| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 733 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 733 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "lurch" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "churned" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "the last thing" | | 14 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 722 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Liar." | | 1 | "watched" | | 2 | "Hel portal." | | 3 | "known" | | 4 | "wrong." | | 5 | "herding" | | 6 | "\"You brought us the key.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | God | 1 | | Rory | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 0.73 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 722 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 19 | | std | 19.35 | | cv | 1.018 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 37 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t chasing" | | 1 | "was *herding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.074 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting flowers, cloying enough to coat the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Not a sound, not a breath of wind—just the sudden, sickening lurch of vertigo, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her." | | 2 | "She hadn’t believed the stories—not really." | | 3 | "Then—laughter." | | 4 | "Too *wrong.* The shape of it was human—mostly—but the limbs were too long, the joints bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "The mouth, though—God, the mouth—split too wide, lips peeling back from needle-thin teeth." | | 6 | "A hand—cold, clammy—closed around her wrist." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 725 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.034482758620689655 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004137931034482759 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 7.6 | | std | 5.97 | | cv | 0.786 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 43.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.3263157894736842 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the weight of it" | | 1 | "Too loud to be an" | | 2 | "Too *wrong.* The shape of" | | 3 | "Just smooth, stretched skin where" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 2 | "She hadn’t believed the stories—not" | | 3 | "She turned slowly." | | 4 | "She exhaled, forcing her voice" | | 5 | "It came from the left," | | 6 | "She took a step forward," | | 7 | "Her fingers curled into fists" | | 8 | "It moved wrong." | | 9 | "She fumbled for the rucksack," | | 10 | "She risked a glance over" | | 11 | "It wasn’t chasing her." | | 12 | "It was *herding* her." | | 13 | "It whispered, the words slithering" | | 14 | "It hissed, its grip loosening" | | 15 | "She didn’t think." | | 16 | "She lunged for the pool." |
| | ratio | 0.23 | |
| 47.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 4 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 5 | "A childhood accident, her mother" | | 6 | "*Liar.* The memory of that" | | 7 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 8 | "The world tilted." | | 9 | "Rory staggered, one hand flying" | | 10 | "The bark was warm." | | 11 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 12 | "The Heartstone’s glow deepened, casting" | | 13 | "The words slithered through her" | | 14 | "She hadn’t believed the stories—not" | | 15 | "A twig snapped." | | 16 | "The sound had come from" | | 17 | "She turned slowly." | | 18 | "The trees stood motionless, their" | | 19 | "The wrongness pressed in, a" |
| | ratio | 0.824 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a sound, not a breath of wind—just the sudden, sickening lurch of vertigo, as if the ground had dissolved beneath her." | | 1 | "The grove stretched before her, a perfect circle of silvered grass and wildflowers that shouldn’t exist in November." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |