Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR61C3QX8VQHXWESRQCNPJ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, revealing Lucien in his tailored charcoal suit, the ivory-handled cane almost a casual extension of his posture. Aurora’s breath hitched, a involuntary reaction to the casual elegance that always seemed to radiate from him. "Lucien," she said, her voice steadier than she felt. "What are you doing here?" "I needed to see you." His heterochromatic eyes, one amber and the other black, locked onto hers, unyielding. She stepped back, letting him in, the tension between them palpable. He moved with the grace of a predator, every step measured, every gesture deliberate. The flat, usually a cozy haven above Silas' bar, felt smaller, the air thick with unspoken words. "You could've called," she said, closing the door behind him. The click of the lock echoed in the silence. "I couldn't wait." He placed his cane against the wall, his eyes never leaving hers. "There’s something we need to discuss." Aurora crossed her arms, a defensive gesture. "Can’t it wait?" "It can’t," he replied, his voice low and urgent. "Not after what happened." She remembered the last time they’d spoken, the clench of her jaw, the unshed tears. "What happened?" "The shadow manifestations," he said, his tone leaving no room for argument. "They’re getting stronger. More frequent." "Stronger?" She frowned, the memories of the recent events flooding back. The dark, formless shapes that seemed to follow her, the cold whispers in the night. "I’ve been dealing with them. What does that have to do with us?" "They’re connected, Aurora. To you, to me, to the past that haunts us both." Lucien moved closer, his presence overwhelming. "I’ve been researching. There’s a pattern, and it’s growing more dangerous." Her defences were crumbling, the weight of his words heavy in the room. "I don’t understand." "Remember the night we met? The night you first saw the shadows?" His voice was a whisper, yet it carried the weight of a thousand unspoken promises. "It wasn’t a coincidence. It was a warning. A sign that the boundary between our worlds is thinning." Aurora’s heart pounded, the room spinning slightly. "A warning? From who?" "From the realms that overlap with our own. Avaros, the realm of the demons. The same realm my father came from." He paused, his expression darkening. "The realms are bleeding into each other, and the shadows are the harbingers of this convergence." She felt a chill run down her spine. "What does that mean?" "It means that the dark forces are becoming more active. They’re trying to break through. To claim what they believe is theirs." Lucien’s gaze was intense, his eyes burning with a mix of fear and determination. "And they see you as a key. A bridge." Aurora’s eyes widened. "Me? Why me?" "Because you have a unique connection to both worlds. You’re human, yet you’ve encountered the supernatural. You have a resilience, a strength that they can sense. They’re drawn to you." He stepped closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. "We need to work together to stop them. To protect what remains of our world." She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. "How do we do that?" "There’s an ancient ritual. It’s dangerous, but it’s our only hope. We need to perform it before the boundary becomes too thin." Lucien’s eyes were fierce, his conviction unwavering. "I’ve already made the preparations. We need to do this tonight." Aurora’s mind raced, the implications of his words sinking in. "Tonight? That’s not enough time." "It’s all the time we have. The ritual must be performed under the waning moon. The window is small, and it’s closing fast." He reached out, his hand brushing against hers. "I need you, Aurora. I can’t do this alone." She hesitated, the memory of their past conflict still raw. But there was no denying the sincerity in his eyes, the urgency in his voice. "What do I need to do?" "Follow me. We need to go to the ritual site. It’s a hidden grove in the heart of the city." Lucien turned, his steps determined as he headed for the door. "We don’t have much time." Aurora followed, her resolve strengthening with each step. "Lead the way." The night air was crisp as they descended the stairs to the street below. Silas' bar was quiet, the usual cacophony of laughter and music muted this late. Aurora’s heart raced, the thrill of the unknown mingling with the fear of the unknown. Lucien’s presence was a comfort and a challenge, a reminder of the complexities of their past and the unknowns of their future. As they walked, the city seemed to come alive around them, the shadows of the buildings stretching and twisting in the dim light. Aurora felt a shiver run down her spine, the air charged with a supernatural energy. Lucien’s grip on her hand tightened, a silent reassurance. "We’re almost there," he said, his voice steady. The hidden grove lay just beyond a dilapidated fence, the trees forming a natural barrier. The moonlight filtered through the dense foliage, casting eerie patterns on the ground. Lucien led her to a small clearing, where a stone altar stood at the center. "This is it," he said, his voice tinged with reverence. "The ritual must be performed here." Aurora took a deep breath, the weight of their mission settling over her. "Let’s do this." Lucien nodded, his eyes gleaming with a mix of anticipation and fear. He began to chant, the ancient words resonating in the air. Aurora joined in, her voice steady and strong. The words felt strange on her tongue, yet they seemed to awaken something deep within her. As the ritual progressed, the air grew thicker, the shadows around them becoming more active. Aurora felt a pull, a connection to the ancient forces that Lucien had spoken of. Her heart pounded, her breath coming in short, sharp bursts. Suddenly, the ground beneath them trembled, a low rumble that shook the very roots of the trees. The shadows grew denser, reaching out like tendrils, trying to pull them apart. Aurora’s grip on Lucien’s hand tightened, her resolve unbreakable. "We can do this," she said, her voice steady. Lucien’s eyes met hers, a flash of determination in their depths. "Together." The final words of the ritual echoed through the grove, the energy reaching a crescendo. The shadows recoiled, the rumbling subsiding. Aurora and Lucien stood there, the world around them still, the air calm once more. It was over. The boundary between the worlds had been reinforced, the threat temporarily averted. Aurora took a deep breath, her heart still racing. "We did it." Lucien’s gaze softened, a rare smile playing on his lips. "Yes, we did." They stood there, the night around them peaceful, the tension between them easing. Aurora felt a sense of connection, a bond that had been forged in the crucible of their shared experience. There were still questions, still unresolved feelings, but for now, they were just two people who had faced the darkness together. "Thank you," she said, her voice low and sincere. Lucien’s smile widened, a warmth in his eyes that she had rarely seen. "Always, Aurora. Always."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms35
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"carried the weight"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"down her spine"
count2
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"raced"
count2
14
word"determined"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count2
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"reminder"
count1
18
word"charged"
count1
19
word"tinged"
count1
20
word"gleaming"
count1
21
word"anticipation"
count1
22
word"trembled"
count1
23
word"depths"
count1
24
word"racing"
count1
25
word"sense of"
count1
26
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"palpable"
2"predator"
3"measured"
4"unspoken"
5"echoed"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
9"carried the weight"
10"chill"
11"down her spine"
12"unwavering"
13"raced"
14"determined"
15"resolve"
16"cacophony"
17"reminder"
18"charged"
19"tinged"
20"gleaming"
21"anticipation"
22"trembled"
23"depths"
24"racing"
25"sense of"
26"warmth"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"felt a shiver"
39.34% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1193
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount791
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien15
Aurora15
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.552
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shapes that seemed to follow her, the cold whispers in the night"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1193
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean26.51
std15.57
cv0.587
sampleLengths
038
114
218
342
419
521
610
713
817
917
1039
1131
1216
1345
1411
1542
1612
1745
186
1954
2014
2140
2215
2340
2431
2536
2611
2765
2847
298
3043
3116
3216
3347
3440
3539
369
3712
3836
3915
4012
4113
4253
439
4416
95.09% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences69
matches
0"been reinforced"
1"been forged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"were crumbling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount371
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.029649595687331536
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.005390835579514825
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.05
std7.39
cv0.613
sampleLengths
021
117
29
35
418
511
614
717
810
99
1015
116
127
133
149
154
1615
172
1812
195
2011
2115
2213
2320
2411
2513
263
2727
2818
297
304
3126
3216
338
344
3536
369
373
383
3939
4015
419
425
4329
4411
4510
465
4731
489
4910
58.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners36
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Suddenly, the ground beneath them"
ratio0.014
69.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences69
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier"
1"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
2"She stepped back, letting him"
3"He moved with the grace"
4"she said, closing the door"
5"He placed his cane against"
6"he replied, his voice low"
7"She remembered the last time"
8"he said, his tone leaving"
9"She frowned, the memories of"
10"Her defences were crumbling, the"
11"His voice was a whisper,"
12"He paused, his expression darkening"
13"She felt a chill run"
14"He stepped closer, his voice"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"He reached out, his hand"
17"She hesitated, the memory of"
18"he said, his voice steady"
19"he said, his voice tinged"
ratio0.377
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences69
matches
0"The door creaked open, revealing"
1"Aurora’s breath hitched, a involuntary"
2"she said, her voice steadier"
3"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber"
4"She stepped back, letting him"
5"He moved with the grace"
6"The flat, usually a cozy"
7"she said, closing the door"
8"The click of the lock"
9"He placed his cane against"
10"Aurora crossed her arms, a"
11"he replied, his voice low"
12"She remembered the last time"
13"he said, his tone leaving"
14"She frowned, the memories of"
15"The dark, formless shapes that"
16"Lucien moved closer, his presence"
17"Her defences were crumbling, the"
18"His voice was a whisper,"
19"Aurora’s heart pounded, the room"
ratio0.928
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora felt a sense of connection, a bond that had been forged in the crucible of their shared experience."
1"There were still questions, still unresolved feelings, but for now, they were just two people who had faced the darkness together."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"he replied, his voice low and urgent"
2"he said, his tone leaving no room for argument"
3"She frowned, the memories of the recent events flooding back"
4"Lucien moved, his presence overwhelming"
5"He paused, his expression darkening"
6"He stepped, his voice dropping to a whisper"
7"He reached out, his hand brushing against hers"
8"he said, his voice steady"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"she said, her voice low and sincere"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.3296%