| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she called again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.837 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |
| 72.15% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1616 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.02% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1616 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "navigate" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "calculated" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "pounding" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "down her spine" | | 11 | "throb" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 37 | | totalWords | 1602 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant seeks its home. Richmond Grove, midnight. Full moon. Come alone." | | 1 | "Return it..." | | 2 | "Keep it safe..." | | 3 | "Run while you can..." | | 4 | "Too late..." | | 5 | "The door opens both ways..." | | 6 | "The key and the lock..." | | 7 | "Your blood, her blood..." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1343 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 17 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | October | 2 | | Movement | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.867 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 15.59% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to warn her away from the place" | | 1 | "center glowing visibly through her thin ju" | | 2 | "patterns that seemed to shift and move in the moonlight" | | 3 | "as if considering her" | | 4 | "appeared beside the first, and then a third, all identical in their hooded cloaks, all impossibly tall and thin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.624 | | wordCount | 1602 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 74 | | mean | 21.65 | | std | 12.17 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 30 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 99.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "was meant" | | 1 | "been slipped" |
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| 13.33% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | | 0 | "was picking" | | 1 | "were walking" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "were coming" | | 4 | "was standing" | | 5 | "were standing" | | 6 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Classic Rory move, that—remember the mysterious ancient artifact, forget the basic survival gear." | | 1 | "The fact that someone knew about the Heartstone—something she'd told no one about since finding it on her pillow three weeks ago—was disturbing enough to compel her here." | | 2 | "The grove was still a hundred yards ahead, but already the air felt different—heavier, more substantial somehow." | | 3 | "One moment she was picking her way through woodland; the next, she stood at the edge of a perfect circular clearing ringed by seven massive standing stones." | | 4 | "It was October, yet here bloomed spring bluebells, summer foxgloves, and autumn heather all at once—a botanical impossibility." | | 5 | "Someone—or something—was watching her." | | 6 | "Something moved at the edge of her vision—a dark shape darting between two of the standing stones." | | 7 | "Looking down, Aurora realized she was standing inside a circle that hadn't been there before—a perfect ring of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue phosphorescence." | | 8 | "The sky above the clearing was no longer the night sky of London, but something alien—deep purple with twin moons." | | 9 | "The three figures laughed in perfect unison—a sound like breaking glass." | | 10 | "Aurora could see through it into somewhere else—a vast chamber with pillars of twisted stone." | | 11 | "As they moved, their hoods fell back slightly, revealing glimpses of what lay beneath—faces too angular to be human, eyes too large and entirely black." |
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| 95.02% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1357 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.045689019896831246 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017686072218128224 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 11.05 | | std | 6.36 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 66.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4305555555555556 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "At least according to the" | | 1 | "Perhaps it was." | | 2 | "Only silence answered her, but" | | 3 | "Instead, it pointed to the" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She ignored it, pressing forward" | | 1 | "she muttered to herself, ducking" | | 2 | "She needed answers, and Isolde's" | | 3 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 4 | "She was early." | | 5 | "She continued forward, the Heartstone" | | 6 | "It was October, yet here" | | 7 | "she said, her voice unnaturally" | | 8 | "she said, addressing the artifact" | | 9 | "she called again, turning slowly" | | 10 | "She glanced at her watch" | | 11 | "She staggered back from the" | | 12 | "She whirled to face it," | | 13 | "*Your blood, her blood...*" | | 14 | "She spun around, heart pounding," | | 15 | "It hadn't been there seconds" | | 16 | "Its hood tilted slightly, as" | | 17 | "She reached for the clasp" | | 18 | "Its hand shot out, gripping" | | 19 | "it agreed, its voice like" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 66.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 1 | "She ignored it, pressing forward" | | 2 | "she muttered to herself, ducking" | | 3 | "The full moon cast enough" | | 4 | "She needed answers, and Isolde's" | | 5 | "The note had been simple:" | | 6 | "Richmond Grove, midnight." | | 7 | "The fact that someone knew" | | 8 | "Twigs snapped beneath her boots" | | 9 | "The pendant's heat intensified with" | | 10 | "Aurora whispered, tucking it inside" | | 11 | "The silver chain clinked softly" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged in front" | | 13 | "The grove was still a" | | 14 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 15 | "Something rustled in the underbrush" | | 16 | "Aurora froze, straining to see" | | 17 | "Nothing answered but the soft" | | 18 | "A quick glance at her" | | 19 | "She was early." |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 42.74% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had sent the note" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 49.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "What was meant to be comfortably cool against her chest now pulsed with uncomfortable heat, as if trying to warn her away from the place." | | 1 | "Classic Rory move, that—remember the mysterious ancient artifact, forget the basic survival gear." | | 2 | "At least according to the cryptic note that had been slipped under her door that morning." | | 3 | "Each stone was easily twelve feet tall and covered in spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and move in the moonlight." | | 4 | "Aurora approached the altar, each step requiring more effort than the last, as if she were walking through water." | | 5 | "Aurora ducked and twisted, breaking free with a desperate jerk that sent her stumbling backward." | | 6 | "Looking down, Aurora realized she was standing inside a circle that hadn't been there before—a perfect ring of mushrooms that glowed with soft blue phosphoresce…" | | 7 | "The grove began to change around her, the colors shifting, the trees stretching taller, their bark darkening to an impossible black." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice unnaturally loud in the stillness" | | 1 | "Aurora said, trying to sound braver than she felt" | | 2 | "Aurora demanded, her voice cracking slightly" | | 3 | "She reached, intending to remove it" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" | | 4 | "it agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "the figure agreed (agree)" | | 7 | "Aurora gasped (gasp)" | | 8 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 9 | "they chanted (chant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.395 | | leniency | 0.791 | | rawRatio | 0.588 | | effectiveRatio | 0.465 | |