed the shadows of choices made, of roads not taken, and the haunting question: what if their paths had converged sooner, before the relentless passage of time had reshaped them into these... altered versions of themselves? As the night's final notes began to fade, Eva glanced at her watch, a sleek, silver accessory that seemed an extension of her transformed self. "I should go, Rory. We have a lot to catch up on, but... another time?" Rory nodded, a mixture of emotions churning within her. As Eva stood, Silas handed her a small, unmarked package. "A little something for the road. Welcome back, Eva. Don't be a stranger." With a enigmatic smile, Eva took the package and vanished into the London night, leaving Rory to ponder the uneasy reconciliation of their past and present selves. The whiskey, once a comforting warmth, now felt like a dull ember, a reminder of the long, complicated journey that lay ahead – one that would force her to confront the inevitable question: who was she, truly, beyond the comforting familiarities of her life? As the door closed, Silas poured Rory another drink, his eyes, filled with a deep understanding, meeting hers. "Some people, Rory, come back into our lives to remind us of the paths we didn't take. The question is... what will you do with that reminder?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"comforting"
count3
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"enigmatic"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"fleeting"
count2
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count2
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
11
word"churning"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count2
highlights
0"comforting"
1"silk"
2"enigmatic"
3"silence"
4"fleeting"
5"weight"
6"unspoken"
7"wavered"
8"tension"
9"charged"
10"gleaming"
11"churning"
12"warmth"
13"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
84.35% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences41
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"felt the sting"
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences41
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences50
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords859
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount699
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora1
Carter1
Rory15
Blackwood1
Silas7
Eva15
Golden1
Empress1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Rory"
5"Blackwood"
6"Silas"
7"Eva"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
globalScore0.427
windowScore0.333
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing the waters of their reunited past"
1"felt like a dull ember, a reminder of t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount859
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
72.05% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean39.05
std15.7
cv0.402
sampleLengths
066
113
246
312
454
530
640
727
818
929
1047
1162
1227
1331
1428
1551
1644
1746
1840
1932
2071
2145
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs95
matches(empty)
28.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences50
ratio0.04
matches
0"She had, indeed, resisted change, clinging to the comfort of familiarity – her work at the Golden Empress, her flat above the bar, and the quiet, unassuming routine she'd built."
1"The whiskey, once a comforting warmth, now felt like a dull ember, a reminder of the long, complicated journey that lay ahead – one that would force her to confront the inevitable question: who was she, truly, beyond the comforting familiarities of her life?"
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount703
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"awkward, half-hearted hug,"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02702702702702703
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008534850640113799
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences50
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences50
mean17.18
std8.93
cv0.52
sampleLengths
017
127
222
313
413
520
613
712
89
925
1019
111
1216
1310
144
1517
1623
1717
1810
1913
205
2129
2210
2329
248
2518
2614
2730
2827
2914
3017
3112
3216
3319
3418
3510
364
3720
3824
3942
404
4125
4215
439
4410
4513
4627
4744
4818
4927
81.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences50
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount5
totalSentences40
matches
0"he asked, his deep voice"
1"She nodded, and Silas poured"
2"she said, her voice lower,"
3"Her gaze locked onto Rory's,"
4"She had, indeed, resisted change,"
ratio0.125
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount26
totalSentences40
matches
0"The distinctive green neon sign"
1"Silas Blackwood, the bar's proprietor,"
2"he asked, his deep voice"
3"She nodded, and Silas poured"
4"Rory's gaze drifted towards the"
5"The name escaped her lips"
6"Eva, her childhood friend, now"
7"Eva's eyes, once a deep,"
8"Eva's gaze, however, held a"
9"she said, her voice lower,"
10"Rory slid off the stool,"
11"The two women met in"
12"Silas intervened, his voice a"
13"Eva's smile, a thin, enigmatic"
14"Eva's laughter, a melodic, practiced"
15"Her gaze locked onto Rory's,"
16"The bar's ambient noise receded,"
17"Rory felt the sting of"
18"She had, indeed, resisted change,"
19"Rory countered, her voice even,"
ratio0.65
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Eva's eyes, once a deep, warm brown, now appeared an unsettling shade of grey, a color that seemed almost..."
1"Rory slid off the stool, her movements uncertain, as if testing the waters of their reunited past."
2"The two women met in an awkward, half-hearted hug, the type that spoke of long-standing intimacy struggling to bridge the chasm of years."
3"As the night's final notes began to fade, Eva glanced at her watch, a sleek, silver accessory that seemed an extension of her transformed self."
4"The whiskey, once a comforting warmth, now felt like a dull ember, a reminder of the long, complicated journey that lay ahead – one that would force her to conf…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.1058%