Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR63B4VV47GS97SV98X1MQ

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Duration:
24.3s
Cost:
$0.009348

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust. Quinn stepped over the police tape, her boots clicking against the cracked tiles. The air hummed with the low buzz of fluorescent lights, their sickly glow casting long shadows across the graffiti-scarred walls. A uniformed officer nodded at her as she passed, his face tight with the kind of tension that came from seeing something you couldn’t unsee. "Detective Quinn." DS Carter stood near the far platform, his hands shoved deep in his pockets. He was young, still had that eager shine to him, the kind that hadn’t been scrubbed off by too many nights spent staring at crime scene photos. "Glad you could make it." Quinn adjusted the strap of her bag, her fingers brushing the worn leather of her watch. "What’ve we got?" Carter gestured toward the body. A man, mid-forties, sprawled across the tracks. His suit was expensive, tailored, the kind of thing you didn’t wear to a place like this unless you had a damn good reason. Or a very bad one. His face was frozen in an expression that wasn’t quite fear, wasn’t quite surprise—more like he’d seen something impossible and hadn’t had time to process it. "Victim’s name is Richard Voss," Carter said. "Financial consultant. No priors, no known enemies. Wallet’s still on him, cash intact. No signs of struggle." Quinn crouched beside the body, her knees popping. She didn’t touch anything, just let her eyes trace the details. The man’s tie was loose, his shirt unbuttoned at the collar. His shoes were scuffed, the leather worn at the heels. Not the kind of wear you got from a day at the office. "Time of death?" "ME’s initial estimate is between midnight and two AM. No defensive wounds, no ligature marks. Tox screen’s pending, but no obvious signs of poisoning." Quinn stood, her gaze flicking to the platform above. A single set of footprints in the dust led to the edge, then stopped. No scuff marks, no signs of hesitation. Like he’d just... stepped off. "CCTV?" Carter shook his head. "Station’s been abandoned since the ‘90s. No cameras, no power. The only reason we found him is because a homeless guy sleeping in the tunnels called it in." Quinn exhaled through her nose, her fingers tapping against her thigh. "You said no signs of struggle. What about the body itself?" Carter hesitated. "That’s the thing. ME says it’s like he just... fell. No broken bones, no trauma consistent with a fall from that height. Just a few scrapes, like he landed wrong." Quinn’s jaw tightened. She stepped closer to the edge of the platform, peering down at the tracks. The body lay directly beneath, as if he’d dropped straight down. No momentum, no roll. Just a clean, vertical descent. "Any witnesses?" "None that we’ve found. But—" Carter pulled out his notebook, flipping to a page. "There’s this. Found it in his pocket." He handed her a small, crumpled slip of paper. Quinn smoothed it out. A single line was scrawled in neat, precise handwriting: *"The Veil Market moves tonight."* She stared at the words, her pulse kicking up a notch. She’d heard whispers of the Veil Market before—rumors, really. A black market for things that didn’t exist. Things that shouldn’t exist. She’d dismissed them as urban legends, the kind of stories cops told each other over bad coffee to pass the time. But DS Morris had mentioned it once. Right before he died. Quinn folded the paper carefully, tucking it into her own pocket. "You said the ME found no trauma. What about the blood?" Carter blinked. "What blood?" Quinn pointed to the victim’s temple. A thin, dark line ran from his hairline down to his jaw. "That’s not dirt." Carter leaned in, squinting. "Huh. Looks like... a sigil?" Quinn’s stomach twisted. She’d seen something like it before, in Morris’s notes. A symbol, half-finished, scrawled in the margins of a case file. She’d thought it was just a doodle. She turned back to the body. The man’s hands were clean, his nails trimmed. No dirt under them, no signs of a fight. But his right sleeve was pushed up, revealing a patch of skin just above his wrist. A faint, glowing mark pulsed there, like a brand. Quinn’s breath hitched. She’d seen that before, too. "Carter," she said slowly, "did the ME mention anything about... unusual readings?" Carter frowned. "Unusual how?" "EMF. Radiation. Anything that doesn’t fit." Carter shook his head. "Not that I heard. Why?" Quinn didn’t answer. She was too busy staring at the mark on the man’s wrist. It wasn’t a tattoo. It wasn’t a burn. It was something else. Something that didn’t belong in this world. She pulled out her phone, snapping a photo of the mark before the ME’s team could cover the body. Then she turned to Carter, her voice low. "We need to talk to the homeless guy who called this in. Now." Carter opened his mouth to protest, but Quinn was already walking away, her boots echoing against the concrete. She could feel it in her bones—this wasn’t just another case. This was the same thing that had taken Morris. And she was going to find out what it was.
total_cost0.009348

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.083
77.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount880
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"pulse"
2"stomach"
3"pulsed"
4"echoing"
5"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords874
ratio0.006
matches
0"\"The Veil Market moves tonight.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount670
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Carter"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Carter12
Quinn13
Veil1
Market1
Morris3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.53
windowScore0.667
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite fear, wasn’t quite surprise—more like he’d seen something impossible and hadn’t had time to process it"
1"quite surprise—more like he’d seen something impossible and hadn’t had time to process it"
2"something like it before, in Morris’s notes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount874
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean23.62
std17.93
cv0.759
sampleLengths
068
148
219
367
424
553
63
724
835
91
1032
1122
1232
1337
142
1521
1622
175
1853
1911
2022
214
2221
239
2430
2548
268
2712
284
296
309
3127
327
3327
3413
3538
3610
81.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"been scrubbed"
1"was frozen"
2"were scuffed"
3"was scrawled"
4"was pushed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences93
ratio0.032
matches
0"His face was frozen in an expression that wasn’t quite fear, wasn’t quite surprise—more like he’d seen something impossible and hadn’t had time to process it."
1"She’d heard whispers of the Veil Market before—rumors, really."
2"She could feel it in her bones—this wasn’t just another case."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount676
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"other over bad coffee"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03550295857988166
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0073964497041420114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean9.4
std6.63
cv0.706
sampleLengths
010
113
220
325
416
527
65
716
83
95
107
1124
125
1326
147
1517
168
1711
1811
1910
2013
213
2224
239
2414
257
263
272
281
294
3028
3111
3211
332
3430
353
3614
3711
384
395
402
4114
427
439
444
459
465
4711
489
498
64.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41935483870967744
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners39
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences68
matches
0"Just a clean, vertical descent."
1"Right before he died."
2"Then she turned to Carter,"
ratio0.044
96.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences68
matches
0"He was young, still had"
1"His suit was expensive, tailored,"
2"His face was frozen in"
3"She didn’t touch anything, just"
4"His shoes were scuffed, the"
5"She stepped closer to the"
6"He handed her a small,"
7"She stared at the words,"
8"She’d heard whispers of the"
9"She’d dismissed them as urban"
10"She’d seen something like it"
11"She’d thought it was just"
12"She turned back to the"
13"She’d seen that before, too."
14"she said slowly"
15"She was too busy staring"
16"It wasn’t a tattoo."
17"It wasn’t a burn."
18"It was something else."
19"She pulled out her phone,"
ratio0.309
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences68
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Quinn stepped over the police"
2"The air hummed with the"
3"A uniformed officer nodded at"
4"DS Carter stood near the"
5"He was young, still had"
6"Quinn adjusted the strap of"
7"Carter gestured toward the body."
8"A man, mid-forties, sprawled across"
9"His suit was expensive, tailored,"
10"His face was frozen in"
11"Quinn crouched beside the body,"
12"She didn’t touch anything, just"
13"The man’s tie was loose,"
14"His shoes were scuffed, the"
15"Quinn stood, her gaze flicking"
16"A single set of footprints"
17"Carter shook his head."
18"Quinn exhaled through her nose,"
19"Quinn’s jaw tightened."
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A uniformed officer nodded at her as she passed, his face tight with the kind of tension that came from seeing something you couldn’t unsee."
1"He was young, still had that eager shine to him, the kind that hadn’t been scrubbed off by too many nights spent staring at crime scene photos."
2"His face was frozen in an expression that wasn’t quite fear, wasn’t quite surprise—more like he’d seen something impossible and hadn’t had time to process it."
3"Carter opened his mouth to protest, but Quinn was already walking away, her boots echoing against the concrete."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.083
leniency0.167
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.9320%