| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Herrera said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 68.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 952 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.97% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 952 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resolve" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "furrowed" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "dancing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 937 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 833 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | Soho | 1 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 7 | | Westminster | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Westminster" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.84 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if weighing the options, then slowly slipped the bone token into his pocket and took a step back" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 937 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 28.39 | | std | 17.23 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "were vibrating" | | 1 | "was happening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a faint scent—something metallic and strange—drifted through the air." | | 1 | "The man stepped into view—her quarry, slipping behind a ragged metal door embedded into the wall, which seemed to ripple unnaturally beneath his hand." | | 2 | "But another part—the cautious, seasoned element—reminded her of what she knew." | | 3 | "She remembered Herrera’s reputation—an off-the-books medic who’d seen things no civilian should." | | 4 | "The flickering sign above it—a bright, neon green—gleamed with the same unnatural hue as the alley’s shadows." | | 5 | "Shafts of uneven light spilled from cracks in the ceiling, illuminating shelves lined with odd artifacts—crystals, jars of shimmering powders, and items that looked straight from a nightmare." | | 6 | "A faint rumble of distant voices from further back told of a secret gathering—something big, something dangerous." | | 7 | "Across the room, a figure lurked near an alcove—a man wrapped in dark cloth, clutching a bundle that glimmered faintly." | | 8 | "She aimed her flashlight, its beam hitting the man’s face, catching a flash of silver—a bone token tucked into his palm." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 565 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03893805309734513 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017699115044247787 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 11.86 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.568 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 74.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.45569620253164556 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a faint scent—something metallic" | | 1 | "Only seconds had passed, but" | | 2 | "Always cautious, always risking more" | | 3 | "Suddenly, Herrera tensed beside her." |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots hit the slick" | | 1 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 2 | "He glanced over his shoulder" | | 3 | "She remembered the rumors, the" | | 4 | "He slipped into the alley," | | 5 | "She kept her eyes peeled" | | 6 | "She hesitated a beat." | | 7 | "she demanded, flashlight trembling in" | | 8 | "He exhaled grimly, eyes darting" | | 9 | "She remembered Herrera’s reputation—an off-the-books" | | 10 | "His scar tugged as he" | | 11 | "She nodded only minimally, scanning" | | 12 | "She hesitated, voice low." | | 13 | "Her gaze edged over to" | | 14 | "He nodded, reaching into his" | | 15 | "She watched him insert the" | | 16 | "They moved inside, shadows dancing" | | 17 | "She aimed her flashlight, its" | | 18 | "she yelled, voice echoing into" | | 19 | "She exchanged a glance with" |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 45.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots hit the slick" | | 1 | "The flickering neon signs shedding" | | 2 | "Her breath came in ragged" | | 3 | "He glanced over his shoulder" | | 4 | "Quinn slowed her approach for" | | 5 | "The suspect's shoes squeaked on" | | 6 | "Quinn's instincts screamed caution." | | 7 | "This wasn’t a routine chase." | | 8 | "She remembered the rumors, the" | | 9 | "He slipped into the alley," | | 10 | "Quinn moved swiftly, her left" | | 11 | "A sharp turn, and she" | | 12 | "Grafitti and peeling posters clung" | | 13 | "She kept her eyes peeled" | | 14 | "Quinn paused, her pulse quickening." | | 15 | "A gust of wind swept" | | 16 | "The voice had a rough" | | 17 | "Quinn’s grip tightened on her" | | 18 | "The man stepped into view—her" | | 19 | "She hesitated a beat." |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, daring or not, she" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 14.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came in ragged gasps that blurred her vision, but her eyes stayed locked on the man weaving past alleyways and shuttered shops." | | 1 | "The man stepped into view—her quarry, slipping behind a ragged metal door embedded into the wall, which seemed to ripple unnaturally beneath his hand." | | 2 | "She remembered Herrera’s reputation—an off-the-books medic who’d seen things no civilian should." | | 3 | "He nodded, reaching into his coat, pulling out a small, battered medallion." | | 4 | "Shafts of uneven light spilled from cracks in the ceiling, illuminating shelves lined with odd artifacts—crystals, jars of shimmering powders, and items that lo…" | | 5 | "Across the room, a figure lurked near an alcove—a man wrapped in dark cloth, clutching a bundle that glimmered faintly." | | 6 | "She aimed her flashlight, its beam hitting the man’s face, catching a flash of silver—a bone token tucked into his palm." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, flashlight trembling in her grip" | | 1 | "Quinn ordered, voice barely above a whisper" | | 2 | "she yelled, voice echoing into the cavernous space" | | 3 | "she said, voice gritty" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "Quinn ordered (order)" | | 2 | "she yelled (yell)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.357 | | leniency | 0.714 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |