Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR6A5RQQGRXRQB5CJY0K4G

Run Details

Duration:
34.2s
Cost:
$0.000591
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door of The Raven's Nest creaked open, and a gust of cold London wind followed Aurora Carter inside. She shook off her coat, revealing her straight, shoulder-length black hair and bright blue eyes. The bar was dimly lit, the walls adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance cast an eerie glow inside. She scanned the room, her gaze landing on Silas Blackwood behind the bar. He gave her a nod, his hazel eyes twinkling with recognition. Rory made her way to the bar, the scent of old wood and faint whisky enveloping her. "Silas," she greeted, her voice steady. "How’s business?" "Slow night," he replied, polishing a glass. "But you know how it goes. What can I get you?" "Just a water, thanks." He placed the glass in front of her, and she took a sip, her eyes lingering on the room. It was a place she found comfort in, a steady anchor in her ever-shifting life. She was about to turn away when a familiar figure caught her eye. Sitting at a corner table, shoulders hunched, was a man she hadn't seen in years—Evan, her ex. Her heart skipped a beat, and she felt a pang of unease. She hadn't seen him since she fled Cardiff, leaving behind the abuse and the lies. She forced herself to take a deep breath, pushing down the memories that threatened to overwhelm her. Evan looked up, his eyes locking with hers. For a moment, the world seemed to pause. Then, he stood, his movements slow and deliberate. He approached the bar, his eyes never leaving hers. "Rory," he said, his voice low and gentle, as if trying to summon a memory. She turned to face him, her expression unreadable. "Evan," she acknowledged, her voice cool and detached. He leaned against the bar, his face drawn and tired. "It’s been a long time." "Too long," she replied, her words laced with a hint of bitterness. "What are you doing here?" "Just passing through. I heard Silas runs a place here. Thought I’d check it out." Silas, sensing the tension, stepped back, giving them a moment of privacy. Rory’s eyes flicked to the bar owner, a silent thank you. She turned her attention back to Evan, her mind racing. She had moved on, built a new life in London, but seeing him brought it all back—the fear, the pain, the regret. "You look well," Evan said, breaking the silence. "Better than I remember." She raised an eyebrow. "You were never one to notice much, Evan. How’s Cardiff?" "Same as ever. I moved back. Started a new job. Trying to turn things around." Rory took another sip of water, her hand steady. "That’s good to hear," she said, her tone devoid of any real emotion. "I’m glad you found your way." He shifted uncomfortably. "I wanted to say... I’m sorry. For everything." The words hung in the air, heavy with unspoken weight. Rory’s eyes narrowed, a mix of curiosity and skepticism. "Sorry doesn’t fix what you did. It doesn’t make the bruises go away or the nights I spent crying myself to sleep disappear." Evan’s face fell, and he looked genuinely remorseful. "I know. I can’t change the past. But I can try to make it right. I’ve been thinking a lot about what I did, and I’m not proud of it. I’ve been seeing a therapist, trying to understand why I was such a monster to you." Rory’s expression softened slightly, but the walls she had built remained intact. "It’s good that you’re taking responsibility. But it’s a long road, and it’s not just about you. It’s about the people you hurt." He nodded, his eyes meeting hers. "I understand. I just wanted you to know that I’m trying." She sighed, the tension in her shoulders easing a bit. "I appreciate that. But for me, it’s not about forgiveness. It’s about moving on. I’ve built a new life here, and I’m happy. That’s what I need to focus on." Evan nodded, his face a mix of relief and regret. "I get it. I just wanted to see you, to make sure you’re doing okay. You deserve better, Rory. You always did." She forced a small smile. "Thanks, Evan. I’m doing better than I ever thought I would. And you should keep working on yourself. It’s never too late to be a better person." He nodded, a hint of a smile tugging at his lips. "I’ll do that. Take care, Rory." She watched as he walked away, the weight of their shared past still lingering. She took a deep breath, the air in the bar feeling a little lighter. She turned to Silas, who had been watching the exchange with a thoughtful expression. "You okay?" he asked, his voice gentle. "Yeah," she replied, her voice steady. "Just unexpected. But I’m good." Silas nodded, understanding. "He seemed sincere." "He was. But it’s not my job to fix him. It’s his." Silas raised his glass in a silent toast. "To new beginnings and old friends," he said, his eyes warm. "To that," Rory agreed, clinking her glass against his. She took another sip of water, the tension in her muscles finally beginning to release. The past was a part of her, but it no longer defined her. She was Rory Carter, and she was building a life she could be proud of, one day at a time.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:47:35.869Z" 2/19/2026, 10:47:35 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount915
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount915
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"pang"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"tension"
count3
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"skipped a beat"
3"pang"
4"unreadable"
5"tension"
6"flicked"
7"racing"
8"silence"
9"eyebrow"
10"unspoken"
11"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences55
matches
0"a pang of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences55
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords909
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount591
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Aurora1
Carter2
Silas5
Blackwood1
Evan6
Cardiff1
Rory7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Evan"
7"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.908
windowScore1
94.44% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if trying to summon a memory"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount909
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean28.41
std19.4
cv0.683
sampleLengths
085
125
218
34
464
544
648
716
815
917
1015
1155
1212
1314
1415
1528
1611
1742
1854
1935
2017
2140
2232
2332
2417
2542
267
2711
286
2912
3019
3157
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was building"
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences77
ratio0.026
matches
0"Sitting at a corner table, shoulders hunched, was a man she hadn't seen in years—Evan, her ex."
1"She had moved on, built a new life in London, but seeing him brought it all back—the fear, the pain, the regret."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount597
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.023450586264656615
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008375209380234505
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.81
std6.87
cv0.582
sampleLengths
019
115
214
313
413
511
617
76
82
97
1011
114
1219
1315
1413
1517
1612
1715
1817
198
208
218
229
2315
248
258
2610
275
2812
295
3015
3112
3211
3310
3422
358
364
374
3810
3915
409
4113
426
433
448
4510
469
4723
488
4946
47.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.33766233766233766
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners26
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then, he stood, his movements"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences55
matches
0"She shook off her coat,"
1"She scanned the room, her"
2"He gave her a nod,"
3"she greeted, her voice steady"
4"he replied, polishing a glass"
5"He placed the glass in"
6"It was a place she"
7"She was about to turn"
8"Her heart skipped a beat,"
9"She hadn't seen him since"
10"She forced herself to take"
11"He approached the bar, his"
12"he said, his voice low"
13"She turned to face him,"
14"she acknowledged, her voice cool"
15"He leaned against the bar,"
16"she replied, her words laced"
17"She turned her attention back"
18"She had moved on, built"
19"She raised an eyebrow."
ratio0.618
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences55
matches
0"The door of The Raven's"
1"She shook off her coat,"
2"The bar was dimly lit,"
3"The distinctive green neon sign"
4"She scanned the room, her"
5"He gave her a nod,"
6"Rory made her way to"
7"she greeted, her voice steady"
8"he replied, polishing a glass"
9"He placed the glass in"
10"It was a place she"
11"She was about to turn"
12"Her heart skipped a beat,"
13"She hadn't seen him since"
14"She forced herself to take"
15"Evan looked up, his eyes"
16"He approached the bar, his"
17"he said, his voice low"
18"She turned to face him,"
19"she acknowledged, her voice cool"
ratio0.945
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She forced herself to take a deep breath, pushing down the memories that threatened to overwhelm her."
1"She turned to Silas, who had been watching the exchange with a thoughtful expression."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she greeted, her voice steady"
1"she acknowledged, her voice cool and detached"
2"she said, her tone devoid of any real emotion"
3"he asked, his voice gentle"
4"she replied, her voice steady"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Rory agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.303
leniency0.606
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.121
77.5176%