Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR6QAPBKSTB177TPGPAV6C

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Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.001219
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the stone archway, her senses immediately assaulted by the otherworldly atmosphere of the Fae Grove. The air hung thick with a scent of blooming wildflowers, mingling with the earthy aroma of moss-covered stones. The boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones seemed to pulse with a faint, mystical energy that stirred the hair at the back of her neck. She glanced over her shoulder at Nyx, whose form wavered like a shadow cast by a flickering candle. The shade's violet eyes glimmered faintly in the half-light. "Are you sure this is it?" Rory whispered, her voice barely audible over the distant rustling of leaves. Nyx's form solidified momentarily, their whisper-like voice carrying on a gentle breeze. "The Grove is as elusive as a dream. But yes, this is the place Isolde calls home." Rory nodded, taking a deep breath to steady her nerves. She tugged at the silver chain around her neck, feeling the warmth of the Heartstone Pendant. The gemstone pulsed faintly, as if responding to the shift in the Veil. She turned to Isolde, who stood a few paces behind them, her silver hair cascading down to her waist. The Half-Fae's lavender eyes peered at them through the dappled light filtering through the canopy. "Be cautious," Isolde warned, her voice a soft melody. "The Grove exists in a pocket between realms. Time moves differently here. An hour within could be mere minutes or days without." Rory nodded, her eyes scanning the grove. The ground was carpeted with a thick layer of soft, green moss. Wildflowers of every color imaginable bloomed year-round, their vibrant hues a stark contrast to the muted tones of the world beyond. She stepped forward, her foot sinking slightly into the moss. It was like walking on a plush, living cushion. "Where do we go from here?" she asked, her voice steady but tinged with curiosity. Nyx's form shifted again, a silhouette of living shadow. "Follow the path. It will lead us to the heart of the Grove." Rory led the way, her steps cautious but determined. The path was narrow and winding, bordered by intertwining roots and vine-like plants. As they moved deeper into the grove, the air seemed to grow even thicker, filled with a sense of ancient magic. The sounds of birds and insects grew louder, a symphony of natural sounds that felt almost orchestrated. "Is it just me, or is it getting warmer?" Rory asked, wiping a bead of sweat from her brow. Isolde smiled faintly. "The Grove is a place of life and growth. The warmth you feel is the essence of the Fae realm seeping through the Veil." Nyx's whisper-like voice carried on the wind. "And theVeil is weakest here, especially on the solstice. You are walking in a space between worlds." Rory paused, her eyes catching the faint shimmer of the Veil. It was a ghostly distortion, visible only to those attuned to the supernatural. She reached out a hand, feeling the cool, tingling sensation as her fingers brushed against the barrier. It pulsed gently, as if acknowledging her presence. "Remarkable," she murmured, her voice filled with awe. Isolde stepped closer, her eyes never leaving Rory's. "The Grove is a place of power. It is said that those who dare to seek the heart of the Grove may find answers to their deepest questions." Rory's brow furrowed. "What kind of answers?" Isolde's smile widened, though it did not quite reach her eyes. "Only the Grove can reveal that. But beware, the path is not without its trials." The path began to widen, leading them to a clearing where the trees thinned, and the sky opened up. The light was a soft, golden hue, casting long, dancing shadows across the ground. In the center of the clearing stood a large, ancient oak tree. Its branches stretched toward the sky, and its trunk was gnarled with age. At the base of the tree, a small stone basin filled with clear, shimmering water caught Rory's eye. "Is that...?" Rory began, her voice trailing off as she approached the basin. Isolde nodded, her voice a blend of reverence and caution. "The Mirror of Truth. It is said to reveal the essence of one's soul. But it is not for the faint of heart." Rory's gaze flickered to Nyx, who remained silent, their form a wraith-like presence in the clearing. She took a deep breath and stepped closer to the basin. The water was perfectly still, reflecting the sky and the trees around them. She hesitated, then leaned in, her reflection coming into focus. For a moment, she saw herself as she was—black hair cascading over her shoulders, bright blue eyes filled with determination. But as she stared deeper, the reflection began to shift. The image of her face blurred, replaced by fleeting visions of the past and glimpses of the future. She saw herself in different moments, each one a snapshot of her journey. She saw theWeight of the Heartstone Pendant, the cold touch of the Fae-Forged Blade, and the shadows that seemed to follow her every step. A shiver ran down her spine as the visions intensified. She saw herself standing at a crossroads, the path forward uncertain but filled with potential. The Mirror of Truth revealed not just her past, but the choices that lay ahead. Each vision was a challenge, a test of her resolve and strength. Finally, the visions faded, and the water returned to its calm, reflective state. Rory pulled back, her breath shaky but her eyes clear. She turned to Isolde and Nyx, a newfound resolve in her voice. "I understand," she said, her voice steady. "The Grove is a place of discovery. And the answers we seek are within us." Isolde's eyes gleamed with approval. "Well spoken, Rory. The journey has only just begun." Nyx's form wavered, their whisper-like voice carrying a hint of a smile. "The path ahead is as mysterious as the Grove itself. But you have the strength to face it." Rory took a deep breath, feeling the weight of the Heartstone Pendant and the cold touch of the Fae-Forged Blade. She knew the road ahead would be fraught with challenges, but she was ready. With a determined nod, she led the way deeper into the Grove, each step bringing her closer to the heart of the ancient, otherworldly place.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1068
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"otherworldly"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"wavered"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"cascading"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"tinged"
count1
10
word"determined"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"symphony"
count1
13
word"remarkable"
count1
14
word"furrowed"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"fleeting"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"potential"
count1
20
word"resolve"
count2
21
word"newfound"
count1
22
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"otherworldly"
1"pulse"
2"wavered"
3"whisper"
4"warmth"
5"pulsed"
6"cascading"
7"scanning"
8"stark"
9"tinged"
10"determined"
11"sense of"
12"symphony"
13"remarkable"
14"furrowed"
15"dancing"
16"flickered"
17"fleeting"
18"down her spine"
19"potential"
20"resolve"
21"newfound"
22"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
72.92% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells4
narrationSentences64
matches
0"filled with awe"
1"d with awe"
2"filled with determination"
3"d with determination"
31.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1061
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount828
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae4
Grove2
Nyx7
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Veil2
Isolde8
Half-Fae1
Rory13
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Mirror1
Truth1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Rory"
3"Truth"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.715
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if responding to the shift in the Veil"
1"as if acknowledging her presence"
2"not quite reach her eyes"
3"shadows that seemed to follow her every step"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.943
wordCount1061
matches
0"not just her past, but the choices"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean37.89
std23.04
cv0.608
sampleLengths
089
118
229
373
431
559
615
722
860
919
1027
1124
1249
138
1436
157
1626
1776
1813
1933
2050
2185
2252
2335
2422
2514
2630
2759
94.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"was gnarled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences76
ratio0.013
matches
0"For a moment, she saw herself as she was—black hair cascading over her shoulders, bright blue eyes filled with determination."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.032335329341317366
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.016766467065868262
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
94.61% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean13.96
std5.4
cv0.387
sampleLengths
018
118
226
318
49
518
612
717
810
916
1013
1119
1215
139
1422
157
1612
1721
1810
199
2015
219
2213
239
2413
2521
2617
2719
283
2924
307
3117
3211
3313
3417
358
368
378
3828
393
404
4111
4215
4319
4414
4512
4613
4718
4813
4910
59.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3815789473684211
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners29
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Finally, the visions faded, and"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences64
matches
0"She glanced over her shoulder"
1"She tugged at the silver"
2"She turned to Isolde, who"
3"She stepped forward, her foot"
4"It was like walking on"
5"she asked, her voice steady"
6"It was a ghostly distortion,"
7"She reached out a hand,"
8"It pulsed gently, as if"
9"she murmured, her voice filled"
10"Its branches stretched toward the"
11"She took a deep breath"
12"She hesitated, then leaned in,"
13"She saw herself in different"
14"She saw theWeight of the"
15"She saw herself standing at"
16"She turned to Isolde and"
17"she said, her voice steady"
18"She knew the road ahead"
ratio0.297
14.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences64
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the stone"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"The boundary marked by ancient"
3"She glanced over her shoulder"
4"The shade's violet eyes glimmered"
5"Rory whispered, her voice barely"
6"Nyx's form solidified momentarily, their"
7"Rory nodded, taking a deep"
8"She tugged at the silver"
9"The gemstone pulsed faintly, as"
10"She turned to Isolde, who"
11"The Half-Fae's lavender eyes peered"
12"Isolde warned, her voice a"
13"Rory nodded, her eyes scanning"
14"The ground was carpeted with"
15"Wildflowers of every color imaginable"
16"She stepped forward, her foot"
17"It was like walking on"
18"she asked, her voice steady"
19"Nyx's form shifted again, a"
ratio0.891
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones seemed to pulse with a faint, mystical energy that stirred the hair at the back of her neck."
1"She turned to Isolde, who stood a few paces behind them, her silver hair cascading down to her waist."
2"The sounds of birds and insects grew louder, a symphony of natural sounds that felt almost orchestrated."
3"Rory's gaze flickered to Nyx, who remained silent, their form a wraith-like presence in the clearing."
4"She saw theWeight of the Heartstone Pendant, the cold touch of the Fae-Forged Blade, and the shadows that seemed to follow her every step."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rory whispered, her voice barely audible over the distant rustling of leaves"
1"Isolde warned, her voice a soft melody"
2"she asked, her voice steady but tinged with curiosity"
3"Rory began, her voice trailing off as she approached the basin"
4"she said, her voice steady"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.316
leniency0.632
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.316
70.7439%