Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTR73ABHHKEMP3945D1G8YE

Run Details

Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.014212
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The doorbell rang, a sharp sound piercing the quiet of the evening. Rory, curled up on Eva's couch with a book, glanced up. Ptolemy, Eva's cat, yawned lazily at the noise, unperturbed. Setting her book aside, she rose, the book now a paper barrier shielding her hand from the hot teacup as she made her way to the door. She flipped each deadbolt with deft fingers, honed by weeks of practice, and pulled the door open. Her jaw dropped slightly, blue eyes wide with surprise. "Lucien." He leaned casually against the doorframe, his platinum blond hair sleek even in the breezy evening air. A charcoal coat hung loosely over his broad shoulders. "Hello, Aurora," he drawled, his voice rich with an accent that sent shivers down her spine. A part of her, the part that had once been drawn to him in a whirlwind of attraction and intrigue, stirred. The front hall light illuminated his face, revealing his unique heterochromatic eyes, one amber, the other black as pitch. They gleamed under his thick lashes, holding her gaze. His lips, pale in the evening light, curved in a slight smile as he looked her up and down. "Are we letting just anyone in these days? You know how dangerous that can be." Rory's heart pounded, a mix of emotions flooding through her. She'd been right to expect no ordinary ex at her door. Lucien Moreau was not merely a man; he was a fixer, a half-demon with connections to the supernatural underbelly of London. And she'd been, briefly, ensnared by his otherworldly charm. "I... should've guessed it'd be you," she managed, her voice steadier than she felt. She leaned against the door, mimicking his relaxed pose. "To what do I owe the pleasure?" "I needed to see you," he said simply. "It's been... long enough." Rory's throat tightened at the memory of their last encounter. It had been in a dingy pub, both of them raw with anger and hurt, shouting accusations over the din. She'd stormed out, leaving him with a broken bottle of whisky and several broken promises. "Not long enough," she said, her tone wry. "How'd you find me anyway?" He smiled, a dangerous flash of white teeth. "I'm a man of information, Aurora. You know that. Though I must admit, your choice of company is intriguing." Rory frowned. "Company?" "The barman, Silas, I believe. He's watching us from the window upstairs." Rory's eyes darted up to the window above the door. Sure enough, Silas peered down, his expression unreadable. "Careful, Aurora. I wouldn't want you hurt." Her laugh was bitter. "Hurt? You'd be the last person I'd expect to care about that." He took a step closer, and Rory could smell the dark cologne he always wore, a mix of tobacco and spice. "I admit, I may not have shown it back then, but..." "But what?" she challenged, her breath quickening. "I cared. I always have." His words, sincere and heartfelt, jarred her. She could feel her walls cracking, those barriers she'd erected to protect herself from him after their painful breakup. She clutched the book tighter, using it as a physical barrier against the sudden onslaught of memories. "You didn't show it," she said, her voice low. "Not in any way that mattered." "I know. And I came here to change that. To start anew." He paused, eyes searching her face. "If you'll let me." The evening breeze picked up, stirring strands of black hair around Rory's face. She took a deep breath, struggling to keep her emotions in check. How many nights had she spent replaying their turbulent relationship in her head? The heat of passion, the sting of hurt, the confusion of mixed signals. It had been a maelstrom of feelings, leaving her bruised and shaken. "That's... it's not so easy," she said finally. "I know it's not, Aurora." He reached out, his hand hovering as if to touch her hair, but he stopped just short, respecting her unspoken boundary. "But we owe it to ourselves to try." Ptolemy meowed loudly from within the flat, his yowls echoing down the hall. Lucien smiled slightly at the sound. "And we have an audience," he said. "Perhaps we can continue this inside?" Rory hesitated, torn between the memory of his past incursions and the lure of his present charm. She swallowed, knowing that Eva would be back any minute with takeout from Yu-Fei's. But, more than that, she knew she needed to put the past to rest, one way or another. She stepped aside, gesturing for him to enter. He was a part of her history, but whether he was her future, she'd yet to decide. "Come in," she said, "for now." As he passed, she caught a whiff of his cologne again, a scent that had once been the air she breathed, the pillow she slept on. Her heart fluttered, caught between old cravings and new reservations, between the gravity of the past and the unpredictable pull of the present.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said simply [simply]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.148
76.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount837
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slightly"
2"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount837
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"sent shivers down"
count1
1
word"intrigue"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"charm"
count2
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"intriguing"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"sent shivers down"
1"intrigue"
2"otherworldly"
3"charm"
4"encounter"
5"intriguing"
6"unreadable"
7"could feel"
8"unspoken"
9"echoing"
10"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
78.70% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences54
matches
0"e with surprise"
1"w with anger"
2"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords835
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount659
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau1
London1
Rory8
Silas1
Ptolemy2
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Yu-Fei"
globalScore0.893
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount835
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean26.09
std19.92
cv0.763
sampleLengths
076
19
21
326
437
528
634
751
830
912
1045
1113
1227
133
1412
1518
167
1716
1832
197
205
2143
2215
2322
2463
258
2634
2719
2813
2974
306
3149
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs108
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences70
ratio0.014
matches
0"Lucien Moreau was not merely a man; he was a fixer, a half-demon with connections to the supernatural underbelly of London."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount661
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.039334341906202726
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.018154311649016642
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean11.93
std6.06
cv0.508
sampleLengths
012
111
29
327
417
59
61
717
89
916
1021
1119
129
1319
1415
1510
1611
1721
189
1914
209
217
228
234
2410
2520
2615
278
285
298
3019
312
321
3312
3410
358
367
374
3812
3921
4011
417
425
437
4419
4517
469
476
4818
494
70.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences51
matches
0"She flipped each deadbolt with"
1"Her jaw dropped slightly, blue"
2"He leaned casually against the"
3"he drawled, his voice rich"
4"They gleamed under his thick"
5"His lips, pale in the"
6"She'd been right to expect"
7"she managed, her voice steadier"
8"She leaned against the door,"
9"he said simply"
10"It had been in a"
11"She'd stormed out, leaving him"
12"she said, her tone wry"
13"He smiled, a dangerous flash"
14"Her laugh was bitter."
15"He took a step closer,"
16"she challenged, her breath quickening"
17"His words, sincere and heartfelt,"
18"She could feel her walls"
19"She clutched the book tighter,"
ratio0.588
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences51
matches
0"The doorbell rang, a sharp"
1"Rory, curled up on Eva's"
2"Ptolemy, Eva's cat, yawned lazily"
3"She flipped each deadbolt with"
4"Her jaw dropped slightly, blue"
5"He leaned casually against the"
6"A charcoal coat hung loosely"
7"he drawled, his voice rich"
8"A part of her, the"
9"The front hall light illuminated"
10"They gleamed under his thick"
11"His lips, pale in the"
12"Rory's heart pounded, a mix"
13"She'd been right to expect"
14"Lucien Moreau was not merely"
15"she managed, her voice steadier"
16"She leaned against the door,"
17"he said simply"
18"Rory's throat tightened at the"
19"It had been in a"
ratio0.882
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"But, more than that, she"
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A part of her, the part that had once been drawn to him in a whirlwind of attraction and intrigue, stirred."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she managed, her voice steadier than she felt"
1"she said, her tone wry"
2"she challenged, her breath quickening"
3"she said, her voice low"
4"He paused, eyes searching her face"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he drawled (drawl)"
1"she challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.148
79.3288%