Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR6ST44NE05H1CMFJNFY5H

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Duration:
9.2s
Cost:
$0.000584

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
--- The door to *The Raven’s Nest* swung open with a *thunk*, the brass handle groaning under the weight of a man who hadn’t bothered to slow his stride. The air inside hit like a fist—damp, thick with the scent of aged whisky and something sharper, like ozone after a storm. The jukebox wheezed out a half-forgotten tune, the kind that made the older patrons at the bar hum along without thinking. But then there she was. A woman in a fitted black coat, her straight black hair caught in the dim glow of the neon sign above the entrance. She stood frozen for a second, fingers curling around the strap of her bag like she was debating whether to turn around. Then the door banged shut behind her, and she was inside, shoulders hunched against the weight of something unspoken. Silas Blackwood didn’t look up from his glass. He knew that coat. Knew the way the hem brushed just above the ankle, the way the collar turned up at the edges like she’d been cold for a long time. His fingers tightened around his tumbler. *Christ.* “You’re late.” The voice was smooth, amused, but there was steel beneath it. She exhaled, slow and deliberate, before turning. The light caught her eyes—bright blue, sharp as a blade—and for a second, he forgot how to breathe. “Rory.” Her name sounded like a question. Like she wasn’t sure if she was imagining it. She looked different. Younger, maybe, but not in the way he’d expected. Not softer. Harder. The kind of hard that came from carrying things no one else could see. The scar on her wrist, the one from when she was twelve and had tried to climb a tree too high, was still there, but it didn’t look like a reminder anymore. It looked like a brand. Silas set his glass down with a *clink* that echoed in the quiet. “Took you long enough.” She didn’t move. Didn’t smile. Just stared at him like she was trying to memorise every line on his face, like she was afraid he might disappear if she blinked. “You look like hell.” That got a flicker. A ghost of a smile. “And you look like you haven’t aged a day.” “Flattery won’t get you a drink.” She laughed, sharp and unexpected. “I wasn’t asking for one.” Silas gestured to the stool beside him. “Sit. Before I change my mind.” She hesitated, then slid onto the barstool, her coat brushing against the worn leather. The fabric smelled like rain and something metallic—old blood, maybe. Or just the city. “You’re not here for the company,” he said. “No.” “Then why?” She leaned forward, elbows on the bar, and for the first time since she walked in, she looked like the Rory he remembered. The one who could outthink her way out of anything. “I need to know what you know about the Carter case.” The name hung between them, heavy as a tombstone. Silas didn’t flinch. “You’re still digging.” “Someone’s been digging *at* me.” A beat. The jukebox wheezed louder. “Evan,” he said. She didn’t deny it. Just watched him, eyes unblinking. “He’s not the only one,” Silas said. “But he’s the one who’ll hurt you the most.” “He already has.” Silas exhaled through his nose. “Then you should’ve come sooner.” Rory’s fingers twitched against the bar. “I had a job. A life. I was fine.” “Until he found you.” “Until I found him.” Silas studied her. The way her jaw was set. The way her knuckles were white around her bag strap. She wasn’t fine. Not anymore. “You’re not the same person who left Cardiff.” “No.” “Good. Because the Rory I knew wouldn’t have walked into a bar like this looking for trouble.” She laughed, but it was bitter. “I’m not looking for trouble.” “Then what are you looking for?” She met his gaze. “Answers.” Silas reached into his jacket, pulled out a folded piece of paper, and slid it across the bar. The corner of it was singed, like someone had tried to burn it. Rory didn’t touch it at first. Just stared at it like it was a live wire. “What’s this?” “A lead. Not mine. Someone else’s.” “Who?” “Doesn’t matter.” Silas swirled his whisky. “But it’s fresh. And it’s about your father.” Rory’s breath caught. She reached for the paper, fingers trembling just enough to make him wince. The paper was thin, yellowed at the edges. A name scrawled in ink that looked like it had been written in a hurry: *Dr. Elias Voss. Private clinic. Baker Street.* “He’s a doctor,” she said, voice hollow. “Or he was.” She looked up, eyes wide. “What?” Silas didn’t answer. Just gestured to the paper. “Check him out. But don’t go near him alone.” “Why?” “Because,” Silas said, “the last time someone asked about him, they ended up in a morgue.” Rory’s hands stilled. “You think he’s involved?” “He’s involved in something. And if your father’s name is on that list, then he’s involved in whatever it is you’re looking for.” She swallowed. “What is it?” Silas leaned back, letting the weight of his words settle between them. “Your father didn’t disappear because he was a good man. He disappeared because he was digging too deep. And if you’re following in his footsteps, you’re going to end up the same way.” Rory’s fingers curled around the paper. “I’m not my father.” “No,” Silas said. “You’re better.” She didn’t argue. Just stared at the paper, the weight of it pressing into her palm like a promise. Silas finished his whisky in one go. The glass hit the bar with a *thud*. “You should go.” “Why?” “Because if Evan’s looking for you, he’s not going to stop until he finds you. And if he finds you here—” “He won’t.” Silas didn’t answer. Just watched her, the way her eyes flickered with something raw and dangerous. She stood, her coat brushing against the bar. “Thanks.” “For what?” “For the paper.” “For the truth.” She hesitated. Then she turned, her heels clicking against the floor like a countdown. The door swung open behind her, and for a second, she was gone. Silas stayed where he was, staring at the empty stool. The jukebox wheezed out its last note, then fell silent. He reached into his pocket, pulled out a silver signet ring, and pressed it into the bar’s polished wood. The metal left a faint mark, like a brand. Then he poured himself another drink. The door creaked open again. Rory stood in the doorway, her coat pulled tighter around her. “I’m not done.” Silas didn’t look up. “No. You’re not.” She stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind her with a *thunk*. The neon sign flickered.
total_cost0.0005842

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1133
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"unspoken"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"unspoken"
2"reminder"
3"echoed"
4"flicker"
5"footsteps"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences98
matches
0"was afraid"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords16
totalWords1128
ratio0.014
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"thunk"
2"Christ."
3"clink"
4"at"
5"Dr. Elias Voss. Private clinic. Baker Street."
6"thud"
7"thunk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount822
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Blackwood1
Rory7
Silas17
Voss1
persons
0"Blackwood"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
3"Voss"
places
0"Raven"
globalScore0.466
windowScore0.167
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like a question"
1"smelled like rain and something metallic—o"
2"looked like the Rory he remembered"
3"looked like it had been written in a hurr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1128
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"knew that coat"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean14.84
std16.03
cv1.08
sampleLengths
01
176
264
346
42
536
61
715
866
917
1030
114
1218
136
1410
1513
1628
178
181
192
2044
2115
225
236
243
259
2616
273
2810
2915
304
314
3232
331
3417
3511
366
375
3847
392
406
411
4214
4339
447
457
463
476
4817
491
94.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences98
matches
0"was singed"
1"been written"
2"was gone"
32.29% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs159
matches
0"was debating"
1"was imagining"
2"was trying"
3"was, staring"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences147
ratio0.02
matches
0"The air inside hit like a fist—damp, thick with the scent of aged whisky and something sharper, like ozone after a storm."
1"The light caught her eyes—bright blue, sharp as a blade—and for a second, he forgot how to breathe."
2"The fabric smelled like rain and something metallic—old blood, maybe."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount828
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03864734299516908
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean7.67
std6.75
cv0.88
sampleLengths
028
122
221
35
423
522
619
78
84
927
106
111
122
1311
147
1518
161
176
189
193
209
212
221
2314
2432
255
2613
274
283
292
3025
314
324
335
349
356
365
375
387
396
4014
4110
424
438
441
452
4623
4710
4811
499
47.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3129251700680272
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then the door banged shut"
1"Just stared at him like"
2"Just watched him, eyes unblinking."
3"Just stared at it like"
4"Just gestured to the paper."
5"Just stared at the paper,"
6"Just watched her, the way"
7"Then she turned, her heels"
8"Then he poured himself another"
ratio0.111
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences81
matches
0"She stood frozen for a"
1"He knew that coat."
2"His fingers tightened around his"
3"She exhaled, slow and deliberate,"
4"Her name sounded like a"
5"She looked different."
6"It looked like a brand."
7"She didn’t move."
8"She laughed, sharp and unexpected."
9"She hesitated, then slid onto"
10"She leaned forward, elbows on"
11"She didn’t deny it."
12"She wasn’t fine."
13"She laughed, but it was"
14"She met his gaze."
15"She reached for the paper,"
16"she said, voice hollow"
17"She looked up, eyes wide."
18"She didn’t argue."
19"She stood, her coat brushing"
ratio0.272
46.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences81
matches
0"The door to *The Raven’s"
1"The air inside hit like"
2"The jukebox wheezed out a"
3"A woman in a fitted"
4"She stood frozen for a"
5"Silas Blackwood didn’t look up"
6"He knew that coat."
7"His fingers tightened around his"
8"The voice was smooth, amused,"
9"She exhaled, slow and deliberate,"
10"The light caught her eyes—bright"
11"Her name sounded like a"
12"She looked different."
13"The kind of hard that"
14"The scar on her wrist,"
15"It looked like a brand."
16"Silas set his glass down"
17"She didn’t move."
18"That got a flicker."
19"A ghost of a smile."
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The jukebox wheezed out a half-forgotten tune, the kind that made the older patrons at the bar hum along without thinking."
1"Silas set his glass down with a *clink* that echoed in the quiet."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice hollow"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.107
leniency0.214
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8810%