| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 30 | | adverbTagCount | 12 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora echoed incredulously [incredulously]" | | 1 | "Isolde explained softly [softly]" | | 2 | "the shade murmured ominously [ominously]" | | 3 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 4 | "Aurora asked sharply [sharply]" | | 5 | "Isolde replied grimly [grimly]" | | 6 | "Isolde declared firmly [firmly]" | | 7 | "he said coldly [coldly]" | | 8 | "Aurora asked sharply [sharply]" | | 9 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 10 | "she asked breathlessly [breathlessly]" | | 11 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.698 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |
| 53.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1956 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "nervously" | | 4 | "anxiously" | | 5 | "sharply" | | 6 | "coldly" | | 7 | "precisely" | | 8 | "completely" | | 9 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1956 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "anticipation" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "race" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "grave" | | 13 | "cascading" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "sanctuary" | | 16 | "otherworldly" | | 17 | "firmly" | | 18 | "simmering" | | 19 | "crystal" | | 20 | "radiant" | | 21 | "sense of" | | 22 | "echoing" | | 23 | "intricate" | | 24 | "pounding" | | 25 | "pulse" | | 26 | "glinting" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 88.37% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 4 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "e in anticipation" | | 1 | "filled with wonder" | | 2 | "d with wonder" | | 3 | "a flicker of unease" |
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| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1964 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 25 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "As if to confirm her darkest fears, Silas spoke up from behind them, his voice low and ominous." |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1653 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.63 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 4 | | Aurora | 27 | | Isolde | 13 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Eden | 1 | | Wardens | 3 | | Veil | 2 | | Silas | 8 | | Hellscape | 1 | | Soulforged | 2 | | Wordless | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Eden" | | 5 | "Wardens" | | 6 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.683 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to drink in the dappled sunbeams filtering through the broad leaves overhead" | | 1 | "As if sensing their gaze upon it, the seraphine turned its head towards them" | | 2 | "as if wondering what business these mortals had in their paradisiacal home" | | 3 | "music that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 4 | "as if invoking some secret knowledge" | | 5 | "as if contemplating her words — or perhaps considering whether it would be worth his while to defy her command" | | 6 | "seemed alive with magic, tingling against Aurora's skin like tiny needles of ice and flame" | | 7 | "it was as if the very essence of the realm had been twisted and corrupted by some unseen force" | | 8 | "patterns that seemed to dance before Aurora's eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.509 | | wordCount | 1964 | | matches | | 0 | "not only were they being pursued by the Soulforged, but also by their own kind" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 35.71 | | std | 19.19 | | cv | 0.537 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 49 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 50 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 68 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 66 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 44 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 72 |
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| 93.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "been tasked" | | 1 | "been twisted" | | 2 | "being pursued" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 275 | | matches | | 0 | "were pulsing" | | 1 | "was implying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 8 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.163 | | matches | | 0 | "Here and there, they passed other denizens of this strange realm — beings that resembled men and women but moved with an unearthly grace, their features too perfect to be wholly human." | | 1 | "Aurora felt her heart lurch in her chest, certain that at any moment the insubstantial shade would dissipate before her eyes — but then the wind died away, leaving Nyx whole and unharmed once more." | | 2 | "Aurora did not need to ask how Nyx knew this; shades had senses beyond mortal ken, able to perceive things that existed just out of reach of human sight." | | 3 | "As if in answer to her words, a figure emerged from the shadows between two trees — a tall man dressed all in black, his eyes hidden beneath the brim of his hat." | | 4 | "Aurora felt a sudden surge of anger and fear as she realized what he was implying; that all of this beauty and wonder would be lost forever if the Wardens failed in their duty." | | 5 | "For a long moment, Silas stood immobile, as if contemplating her words — or perhaps considering whether it would be worth his while to defy her command." | | 6 | "Everywhere they looked, there were new sights to behold: crystal-clear streams overflowing with sweet nectar; groves of trees suffused with an inner light that bathed their surroundings in radiant hues; even the air itself seemed alive with magic, tingling against Aurora's skin like tiny needles of ice and flame." | | 7 | "But beneath this veneer of beauty, a sense of wrongness began to creep over her — a feeling that all was not as it should be." | | 8 | "The colors seemed too bright, the scents too fragrant, the fruit too sweet; it was as if the very essence of the realm had been twisted and corrupted by some unseen force." | | 9 | "As they walked, the landscape began to change subtly; the vineyards and orchards gave way to gardens filled with flowers of impossible hue, each petal adorned with intricate patterns that seemed to dance before Aurora's eyes." | | 10 | "Here and there, she caught glimpses of creatures unlike any she had ever seen before — beings that moved like liquid shadow, or shimmered like heat haze on the horizon." | | 11 | "But there was nothing — only the stillness of the garden, broken by the occasional flutter of leaves in the warm breeze." | | 12 | "Aurora smelled the sharp tang of ozone in the air, and felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand on end — and then she saw them, emerging from the shadows between the trees with deadly purpose: Wardens, their black robes billowing like smoke, their faces hidden beneath the brim of their hats." | | 13 | "Fear twisted like a knife in Aurora's gut as she realized what this meant; that not only were they being pursued by the Soulforged, but also by their own kind — those who had once sworn an oath to protect the Veil between worlds, but who now sought to destroy it utterly." | | 14 | "and destroy it — before it is too late.\"" | | 15 | "The world exploded into chaos around them; Nyx's cries echoed through the air like the wail of a thousand damned souls, while Isolde shouted words of power that cracked like thunder overhead." | | 16 | "But through it all, one thought remained foremost in Aurora's mind — that whatever happened now, she would face it head-on, armed with nothing but her courage and her will to survive." |
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| 87.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1509 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.05036447978793903 | | lyAdverbCount | 36 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02385685884691849 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 18.88 | | std | 10.12 | | cv | 0.536 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 69.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 39.22% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Everywhere they looked, there were" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt warm and slightly" | | 1 | "Her silver hair shimmered like" | | 2 | "It moved with a sinuous" | | 3 | "Its eyes glinted like emeralds" | | 4 | "She had read about such" | | 5 | "It was a melody that" | | 6 | "she asked Isolde nervously" | | 7 | "She scanned the orchard anxiously," | | 8 | "she said quietly" | | 9 | "They were powerful beyond reckoning," | | 10 | "He moved with deadly grace," | | 11 | "His voice was low and" | | 12 | "He let the thought trail" | | 13 | "he said coldly" | | 14 | "he said softly" | | 15 | "she asked breathlessly" | | 16 | "he said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora crept forward, the warm" | | 1 | "The vineyards stretched out endlessly" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, a" | | 3 | "Aurora murmured, reaching out to" | | 4 | "It felt warm and slightly" | | 5 | "Her silver hair shimmered like" | | 6 | "Aurora could almost taste it" | | 7 | "Nyx let out a soft" | | 8 | "There, a creature unlike any" | | 9 | "It moved with a sinuous" | | 10 | "Isolde replied, her voice filled" | | 11 | "Its eyes glinted like emeralds" | | 12 | "Aurora echoed incredulously" | | 13 | "She had read about such" | | 14 | "Isolde explained softly" | | 15 | "The vineyards gave way to" | | 16 | "Here and there, they passed" | | 17 | "Some smiled at the travelers" | | 18 | "It was a melody that" | | 19 | "she asked Isolde nervously" |
| | ratio | 0.706 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "As if sensing their gaze" | | 1 | "As if in answer to" | | 2 | "If these Soulforged were indeed" | | 3 | "As if to confirm her" | | 4 | "As if in response to" |
| | ratio | 0.059 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "The vineyards stretched out endlessly before them, laden with strange fruits that gleamed like jewels in the twilight." | | 1 | "Nyx drifted alongside her, a living shadow that seemed to drink in the dappled sunbeams filtering through the broad leaves overhead." | | 2 | "It felt warm and slightly yielding beneath her touch, as if it were pulsing with some secret energy." | | 3 | "Her silver hair shimmered like moonlight, and her pale lavender eyes held an ancient wisdom that made her seem far older than her youthful appearance suggested." | | 4 | "Aurora could almost taste it on her tongue, a richness that made her mouth water and her stomach rumble in anticipation." | | 5 | "As if sensing their gaze upon it, the seraphine turned its head towards them." | | 6 | "Here and there, they passed other denizens of this strange realm — beings that resembled men and women but moved with an unearthly grace, their features too per…" | | 7 | "Some smiled at the travelers in welcome, while others simply watched with impassive curiosity, as if wondering what business these mortals had in their paradisi…" | | 8 | "It was a melody that made her heart race and her feet itch to dance, even as dread twisted her guts into knots." | | 9 | "Isolde's eyes narrowed as she peered into the distance, her lips moving silently as if invoking some secret knowledge." | | 10 | "They were powerful beyond reckoning, possessed of arcane knowledge and abilities that made even shades like Nyx seem insignificant in comparison." | | 11 | "As if in answer to her words, a figure emerged from the shadows between two trees — a tall man dressed all in black, his eyes hidden beneath the brim of his hat…" | | 12 | "Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs as she recognized him: Silas, the barkeep who had offered her sanctuary in his home above the pub." | | 13 | "For a long moment, Silas stood immobile, as if contemplating her words — or perhaps considering whether it would be worth his while to defy her command." | | 14 | "Everywhere they looked, there were new sights to behold: crystal-clear streams overflowing with sweet nectar; groves of trees suffused with an inner light that …" | | 15 | "The colors seemed too bright, the scents too fragrant, the fruit too sweet; it was as if the very essence of the realm had been twisted and corrupted by some un…" | | 16 | "Together, they pressed onward, following the winding path that led ever deeper into the decadent heart of Dymas." | | 17 | "As they walked, the landscape began to change subtly; the vineyards and orchards gave way to gardens filled with flowers of impossible hue, each petal adorned w…" | | 18 | "Struggling to contain the rising tide of panic that threatened to overwhelm her completely, she turned to face Silas, her voice shaking with barely controlled f…" | | 19 | "As if in response to his words, the shadows around them began to writhe and swell, coalescing into a single mass of darkness that threatened to engulf them all." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 30 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her voice trembling slightly" | | 1 | "Nyx hissed, its voice barely audible over the pounding of Aurora's pulse" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 26 | | fancyCount | 11 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde explained softly (explain)" | | 4 | "the shade murmured ominously (murmur)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "Isolde declared firmly (declare)" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 9 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 10 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.605 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.423 | | effectiveRatio | 0.423 | |