| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1068 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "otherworldly" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "stark" | | 9 | "tinged" | | 10 | "determined" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "symphony" | | 13 | "remarkable" | | 14 | "furrowed" | | 15 | "dancing" | | 16 | "flickered" | | 17 | "fleeting" | | 18 | "down her spine" | | 19 | "potential" | | 20 | "resolve" | | 21 | "newfound" | | 22 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "shiver down spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "A shiver ran down her spine" |
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| 72.92% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "filled with awe" | | 1 | "d with awe" | | 2 | "filled with determination" | | 3 | "d with determination" |
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| 31.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1061 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 828 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Mirror | 1 | | Truth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Half-Fae" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Truth" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.715 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to the shift in the Veil" | | 1 | "as if acknowledging her presence" | | 2 | "not quite reach her eyes" | | 3 | "shadows that seemed to follow her every step" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.943 | | wordCount | 1061 | | matches | | 0 | "not just her past, but the choices" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 37.89 | | std | 23.04 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 73 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 60 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 76 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 85 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 59 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "was carpeted" | | 1 | "was gnarled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 133 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, she saw herself as she was—black hair cascading over her shoulders, bright blue eyes filled with determination." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 835 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.032335329341317366 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016766467065868262 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 94.61% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.96 | | std | 5.4 | | cv | 0.387 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 59.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3815789473684211 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 52.08% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, the visions faded, and" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced over her shoulder" | | 1 | "She tugged at the silver" | | 2 | "She turned to Isolde, who" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, her foot" | | 4 | "It was like walking on" | | 5 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 6 | "It was a ghostly distortion," | | 7 | "She reached out a hand," | | 8 | "It pulsed gently, as if" | | 9 | "she murmured, her voice filled" | | 10 | "Its branches stretched toward the" | | 11 | "She took a deep breath" | | 12 | "She hesitated, then leaned in," | | 13 | "She saw herself in different" | | 14 | "She saw theWeight of the" | | 15 | "She saw herself standing at" | | 16 | "She turned to Isolde and" | | 17 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 18 | "She knew the road ahead" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 14.69% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the stone" | | 1 | "The air hung thick with" | | 2 | "The boundary marked by ancient" | | 3 | "She glanced over her shoulder" | | 4 | "The shade's violet eyes glimmered" | | 5 | "Rory whispered, her voice barely" | | 6 | "Nyx's form solidified momentarily, their" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, taking a deep" | | 8 | "She tugged at the silver" | | 9 | "The gemstone pulsed faintly, as" | | 10 | "She turned to Isolde, who" | | 11 | "The Half-Fae's lavender eyes peered" | | 12 | "Isolde warned, her voice a" | | 13 | "Rory nodded, her eyes scanning" | | 14 | "The ground was carpeted with" | | 15 | "Wildflowers of every color imaginable" | | 16 | "She stepped forward, her foot" | | 17 | "It was like walking on" | | 18 | "she asked, her voice steady" | | 19 | "Nyx's form shifted again, a" |
| | ratio | 0.891 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The boundary marked by ancient oak standing stones seemed to pulse with a faint, mystical energy that stirred the hair at the back of her neck." | | 1 | "She turned to Isolde, who stood a few paces behind them, her silver hair cascading down to her waist." | | 2 | "The sounds of birds and insects grew louder, a symphony of natural sounds that felt almost orchestrated." | | 3 | "Rory's gaze flickered to Nyx, who remained silent, their form a wraith-like presence in the clearing." | | 4 | "She saw theWeight of the Heartstone Pendant, the cold touch of the Fae-Forged Blade, and the shadows that seemed to follow her every step." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory whispered, her voice barely audible over the distant rustling of leaves" | | 1 | "Isolde warned, her voice a soft melody" | | 2 | "she asked, her voice steady but tinged with curiosity" | | 3 | "Rory began, her voice trailing off as she approached the basin" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.316 | | leniency | 0.632 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.316 | |