Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR67XQHS4W6EC04YQ2GJA2

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.041070
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's breath caught as she stepped through the ancient oak archway into Isolde's grove. The air shifted, became heavier with possibility, and the sounds of London traffic faded to nothing. Nyx's shadowy form drifted beside her, their violet eyes the only distinct feature in their fluid silhouette. "The Veil is paper-thin here." Nyx's whispered words rode the strange breeze that seemed to blow from everywhere and nowhere at once. The grove sprawled before them, far larger than should have been possible in Richmond Park. Massive standing stones of gnarled oak wood formed a rough circle, their surfaces writhing with carved symbols that shifted when viewed from different angles. Perpetual twilight bathed everything in silver-purple light, though Aurora could have sworn it had been mid-afternoon when they'd entered. "Watch your step." Isolde glided ahead of them, her bare feet passing over wildflowers without bending a single stem. "The paths here change with the moon's mood." Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant at her throat. It pulsed with unusual warmth, responding to the grove's otherworldly energy. The carved symbols on the standing stones flickered in time with its rhythm. "These flowers..." She crouched to examine a cluster of blooms unlike anything she'd seen before. Their petals caught the strange light and reflected it in impossible colors. "They're beautiful." "And deadly, if you're not careful." Isolde's silver hair danced in the directionless breeze. "Beauty and danger walk hand in hand in the spaces between realms." They ventured deeper into the grove. The ground sloped gently downward, leading them through patches of luminescent moss and beneath trees that bore fruit of spun glass. Aurora's hand kept straying to the Fae blade at her hip, its moonsilver surface gleaming with reflected light. "The air tastes like memories," Aurora murmured, touching her lips. Nyx's form rippled. "Time moves differently here. What you're tasting might be yesterday's rain or tomorrow's dawn." A clearing opened before them, centered around a pool of water so still it looked like polished obsidian. Aurora's steps slowed as they approached. The surface reflected nothing – not the strange sky above, nor their faces when they peered down. "The Seeing Pool." Isolde knelt at its edge, her movements graceful and practiced. "It shows truth to those pure of heart, and madness to those who would abuse its power." "I've seen something similar in Dymas," Nyx said, their form coalescing slightly. "Though there, the pools run with wine instead of water." The trees around them creaked and swayed, though the breeze had died. Aurora's fingers tightened around the Fae blade's hilt as shadows deepened between the ancient trunks. The Heartstone's warmth intensified. "The grove knows we're here," Isolde said. Her pale lavender eyes reflected the pool's darkness. "It's deciding whether to trust us." Aurora's crescent scar tingled as she reached toward the water's surface. Before her fingers could touch it, ripples spread across the pool – though nothing had disturbed it. "Look." Nyx's whisper carried a note of awe. Lights rose from the water like stars being born. They drifted upward, casting rainbow reflections on the standing stones. The carved symbols blazed in response, and for a moment, Aurora could read them – ancient words of power and protection, promises and warnings interwoven. "The grove accepts you." Isolde's lips curved in a rare smile. "Few mortals have ever received such a welcome." The lights swirled around them in a dance of color and shadow. Where they touched Aurora's skin, they left behind a tingling sensation like mint and starlight. Nyx reached out, their shadowy form rippling as the lights passed through them. "There's power here," they said. "Old power. Different from Hel's corruption or the Fae Courts' glamour. Something... purer." "The grove remembers when the Veil was younger," Isolde said. "When the boundaries between worlds were less rigid. What you feel is an echo of that time, preserved in this pocket of space between realities."
created_at"2026-02-19T10:47:33.564Z" 2/19/2026, 10:47:33 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount650
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount650
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"gleaming"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"dance"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"otherworldly"
3"flickered"
4"gleaming"
5"whisper"
6"dance"
7"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences41
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences51
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords650
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount484
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Isolde7
London1
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora10
Heartstone2
Fae2
Nyx6
Lights1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
4"Lights"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
globalScore0.467
windowScore0.667
7.14% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"breeze that seemed to blow from everywhere and nowhere at once"
1"looked like polished obsidian"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount650
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
75.53% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean29.55
std12.24
cv0.414
sampleLengths
047
122
258
327
432
529
626
745
810
917
1041
1130
1222
1331
1421
1528
168
1744
1819
1940
2018
2135
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs91
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences51
ratio0.059
matches
0"The surface reflected nothing – not the strange sky above, nor their faces when they peered down."
1"Before her fingers could touch it, ripples spread across the pool – though nothing had disturbed it."
2"The carved symbols blazed in response, and for a moment, Aurora could read them – ancient words of power and protection, promises and warnings interwoven."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount483
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.028985507246376812
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008281573498964804
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences51
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences51
mean12.75
std5.44
cv0.427
sampleLengths
014
116
217
322
415
524
619
719
88
98
1011
1113
1215
1312
142
1514
1612
176
1821
1918
2010
213
2214
2318
246
2517
2613
2717
2812
2910
3012
3115
324
337
348
356
3611
3717
388
399
4010
4125
4211
438
4412
4515
4613
475
4813
4910
73.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.49019607843137253
totalSentences51
uniqueOpeners25
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences38
matches
0"It pulsed with unusual warmth,"
1"She crouched to examine a"
2"Their petals caught the strange"
3"They ventured deeper into the"
4"Her pale lavender eyes reflected"
5"They drifted upward, casting rainbow"
ratio0.158
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences38
matches
0"Aurora's breath caught as she"
1"The air shifted, became heavier"
2"Nyx's shadowy form drifted beside"
3"Nyx's whispered words rode the"
4"The grove sprawled before them,"
5"Isolde glided ahead of them,"
6"Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant"
7"It pulsed with unusual warmth,"
8"The carved symbols on the"
9"She crouched to examine a"
10"Their petals caught the strange"
11"Isolde's silver hair danced in"
12"They ventured deeper into the"
13"The ground sloped gently downward,"
14"Aurora's hand kept straying to"
15"Aurora murmured, touching her lips"
16"Nyx's form rippled."
17"A clearing opened before them,"
18"Aurora's steps slowed as they"
19"The surface reflected nothing –"
ratio0.868
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences38
matches
0"Before her fingers could touch"
ratio0.026
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Massive standing stones of gnarled oak wood formed a rough circle, their surfaces writhing with carved symbols that shifted when viewed from different angles."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Isolde knelt, her movements graceful and practiced"
1"Nyx said, their form coalescing slightly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.091
79.5356%