Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR735V6RYC0E7C0WMVP6TK

Run Details

Duration:
45.8s
Cost:
$0.048000
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant burned against Aurora's skin as she approached the ancient oak stones marking the boundaries of the Fae Grove. What was meant to be comfortably cool against her chest now pulsed with uncomfortable heat, as if trying to warn her away from the place. She ignored it, pressing forward into Richmond Park well after closing hours. "This is mad," she muttered to herself, ducking under the chain blocking the footpath. The full moon cast enough light to navigate by, which was fortunate since she'd forgotten to bring a torch. Classic Rory move, that—remember the mysterious ancient artifact, forget the basic survival gear. She needed answers, and Isolde's grove was supposedly where one went to get them. At least according to the cryptic note that had been slipped under her door that morning. The note had been simple: *The pendant seeks its home. Richmond Grove, midnight. Full moon. Come alone.* The fact that someone knew about the Heartstone—something she'd told no one about since finding it on her pillow three weeks ago—was disturbing enough to compel her here. Twigs snapped beneath her boots as she followed the barely visible trail. The pendant's heat intensified with each step toward the grove, its crimson center glowing visibly through her thin jumper. "Right, because that's not creepy at all," Aurora whispered, tucking it inside her shirt. The silver chain clinked softly against her necklace. Her breath fogged in front of her face despite it being a mild October night. The grove was still a hundred yards ahead, but already the air felt different—heavier, more substantial somehow. The trees seemed to lean toward her, their branches reaching out like gnarled fingers in the moonlight. Something rustled in the underbrush to her left. Aurora froze, straining to see in the darkness. "Hello? Is someone there?" Nothing answered but the soft whisper of leaves. A quick glance at her watch confirmed it was 11:52. She was early. Whoever had sent the note wasn't due for another eight minutes. She continued forward, the Heartstone now painfully hot against her skin. As she approached the ring of standing stones, the pendant began to vibrate. The grove appeared before her suddenly, as if she'd passed through some invisible barrier. One moment she was picking her way through woodland; the next, she stood at the edge of a perfect circular clearing ringed by seven massive standing stones. Each stone was easily twelve feet tall and covered in spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and move in the moonlight. In the center of the clearing stood a stone altar, simple and unadorned. The wildflowers carpeting the grove caught her attention immediately. It was October, yet here bloomed spring bluebells, summer foxgloves, and autumn heather all at once—a botanical impossibility. "This isn't right," she said, her voice unnaturally loud in the stillness. The pendant jerked against her skin, tugging toward the altar. "Okay, okay, I'm going," she said, addressing the artifact as if it were alive. Perhaps it was. Three weeks of waking to find it hovering inches above her chest while she slept suggested it possessed some form of awareness. As she stepped fully into the clearing, time seemed to stutter. The clouds racing across the moon slowed to a crawl, and the distant hoot of an owl stretched into a long, mournful call. Aurora approached the altar, each step requiring more effort than the last, as if she were walking through water. The air felt thick, resistant. "Hello?" she called again, turning slowly to survey the entire grove. "I'm here about the note." Only silence answered her, but it was a silence that felt observed, calculated. The hairs on the back of her neck stood up. Someone—or something—was watching her. She glanced at her watch again. The second hand had stopped moving. 11:58. "Brilliant," she muttered. "Digital next time." A soft whisper echoed from behind one of the standing stones, too indistinct to make out words. "I can hear you," Aurora said, trying to sound braver than she felt. "You asked me to come here. About the pendant." Another whisper, from a different stone. Then another. Soon it seemed the whispers were coming from everywhere at once, overlapping and contradicting each other. *Return it...* *Keep it safe...* *Run while you can...* *Too late...* The pendant yanked hard against her neck, the chain digging into her skin. Aurora gasped and grabbed it, intending to remove it, but the moment her fingers touched the crimson stone, visions flashed before her eyes. A doorway opening in empty air. Blood-red skies. Creatures with too many limbs. A city of impossible architecture. She staggered back from the altar, blinking away the images. "What the hell?" Something moved at the edge of her vision—a dark shape darting between two of the standing stones. She whirled to face it, but saw nothing. "Show yourself!" Aurora demanded, her voice cracking slightly. "What do you want from me?" The whispers intensified. *The door opens both ways...* *The key and the lock...* *Your blood, her blood...* Movement again, this time behind her. She spun around, heart pounding, to see a tall, thin figure standing by the altar. It hadn't been there seconds ago. The figure wore a hooded cloak that obscured its features, but Aurora could see pale, elongated fingers emerging from the sleeves. Those fingers traced patterns on the altar's surface, leaving trails of light that lingered in the air. "Are you the one who sent the note?" Aurora asked, taking a step back. The figure didn't respond. Its hood tilted slightly, as if considering her. "Look, I don't know what's happening, but I think there's been a mistake. I just found this pendant. It's not mine." She reached for the clasp at the back of her neck, intending to remove it. The hooded figure moved with impossible speed, suddenly standing directly before her. Its hand shot out, gripping her wrist with painful strength. "Not yours," it agreed, its voice like dry leaves scraping across stone. "But bound to you now. Blood calls to blood." Aurora tried to pull away, but the grip was unyielding. "Let go of me!" The figure's other hand reached for her face, those long fingers stretching toward her eyes. Aurora ducked and twisted, breaking free with a desperate jerk that sent her stumbling backward. The figure made no move to follow. Instead, it pointed to the ground at her feet. Looking down, Aurora realized she was standing inside a circle that hadn't been there before—a perfect ring of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue phosphorescence. "A fairy ring," she whispered, recalling childhood warnings never to step inside one. "The door," the figure agreed. "You stand between worlds, Aurora Carter. Neither here nor there." The use of her name sent ice down her spine. "How do you know me?" "We have always known you. Since before you were born. Since before your mother was born." The pendant pulsed in time with her racing heart. The grove began to change around her, the colors shifting, the trees stretching taller, their bark darkening to an impossible black. The sky above the clearing was no longer the night sky of London, but something alien—deep purple with twin moons. "What's happening?" Aurora gasped, spinning around to see the transformation spreading outward from the fairy ring. "The veil thins," the figure said. "The pendant responds. It seeks its home." A second figure appeared beside the first, and then a third, all identical in their hooded cloaks, all impossibly tall and thin. They formed a triangle around her, swaying slightly as if to music she couldn't hear. "We have waited so long for a Carter to return," the first one said. "Too long," agreed the second. "The bargain must be renewed," said the third. Aurora clutched the pendant, which now burned like a coal against her palm. "I don't understand. What bargain? What does this have to do with me?" "Your grandmother knew," said the first. "Jennifer Ellis. She wore the stone before her mother. And her mother before her." The crescent scar on Aurora's wrist began to throb painfully. She glanced down at it, shocked to see it glowing with the same crimson light as the pendant. "That's impossible. This scar is from a childhood accident. I fell off my bike." The three figures laughed in perfect unison—a sound like breaking glass. "The mark of the covenant," said the second figure. "Passed down through blood and bone." "You belong to us," said the third. "As did all the women of your line." The fairy ring began to pulse with light, the ground within it turning translucent. Aurora could see through it into somewhere else—a vast chamber with pillars of twisted stone. She tried to step out of the ring, but an invisible barrier stopped her. Panic rose in her throat. "Let me out!" she demanded. "The door opens both ways," said the first figure, repeating the whisper she'd heard earlier. "But the key must be turned correctly." The figures began to circle her, moving with liquid grace despite their height. As they moved, their hoods fell back slightly, revealing glimpses of what lay beneath—faces too angular to be human, eyes too large and entirely black. "You are the key, Aurora Carter," they chanted in unison. "The lock is the door between worlds." The ground beneath her feet became more transparent with each passing second. Aurora felt as if she were standing on glass that was steadily weakening. Below, in that other place, something massive stirred. Something that had been waiting a very long time. And it was looking up at her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she called again [again]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.419
leniency0.837
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.047
72.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count4
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1616
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"navigate"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"perfect"
count3
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"calculated"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"throb"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"navigate"
2"whisper"
3"perfect"
4"racing"
5"silence"
6"calculated"
7"echoed"
8"pounding"
9"traced"
10"down her spine"
11"throb"
12"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
6.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences126
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords37
totalWords1602
ratio0.023
matches
0"The pendant seeks its home. Richmond Grove, midnight. Full moon. Come alone."
1"Return it..."
2"Keep it safe..."
3"Run while you can..."
4"Too late..."
5"The door opens both ways..."
6"The key and the lock..."
7"Your blood, her blood..."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1343
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Aurora17
Fae1
Grove2
Richmond2
Park1
Rory1
Isolde1
October2
Movement1
London1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"London"
globalScore0.867
windowScore0.833
15.59% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if trying to warn her away from the place"
1"center glowing visibly through her thin ju"
2"patterns that seemed to shift and move in the moonlight"
3"as if considering her"
4"appeared beside the first, and then a third, all identical in their hooded cloaks, all impossibly tall and thin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.624
wordCount1602
matches
0"Neither here nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean21.65
std12.17
cv0.562
sampleLengths
058
146
230
317
428
531
622
749
88
912
108
1124
1224
1362
1413
1527
1612
1710
1839
1934
2024
2116
2227
2313
246
2517
2622
2724
2811
2936
3018
3113
3225
3314
343
3514
3627
3738
3814
3912
4036
4122
4221
4314
4430
4516
4625
4713
4815
4915
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences126
matches
0"was meant"
1"been slipped"
13.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs250
matches
0"was picking"
1"were walking"
2"was watching"
3"were coming"
4"was standing"
5"were standing"
6"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences145
ratio0.083
matches
0"Classic Rory move, that—remember the mysterious ancient artifact, forget the basic survival gear."
1"The fact that someone knew about the Heartstone—something she'd told no one about since finding it on her pillow three weeks ago—was disturbing enough to compel her here."
2"The grove was still a hundred yards ahead, but already the air felt different—heavier, more substantial somehow."
3"One moment she was picking her way through woodland; the next, she stood at the edge of a perfect circular clearing ringed by seven massive standing stones."
4"It was October, yet here bloomed spring bluebells, summer foxgloves, and autumn heather all at once—a botanical impossibility."
5"Someone—or something—was watching her."
6"Something moved at the edge of her vision—a dark shape darting between two of the standing stones."
7"Looking down, Aurora realized she was standing inside a circle that hadn't been there before—a perfect ring of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue phosphorescence."
8"The sky above the clearing was no longer the night sky of London, but something alien—deep purple with twin moons."
9"The three figures laughed in perfect unison—a sound like breaking glass."
10"Aurora could see through it into somewhere else—a vast chamber with pillars of twisted stone."
11"As they moved, their hoods fell back slightly, revealing glimpses of what lay beneath—faces too angular to be human, eyes too large and entirely black."
95.02% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1357
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.045689019896831246
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.017686072218128224
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean11.05
std6.36
cv0.576
sampleLengths
021
125
212
314
419
513
614
716
810
93
102
112
1228
1312
1419
1514
168
1715
1817
1917
208
218
224
238
2410
253
2611
2711
2813
2914
3027
3121
3213
339
3418
3512
3610
3714
383
3922
4011
4123
4219
435
4411
455
4613
4710
484
496
66.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4305555555555556
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners62
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences117
matches
0"At least according to the"
1"Perhaps it was."
2"Only silence answered her, but"
3"Instead, it pointed to the"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences117
matches
0"She ignored it, pressing forward"
1"she muttered to herself, ducking"
2"She needed answers, and Isolde's"
3"Her breath fogged in front"
4"She was early."
5"She continued forward, the Heartstone"
6"It was October, yet here"
7"she said, her voice unnaturally"
8"she said, addressing the artifact"
9"she called again, turning slowly"
10"She glanced at her watch"
11"She staggered back from the"
12"She whirled to face it,"
13"*Your blood, her blood...*"
14"She spun around, heart pounding,"
15"It hadn't been there seconds"
16"Its hood tilted slightly, as"
17"She reached for the clasp"
18"Its hand shot out, gripping"
19"it agreed, its voice like"
ratio0.214
66.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences117
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant burned against"
1"She ignored it, pressing forward"
2"she muttered to herself, ducking"
3"The full moon cast enough"
4"She needed answers, and Isolde's"
5"The note had been simple:"
6"Richmond Grove, midnight."
7"The fact that someone knew"
8"Twigs snapped beneath her boots"
9"The pendant's heat intensified with"
10"Aurora whispered, tucking it inside"
11"The silver chain clinked softly"
12"Her breath fogged in front"
13"The grove was still a"
14"The trees seemed to lean"
15"Something rustled in the underbrush"
16"Aurora froze, straining to see"
17"Nothing answered but the soft"
18"A quick glance at her"
19"She was early."
ratio0.786
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Whoever had sent the note"
ratio0.009
49.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"What was meant to be comfortably cool against her chest now pulsed with uncomfortable heat, as if trying to warn her away from the place."
1"Classic Rory move, that—remember the mysterious ancient artifact, forget the basic survival gear."
2"At least according to the cryptic note that had been slipped under her door that morning."
3"Each stone was easily twelve feet tall and covered in spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and move in the moonlight."
4"Aurora approached the altar, each step requiring more effort than the last, as if she were walking through water."
5"Aurora ducked and twisted, breaking free with a desperate jerk that sent her stumbling backward."
6"Looking down, Aurora realized she was standing inside a circle that hadn't been there before—a perfect ring of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue phosphoresce…"
7"The grove began to change around her, the colors shifting, the trees stretching taller, their bark darkening to an impossible black."
13.89% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice unnaturally loud in the stillness"
1"Aurora said, trying to sound braver than she felt"
2"Aurora demanded, her voice cracking slightly"
3"She reached, intending to remove it"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
3"Aurora demanded (demand)"
4"it agreed (agree)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"the figure agreed (agree)"
7"Aurora gasped (gasp)"
8"she demanded (demand)"
9"they chanted (chant)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.395
leniency0.791
rawRatio0.588
effectiveRatio0.465
71.9933%